【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ m. s8 D+ s3 d, Z* f7 i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ J. T7 a" v7 Y7 v: Y: [8 d. SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ h2 N- L5 Y4 r: e4 MFrom the first moment we met,
6 B, F, f/ N6 S# V; g0 wI already loved you with all my heart
& c* I0 J7 `- a2 B8 c" q7 E9 LWe meet and talk everyday,
  y$ k- v, R! z: @" e  D& tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) h- y& ~% q8 JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  z2 b5 ~1 M5 T* @  C9 T1 LLove… just the word love
1 M: F% h0 T- r7 L- CWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, {, ^1 N4 {' J' y' XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ c" m& H9 J2 R% @3 `/ t, p7 D* Q- sEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 I3 [% e8 Z5 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 P; L9 l" Q- J  ~- qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 [+ w" ?. l( N; vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 S% `& O4 r: ~/ y8 B" vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 Z4 B- v* @# I; f0 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; ]. n  h. r! |% t+ F5 O- r+ XCan I entrust it to you?
3 `4 K3 L1 v+ U5 n) `! VEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' J( d, V8 S- M2 S. _( {2 t. E' M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" Z' H* c9 Q$ g, z& w6 y/ @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  N. S) B+ S8 L2 G2 c) j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* z$ a# K9 t: o1 g) K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( G0 `" j% i% T" a# y% K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: a9 H, Q4 S9 V- Y# I% [" G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: s; G% ]8 D. d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. t  R" o' R& E" H+ @8 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 E5 |0 G/ u! ^' g* [; }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) C+ ]! b7 ]- G, }, D! r3 Z# \2 z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' g- y& _8 B! D! Y# o# J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ }' I! ^% J4 M4 h  L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 w2 ^1 j4 @! i; `) }! E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% E1 Z2 G. ^) H  s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ A+ z) Q5 f# A0 m; X' b0 ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# t4 a3 k, m. g. ~8 \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 i" \: }% d7 I, k5 L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- {! L  C" ?! c$ }( ]  {1 s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! S: g3 G; p) S0 T7 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- Y* m( p) h/ e/ H9 Y" a; Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ r. n5 {' O" Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, u( V$ A/ T- y) f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* U. O& X2 u- r2 M  I8 e; K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

8 A7 N4 a! C- g5 V7 I$ N" A<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% C, ~5 o/ M6 |$ J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( E9 Z6 Z! z+ l8 ]: S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>