【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 H) F" X0 R) A: n( m  R歌词我附在后面。
! N. b) Q  x6 D$ H  \2 L' qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 a/ T  d' V7 [7 x5 n+ d( aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( K( O6 K# P  D0 |  k- A1 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
. I% U7 ]( b+ }' m( [With the moon kissing it every night
$ U4 [: w$ R# t0 x- d) dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, I2 M6 C3 N! Y6 j/ z; tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  `+ S2 v7 v$ k5 I& c- t, nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( @3 M' }) ], g7 z% ^+ C) j4 W4 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" M# E( \: F4 cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 @. ?" `: t6 W5 C" DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 Q. L! E) v* T0 H3 V5 J: Z  ?& GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' J6 ~: o8 G7 L7 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 U4 b7 v: E' f' |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 t" ]( ]6 ~& g+ d; A0 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 q) H: B; j% }: L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 r3 r0 @8 T0 N. T3 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# w7 x, i" {; j% g: @' U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ h; Q- K8 Y2 z/ I. a- _  ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' @1 s, h( ?/ v) J1 E$ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; n4 W) R  }% y2 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! N, y+ h% r! A+ m1 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" [% [/ B  N0 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* d/ {: k+ Q# x% T4 X4 @1 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ B6 i* ]* F# [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) O$ T5 h$ k* t" e8 Y7 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# m' n# U; d( F" C( I9 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" R1 Y$ U& P8 |$ i: B; z' d2 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ e. F' }) N+ N6 t9 i5 d- [9 ]5 {: b; R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) R+ u+ ]& d2 ]9 q( h! G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 K6 \  x6 V) P" E/ J- g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' p- T4 A* r2 o9 s+ F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  E( a; d0 b+ [1 I# O; ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" S) ~% l& f5 u- r; v; S; L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% a; [4 o& M) U$ v. \1 _8 a4 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' }+ r. w: ]6 K& x; w: W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ N+ }8 s  u  T8 s1 g; K+ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ]( S0 K: l/ t9 N9 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>