【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 q2 h" \* J& ^, \% q1 CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Z  i% x! o8 D3 E! ~: r  \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- E) z3 {4 U/ B0 n1 r+ {8 }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. v# M% S$ B+ Y( tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 I( p" u2 q" G& m' b& v; ^+ w4 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 Z) a& s- l, T& |I love you I love you with all my heart
* Z8 _/ s! s) b, Y; c) }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 G; Q& @% D# O7 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; L0 U8 \1 {% i1 U% oI regret not dying
& q3 ]7 S/ `( I4 b0 l7 l& \0 n) mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 P! K1 v( W8 h: C  E) _+ zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ h0 H9 \, [: a% Q% _2 R# |4 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 b. c1 Z0 Q- w8 \- e; X( U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: \* h; e& m2 l9 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' Y$ Q( K0 t' u" M5 v9 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, C" {: o8 s7 w+ |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; B5 r  c+ `) c, b. x" U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- ^8 E3 q) M9 T5 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 e/ A9 i2 C# @0 Z+ x2 L; p0 \! K# |% B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' v- N% a9 D: T" N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 I# {! t# R  j9 U2 P; u9 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 i* p* p0 Z5 m8 d  s# r! C/ F- L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 X' d% [$ K9 h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 `* P, [) ], H% G4 P; t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 c+ T$ K8 {" m4 \1 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 B" ~/ ^, x/ h% Q. k0 G7 D3 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Y2 a" Z& w3 ?  E- U8 _, R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 [% [2 ^3 ?+ Y" W* N" X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 K5 |, q( Z: k9 @+ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 c: ?7 g8 [  S( ~; P; J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- w; e, l' v: d% C9 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( \. ^7 N4 J- ~5 V, P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& e' k: X  J2 `$ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  J9 R( e! D4 \8 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ Q$ `0 k5 {" T1 i& C& G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( t9 y1 j: T/ D! ?; l; s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! `" g+ O3 W$ f% E# k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. I1 V& k( y4 ^* w我请你剖开它

0 u4 g+ t! I& u! Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>