【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. Z5 ~; K* Q- z( LThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 j2 v3 S0 l2 U  uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 n, [# v( f' VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 K6 K$ K2 K8 _! JEvery other word you utter is love
1 J9 o2 W( M2 n7 t" ]0 K9 X+ w* UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 d8 j6 x  \2 P: PNothing can compare to my love
4 R  L1 @( d' U2 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& a/ B. T( W/ Y. P  ^4 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 Y7 l! u) E' Y" fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% o6 B2 k4 U/ yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 e4 U7 x0 O4 a$ F0 R* N# X/ eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( |% I! l- b* L: x: D9 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% n  v* Y0 {1 m' }  yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 z1 _7 a) K+ |0 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* D) I5 y$ E+ K% m5 |; I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& n9 V* @7 P- a* A0 x& d8 I2 @3 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 ]; P  n* l9 O; f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 c1 C1 X/ L4 E8 a) ^' R# z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ~6 R1 o3 {. r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. Z9 l. N! ~  W% n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ _/ k6 f6 l- [. g( {; J* t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! B6 m! H* B9 i3 k& d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, I: y( ]) z4 e, W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 `% ]4 _$ _& P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) E. s; t. f' l8 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) `) I1 @- D% o+ G: s. _; f- G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 t0 @: J+ V* A% j. A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. M. o1 S  o! T% X6 M8 c' n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; d5 A1 u: l8 Z" ~  n" i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; w( e3 x4 M9 y: ]2 K4 Y. V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# l6 x9 p  l" r1 K7 V1 w" G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) N( j. ^% Z' ]* ?3 X( h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) I  Y3 E9 m# Q: D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* c) k8 }" a' F4 k" o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' {* f: A! Q/ M3 a+ x& {# e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ?7 ~* o4 o& R% b% a$ F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 N" l" x9 i' v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 G1 N% `4 z0 S  N/ T$ q9 P" C6 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  y' \' ^" J* N1 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% F# ], M( q# {9 U* N; d. j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ u4 ]; D. q7 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. B* d0 k2 C1 N1 Z) d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. Y3 Y2 D) v9 d( ^7 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# @) O4 _* ]& @2 @% R. U5 x+ D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( z' V2 ?) p, ~; R$ n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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