【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 [# x3 |" C/ YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, u# f! {* n- u( Q- u8 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. @6 j4 H5 f- Y2 x/ i5 k9 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, V  _; U- Z* Q, m5 VSeeing the sky content with its love
+ k9 K5 M4 m5 u* T' QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# f0 }4 j% V' V/ ?4 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* u" @7 r! C7 @$ nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# V& z8 R4 M( i" Z! Z% RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 I" J% I8 O' n! X! ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* ]7 e; D" {+ FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. f& g' m* i6 ]8 ~. y; ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: T  O. R) V6 H/ V# `: B4 z  @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 b* U, h8 _+ q# MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, |' f; {2 Z4 f  B9 Z1 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; b; _0 B6 o0 y* y; Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 P4 @  I" D, M9 b1 G) I8 O: q- v* ~2 \- g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 {! e; p  ^: ?$ ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# A+ J0 H5 c* P5 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 R# R. t' T. H4 h  l) V4 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% u2 g4 {. }& P4 n3 ]& w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' ~0 Q) R3 L) V8 W% e6 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" u% K3 W+ O# v: I: j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% \$ J( Z+ H+ A4 ^, r& ?5 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 F# ]" y. c4 [" C: d8 w$ G4 g  ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* w2 I* j  A/ v0 v/ w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 a, P1 ]3 [3 {7 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& I: ^9 W7 y$ J1 R" ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 A% Y) o1 u" Z6 [) e% m# D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! R& z3 H  ^$ R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, d- V+ C& F$ p4 j; ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% L: P4 y6 a, W* G3 Q5 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- Z: k! G" y: X3 `  F/ l2 [7 |# k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 M: q% Q. W/ G+ I3 J! k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, K! Q9 D8 i' c. K* K) e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; N. {! K: a/ U( x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 B! x0 }. B7 P3 m3 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. i7 s' I% D1 H7 p  s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. z, l4 |/ d6 J3 p$ s4 a0 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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