【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& B& B5 M; [6 V7 k- VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 V$ c9 X% C; |, n0 X+ g: U: jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; e! B; c1 P, P: X8 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
. K# g! T6 S. {  k6 {, Y" f1 f% HWith the moon kissing it every night
. Q5 q% S6 l" B  M) j1 g+ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) E$ V6 ~+ i0 S: Q2 S/ _You needn’t fear anything
" y' ^/ {& R" H* B- ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, M. H& P1 [' v% a; T5 M3 B: j* \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 U& R0 ^) {4 Z1 n5 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) ?1 W6 i  ?+ I6 s& R- m, G9 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( n* P& O! @2 J! e8 t8 @3 A5 NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 I0 H8 r5 v! x6 AI’m still filled with fear
' [( b/ T3 f  z1 Z! ^5 n3 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 @+ _8 S4 k! J. ~3 x- J! P0 x# ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! b6 S2 H+ c% X& g8 `& w8 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, L+ [# h: u* _% g/ U% K; E4 O3 w! K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ g- y' Y8 x! `/ M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 S  e) C8 E% W" }$ M! M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 X) f& {" a- i4 M! m3 B: t1 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) K' Y: k8 ?( W3 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* w  h4 b/ A( r- Y2 h& [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ l  ~% b4 d- a! x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( X4 l, x- U, Y0 l; u' i( i2 i- O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 l' O+ j$ x( @( P% u6 A3 Y. F<P>你无需担心</P>
9 e6 c2 _3 X. E* T  P9 i4 }5 b( P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" |0 r/ @+ s0 c: n3 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; f; T6 N1 Y( a' E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 {# c- g' n% `: l$ h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 p. i) e7 C' K. O3 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) t) _1 X* {+ N( @* u' O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) D/ i- O- J" `% ~. j/ H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: q2 Q3 a  |& J1 i- M* G; m; r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, N# x, C) S# A9 W8 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ^4 q: z& P( C9 k  ?& R, ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& r# ^, E2 ?$ I9 ~0 X+ ]9 p1 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# p* {5 G( v1 Z0 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 ?: F# v0 ]% z, s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. }4 ]4 M* D4 b% A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 V2 S% r) v3 m+ C* w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 y% Q& O/ A; q5 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* ]# i# t: s) Z' c7 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  r, @* L8 T# g' C8 m( k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( U/ Q4 o; J: I! B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 v+ F) d! v8 _7 N; a# l2 m. {: b我请你剖开它

) r8 |* O- @+ s$ j# u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 _; m( d7 O7 S; m4 n' l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>