【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* c, i& q* w1 E$ B7 _3 V% eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# R) j, I$ \5 a$ a1 x% ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ |- U7 O% [" P  ?3 a7 Q4 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ K3 U4 t, l" |" PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( }* g9 J; u4 p$ R4 p/ Q( d7 ~) YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 M* c# `- f: k# P  F: ^8 \5 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! A. M  r, I( f( T$ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& g' O% J% {+ II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 Z  m! i3 N8 h' T6 M, ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% A! m; J+ E/ A7 E1 F  ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 }/ V6 z/ X! L# uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% g, `! C8 \0 y( R$ x2 ]" ]1 VI regret not dying
/ S- k+ j# y( N# c% wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. Q' B( t( G& @/ B1 [( TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ m) A2 D' i/ _& y% {7 }2 v* [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  D/ \2 s/ o6 \6 q  d$ [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( `1 n1 Q. i  ]" l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ {. F: e$ w* x  ]1 P; r$ J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# g% ?8 X( F  J, m6 L% s8 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ S( u( z. m8 e  r. |0 J: ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' `0 x( O) i* K2 W1 f- m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- c% F. w' @) ?9 i* F3 c* n; q<P>你无需担心</P>
1 U0 h: R- f( L# e4 k8 t7 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ [4 K# h& p2 ~/ I  [2 n* L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& H$ w$ j; }1 k  X7 z2 O0 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; J! b6 p3 q. L' y  e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" }3 `, i, F/ k7 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& O9 u- `# H) O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ?% }* y! Y3 c- u$ ~5 w" e5 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ R) V) X- G- F9 Z. \! L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" o6 `: D4 M2 ~3 b4 e, R7 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 I5 ^+ I. B8 P% G; Z  {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ H* E# _" E! k* i% p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 \9 [  \4 S- d( F! k/ e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  a# n4 u+ ^8 A8 o) d( h+ X* m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 A8 a  \6 L' o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 s* R, v8 A, Q) B# ]0 Q/ @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 A: t* I/ K/ ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% p( b& C2 K0 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 W" N9 o  H! b3 M1 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! y. C8 T" S% r- s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ o  B! l- T2 }9 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) s9 v& ]: p! ~& u0 s$ K4 ?; R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 `2 F4 a& \) O" P1 {. p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# T# ~- c, B6 |/ M# ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>