【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 L6 N' O7 F! X& i" Y4 c/ QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ C) K/ e8 |: l3 F- B8 m$ ISeeing the sky content with its love
6 C' z, M, V/ m% _+ ~3 u) Y8 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 }& ]0 g, M- {( ~+ C, `& oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) K0 N5 F8 J: d" I1 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; A) @5 e; T6 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% O) b! C4 m; N6 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: u! V* U* K" \" J6 s) K  U, @6 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 r4 T, k  C& H' ]5 v. TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 I8 a. l0 A+ E; U8 uWith such a tongue as yours,
5 O# h+ v! h$ H& A7 G+ ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ z! x; e  a. A8 u$ g1 Q, g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  v+ U. {: E. K; N% t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 x5 A! ]3 Y5 P. V6 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# f/ L4 v9 b* d! T1 o7 C' z2 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# E3 k" G/ ^& u8 Q; y- `1 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 W3 F7 R2 o9 O7 Z: @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 q9 y: n4 S, ~9 r' x" J, I  n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 Z6 ~; I: [* r) W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ P( K1 s' Q5 k3 i4 [+ w, v( `! n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 m% b1 t1 L8 d2 s' @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 z! d. m- [7 N( Z: [: L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 \" s6 N- {0 f1 \/ u2 [, g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' v+ h" b; w" u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- ]. m) _9 F# I: S0 F/ o" }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 I7 h. p3 q" _0 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" h' K2 b' T$ _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ l* P9 W& @# j8 H6 L3 \; R/ d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ I: x+ p! s$ p- @( a4 A2 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* w) }5 i/ D+ H' D7 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ h% l# M0 h/ S9 s  j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 g% ?& e- ^4 N+ u0 A, u* T* Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 a' B* E8 g  A% r& H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" ?3 |4 n( b) P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 {' G" _! V8 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 P# [+ w# F% t  E+ N" N1 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 f7 E' b# y0 g' K  i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 X# M: B6 H% c% K1 \" S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' o+ u+ p# x) s3 G) u# r" t, W9 I) F4 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ _3 [9 ?; m, v8 H<P>I regret not dying</P>
* P# O( W8 B" C, w% r7 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 }: l8 L1 a, ^, Y" [+ S- x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# o* {' l2 M; ^9 |: c  ]5 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" y3 \# _) K6 X, a4 c( W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& P; s: b% a# R( U# b4 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 U# p2 |- a9 f' X0 C5 ]: |) U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 B, B  D; [9 P7 _1 n, l/ T+ d. D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>