【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. I; @# J. \4 Y# a0 p' i+ E2 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) B4 Q4 @5 o4 z# xWith the moon kissing it every night
# n# a$ \( A* a* ~% bSeeing the sky content with its love
* ^. X. v- D  b. W$ M) _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 R' l9 S5 S7 {: i: f/ mYou needn’t fear anything
* F) h8 j3 r% E# \6 ~8 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! _" r* {. h0 X6 q. X# O* b  ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% B) `. C4 ]+ G% Z, a7 TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ?0 A9 D+ a7 i6 n- X8 x/ C; qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ x7 l$ h  U4 z" h# @/ E* E" JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  c2 g2 S6 L5 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 M1 Z* M. b+ j% O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' S, r" D" o/ m2 v+ a( C: j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! L# W; Y$ r8 r" M. m7 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, t8 G5 t+ R% A* a/ f* }* {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 n8 Q- {" W. g, E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* T9 Z% h# Z, N" C/ R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 M: U* m0 i' h$ b2 c5 A9 M5 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; V& l$ J$ l- T- L0 L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" [3 @% U# Y( c; L, l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- _; ~( Z; O: V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ F0 ?# a; R+ y) L6 Y! p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% |- f0 D. @. v3 Z1 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, m( B; Y; a$ n" v9 c3 U! B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( Q! w$ e2 t' A" h* |0 X( C4 w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' O3 }3 F: q+ z; @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( P2 Q! J5 D- W( ^- N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 H  X9 t% {+ b! C. w, t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ A% W' \) e& {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( H, c  c5 J1 l1 ?2 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ~  Y/ }% t2 f7 S; p3 n8 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: w6 I3 }+ R5 Q; M" W5 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* n: Y# R8 T- V& P6 z& Z& G& [2 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 _+ ?; Y8 m! h5 A: h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: e6 s' w& q1 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 f( V6 D& B2 S9 U8 ]5 P6 Y" N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 i4 c# C3 B" C5 O; p4 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" R" F9 z4 F2 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 B$ a# @0 r& G& U: q- ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  E0 i/ ~, s+ |' t- K# }+ @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* v2 D! O3 i* o  h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>