【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& r2 C% `7 J6 d) Q# f% b: V: J歌词我附在后面。
  r( G, V) q9 v! O5 G& D4 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" w2 B+ w  d; m  U9 J1 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 P6 O1 V* Z  X2 L' ?  U( VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# ?& W& r* v. r% y: lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 ~, _4 ]8 \0 p, }9 m  zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& {$ L7 B7 x' wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 L' O" z5 l4 m! E% gI really want to know just how much you love me
+ `, a$ q7 G/ x* c8 p* MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) C" _0 ?8 [1 B$ WI want so much to see inside your heart
) ?8 |4 u6 f! X: O: S! q: [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 t6 b( _/ p5 }2 {! {6 h0 C  ^0 gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# H/ F( `9 t6 m" Q4 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) n3 @7 h. J/ `4 M; l: J- V" @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! s  R" r( p& Y/ s# U0 q  Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  H* t3 H$ G& ^  M: l% h0 |" {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: O- Q* m3 ]# g6 u2 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ s9 ?, H" ~9 U- @- [( `+ _. ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" }) Z8 L. [' v% T+ b" K( t% x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- j, C! s' d: U- |% J! I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 I) y$ n: z; z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. b( s4 _" c! R5 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  L0 s) W+ o3 r$ b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. L% {% Q# d8 _; D9 n) e+ v) g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; {6 ~! i& C' }/ }9 Z+ e5 \6 i2 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 s6 _7 O. k" i5 S& s% A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ |" W$ L* x+ u9 ^' P  _  [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# |9 U, v& m- g' ~7 [/ [- T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ i5 E8 P  l6 a1 J' x% |% U1 M$ a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& x$ v  _0 v" }5 ?7 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% @0 C! x* v' q0 O& `4 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 z# y( O! U" i6 I* {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, X& s/ h( L3 K' N1 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' [3 P6 U! v) D2 y7 P' u. _+ |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* y# J. v  K' z% d" |" n4 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 ^; ^: u; p" _& d<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ W. |3 m& f! `" O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 K6 k- C- B( z1 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; @/ A& T: r+ R. t2 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 f: A7 W# Y# a; g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ X! ^1 d6 s2 E' x5 P% ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" D: M; R2 X/ t! G2 Z8 |5 x! u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( c  H% N9 {+ Y1 ~) P/ B8 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* t% F% }. ?9 T8 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
; I+ `" p' Y3 Q7 ~3 ^* m) E% \
; u2 N* Z6 Z4 m5 D, G我请你剖开它

8 T& \; E+ |* L# s8 z3 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>