【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 I' N$ K2 _5 K$ G6 L歌词我附在后面。
6 a- k7 f# ], M9 ?+ j) P3 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& {  G; d- t0 |4 |# ^* M; NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, s3 |8 F- ^7 Z& H* M8 ^- KWith the moon kissing it every night
9 p( b( d: A- T0 r" bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* F1 {1 t, x  k3 W7 H4 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 c; X2 a$ a3 d+ Z& S3 ?2 X* x% N& ]Every other word you utter is love
, m/ L6 I* k6 x/ e; VI really want to know just how much you love me
+ |, K3 [' z) L8 l. P3 E3 c3 MI love you I love you with all my heart
% d1 W- K9 {' S4 j, L+ F0 u% aNothing can compare to my love
9 @- _% G' P! x0 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 [- {+ y9 e$ V1 B$ O8 w' ]# h" OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 L0 ?/ h6 @* k- h/ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' q+ q5 w8 i% _' N: ?% A7 K  t$ a1 e4 jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# b( A! O. Y& e0 p- @2 |, jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* p8 S/ X) C' j8 E' dWith such a tongue as yours,
: k/ B0 x' t/ s- [' zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! L% k) ~: A6 \# U! x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, ^, W& |! G. |) y! p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 W& j( N) N7 m. q$ Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ _$ b. |' w; n$ S+ r4 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 q" I. }% n' o0 N) p# M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 Q6 V0 v/ m2 V+ J' i: o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* s$ f$ x7 q: s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: E# x8 |* g  z  ]8 E9 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! ~. o$ n. q$ l3 f% X) m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- p/ X# W7 w; _6 O5 r# x" Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ~  H. w; C* k& A" p6 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. r, E7 z1 U" }. n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! H/ F8 a3 Z% P! C7 O  k! J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- T0 X4 Q! X6 n! c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; B# L+ [1 S+ v% V) V. D" n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# S& P# j+ |7 I; d, w. O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 ?, `/ r2 `0 Z8 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' M8 m% H$ {  S. j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 j" N  p8 ?. R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, J$ k6 c" T2 q% a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  {) N1 w; A: x1 Y; I; k7 Y7 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 i& \  N/ c7 j$ J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( y- ^& O- w5 U6 e! o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 Y: }( G2 N, E; g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: `+ H$ I5 X. F- x: J8 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 E2 O3 H6 u% M, [% v2 C$ F! m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: X1 j4 f9 Q  W' ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 }  K/ Q0 w3 n8 S9 a; F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. T% l7 b" E/ A6 L& e+ ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ q; x* t6 z8 L7 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 S6 a) ?* Y: S; \7 x2 m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>