【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ W4 P, s- }. [# n) gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 h+ W3 y+ I: t  O" z4 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 E: d0 ?. `0 Z7 [* v% s" w* sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- E' {# Z  h' }6 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) k! {- {% \. ^Nothing can compare to my love
5 D/ M3 z( A3 W) L/ S0 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) r& `. q; }2 i" {: ~( f- J) uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 H) P4 U# i0 N2 P$ N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 W% c* s3 p+ J( O5 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ v$ r! y/ H4 M2 x7 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, E9 x; j; D, ~5 O$ W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 B2 L& }) [" l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 U- t- \" }1 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, m$ \: V$ D+ t% W) D- h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* I8 \8 d8 h8 \4 r' H; G. {' Y; y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. c+ L: N3 X. {- }" @: ?& X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, g- L8 `! f5 }+ }) ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ H& A# K' }2 Z" n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: [1 A( ]- C; c9 M& U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! A( H) ]- U: X7 p! q8 n) E! r/ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ n9 I* G  z+ ]  L4 V9 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' I3 M8 w; X8 N5 T. V  o; W) v/ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- N3 z. U$ R& ~( j! ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% [- w& P; Z. s* N9 |5 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  f$ ]. o; M$ b3 o% W$ j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. I& V$ z% m1 w/ a1 K0 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 ]! z3 U( U% W7 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. o8 j4 L3 T$ M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 }3 r4 B, {' d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- m0 D9 p8 Z; R3 K9 U/ _0 h6 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 `, s: F% w& d) A0 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' c: l4 l$ a. o& D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, c  Z# I: P) c* r3 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) G: `! T# v3 l/ N. |) V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' p5 `. |( B# k: d- w" `  A7 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" Q! ~/ @$ G, w; W5 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" Q* [: Y; ^- C6 h8 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( Z  y1 ^5 m- x- C% a0 ^! h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: o* t: [1 Y$ |* j3 t2 M3 L! W+ B0 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# K' e$ P# c" ]: i: Z: T/ S! U" x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 C- j4 p3 c, g# b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: ]/ p( q) Y* k5 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; ]9 {9 t: Y( G1 m4 K+ X& M' I- P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; N7 G; D& _- X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 H$ H0 k% D6 ]/ M  Q我请你剖开它

. T0 j* H7 i& f* K, B! v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 [3 K' ~6 ]) f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>