【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' Z8 ~% @  c  [0 ^( KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, W1 Q$ ~1 ?1 z6 [. wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" t7 ^: W. E& i- v3 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 j/ P9 F' a7 P# F; }4 Q, zThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ ^( d; j5 C" q& {  SWith the moon kissing it every night
* m  |) I  z2 ^. w' eSeeing the sky content with its love
) j) q8 N$ j# r7 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 V2 S5 o2 y8 r9 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% M" S) G+ t9 n' g0 P" ZEvery other word you utter is love
' ~, ^5 D8 }4 V" a6 z6 `I really want to know just how much you love me
4 M- M6 U# @& `! hI love you I love you with all my heart
% E' ~1 X4 Q8 n$ CNothing can compare to my love
. e, s8 z9 J$ |1 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 i, p  p8 G% ~) _, E' z: UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 v# ^3 B2 e' n7 [; C( rI want so much to see inside your heart
3 e8 v. U6 q- L8 m/ B. PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 g" Y$ p4 ~/ O, b" iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ X" A3 o( L' n; D' i9 b  L' hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 e# R% p3 g" q6 x& qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 I1 }7 k' t1 V8 a8 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' ?' K6 C2 s. C6 G* gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 p5 z" k) q, L7 ~$ F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ t% h. Z6 a9 E. F9 R1 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ _- ^; [& i/ b: r- x8 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; @4 o" I! L% k* X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# B3 [/ S6 I( j2 W2 j5 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( m8 j1 }% t6 a+ j9 Z9 c9 K" t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: {4 A% ], o2 m% ~+ r. S+ y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 f' u- G3 N  Y9 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" r. k; E; M) {4 L- |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& z9 S2 l& I* o, ^3 x( q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" A$ Y9 N4 M0 W* J  ?2 o3 j3 |4 B<P>你无需担心</P>
; {2 Q, y9 I! ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 O; r; b9 D4 \& s- ?6 X% F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) D  I' S; a% O2 z7 I  s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 x0 O) B* t7 P; ~7 l! a* f5 `) B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ i. H& O. g% c& U; S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 A! S. Z3 r9 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ^& m5 E3 x& s# A# v! p& p& d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 t, I' |) Z. A5 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 }& o0 H; S" x  O! s. r% W  g3 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# O4 B2 p% i- u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 b: d7 m3 K7 `& i: N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 o# G2 `3 }' p/ Q3 X9 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) C& s' c, ^5 r; M. x' u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ Q: W3 I4 _  [: A# e  M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; e9 h5 N! @* b8 p' _0 k. h7 \7 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& B5 X7 i) U2 ]0 ], V4 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) A, f8 |4 @# T" @1 D+ G% h6 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) c, z/ w& u0 _6 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; k1 r( Z. w9 ~3 g6 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ ]' p1 Z  X( ~$ T' \; i2 b# t我请你剖开它
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4 B# i! [4 T& K+ K! o' _, | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ @1 q2 R6 q4 C# a0 s9 _# S9 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>