【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 ~; j" f4 C, @/ E. X; LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: }' X! x4 h, h) L0 P0 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
- F. q4 X. C1 g1 e' W; }) E9 Q! HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, ]( N1 N+ `( I# d% R, zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# S9 d6 \7 d  A+ P3 nYou needn’t fear anything
7 H- ~  c7 u# w! U# d0 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 Y# I6 G: b7 d' b& W$ OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 a; r) ]0 ?- t8 E" B! l6 gNothing can compare to my love
' H) X3 u' a+ s8 a% dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 [' b2 ~' \7 }: _5 i2 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 q6 G; e3 H+ r- CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& q) ?. W1 z$ r/ r, SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" W4 @8 _5 Z, y: M& D! [8 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 d  E; S- U: y7 z( U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 V' _; q. B! d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( T% v! u2 F# {  ?0 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ q* f+ V  C, q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ t: T  A+ y8 |: y5 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 w. u, O3 g& x( z/ [6 U! b% Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 b1 K6 C9 U8 U& Q, d$ f; {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 _! T, t, D& H+ L. S) x4 L# p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& a) f! c- J$ i3 X' p<P>你无需担心</P>
$ \) K8 F( c1 u9 [( |1 L& R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* N* n7 {- ~( Z, q5 D/ B3 \9 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  N* w$ ]0 H" u8 u3 @/ n0 I) v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 _3 E- t0 x, G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 L  ?' ?+ s% V( x5 U7 ~& J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" G- k- [2 j4 d, ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, J2 X5 z0 N8 b/ [, W' y/ E  _% A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# B, A1 A: A3 L5 V% G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) F& W% P  a6 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 j3 |1 f; I& L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 D9 |$ l/ ^- Q5 W# t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, g$ F6 B8 u% x( G  _7 ~9 o7 R2 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  l8 y# z( r: v1 k* [1 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ {. f0 O! M3 t* K3 `5 H7 [. |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. Y+ n% X& o: N9 c0 x$ s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% c7 f% |. v/ }7 \7 P+ S; s6 \1 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. U9 h( F' ]1 r1 {7 G+ x, e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- c6 u) L; x- R  p% r: k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 G6 W2 T" ?! \$ a9 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( w* p5 x6 m* l0 t$ C1 I4 `; |7 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>