【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, r4 m  {* k0 L+ e. N3 |, Z7 r我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, T2 a% _; a0 ]# OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) s. ^, i; z6 {+ u  |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! P* j  N9 q* Z# IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* Y$ v1 t4 N7 M; wLove… just the word love
' q& o( E3 E& ]  RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( ~$ W7 k( M' K4 O3 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* W! A6 {- i3 w! J& ?6 J$ `$ qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, e9 v+ t( ?/ L2 XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. I9 L* k9 P4 a1 `) DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 F; f, P+ m4 g! n2 ?Love… just the word love
, `, ]! V* t3 C1 f) J* g, M' TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* M; x! v4 {( o, K- v, b1 s- bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" P! w) R  F8 M, Q6 _3 qIf today isn’t too late,
' ~/ ?) H, O: |( k2 X0 y. V. WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ e/ \+ f  [1 R  HCan I entrust it to you?
  }9 c# v5 m, ~/ [4 rEntrust my love within your heart
; s9 W6 m# q2 O! l; ]Can I entrust it to you?
" d" v/ r' D/ X& |/ z0 ?0 P6 zEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; ~3 V. ?- V) U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 F( Q5 }) U* B: V" o* v1 m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& d  X4 _" `- k. ]' G) X! J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 e) p" q6 b, f) v6 t: |& I" k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" P8 m! K0 s1 y! _" }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, c1 f1 a3 Y) L, ^) K8 I6 t  K<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 G# Y6 }. J' J% s  o1 ~* n1 j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- T5 e7 m) c, a4 K1 a) Z# E<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; I' X8 D8 y) Z0 z5 ?. D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 E3 G2 ?& G$ V& L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ n/ T" c: T; |: J7 b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ i; Y; Y' N2 [+ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& i" H: v" j) @6 J$ R* I5 [, j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 x* ?+ p7 D# A! c5 t! T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 K: S6 ]6 |0 R( g% |1 o/ e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* S7 k  M" y& w; i  J4 e1 b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 u* c! R  m, J8 v# l<P>但我不会 </P>
0 V, P3 ~' K% z& k" o9 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ {4 e- n! A1 Z8 B+ V6 R8 |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 d( a' e! k2 B1 v' l3 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' _+ K: Y* o4 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 m' j1 s9 C  I1 F/ f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- t+ H: [! R2 u4 a! c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* {4 r" x  I5 x& g* y7 C! e$ `4 W0 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ a2 T: `5 w: g3 m8 v" p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 m5 Q' n1 j/ Z4 w3 m* O% t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* _; v( x$ ~. m3 ?! d5 }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 T* S7 O; F9 y* d: d. L! ]8 {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>