【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 K$ V1 f% ?. s/ w/ d' H歌词我附在后面。
$ e" O( b4 ~' g& B2 q  VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% f: M0 |, C: G2 t0 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 c1 [5 i( C, z3 ?8 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 |1 q. F7 E3 d0 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! z1 t1 ]% i( d* K/ b" ^You needn’t fear anything
5 V, I' o* X- N0 U) iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 p6 ^, e1 p; v0 _9 j8 a! _& C# dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ ?# i) [1 q6 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& h% u3 x5 K7 u( R" ], xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) z+ K: E) G1 m1 G0 p& qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 L7 e3 A. Y5 A+ ^0 W3 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ K& y" u$ a5 f! M5 L! s* [0 rI regret not dying
( l7 C6 b8 g0 a: A' iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 k+ p# Y' w: j  Q9 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! ?! c$ d% I! d1 S) d6 ^8 j) ~5 d  ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" y7 s* ]  g: k6 g. K" i" Y* BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, v/ M7 _, H8 H2 A" j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) j. n) ~% {* `% H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 s! A# B& C1 z" A$ E5 E* K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* [0 W! L+ u2 P' v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 E6 l+ f/ B& l4 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& Q4 j& l1 E: g' H! i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 y2 l4 |; p1 H  p3 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  N0 W7 b1 {$ }8 C8 p* N& I9 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; c- L8 k2 ~. d8 F- R) e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ s1 S: P8 y- y1 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. ^  \$ @" V' z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; ~4 D1 u( V( y7 m% x/ C$ T- _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 _( k; h, {7 Q' c( P/ }; v# `; X/ ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 Q! ~  V% _$ V% P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! k# _2 M0 y" _* u4 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 f8 U7 J) c! G6 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& {" y, w% n) l" r* \$ U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 C* r5 o& G& B1 F2 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ G+ _6 h  y- M8 B, D6 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  t9 x! F* [0 A, L7 @$ f+ }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 }& m3 }7 h$ b5 v% Z9 _% v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 t' F6 P' o; ]! f6 B) ]1 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 H/ ?. o6 E# \- t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ \$ C2 Y8 J8 V$ x1 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! |4 h* R* Q3 Z: a. B- Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( X3 a/ }- s, e$ x* h& q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ \# t3 l. C1 N: A8 m5 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ @. F7 m  A, S# u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; h' b& o1 i$ c; P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>