【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 h# e. u% c! b2 e: p5 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 i; Y! S" P; S+ }# E6 p* ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% T- X2 T) h+ c0 i; _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  o7 M* Z8 c( H9 {" j! RYou needn’t fear anything
6 q# Z; u* @# H3 X3 F0 C: K; _# aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; Q8 P2 D8 L0 h# TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, Q9 N) y+ ?! c* l: BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 L9 ^! [& S9 ?; lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 O8 k6 r( O7 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ W  m" c; w0 j( j  r; w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' U1 P1 L: a% Z4 m6 \+ b; P1 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 N0 r" S- {" o( E! {  Y3 `5 n4 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 d" {) J, v/ ?7 H# S* [6 X: {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" ?, ~2 q* b6 Z$ u; f& d$ W% A" ], J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" B4 Y9 ]* x3 N) i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  r- \& S4 J! F$ M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( t, |5 @0 M0 |, t9 x# u" t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 N4 f% B6 b: H# o% F% h<P>你无需担心</P>
$ z% E, S$ o& ~) N2 z. a# V4 I- G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! f' |$ g' _: i# U7 S/ T( o2 O) o$ E7 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 T  d# F) _) Y" F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# G! [  y, X/ M# F' r& i$ a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ I  p* M# C0 c" {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# ^( R, O4 [& C. J% D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. Y6 N" f8 k) q* @% M: M) N6 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( L7 X; k  \1 @% `7 Z1 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& Q% z4 y* b& F0 H8 \& ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" n+ Q1 @. g* V' h4 B5 ?5 ?( D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) d3 N/ D4 o- r8 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 I$ K7 v$ z8 g; F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. X% J; s% u8 m& z( e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 c, F2 N  e, ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 t+ H% n' l) _! L% W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ d+ s: U& r. `" U$ Z' e& h8 Y' v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ H2 l) Z0 o" k: c5 v0 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 e. G8 e' }) E: }4 U% Z8 p, p, i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 H4 j; ^8 u' }! n2 \3 m% l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 K: ~. ?* g+ S# c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>