【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 c0 L: S# l0 T1 F$ A; S歌词我附在后面。
+ `4 [/ ?: a$ A) H' @% W7 Y: jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; E9 z1 z( x, P6 r$ YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 i. I: S6 E' U3 R- \- M, QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) J2 }$ i% L3 ?8 g* `2 c& Z% e0 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 d1 M+ q) w& I; w! x0 t+ M* VThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ }/ z  |! o6 s, [& N' a+ ZWith the moon kissing it every night
9 ]0 {3 R  @# H8 K3 S! OSeeing the sky content with its love
0 S  p' N9 e. Z/ H6 L/ U' `9 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 @- b6 I2 l7 \! ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. ^, ]  E% W8 E. wI really want to know just how much you love me
4 ?. c% L5 R% g2 ?' e( vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* E3 x+ e! d( r% R8 u1 ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% O1 H/ E0 a) u2 v- P. _$ sI regret not dying
8 A$ C7 w3 G9 v, DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! f0 ~4 g8 G( z2 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 _0 ~+ \/ A$ Y! C8 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ A  o( n. U& _: C2 ~) Y+ l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, x7 o* M. D, m3 I9 V9 O( e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( J4 Y& Z$ e# I- z  u7 |' V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) C% O. J% ]. B- r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" Z7 S9 b1 C& u( f0 j" z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 f5 e+ Q* H- P4 D9 P* n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ Z" y" F0 L" |+ W6 N( d1 s4 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" S; O7 j. o; g9 F<P>你无需担心</P>
/ M: }) a* {; V0 [' v1 u( M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' X- r. Q0 g& U  x* L. W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 a0 f" k" {, L* C/ L3 j  m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 o. e- R2 z- b/ b6 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ J8 Y# J! Z5 `7 g; @& z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( Q, t- m+ i$ Q$ f1 s' p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* s6 z- T  i, ]8 p  O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, E4 A" ^: R; \  I3 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; L- B& A3 j( `( G6 \& {6 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" X' C% p5 T' y" M0 Q" N* u0 Q5 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ R' U" S0 S1 u' K1 Z3 a3 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# h7 g% Z5 ~- i- \) n- R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 G- t, q6 u% p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 `) u- w6 C: p  N# c- Y1 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. x; E: B  u. L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% ]" R- }" b& k# `8 O2 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; l# k: `: p: w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: t+ O2 S: \' {' _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: g5 @# N# i$ M: A% Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) z) {3 `6 ^/ o0 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ N3 \# |3 z6 I4 K) ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 _. C3 J  x: y+ A, {8 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ p+ w0 ^; ?0 Q" w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ P; E4 k. Y0 ^4 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 ]; o1 r5 g& H! B7 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>