【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ D& }, n# ^  E6 G' I! G2 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 y" g7 I4 A# q( s/ qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! q, u% a" r6 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  D; @5 N2 B: c  s1 oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 a$ U$ O  F+ vYou needn’t fear anything
/ z% i1 k  @% ~3 e& iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 F( Y* K' u( w& T/ ]% B( YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 a8 t, k* y( L0 s% y9 c+ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- E4 A4 o3 A7 ]7 j8 Y: OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: ~0 N* |5 K; a/ {0 d, K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' \% s. {* i4 q+ T/ c8 n! D- w, S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ~* V+ ~& P+ s  U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  `4 X8 M+ s, ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) Q6 I# m" w% r6 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# c0 w1 |2 e4 e5 o% U! K# s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% C4 K! p3 V* `& e( u/ K+ j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 H, h0 N. X# Z3 Z7 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ J9 W8 ^  u/ c7 Y: u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) l0 n( |% }1 c% g/ q0 p) I; L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, p* n0 f( Z4 w# P/ S9 N( _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 X  K9 B, o' _( d9 \6 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 p6 [4 X" g6 ^! ~0 V& L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  |$ k# r: i5 `( E6 e6 R1 b. E9 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 Q# s9 M3 x* R; K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* O$ p1 t0 o+ T9 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 p' w2 J' _( p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 _7 H* `2 L3 o& J  O: x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 |( @  d5 a, D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ \% e/ R! ?8 D8 n' a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 s9 t4 L& I  D* F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. h' F  A' q5 J' h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; w! h0 j4 D9 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" [3 }, w9 Y' q4 L8 K8 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" X' l, X8 M+ c& U6 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 l1 @3 P) e2 @4 _/ M  v2 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 N) {8 T- P, v2 o9 v5 z9 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  U! d" n7 {/ d8 b" b; D" f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' G3 v: o1 b) k我请你剖开它
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: Y7 j+ c0 O+ {% Z) D& g; z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>