【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ y# I1 N6 G* O6 M' e/ `The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 @; H  f. Y5 R+ ^8 D' x6 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& k% M) B) D% ^! VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 z4 C! @, B$ ^6 c" @& O1 l+ }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 q1 r$ N5 [+ K0 ]; q+ A$ E9 F- NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* U( S7 M& g6 K+ tSeeing the sky content with its love
9 Y8 i- M9 V' H( C) o) LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- Q2 d9 V7 f( r5 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; L) H. T4 R. UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( {0 g: q% S7 n' UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ~* b/ q7 L. s; y5 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
" f% O) A9 ?1 K1 c$ mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( r, I# s( e: KI regret not dying
( r9 M, P" s$ A5 D0 a+ f* \! I6 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 _5 ]! m9 |; iWith such a tongue as yours,
; W) S5 d0 D. c) AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 g# P- A: ^' J" U* T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) z+ E; R2 S* L1 i9 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* y) I+ h7 t: M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' x" |( W1 e! t& T* O2 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ R4 I4 S0 p" Q$ u6 W; ^9 I7 O! z( k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 f9 G' e( J$ z: x6 @0 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* B5 Y1 G3 \1 h- z0 i' |+ d4 G0 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" q4 {: V0 V5 \0 t* u% F4 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 \3 A. R- x. q+ {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. S5 ^% ]2 O( J0 s- k2 V  d: ]- `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 P- X. M. ~( f) b5 C6 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 r6 t5 \7 `) f, W. t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# j' V% |- s9 E% j5 P* n0 S6 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" y& w; ?. ~" P8 I" {% ^: k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ?* Z/ q  Z7 d2 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( m# s0 V  `; i$ u5 |% z8 {/ b% V8 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) c& Z) i8 U7 c; Q& n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 l$ g2 P. `# U5 X" @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 r6 i* i1 A) m/ x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# J) g* Z' b" y: F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- }. E% H5 w2 a% G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: W/ F! @* |6 m1 W: I: h, y6 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* B  h5 i; M, t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ }# J1 n9 H; g* z3 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" H* s, X0 }/ d3 |7 j. L$ m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% t/ L: I: O) S* j- t1 A: D$ k<P>I regret not dying</P>
! _: H& n$ g: a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ~+ E8 S- _! y; o  z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( n# L/ e+ i* T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  u% A8 V: a# }' K% q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 L9 K6 P5 T, T/ K2 f& {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: r) C' m7 c3 c, t& u. _+ Z# F# s7 `+ Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 T* j% t& d& N$ |9 y+ v4 l0 Y) q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) k% ?- F- d4 I/ l  G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>