【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- l) F" c2 b9 x( o$ Q1 D! k# S! NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ I3 i* }% r. I% r( p  U: QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ t# v* h% @+ J% z- K4 Y+ v& [: kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: d" N+ W0 W4 ~. f0 f, M" FThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 o% B2 A. R; a; b  FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" o! [5 L/ Z% R8 }+ CYou needn’t fear anything
3 b3 }; f; b. k; v% A: LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 Y# |  {2 L- I$ @/ h8 m# D+ jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 k$ E: H0 W# x7 L/ sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& h) _1 t7 \" T! ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% F- o6 }: Z0 D! E! EI’m still filled with fear
- h' m$ t3 s* ]7 ~* c. EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: _8 |9 W5 F" @$ \% z& X! u% T8 ]I regret not dying
. |0 `! x8 G* U% U' JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; k6 Y3 ~) M7 W# a4 x  `1 Z/ fWith such a tongue as yours,
+ s9 ~& y; ~) W& n  MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' h. E/ J6 d; u! a' A: qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 L5 R! h  P- S  f& Y4 l2 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" n& k  a$ J, z! A( o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* r( Z8 E& q1 _* B( p0 a2 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; u4 l; \/ L; Z2 W" u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: m$ o* P9 S/ d# b$ a" K) Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 H% }: {$ \) h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 ~. d. ~* F, S% J# u8 v4 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% A9 U5 K5 h) d2 c! E7 C* s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, k, V3 S7 s5 N$ j! ]' j: E8 N" _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) h% o/ j+ w* _2 r0 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. j- L  c1 K9 \- R- i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& L; A$ |+ C% X, w/ ^$ ^# d2 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 [+ |9 j7 V! f: V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 C5 {$ z) L) {- t  x8 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. G+ ~. S1 O/ {" f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 p/ ^& m" L& F" y7 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 r( ?: }' K/ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) B$ F, ]5 k9 n: Q, E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ `' ]) b, W( d) m. u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 s) l: I! l+ ]8 I' L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Y5 Q3 F6 O7 k4 `; X; J: v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 [) o/ u9 J0 [2 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 b( J  W0 j+ t$ N- g$ Z, c) ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  L+ r: K( h+ m0 h# q3 w& Z* x* {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; R" \, y: V& X# c' j" k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 @  S$ V8 ^- F3 R+ [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, x2 G+ X5 p  P, B# g3 j* ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( q: d2 E+ Q. d4 c5 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- V1 `0 m2 ~1 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: A# P9 p2 S" ~- X4 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, o) i+ b( t4 h, \4 y- l9 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>