【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' O- {- O) e; }' c9 c  S$ ^) `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 {2 r8 I; H# z* ~# n4 Y$ _2 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( d3 h7 q' v* a. d5 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 B, s) f; P, ~+ eYou needn’t fear anything
$ v/ N3 r' }! {" ?5 K, j4 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" a" g% }. H+ J/ B, G5 e: KI really want to know just how much you love me
/ G  H+ R0 }% BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! m/ U- Y( V) cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 @* N$ r" y* J5 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ O8 o* K) z+ a5 L- pI’m still filled with fear
% [8 w- X  n, t6 t4 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% f' ?; Y4 I5 `* q  n6 n0 dI regret not dying
. R% _7 J( j* C" \+ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  @7 l% _  U+ `9 J6 q7 @With such a tongue as yours,
' X" w3 `2 l  M. z3 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 N- e( T2 \5 [" z3 N. ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ?6 A+ I$ e1 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ `" u5 T6 `+ C7 Q# E* L2 e5 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( l9 R) C7 F! D) N5 X& n; i; t; V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 N0 u6 t+ B3 t: O) g: A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) Q4 m; [& H% E% T9 |7 P  O3 ]2 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% f) A; r4 L" O/ X" _, c- P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 V  \* v$ T7 i7 U+ x7 c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ X' X8 K+ {  C+ r/ Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! ]' W' S( m4 f4 h" @* q. |' k7 _! o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% Q3 I- p- M: O3 u: S2 y( Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 l4 U2 Z: f4 h& Q/ K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 Z; c$ s* |. @, v2 ]" \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 T& C; c  A2 e$ W, T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# Z$ r/ [1 [  }" t: k: b* a& S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, b" I' o% u% E/ v" R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* Z, @! d* E  u/ e: c# M+ H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 B0 L+ s, V7 `7 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 [8 }; m8 @  @8 R% V) C' y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% t  ]! h; I9 L9 m# p& C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! O+ V' z* n/ W7 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) U7 P9 `& \- n0 r  y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! R6 `/ i6 o3 V- h! O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! g' `1 y3 Q: B' ~% K: ?) Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ }( g7 m* N7 |3 F2 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" q8 M  U9 l* u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: r" Q. S  \3 E4 Q0 b' J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 g2 c, q. Z! Q. V9 P, D5 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ l1 C& D3 |5 w7 b/ m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( _2 G# }0 C; K, D1 i) t2 w7 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) _# e/ c9 N4 p; |# x/ P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>