【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: w7 d" i* U2 V6 O* tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% B1 {+ w' d8 b% ]1 w* @/ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  c+ M+ M# Q4 v0 o# JThe sky is happy down to its soul
. f/ g! t' V, V0 A5 F' C* PWith the moon kissing it every night
. z" Z9 \  K+ k: bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ y, N) z5 }* PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  Q) ]* E% C& f# }) Y% \% nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ U* y9 E+ m# x5 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 m6 p5 W' m  J2 U0 U. ~6 [. PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) n& T* E$ M! ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 o, j4 v' v# z% G, A0 b% g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" u9 w% Z  a+ X& Y. F! Z7 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 K! Y: t$ ]$ e- I6 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 B& Y- x6 q, f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" m1 d2 h& W$ `1 s: Z8 ?! s; L2 w3 ^& _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ E0 Z1 c+ V' [) z( v" b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 o( C6 G# Y6 e0 Y+ ]7 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) y4 u8 ~5 X- w# ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" M0 m9 U  B- D7 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& n$ e$ M7 A' w) d6 b9 g( k4 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# [7 j4 B9 A7 C3 |' N0 ]: U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Q4 S+ F& v  |7 M5 [+ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 `* w4 a+ S5 C" M3 @, z( T! M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! c5 R% Z+ k# o+ K- J8 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  X0 i, |& @( o5 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. w# u4 g. W4 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( H% N, @; U, ?" p( Y& r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# T' I$ C" J2 e$ ~6 H5 z8 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 A5 A& Q; e% W1 j$ G+ B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' }* {' R3 K5 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- Z& ?. I  `; E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ Y, H+ m" w, P+ V( D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ?. o: M# `0 m5 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- |& W+ s& g( \  D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; D, p0 ^0 @8 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 m  ]1 f& N5 s/ ]# k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 n2 R$ b( X0 `, Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 f3 _8 P5 c" a( z* V: e9 v/ C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- R) a9 E+ I% @# t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 j$ g( V( `% `  m( |  Y" }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 i3 o4 s$ a+ n" P& D' t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 U; m7 m: M: n/ l, E5 z6 ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>