【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; u  F- n: n" g4 {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 |- c! N1 L, S4 F- XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* n' }$ _2 F+ B( GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: V2 S1 y( G/ a+ eThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 K+ O4 x" C/ SWith the moon kissing it every night
( N( Y% R# S, o4 i, @. JSeeing the sky content with its love
* X* ]" Y' _% n. W" \: g+ {# wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! o% R5 [" V  y- ?; |: DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ^# u. }) o$ }$ IEvery other word you utter is love
+ G* R  z6 f4 q3 x7 W  Y# rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' z4 h* O* r8 J' M9 b% T  uI want so much to see inside your heart
, M5 N  K1 ~4 i0 p; z# b- n0 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 D; @. ?9 q! O7 |- C/ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' x+ n4 r  R7 E- V( WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 h0 X+ P: j2 m) s" S! P1 r5 `# s' F# bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' z: ?& ^& B9 k8 m+ S: U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, Z2 ]+ i1 P6 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: s% s- z6 l7 v  P- ]8 n! Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ R8 r8 w6 }" {8 N) U9 M$ K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' H. X/ |4 ~3 B/ R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# w: b1 R. V+ W1 a4 \1 ]) g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 b+ o$ i+ b6 J+ Q1 n3 [, K& C  Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 p5 }  Y6 D; W0 o* S" k7 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 S3 T3 f( r5 Q5 a6 j/ i  n4 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' t$ n# ]7 M) y. H' d# [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ a& q0 [  o3 Q( j9 T$ T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 Y6 G0 R4 K7 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 K% D0 M. y0 f: w1 M0 Y; c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. K. x8 p) r- V6 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 @; Y" [1 _  O: I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 k: k$ F. }) X! ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% v- K$ R: I( p- Y# A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" m2 A4 H, _* z# I$ }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 R5 B7 u3 \$ W1 s* J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. e+ f; @5 w0 S! s7 y0 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. @/ C) Q) k5 q" G, y" J! n" k+ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 T8 [6 P: V+ L! A% n+ h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( p( J  d1 D. l: X5 I7 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 U- Z5 M6 ^: p7 [6 f  z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# p. R% G+ @1 p" S5 a- C: A5 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 o- k" y! N, Z6 \! C8 b4 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! E4 B2 j$ J$ z# i7 L7 H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 ]3 y; d! ]( f/ E% e; s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>