【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 h8 G8 d3 F; ~$ i! e, F# ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
. U* l, N4 O: L) |) R+ H% OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 U6 b5 J' x0 \2 \* \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 S6 R4 ?' |7 W) ^2 |3 o. BThe sky is happy down to its soul
) A+ [1 {$ o' V# C" ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" U6 o/ \. A# _( W' T5 v. T) f3 k/ AYou needn’t fear anything
. P6 ~+ U, ?0 Z4 s0 @& m. Z3 h$ o( pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& G, ~5 u; ]7 i3 C. @I love you I love you with all my heart
! K" P6 h) U9 l7 b# O, ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 r3 P3 F9 ^& i# O: n5 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& H# \/ l0 X$ k0 F/ B! gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ c9 [" D" K$ \( A4 YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  L4 x+ R3 Y; L1 b: AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ ]+ n/ A% Q: p8 q7 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 j9 s& b7 T+ W* m( i+ H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% Z: b" r- @* t% \5 |- c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- M! h: T+ f! _- K% |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- b; i' ?' d* x9 q- a" Z" L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: F& t2 b- s# p  w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 j' t1 m+ u$ {, h% B/ N0 K( p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, M  a, M! y' r% C0 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) T& V. @3 V5 k! R/ m7 H: F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, D9 @8 }! F1 |! O7 E& f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. n, N) O4 T. S2 _: L0 }7 ^- m) R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! P+ F! P% b! J6 W6 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ^) I7 G" H' `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 X. t# h; c9 B; W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. u0 t$ a- L6 ?% U  V5 ]* h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ N0 x% e/ U+ T! ?7 I3 P& Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 n% w; M  F& B9 M' ^" l; U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 L7 z% C/ W5 J$ U; }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ a2 f! D+ @7 n1 G7 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) H9 E- n- e3 L( e3 k1 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. r8 K# s8 E' m' A/ o* S: C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 m8 V9 C7 l6 I1 [& w5 W5 |0 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, L, C7 u; k- ^: j: `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' S% i$ M3 y" J+ V6 F8 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 V: r9 a7 V7 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 P1 t! i; J% E& L# {5 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% m0 E$ ?3 t- p  ^0 w  D9 g, d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, o7 ?: Y+ l/ v5 n  v3 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>