【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: H' O2 m2 d" J3 A4 u$ I" u歌词我附在后面。
; i" j% y3 @, }2 r! PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 p- f: A* R  Z3 E$ [5 e2 \  e: _Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 g: M- Z4 R! A" q8 @; j% @: IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ O* y9 L: a7 n9 u( cWith the moon kissing it every night
. P' H& W6 L/ l+ {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; W2 Y  ]1 a- mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Z$ |4 X: J+ Z0 c& }Every other word you utter is love
4 E  x) q0 i7 L8 C; Z3 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 }5 x! s2 b' Q# A, KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( p0 _$ k! b% ]/ a, {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 o9 c! g$ `9 N) {. S$ [+ yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 n0 S( t, T0 T# L: DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: q4 U+ V6 D8 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, N+ W; u/ w* h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ P' ], T$ o  _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: R( _; c" S/ b4 l! q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* r- T4 z: Q( v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  J0 \2 i' U' x& H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 T0 D/ u. J/ O8 n1 }3 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: g* N3 C  J- e3 Y/ Z' V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* q* u; _' y: |" `7 h7 g! [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! B- s6 H- A: [9 F8 h( V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& m/ O: Y9 }: l) [) y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. J( I/ O8 l1 z4 T& g; \- X4 v0 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) }3 Y3 c3 m/ n* ]" N0 a# i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* j  H, w3 A1 ]  N' o1 v. {" m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* i8 }+ b. f4 Z, q4 Q4 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" v) P. k: B! Z0 V; z+ y9 }' J# [! E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) N" _6 R  T6 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; I; J  r' {* }0 B3 Q" K3 q% h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; j. ]+ X  ]6 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 }. F4 i3 A$ r, ~3 B/ |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, ~% ~4 J$ G4 L$ u) z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* _1 M$ C! d7 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  A. }' ]! \& _" ?8 F3 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ q* l/ B2 T6 S' V; c$ M! F- O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 g* ]8 u- T3 U; d3 z0 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 s9 p. d# i0 m$ r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! s( k+ p, I% A8 t% g( g% C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: _7 \: p/ \" Q6 Z$ y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>