【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ F; p2 j. `+ N$ ^6 Y% b9 J- aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ S; \: X* s4 ]2 j& D$ dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 ]: Z7 h* ?0 }) ]' w* I5 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ M8 N8 i4 ~6 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! J  _' H3 X) ^) aSeeing the sky content with its love
, |) G* i; ^& s7 N7 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 o  B- Y% X$ S5 W5 qYou needn’t fear anything
6 ^7 d7 q- h# [* B8 M! B# ^5 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) {0 C  @, F! }/ q9 s1 qEvery other word you utter is love
3 m5 ~, z. K/ A# A$ gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( H- b: y4 a; F( Z* T/ s8 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% M4 z1 B7 D  M6 f# q/ X- AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ t# M: f9 u& T1 |8 uI want so much to see inside your heart
8 A0 T1 ]# O  iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* [7 P8 N& w0 d9 Y; B8 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 T! p, _# ]5 u. G" q3 a9 \0 c8 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 |) j" t- w: h8 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ j- C8 c3 d0 U% q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: Q, B9 B% x1 Y" G% G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- d( t, h6 [$ I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) {3 _1 e3 X& ?& |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 q/ q$ ~7 A  P! ^4 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ O5 O. M$ L3 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. j, G" ~9 o4 U- T) _3 B) |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' D. Z6 C8 U9 w& }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: p4 M5 r8 P2 U8 j# M, `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 K- S' o" l" ^& T( z( l1 }* z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 }* N2 ]5 J1 n1 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 @% H8 z. f% |- S* n& E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  w' [# d3 U3 L$ C$ W9 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% V5 l' o' [9 ?: @6 J5 |1 [# o, E1 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 }9 Y" m1 O8 z, W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# V' v- @. N: C3 ~8 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 Y9 r2 ^* P7 w  T  w# c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 u; F0 f/ o  L: w, I# t( @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 h# f) A' Z% L/ b# t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: S! U. F$ n7 H3 I( J$ k* M* N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ Q% n/ s, \5 z- j1 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 z; d6 d: |: I7 i' V) k1 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% [4 i6 |! t+ J" c6 y7 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- v2 i% t# n% j( X5 G: h! y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( F8 J1 p% U8 S  M  i7 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>