【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: p: B: n# p+ `5 o7 e7 J2 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. h( o, o) a7 k+ [4 F. H5 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' z4 q' g3 A( U5 A: CYou needn’t fear anything
3 m% b" T' j$ G( rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& o& D' D3 h/ x+ h+ EI love you I love you with all my heart
& s( |9 D6 l; YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: g5 {0 J) P4 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 ^, J- g% [* V0 K5 f- OWith such a tongue as yours,
) _* q/ m2 q5 S% q  t% XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# f; m2 q0 `+ Q, Z0 y% a6 s( WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: y" _$ P( O6 \( ]& G  ^6 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 c- c4 S/ m  j. w8 g' r" o2 k: d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& e+ ]) |& V9 V3 D; o) a4 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 ^; [. M) R( n! k& b2 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. m) z$ ~- Q# _0 J  U+ V% \) n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) B% Q/ e4 H  j  B' O3 [* E0 Q7 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  N1 M3 q6 R2 S5 U' |4 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 ?3 s  d) F8 t. p4 E" F8 t2 ?/ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 [& N5 p# _6 R& H, N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  d# u  \: d: \% |( f3 q8 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% c7 D* G& K8 j5 M# s$ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: I1 w0 M2 l1 h4 N, _/ `; a4 c8 w+ K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- ?; m' z7 l! q: j5 m6 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  t+ O* `$ ?5 `0 q( y* X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) p- _% Q% u7 A' E  ^' h# k( h3 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  @8 M; q6 V) f% |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* v6 S: ^# }" L- W  s7 C. M4 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 ]9 l5 `: Q' M; n2 ^  |" E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- D* R- j6 Z/ {$ j9 J& W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ C6 G$ u8 j" o' q$ C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 i7 h3 i& P/ q; u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* D( C; T* i! R5 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 [$ [8 C5 t& N3 d4 ]7 I4 o* A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 U8 C1 S$ E( Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, n, f' L  I8 r' }3 \: `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 X1 q4 r7 o# u* z" |+ J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) k/ q9 P1 b( @4 u7 J* U3 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 z) X7 I$ _3 a# N% C) \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  Y$ ~- ^% y) g" l' i5 _; \, `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% K! `9 ]/ f7 ]7 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>