【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: }. |- v- p) iWe meet and talk everyday,
. {- g/ \6 x" Y) qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 q, Q  l! l( N+ S& t% {. ~( R9 n: |; }I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 P# p8 K6 q# x! G- u* Z3 h, \6 `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, n% G/ Y+ B( [5 o* M( f. }But I never did
9 V  b! n' K$ N5 X. OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ ^4 E: y4 s3 z. bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* f9 |6 R1 b. {1 s' H7 KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 E1 G- ?% X! U- oI want to confess that I love you,
& R: P$ {4 `3 y) b" ?1 ?) ]7 ZBut I never did
  U: H+ s: ?5 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 V2 x% r& ~( Y& k1 _3 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* _" Z$ O. x. V6 y# c4 }Can I entrust it to you?
$ |* G( |  x9 g0 j, u# l* u9 ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& g. V, ]4 r$ ?& K7 EEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. O, l  ]) y) Y* v; c5 r0 D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; }* u; Y8 \4 K' x" A+ d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* v( e/ x2 N7 z8 |) g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 e/ y: I) O9 O3 F& @- M8 Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 H5 m1 K) L2 ~4 ?% o7 |0 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: Y, `  e/ C7 F! t0 H) d$ P* U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 G" b% p) p8 t! q% l- |+ o% s3 q3 s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 B! ]7 @5 Q7 x2 p3 p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ h; r) R. n5 [$ r4 L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* K$ }- i: h9 ~6 @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( i+ J" l. u3 A3 p: D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 a5 n8 O9 b5 a& {4 h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) w8 E8 K: m' J1 ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% ]" E) G; I) ?. D7 N1 _) C( H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% a8 |/ b5 O2 q( \, ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- r9 i/ x/ G3 c5 s9 R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) J' l( N) S, L, T. J4 s; |1 |& e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 s# q5 Z0 d1 p; a& Z( U3 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" S. l1 \; g) G4 [' Y' U* P7 A. V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  ]5 H( Z* {/ E- @9 Z  |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! p$ P! g  U8 r4 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! ~3 `9 ]: L+ E* X* K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- t; T/ _2 q! W; i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- f0 J5 b7 v. }- s/ x9 v; m<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: v% S& {1 i( Y; o; b5 ?) P! t2 Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& l# |# f5 }: I! ]- {8 m7 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ M" D+ \$ F9 [) G! z$ S; q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 x  f6 C, B0 E) [. r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; N/ r7 S& J) \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! H+ a5 Z% {2 s/ ?; K  B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! O3 e/ Q) j' M1 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# w# V  V: i( y6 o( U- M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 W3 U. r$ B4 z/ e0 }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! ^- W' Q$ c# o  [6 Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 Y9 I9 B) G3 k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ @$ ]8 I  t  I; T' y5 j1 g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: J- D  n& m. S' G2 r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>