【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 G  s  e! Z. d/ ^& e$ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; ^) m. E% i: r9 h7 e) EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 X" |1 D4 h* b. G' TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 P3 i% g* T6 ^' c0 JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* }% }. [; T0 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 y' b1 ~( P0 W3 a3 F. b$ p% bEvery other word you utter is love
% P. G: i4 m0 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 x) |- x; |5 ^3 v" ~- ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& k0 w' K4 N' g8 M9 t/ {2 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 ]# X) M6 ?" `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 r) n. r- z# `5 \' NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 J; Y8 ?1 l) J6 x, i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  B' d. O, B& Y6 m) Y+ R9 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 I2 w: Q1 M# a& @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% l& u4 E  g! K6 @* {+ P! p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ c# @+ \( s1 M, o+ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* Q* C8 y" l  {9 `! ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ C9 B* J. V) T7 T) `5 n) |, |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 i8 T' m1 ^5 y0 {8 ~( ]# w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; L3 }- \& Z' T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! t! l3 S! l8 P. p5 O0 h& w4 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 r/ F) |1 Y& Y- @. ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 U7 w/ M0 l  o( ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' X: ~, H/ p  o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ H& n; o$ o" X& B9 E: Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% l# s$ Q2 v# d% i. e" |( P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( i$ a, c3 O) C( m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! v0 ~# M, N2 f$ F" n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# }$ s/ D# Y" o* S9 x. o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' j/ S* ~- Y# e" ]: C" m. H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# {. h3 z2 @2 @' c! V( ^% Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) i9 j; Q* V9 }8 V/ B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( j4 X7 _2 a! W( {3 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- v" W% ]+ i5 @, c4 n4 |# E8 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' }5 z! `0 L6 c! _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 F9 k) _: F1 S% H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ U# y+ T9 s! @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) T4 E. v/ ?2 \: z+ @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>