【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 T) X) h& }/ v& k. t1 \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 |; a5 Y) Y/ j( l4 @) E% nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 e7 I1 U/ X, R* I3 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* E7 O3 b& H+ C+ F9 j9 e+ g9 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 H: s5 z$ Z+ S/ g" s8 [% z2 M' pI want so much to see inside your heart
7 _$ t  x) `4 e4 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ a, O" r. ?6 r9 d( PI’m still filled with fear
7 ~; B; L6 _* m) ^" M7 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. n' @' F# W: QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 M$ T4 ?# Q  A. Z& WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 \& p; D% @1 Z6 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( N* L8 p1 t4 Z% q; v! Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 J7 T8 A. r! j# o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% n# M5 p1 S: y: T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  j8 v3 q% D6 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# D, \$ ?3 N" f6 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. X$ T% }  I$ ?* U! }: Q9 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! X" g5 I9 S& k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  o. v5 W5 I5 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" A' m. _" c, N4 X8 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 L, s/ O/ G' T, `: z" v) _# v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! n: E7 w2 j5 `0 L: z2 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 k0 h' j1 r( h0 Z9 y4 `  n/ p8 A9 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# O$ e4 \; s' g1 F4 i9 Z# b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* s3 S: k5 l& t- `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Z3 Z: i0 ?/ U* T% H) V$ [6 P! Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 z0 K1 Z( e) h! M) |( ?+ p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- U1 u3 ~- ?, G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 B6 d( U5 N% e' v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 H2 g7 J5 \4 ^6 t) G/ f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: t" n; l2 c) @( M+ [2 ?7 H5 q8 r1 @) F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 E5 f2 n2 I0 u4 g) M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! v& c8 _' w* g; Q  r$ U- I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 q* K! m2 S& j) a, p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" }" s( J: e4 X, e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>