【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 G# }0 T6 {9 _5 S; o7 B/ z' J我另将歌词附在此。
& A; j  s7 A; e: ~2 }4 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: b7 ~( M% y$ KFrom the first moment we met,
. R" ~4 ]( A% Y3 U) |5 oI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 g1 j, [' e3 q9 Q: [) Z  f& E: hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* L0 A1 H1 j$ F& S$ ^I would probably know how you feel
; C. E) {$ R( g$ T1 O9 K0 |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) ^: i0 |* A$ zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; ~' e! H/ V9 \& e; w9 y8 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% p* _8 E4 H/ {" q4 X7 HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 m7 g- U, C, zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ ]1 B/ c# {0 G/ K3 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& o5 k% }. q+ D! N. z' ]- {6 n9 @Entrust my love within your heart
0 w" t3 Q! @% k8 {* R7 bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ k( r3 l- G0 O) H+ c# D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 ~. k3 ^  J  b! [8 e: @9 W) J- p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: E4 H1 E/ o8 L1 L) }; _2 N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, ], M- b5 o% d$ D3 Q, X) S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! f0 j$ m0 ~4 K8 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 r; S: |( K" }& {" o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) }0 g! J$ j# l+ {1 t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; {& @$ o0 N4 u9 g4 D6 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 }2 c6 @; J! A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 I- f9 l7 Y$ p5 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. T' I% ?! U. g2 E4 e5 w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( o) ~7 o4 r; i5 `  y& f5 y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' N1 B" N  _, Q, |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% h  }9 B, Q5 q) ~$ f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, d9 }8 N1 x; A1 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 z8 M, }5 E7 E9 `% [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' w& u; A% X3 u) B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( p+ ]* F0 T. ^# \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ \* M( i3 v. H4 }; {+ w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, ~# P* B5 L6 \5 m( r0 i: {2 c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) U" @7 Q& z# E8 t8 ]- m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# u4 q7 H7 J* }+ i# H* w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 o" P6 O  [6 x3 N) k9 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 e+ n* u$ g  B1 c" ~# r1 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 T1 \& X$ Y5 [- A4 g% I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  x) u' s# \) {; b; k: M+ ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& u0 g$ @: j* A& C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 `; V  J+ W* f! i. k0 l. i# [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 i, R' @' t/ ?4 L这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 Q, C+ x  W2 q- {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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