【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! U" h+ {6 c9 b) m7 w. P: y& l1 a歌词我附在后面。
6 I* B4 ?2 U* |# aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 N$ Q+ L! x! L$ I- ^/ T% R- F# XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ X1 C+ F) \2 n& s# w- _, ?& |5 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% {9 L1 |# p8 Y1 n. fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# p% |, l) P+ b2 x* z  k) v, P) [Every other word you utter is love
  ~% ~# F1 E/ p0 o! o" `0 w# a' B7 rI really want to know just how much you love me
6 w- E+ l. B1 n+ S4 bI love you I love you with all my heart
7 Y- M2 z5 }1 ]5 B2 S& dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ Z1 W9 _" d7 G/ N1 n$ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 q5 D0 z) S, q& m$ H1 @I want so much to see inside your heart
9 \+ G! r8 k3 d4 c  KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; h. q6 o1 e9 `1 u0 v/ Q- \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ K0 Z$ O8 f' f( s4 }" v3 H/ OI regret not dying
' d: z0 b% Y- Y+ P( w  v  [0 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 v4 F: A' s5 H8 P3 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 O9 _( j; L* z* `$ V2 \' xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* H- }. a5 N! Q( }2 r' w" P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 Y7 R$ x2 w* y7 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& O, p+ a9 X# H+ g+ `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! ?7 Y5 d& V5 s% @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 P" B) c- q3 N8 Y6 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. h9 f5 e$ }2 `9 i( _" z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, n* t* h/ \/ a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Y0 x- G, {1 \0 Z8 E+ N( [+ v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 F0 E" U/ F% Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ k) j# A' y1 u( n" }$ n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 ~/ X' N# D1 D7 Z" e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: E5 l2 Q- ?' E6 z$ p5 j; P5 S6 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 b# ^+ S$ u7 @* P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 k, d; @0 V# c* G) @( ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 S$ ~9 b0 w% {- _8 t8 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# ]( K1 L, M: e, q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' g# [! h, z4 O: W# o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: p- X- X# y' A1 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ?% |# H" K) u% A; f; I3 B) T0 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. t# b, C2 |# n2 y* R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- {7 O& C' j) A+ s0 E+ P/ j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- S& W# ~" T# ^5 s. Q1 O7 r, |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 U4 O$ Q. Y8 `" p/ c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 `5 `( S1 [: T: j0 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  P. S2 F9 \. G' i% m6 }8 C  h# S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 `3 C7 m# m9 V& T9 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 L1 o" V. K( V% ^* E3 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 l1 }' K  F! ?8 Q$ z: Y0 U% m, G5 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# n' R1 C: C- v1 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  p  ~" T% ]4 P/ r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  u8 E; j! Q/ E, n1 U$ o; s; S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; D, m4 C' I0 \: K0 V. `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  I8 @0 E' x! S: z9 ^我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  D4 a  r) q  ~+ |1 t0 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>