【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 R) f- W  F* A( ^0 R+ t* B1 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  n1 U) q9 U& Q7 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# h. ]. Z, U" j$ D+ {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% u" I& J9 L. j; \  B. o, o2 e( ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
. l1 R1 L9 v3 W( Q5 j$ _% Q( JWith the moon kissing it every night
" Z' S3 k5 F& B% V2 DSeeing the sky content with its love
) ~" a( [8 N+ i* @" N8 m  o- kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% [$ a/ d# D: s  {$ {% y$ m# e4 d6 |4 KYou needn’t fear anything
5 G3 x* i) L! Z* ~, M; }; L( gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) w2 e' V0 |2 ]3 g) k0 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( J" `0 @! H# eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ^0 |" g2 |$ E3 i8 N7 T0 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ b* ~* \; L% I3 P1 n+ R% V1 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 Y: p+ e4 ?2 w7 G0 U: H% _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' f3 P, q+ W7 \  O1 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 x% G( A7 c: r; t( G4 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 q& b$ `; T! [6 \6 M4 j1 L7 @: B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: ^" X2 ?0 S- S) v* {" x6 `1 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  I% P4 T9 O; i2 c) q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 S( Z( A+ U3 _# @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) D2 M5 x2 z! ~$ A  A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 N9 g: C% M8 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 @- p9 J& C8 }2 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 t6 p4 l1 g3 \9 u/ U; z0 q! S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 }% s( e1 y: A. J' c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ~0 u. @1 d  ~% U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 u; l3 s3 D2 ?, O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 T1 P- |8 W) [* K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ y) A+ X, h! \. G4 N, T* G& b" D+ b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- \. p: b2 H% ^7 ]; C8 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ?, S) [) B1 D$ W/ f) A: x0 y/ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% L2 H4 [1 L1 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: V1 {, W9 D; z: \( Z4 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; R1 P) {. D3 m+ w2 n" [: [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. \) N" W& o! U+ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ~6 C$ e0 B7 r+ g0 @0 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 T! q* j. |. B& [& Y, K" [1 b4 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
: }9 x2 t7 Z' x' v3 ?5 ?$ S7 ]7 N
' @* a2 v: n# R/ d3 S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>