【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# W5 {6 d# S7 m3 w6 {+ u+ |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' h+ e/ z8 h! M# a: T7 `  fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 t: P( r$ n$ _' x- B8 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ u8 v5 _. b) e0 WSeeing the sky content with its love
% d8 ^  q- |$ ?2 d: V! yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! t# `) }& ?2 N9 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ E2 [3 p6 ~8 Z$ Q) a+ o: j$ zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, A/ ]! o- F3 V5 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; n! v& t. x; ^5 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) N$ ~9 v% u, f5 T; ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) v( q7 U; E2 U6 h0 r% `$ a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; _; y" |+ r; ^4 Y9 M4 Y: F2 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; M) n/ j2 y' p: ^$ T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" _( [$ a# c& M" o/ O! Y$ J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ u6 U6 X# S) R" w- `, I5 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 n( M" Y4 r, u7 `% f8 k* F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 j$ h- M, K8 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 z) s9 f$ p% q$ B, o) ?. ?5 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% M* U: m$ o1 {! T& ]  _( `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) |3 a$ W% X) b* y8 V& X. \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 |; r  G* z. m. @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- q! t% v- F7 g6 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) h# w; g1 c6 t- s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' L0 C/ Y# _  s- \" X8 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. f/ H+ h2 i) C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, P: [0 R9 C$ j8 }: t$ q; d; K$ W5 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& q& ]" `0 y2 j1 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: e/ w) \% h3 Y6 C# I; n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& w" t8 g) v- E" r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 ^6 m; }6 }0 p2 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 I# e' H7 R0 |% m4 ]& P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" c1 G9 l# J& K, e' u- }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 Z3 A' l* b/ `; k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 t6 [  Q: i; |5 j( y- T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ G3 S- Z, [7 G: X* A& S" ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. Q9 O, ?, d, F; ?8 Y8 q0 {9 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 Q* b+ F$ {  K, Y0 J6 i  V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- @: U$ W# r& F7 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) t/ Y1 ~! M0 X6 P. J  i& ]6 Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: }% \# O4 U! q$ ]( m, I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>