【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 H% i8 T- Y+ I: B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 q1 ^$ f2 A$ F% F) ?0 n6 k; S! C/ p% DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ R. R" Y5 h$ \5 d9 B# RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  x. `  O! u  `0 X$ h3 A9 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 M( L& `1 g0 c2 y! o! p6 C0 b: v5 d& }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 ^; Z! O! r% P$ H0 D; wI love you I love you with all my heart
) a+ L/ |0 ~. d, ZNothing can compare to my love
# J3 X; i, M9 Y% F! p, nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ ^- `) P' w) V5 Z- OI want so much to see inside your heart
* X! w& \+ z! F6 a% \6 o  M2 h( XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" r4 B3 @9 A9 O4 }I’m still filled with fear
6 g- |/ D, b' }/ pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 Q) K9 R1 F% q+ ?/ e/ _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% B8 u8 {) R) z9 Q' W7 X. g" IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* V( o. R  h0 j. KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ G, k1 H- H& Y* g' y( m9 ]0 ]' n5 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ s/ I; _, R; t2 D( P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 b, y% E* u" C4 n9 f3 L# h5 |9 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 o: O* p9 H6 B( t8 X. H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# |$ `2 X8 N. }" ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 U, \: R8 L0 y4 S; b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- G/ r$ D" o) l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 w6 W1 C5 d+ }+ I- x9 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 t% C& Q/ f4 c5 |9 h  G9 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 \, u1 N/ P. u1 U# ^+ D2 D6 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! C, f4 v2 b0 N5 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, H  D) A* C5 M7 J$ B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  s/ g+ L3 {4 x( q4 t2 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  |" q. D4 G1 T* L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 g; e0 f7 t9 r3 h" }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. c! n( S& ]+ z: r3 P* k: _5 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' z5 s* F* T# u7 I+ U: l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( u  `3 M5 \+ E5 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' ?1 P7 T( o% _# X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) |' U7 U1 o! ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 \) [% b0 k! X6 O4 W6 C$ O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 u  x! s+ E2 t1 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 S' ?  r$ E+ q5 l. U9 }. w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" x5 r* J! D/ g) V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ T  m# F! q7 G9 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* O( [8 V/ \) ?2 O; f1 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- F) Y( V# j2 f1 l: s( X! P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, h/ m8 T4 a; u. }; ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>