【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 i1 ~$ f4 L$ |, ?- {  A歌词我附在后面。
  z" V4 d0 [2 y7 g" [4 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. _* }  X0 M" \1 [: k7 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% [# Q! C2 X9 T8 N& f# FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  c) x7 N" }7 r% AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 e, z+ y% j$ d7 G+ Q+ CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ O) h+ y8 F5 i" Q+ p( a' DI really want to know just how much you love me
) }: b6 u, `' \- gI love you I love you with all my heart
- X# T. B4 x, Z3 Q' N8 x6 DNothing can compare to my love
# w" Q/ y! E# E1 _* P% a6 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! v# S; l2 S) x3 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- {/ |$ o! {( yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 r, q1 H) z: A# T' ^# cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, ~) c7 K* V' G  u0 e1 w7 `( f) v* s, LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' m' o4 c/ v/ d5 u- m- NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& }  f% G- E0 |' |$ u6 }7 d+ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ^' S/ Z: I0 Y. n4 p8 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 c2 z7 M* S. N9 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 f2 m8 F1 y0 m! Q* ~- y* M7 Q3 M5 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; b  m3 X; t5 ^, s4 }% d- ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ P; q9 `/ ?: g  X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 m5 `4 ~1 U9 K7 t, g) b5 c( n3 q- c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# \- r% {& Z. ^# }<P>你无需担心</P>
( X2 A$ _5 K" I+ u3 K& \9 o3 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% K- o/ E. h" \! K' E+ v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# _" V1 p8 J# m; w# T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; i0 [1 m" K# a5 j& O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ d6 G" t3 K2 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; {& n6 F5 M! R' K9 h: N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" d4 g9 G; B0 K0 l+ ]$ u0 a8 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 x* N! _9 t2 f  c# s* k6 L: o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 I: J" b5 J' }: d2 ^4 K- m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& S8 Y  g  |% d- q7 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- r1 T- g# J- j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! ^. @. n6 G8 k6 [8 C+ _; G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* }" X  ?4 z% `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* H6 U+ b. H& i# |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! b( C9 E5 m8 X  r. r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 M- j, A; ^$ I' O% `2 B: `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, v' T9 f) e4 {3 x- E7 x! C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 J9 V( t; E! r! v( [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 x2 A, |% m0 r# e" o* p. \* e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, Y- g. z6 k3 n9 |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 A* L- b. L, C  y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>