【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& T: c7 v$ n8 R4 i, H* I! gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 g+ o7 S! q$ I/ PWe meet and talk everyday,
5 H6 q! j$ l- f7 ?' FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 T8 _! ~8 o6 r9 `) l, S% aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ Y  N, `2 e9 r0 c) eI would probably know how you feel
! I% P, O/ T$ z' c% ~3 ~0 wLove… just the word love
% O; Z* m* j  z& t* h" IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ^0 B( z$ R3 F1 f1 c, X$ `0 l* uIf today isn’t too late,
" d. H1 w' ?5 F5 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, R* D3 V% D7 t$ |0 ?2 @7 T0 ^$ ?But I never did
$ C: P& u5 C7 i+ h: ^8 P( m+ F: ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ g+ U2 \; n9 U% H% JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 T0 D6 O' V4 Y" F* l2 ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' \( u% f) {* S1 jCan I entrust it to you?
  V; ^' M" W3 dEntrust my love within your heart
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$ \/ L8 f$ j, C1 C1 }- ^% T0 N& o' L[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ P& j  R# J+ a' O2 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 x- |6 N. w7 ~) }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 O. i+ G' ]* n4 Q2 G* C* J3 g: y8 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* f/ D: @, T. u/ R7 O. e; a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 E2 d' n+ C4 v0 P7 J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) {' |- ^: _1 w' ^9 U2 `$ T" t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ ~/ T* T. N8 h# i4 a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- d2 u/ p9 \1 g* z# O; v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 v" ]/ [0 K) T2 {" M- c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) e/ k6 ?% h; Z1 O! P% u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  d6 U1 }% O0 _3 n& U5 \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* O* ]6 B& H3 I, I3 B! V<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ X- _7 }+ h9 C# i6 a! Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 y0 l* L/ }- Y! b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 H8 s) a% \" D* [5 e( J: w; {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 g, D# S# j$ O% [+ B  z- R; z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& N, f) @, L; s3 L9 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* p4 }' @, C" G3 r5 f+ Y- P+ }$ _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 ~5 l. y& H* H. {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ X, L  h. ]$ g/ a& ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' r3 c1 t8 F& V<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ?1 d, ?& z) p% X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- _& l$ D/ y2 t" b" V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; H6 a0 e$ {) _' r& V$ f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 j: _0 M) E# f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% j" Z+ ]( c4 I; @5 R0 d) R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ @3 o3 j7 c9 g; _* E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# K# [0 p% z) }1 E5 W  P4 U  M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) D9 G. J( t( Y  y, ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: x; {9 z/ A1 R- M; D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  {- _$ Q  a/ r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 J  X6 h6 u/ ?* h+ E; Q0 X* X/ |5 ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 U6 P0 k6 `1 V1 n  \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>