【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( @5 ^& j0 s, X7 ^5 G8 ?# yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ \* R/ d+ `! ~5 [  C/ o, Q5 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 j+ I2 H1 _' \: nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 \, e- C" s& M2 ~& sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ ~* j% F7 Z$ F  EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) Z6 H, z" B  x" W( X% q0 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: c( V# b" G. }- p0 o: r3 |Nothing can compare to my love
4 P) {$ S2 \% B5 ]- ^- r, t8 T* ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' V; b0 F" ?$ h. w0 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Z- ?% `# U8 ~7 w) i$ PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- d5 J  H0 ~" z# b4 z* ~  JI regret not dying
& r8 b& \# e7 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, J  o  \4 g9 d- u" m- E1 r9 SWith such a tongue as yours,
0 S; }: J7 q1 G; |$ _& oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ R9 ~, {' |0 U. \& GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( U" B. E2 C( J9 b- i6 y3 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# l9 C% p5 ~  c$ {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; E& x/ h# u, `: O7 j' B9 ~0 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 j2 y. r+ T: x4 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ L4 p5 b% G" l  R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- C" m+ o* j3 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ G1 [" m: R1 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- h: c$ h1 N4 b& L( J% z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% m! |* X+ v6 A# r1 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% M2 O; Q" [6 U3 w0 a# A2 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 L, h* v7 T! G" r4 {; n+ }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" b: B2 M, Z2 w# q1 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# c7 F$ F; s9 Z/ E8 X' H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' @# e( V. b$ I- [# P2 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ P  [* c; U* M/ m7 M  o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& W: O' c3 O- w1 M" _, U8 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; C* d! U  _2 X) R- s) ^4 c: ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' C2 C% `8 c( p# R# M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& Q4 w( H% l, L, e- F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 \, W& S+ S1 B+ x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! h7 y# |9 Z2 q+ H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ?- m8 T! W# Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ J- o! [  z2 C) V4 h# S( v. @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 \% h( m4 M9 e) A% d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>