【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 k# ~. l' R5 r5 U2 w7 QWe meet and talk everyday,
5 T% H! P* c0 g* wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 x. Q# r/ d. J2 S( C& lBut I never did
# m7 K' f5 n/ C' n6 A% YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ?2 s, ^( \* ?) Z  _; ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' R( ~( J# M5 D) M' zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& l6 c2 \* Q- ^2 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" z4 a6 L# C9 {6 t9 n' u) |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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" y  j0 s" j* C" P3 Y4 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, f) U( r  {/ ~1 d; M# m- Q* a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 f* J, h% r8 _) w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' R! H2 O' B: p. U$ L/ t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- K/ U4 \% `* Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( A: s1 j% x8 q5 y* n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 [$ j" t7 s1 Z/ Q9 F$ ?  a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 U% a2 K! ~7 S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; y% e' T. _1 z: z2 ^) i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ j' b8 ?0 y. u! ^1 R0 {% K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; C9 [6 x( a9 @& Q  R5 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  c; g2 v+ Z3 e# @; N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 R' K6 C. {* t" N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  `. P0 |5 }3 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  k1 E0 _; z0 B& N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  G0 B" y. Z, v* [  H" o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! `/ ~- m2 c7 V3 z# t7 G: n. C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& ^; W$ T4 p8 \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' o; f# F; i# R  U/ S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
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5 B2 Q+ g7 I$ M: r/ B  h<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ ?! C2 P! s4 P( `* \, N$ |9 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, L8 M) e; k. \/ s9 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: D* B% _: D/ d& y# M4 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 o4 o1 k; h% y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 A/ [5 A' c! O; o1 O1 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: p0 p! o" w" m$ }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' A, Q- D4 K* ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" A: W4 L7 J5 ^) p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>