【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ i' p& M' {. \2 O) DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: D# G$ y9 f7 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 _7 {% p4 R6 t2 I+ M8 ?$ dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. @! {$ q$ m& e8 U8 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ o: [% B2 w3 Z9 I9 O5 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 I, d; y' o  ~# q! pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 Y1 e- B( x/ fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R1 Y2 K* O2 K, `5 vI regret not dying
' b* m( {( ^9 T" x8 }* r* jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) \& t% Y. R3 v3 W* P2 u5 k1 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; K; |9 J. o0 P; I) `6 R6 D) a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& B" E  h. ?' r/ t# p/ e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" o% J, F: r0 z' T$ O# M6 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" `; J0 U9 p1 x. E, ?. p: i$ ~# v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ s  v1 |2 d& T$ ^0 @8 T3 g' @/ T  h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 O9 K: m4 h, b0 Z$ }  Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ P- l) O+ O9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- r% ^' C0 ]+ I9 y! ?2 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 A6 G/ d* ~5 P! n4 v3 ?3 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ K  M# \% }. |( g0 R5 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 b0 U* Q& y/ z& a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! n7 C) b9 l8 _$ ]  H1 H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& S0 J3 S% L6 j6 o5 U$ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- w, T" @- o% _2 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* q% m7 V/ k( p: P( @, n2 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; b+ V/ o7 u% i6 x4 V( r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 i! t3 P2 ~0 e/ l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) Q% j& C/ Y; |5 @- H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 X4 l+ v3 ~3 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& f" W6 f3 I! B2 h2 X. |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 R& c; [; Q) }: x2 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ Q+ f; v' f' X( h' V1 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 q) n; @: v3 \6 a' H: L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 o2 D& C  w% E$ S+ f- [. k<P>I regret not dying</P>
  X) |1 g3 n" T) b. i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- a! ^9 G- f& o3 d* y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  \, @& v0 S- ~0 v  w( v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* p1 h" l9 i- h/ y$ d4 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ v9 z/ u# J. h9 T" }6 B' f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 c, V% K& N2 ^  |( u( B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# L  j3 _0 }: J* M0 b7 _- v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>