【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; i# t4 M2 `+ y9 }我另将歌词附在此。
) o# H; @+ G( s! AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; \2 e; |6 L* b$ Z. J# `* XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! j" G* b0 w4 Z! |) {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) }2 o) [- j- t2 f  x1 EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 j& j6 y1 W4 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, v7 F: k$ ~- U5 v9 K' dIf today isn’t too late,
5 L% Y& A- ~# n, }% Z+ f7 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 v$ z; [+ o5 V6 O* M: [! _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 N8 ]7 c. _% u! T; p: DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 j$ l, e& z/ lLove… just the word love
( S- g& \$ e; D1 t( u) t! K. T5 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- F$ X5 z3 u( e. _But I never did
" @3 ?( c# Z9 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, l6 D$ G7 d. t2 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& w, a- f1 J1 B* m* qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- b0 G' L4 a/ T' W& CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 B" U  Y6 Y* H/ |$ n4 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 V: @0 t! D7 |  r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- |9 u9 X6 Y* W+ ^: B, q( Q# b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 D4 q$ k3 f9 [- {3 D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, }) r5 U9 E! a7 j  `' S" g- W/ l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) V9 r& \' b5 l! v4 O% T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" a1 Q- I" M) E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 Y2 V  b# g- `$ r5 l# m7 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ I$ S8 I# r( ?# q& v- H0 K$ |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 q, Q. m! h& f) A5 g0 S, \! z$ t5 |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, Z2 [9 H. b$ N2 a4 M0 Y* D' `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 x" n4 C4 q! L  D3 d1 j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( N* E4 N' O. F. @$ U* X. X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! s: w5 P: N& I" s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  ^1 V* r8 q* V7 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. h  o% c& h: g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* S+ y- M! E! Q1 _/ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- E6 ~& m1 O# C% ?. b# b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 _( i9 u+ C8 A9 `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, g  u! q: A. U; `& n9 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' v2 x" Y( a: U9 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( y& w" X0 t8 \$ N3 V  X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 D$ T' }8 r5 Q* J8 e+ t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' ]7 V* T4 X5 l; r' C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- i( x0 x- R+ ~+ @( h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ a# ], W4 F' Q  ~7 J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>