【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: n5 Z! v% T! B/ [+ x$ u4 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- W5 X! M. H1 H) SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! |% G9 u! {4 T. G1 I; _6 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% B5 Y" m  R/ j2 i- I& V; ~: mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 y2 d' V2 a( H8 X7 W( eI love you I love you with all my heart
+ |& k+ V0 m3 P. E, q) NNothing can compare to my love
* h8 |( E' I+ Y% U7 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) N5 l5 m9 F, e( N1 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. C: m1 n) c' L+ P4 |! \: `With such a tongue as yours,
) g5 q, @& Z: ^" e' q# I$ KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; d' A) n- Z2 Q& k, o7 [5 @* CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, Z) R9 r$ g; L9 |* d) ]+ b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 g8 U& o1 ]" B  j1 T  V# m8 V5 x& R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 a: [1 j$ w  i5 @3 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. j4 A" O) s) k0 O' A; q' c# |2 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. O4 k) P* v; ?4 i* W& ^% j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ]/ w% m7 M$ M9 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 F' J0 q; V6 ^, \% O3 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. T+ w; H, q; w) I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 n7 u6 f* D" P* Q9 Z+ Y& o+ X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 C6 F- h% X6 k, x+ K8 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ e) ^6 x5 L- j. t1 \5 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  R; ~4 A* k6 A/ a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% v, s3 \1 i8 d7 Q. M' g4 z7 ]- o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; R5 m" |0 \. J9 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' R& [: m+ d3 W" G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& R! K, `+ \1 C8 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' S* O" _: n! G0 r% H8 y( W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 c9 a7 s2 o# b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& S2 q3 H7 Y6 [  |8 t- i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 @' C' M0 L# ?$ L9 D( H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 z; x# {5 ^' C6 y5 N3 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: Y9 W# e3 \/ k8 @7 b$ t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) p$ f4 K0 a2 L2 i6 T, H- [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! }) L% ]5 i+ |( T4 z. m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) u% b( ]/ t7 ~& t; b) |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 E! f) h/ R8 _6 t. S" ?- k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 T) q2 u) M. h  D9 U- j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( N) W5 j6 a0 j6 g2 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. p( F* o5 B8 i) R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# d2 Q5 ~- M: M5 x4 t, K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 l% L8 }$ O- y; d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: T- x7 N" F( H0 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 A1 E* t2 Y7 e$ l( [9 a$ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ K1 w: P7 C0 _/ v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>