【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ s# j) G# L& G歌词我附在后面。
) F! d4 [+ @$ t( ^$ W8 X! J7 h8 x9 y8 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 `: J" c: o3 z9 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 _) Y. z% \" y0 r$ i7 @: K' e( VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* B) @& x# w6 w2 L) I% KI love you I love you with all my heart
  x6 N- m' w. ^2 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  N5 X& W: S3 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 J* z0 ]0 n7 y$ G( \$ i6 eI’m still filled with fear
$ v3 q/ d- h" o- m# h9 k8 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 n0 i4 H& n  M& z2 y, m; |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ ?8 C4 P2 b7 g9 k( ^. EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" y3 S: w& t4 y+ v7 Q. YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ E7 D: e6 X, p6 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( l8 |2 x7 ]3 M/ J* f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 _# C/ v4 l2 [- l' ?" f6 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 O9 W! Y/ f7 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( O+ s% f0 v0 l4 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- O1 L9 u3 _6 ]8 L/ {( y, b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 p5 z2 ~, c* B6 ]4 Z6 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 j$ ^7 l* w2 M6 I: M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: h  f! L7 O7 Q( c2 `3 R* G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ b2 v2 K+ A9 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  a0 X" e. v4 j! h7 h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 a  v  t) V! w# h* Y" P" D. R) q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& N# F$ s8 i* ~# l- `( V0 c7 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. k1 Z1 ?9 n' [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  A9 E. ~' l: C6 {2 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 V5 Q/ w5 H" Q: {' m$ q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 O6 y  O3 F$ r; `- F- \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  f( U) s4 M: C( v4 x7 J- l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 Z. Z/ i$ Q. F' ^4 |3 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 c3 n3 `/ \" r0 \( j* c8 e. Z8 x# _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& t0 X( Z* B4 a' K% u/ i5 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 E2 V# @. {; s0 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 M) g  K( u( K( T. {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ i4 Y( F- o2 P1 x5 m0 R) {6 u8 n8 {& |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 [$ w/ c/ }3 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 M5 [- L* l+ l9 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>