【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 f: J" r8 t! G$ [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 p+ W3 Z  ]2 |, U, d4 g1 X0 x+ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' _( |& J4 o4 ]6 A" W0 J. |* fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% l3 `5 W4 T3 V* f2 A. g& |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ \" I8 b. a5 u% S; d9 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ g' S: ~1 [* r4 ^: C, _7 g  JI’m still filled with fear
5 n! r7 t0 F: RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ ?* j( G' d' E, PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( V3 k2 P. X; E3 s, e4 m5 [  XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( v' c+ f2 X, ^, g0 n9 _! j# iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" o% t) i; A9 O, ~4 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: `- ?: L7 o6 \. M* D7 S7 G* r& x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! w* _0 D9 }6 e, {! K5 v1 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 c/ u  C& _& Q; f9 o: b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( a7 S& t; Q- N2 N8 d- o& _' A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 l0 V" C* s3 s( E9 g  ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( {: a# S# U, N, t5 b  d- M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) f  w5 A* V( b4 w/ u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& \$ m5 k8 e+ @9 F/ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 z2 p$ [+ r1 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# Z- r! _9 x. r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 g5 ?/ u; A) Z5 `" v% B# s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& X$ ~2 F0 l9 {8 |! g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# ^6 a" e+ F: d9 A4 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 @" C' h/ v1 I9 z- u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& l& M# p, B& y% |/ s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" l# W0 ]" g4 O- l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 }8 |( B7 M' m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ F9 }% T0 x) s# ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 d" n* R3 M- ]/ N  P0 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 D7 u2 X6 y* Y) ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% M1 P8 e3 R4 Y8 C% d' R3 K2 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 Y) E3 l$ U, M! |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 {/ c% Y+ @+ r1 W( w% \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' b; q) f0 Q, x8 N7 f0 q+ j, _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ]0 t: o% z, d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ R( a( V1 p9 I, h& u8 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 J: H5 R, U- I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( U. u- v8 V$ l2 F0 y6 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 ^9 b. k9 D2 `; ?, b我请你剖开它

4 r$ m# o' x# g; d% ^: F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>