【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) s$ d. l* ^2 |  s, MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. d0 [# g7 h- C: i( zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 e  v6 J7 }. S8 ]; F& ^The sky is happy down to its soul
& w8 v) ~* b( Z: b/ o$ tWith the moon kissing it every night
7 Q! O3 x( E1 u9 k  i$ rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% s$ a: a0 a. x0 \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 y; B) {  d0 M. G$ n) [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 h3 I8 R" z7 w% Y6 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% M9 d' B8 v/ DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) @, C: a3 w; Y3 _I regret not dying
- h" e! p. A& Q: V- ]3 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; c: T# V8 d! c: pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 T; I& C7 Y- Q4 e3 l6 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ K" c5 u, g: V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# Q/ I( e" W7 U5 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 |  T0 H$ d# V6 _; }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( k# p3 n$ ~) M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ q5 \* s" y& w( X2 g' V" N1 x( K" W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: b2 x/ D4 N! t( A8 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  i- v% L9 y- i5 [3 K) A* c5 v8 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  U, L9 ?8 h. m1 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) Y9 X, c- @: J! A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; t) M+ Y- h! [4 r% z: P  `3 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, q  M* i* Y8 f% M, e% j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, U5 O2 V# ~% o) a# d. p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: O2 \5 @3 [/ x6 ]* k6 e% o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, y9 k7 W4 z0 h1 s# G% b9 c( m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" z/ X  {* f% C+ m- a3 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 V: `4 v* s1 j: r' T* V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 b, Q/ [! g3 ]0 E1 }( G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 N/ _' O  d6 w$ P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 D+ l7 e% O6 x. p- \9 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( {4 f2 S- H+ z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# |' f& x5 Z$ J9 @, Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 i$ X5 G$ w- B% L5 n: t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! N/ `" w/ i: @% f% {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 V8 e' j: v* A/ y$ [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; i/ I0 B6 l: q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 ]* u# e/ N* A4 v6 g. F$ \  y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  U( {/ a. ^+ ~0 i" v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- w* U- F0 Q6 h, x8 B! h+ \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 w2 [, b1 z5 r7 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* a  P& O2 [% w$ z' w. ^  W  r+ K) z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  V* v- S1 L* |& z2 S/ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>