【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 e9 f" }' n+ w: o6 S. R7 P我另将歌词附在此。
; ]$ I! e$ p4 [1 F2 ?. b0 J9 V/ pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 x$ e, Z6 u! g! fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* ^  ~" h0 m' V' fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  v. r" y* J6 i1 bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( q8 S, `7 Q( P$ @7 R+ Y0 ZI want to confess that I love you,
; i% e: E& h4 i, |3 h' R) H4 KBut I never did
: h7 ^' L1 \1 u! ~$ ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. V! |1 ?) r$ V# BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ `) g+ c4 E( Z1 q, |6 jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 K( }" \- |) l  q8 |& [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! I% }: N( c& o7 s1 a! E2 d" X& bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% ^# A# h' N1 b. L& UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& Q; P) H- g$ f$ w0 [+ xEntrust my love within your heart
7 T2 \3 H0 \1 [* z3 Y3 c: p$ yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, Y/ k' t( Q- x: e& G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( E* V5 Z, a7 b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! b, T/ R. Y5 o. G* u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% d( @& H" X" T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 O5 G6 D4 z+ I( ^) E3 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" c6 `  d2 L1 G$ G; V# ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 y& `. t& g& I2 c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: y/ ?- B: u2 n5 |6 }9 p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 k2 ]; A$ U5 w! y  O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, R: h6 a' O8 ?! L" \8 B2 b' q( d( [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& L1 C: d+ X/ q3 w! m0 {- \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( s5 B$ a, Y5 w( w# Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" H6 w  d4 k7 i9 j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ j4 B# y  J/ n0 p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 n2 _. w- M3 K<P>但我不会</P>
9 {. f/ g" `9 c9 w) Z* X$ ~4 R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 t( j% }7 ^7 W+ k% p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ E, p( v% d1 u3 L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 {$ D- I6 S- \' s, x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. \$ V  D1 O. ^' t$ T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: N" |+ F1 i, {1 i9 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! d2 y8 K8 e  S9 M' {8 ^  w, A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 b2 q" H; {8 r; s: q5 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 o& ]* J+ f, U; J3 {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- d( w! [% z  P% Q5 \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% K7 x! ^$ b7 @" k# G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 Z: U# n" f' P) f1 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" F6 O7 T  v2 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 M; \. i/ h* d5 M! }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 w8 q+ A1 p$ h. q2 v% f5 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ H' `; `1 i4 D8 w+ z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 W9 I: ?! ]+ d) D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 k- t' h2 _# Y8 i) a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; d9 w. m( C* d0 O4 G+ |2 r8 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 f; Z- J1 e6 W' u: J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* R* V/ V5 G& \2 F; J4 K# L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, s5 R9 L$ M2 [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; C1 ?0 S  M+ Z3 z% _/ |8 d  u0 E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 `( `- _' G: H, @& [8 \+ K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 m! T$ y% A7 B+ }* c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 f+ h9 U! M$ l: y: A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>