【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( }* f" `( j- |5 U: Q歌词我附在后面。
- j0 \$ z3 }3 F6 a! qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, d; ^2 X; J" R/ I; sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 q, h/ s; e  xYou needn’t fear anything
- T9 K4 h+ m8 f. [- sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  A: T' l& I8 `+ t' {& N/ _* OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( `' G' E- l' Q7 Q2 H) {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ Z, }: S" n. Q7 o8 `# dI’m still filled with fear
" f+ [; {" b3 L9 C: U- BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% B9 Y" z, ^# p7 X1 Z6 ]1 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! {+ m0 k% j' j" OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' K1 V4 x2 z# c7 C, VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# o; A5 C: S+ C) H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  v4 Q. {" P- i9 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 n: d3 B1 [4 k% E) l( ~% a: x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! x, _% H0 M  q1 l( @  y4 z1 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ V( Q1 y7 E7 z! t8 @- M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. B& e. d- q. y! g. H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ n# G  n6 i( k8 E/ n) x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ k. Y% `# j* U% Y# L( L# X3 z; _3 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. o" Z6 @, z% u  X; ~0 W  Y( g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 c& a: j! ]# p( u% V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 B7 |0 \5 d. ?5 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 P, W* S( `3 [. \- `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 }% ^7 \6 [# m1 k4 c- l1 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ R2 d% j, p( w( h+ u" ~0 @# ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- v/ B% H6 V' E( u2 |, h! E+ ~3 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# _5 a: X+ z% e, R/ y  [0 U1 a! g, O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- I& o; A/ V% I( t, i, k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' I* v; x0 ~' O5 H+ F+ z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 V1 B8 o# r; S4 s8 G7 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* i% R9 P' b: e5 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! }  _+ _- O% H  S$ U/ L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 P; m, T$ f0 @9 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 o+ O' o+ Y4 R* B! p1 G8 E" E" A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 J3 l0 n" ~8 S8 J. O; q$ n4 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) R  M- P, u1 C4 U+ |' |, }- V2 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>