【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  \/ U* B& [2 Q% aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ U2 n2 b; m8 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 L/ z% `/ W  V# E- h4 c6 {- QThe sky is happy down to its soul
! h' ^( G3 e1 N9 j9 yWith the moon kissing it every night
& ]+ K$ Z" H8 R. e2 O% r. `; `8 XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  S- p0 _* F4 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 ?; ?4 V0 Q1 L0 e. N- oI really want to know just how much you love me
/ ?5 z* S( o% e8 V, eI love you I love you with all my heart
, B6 O. T( V5 ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  w& n9 y' k1 ]) z& l: X: ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ s4 ~7 W+ d$ {+ u$ S& Q1 h- EI want so much to see inside your heart
4 b/ y7 `- G. X  E0 Z3 s+ G. VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 i& M: t9 f( l3 S2 I3 S2 xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 ?& G6 L+ H% P3 Z3 R: NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 d" X. o1 i. f9 g( F# sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ a% X$ B- u& H; ^6 C5 o/ n$ r. }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% A# @( O% h6 Y! o) d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# V9 a! v& h5 _. U. Z' M2 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  M' C' |, r1 M( ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ y+ w7 Z, c% a& c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ }% t7 k7 p0 R- o8 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 C* F! t; R' g' ]& U4 }% I# w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 O0 E6 P$ g3 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" L+ g- p- C, i) l0 \6 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 A4 H( r" R$ x# G$ e$ R- l  u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. |- D" G5 R8 G" [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& d/ F3 l, y+ ?7 G4 s( u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& p" e2 R4 X; \3 W5 h* B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 c1 o5 a# h! V7 ^* O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 D0 O4 E+ |( ]7 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 {+ f" H" A9 |% {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# z3 D8 U' ?3 }9 O2 Q" I% d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 E" k: p+ f/ C% m% t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* j# I" t0 M% K* ~$ B; o" {  s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* {; n1 O' Q4 L: W5 V( l1 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 b7 f; S2 T: J' S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! g7 }2 K, x% `- W3 n% E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ B9 A6 p! k, [( B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! {7 [0 A9 o! H" \" Q1 l2 g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) L/ Z2 b' w6 L9 [/ H7 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ B: g, \* j+ P" h% q* d! Y- w0 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) R& Q3 [( J/ ~1 s+ u: X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& S- [6 j, x( t; {; m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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