【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
, w, V5 u! [0 V* QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ l1 g3 R5 Q( B0 RFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 ?) H% A' h. C( n& L4 Y& jWe meet and talk everyday,
# Z  }* t' Z, Z0 z& W/ EBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  t0 I# p) u# E8 v# YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 s$ x  I0 w4 ?; ?8 K6 @Love… just the word love
! K. r' j  d! T$ u1 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
/ @. |/ f; u& y6 I% s4 Y; zI want to confess that I love you,
" e  @0 s+ L0 u$ wBut I never did
4 d/ p7 M: g- ?( v! }( EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; |! R; H0 h0 r8 H% U9 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* S, U, x2 t2 H" _9 e8 E* A- U0 T8 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  i9 l8 K) M% w  [" @$ U3 P4 XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 x$ E" S1 b3 Y( U2 G0 D6 [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- I) R: N8 g" S) W; n5 P% B
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( w4 c$ u1 A' u' P# `0 u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 E7 l8 N) B2 X$ g7 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 b2 @' k3 y' A' l" E4 K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 _/ ~9 P5 Z5 T+ m8 H1 t" D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: R; S9 s/ _2 b3 i- F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 `# Z! j0 _6 x- C& m' k5 K/ ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' B: q6 a; m2 u* |5 X  P, L4 Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 C5 x1 n2 d4 F4 \+ z! {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* ^% o. e, x6 E$ p6 n# O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, ?7 {2 Q7 G" a9 O8 H( Z<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 Y& w6 X, D- j, `4 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 U5 Y+ t6 I" z( ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ N. m9 c! J% }+ I1 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& J4 R1 J: \7 l9 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, ?. \4 |; ^4 p4 i+ D1 e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. \$ g& o! r4 m/ |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% I9 d; X+ S2 |' i5 E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  L2 ^6 W5 Y% B+ W5 o% f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' N+ f; V. F4 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: @+ e7 k- b) X& \( i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% Q& g0 y" ]* g# F1 Y5 e% ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 E1 z* i: J4 v& Q/ K+ S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" A3 V" G! B! n! ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 \9 v* |3 Y4 k* f; E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 J7 h8 b9 ?  i- k& ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; v# U" s% W* s/ _% ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
/ \# ^) V4 r8 U: q
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 m( m3 Y; F; c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 b2 N& ~) m; R! C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>