【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& B% O: L- P* u$ {6 x- z我另将歌词附在此。
( l4 P" _. D  j6 R  z( w4 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& P/ X  e3 x& |) y9 z# lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% B2 |$ y5 ]3 J8 ^2 e7 E! F! w% V, QI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ B4 R% x8 u# e" R  x3 n8 QI want to confess that I love you,
" Z8 {" ^; w+ p/ HBut I never did
- A% \4 W' A  l4 z; ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. [* v8 ]$ l( S2 n, d3 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ Q$ e$ O, O7 h3 y* eLove… just the word love
6 B* p. N! g  I! [, S5 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 c9 @1 l5 T( E, g# TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) N! S. X$ X3 L. e0 y5 U' ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% d8 d( V! A3 }7 W7 \) ]0 ]Can I entrust it to you?
/ w4 S; Y/ G, sEntrust my love within your heart
" h7 T" K' S$ e+ M& r6 @8 W) h0 T7 i2 [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- b) ^2 Z& h' E! A2 N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# X, U# g6 T7 ^5 G( l. p3 n+ P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 t) u! M/ A, R  j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% Y. l/ ^3 x* G. r$ |+ \- x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 _: p6 T+ L: o" [# }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: q& o1 V4 u- u% c" w( A. S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( ]; \  B" K3 C4 y1 Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% p9 Q; k5 t. I; m) Q  j' D/ G! G$ m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% W! L0 h9 R8 h! W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 f1 o$ i/ _( s" V" K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 P5 [+ p: j( I# `+ G7 \# C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: M; a) m+ ]2 I- H" n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. Y% o5 I5 |7 G  h9 Z8 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 J  u1 f- F4 B* C8 O# G& g- b8 Z& R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; ?6 N  Y* w% B* L: Z; K( `+ m6 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; F. d1 H/ j5 I1 S1 ^6 v% S$ x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! j9 I" Y) S) p$ i$ j4 T' F) Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ X6 v. z4 D& t2 M5 G" S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 ?1 v: c; t# ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 C: a5 u# n7 p  r) q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" K' E2 h' M- P" O/ ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# X, }! F% G& F: v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- o1 s+ I6 P( W3 w! Y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 I$ x; {6 q* @, z, u+ a! X: ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, T+ e9 L; |8 u7 p# h+ d% z: T7 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 L6 Y: m2 p( h2 X* I9 G' b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, I: Z! \. j% ?) C4 ?. w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# c/ F4 {; l# E9 N; A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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6 m  e3 R3 A" c1 w& H! ~7 Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# ^8 W& h( A/ H9 h" b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>