【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 v$ J% _5 m+ m  l. sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! O* V# T* `% h5 R0 }8 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 K3 G" Y. ^/ B" i5 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 X1 d: a0 n, t- c' ?+ M' eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. y9 Y) D1 v+ V1 |; WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 a4 K" R! P6 V( N0 w  Z+ W1 J& ?0 k* IEvery other word you utter is love
4 i' L5 E* K9 H! l( x  LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ b  g) Y0 [# B0 a" nNothing can compare to my love
( M1 j6 g% H+ W- t% \, hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' k9 X1 W1 g+ ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 U! u5 J! k+ q% y; @4 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ q  E7 Z; [; ^6 i) u9 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* _! _& A) i9 f4 P# Y$ M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) M3 y* H2 |2 [; B1 S0 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 y" h3 B8 g  Q! H- v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: O2 r% h7 M" y0 S% u2 U+ q' s. y: }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- G" ?: Q* r/ X3 x' n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; `5 G" d" ]. t5 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 t$ N0 m1 d' T* c  ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( t+ r2 Y. e9 x/ _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' g1 F7 L5 {8 H9 p7 U( L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! X- [7 s! N7 k/ x' n0 T0 ?" T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. k- q" l, G  v' a; ^( Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ n8 q6 M! v4 _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( U8 }" h2 M) f  ?# u4 L& U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 b+ p5 G4 G9 |- ]- X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" o& ~0 B9 s5 ]3 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! g$ C* L- |) }; }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% A) p! F) o* l( Y: l8 N, H' ?/ S9 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( s; L) d4 ~8 L+ _1 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* L% G. T2 o5 t" G$ m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 U! u& {* I6 y# h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& \6 H0 _5 }6 g5 b# s* E' C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" v$ e. ^. M9 a& S, n8 I& ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- J1 p& a$ w; ^" o6 Q, H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! ]7 H( i2 v, h  a; c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ \) p4 A9 H6 g( S8 I/ C8 s- M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' y& T1 d4 U' b8 C  Y4 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( P* F7 ~/ u7 x$ U1 `4 {; y8 ], h1 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# O; G' K" }  P' a+ z2 k7 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ f# ~/ q1 |; {/ x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' V( G9 x2 W5 j) v% \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- y1 C4 m: i* J" c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 w1 l9 I; L. p" u5 @+ ?) Y$ I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>