【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 [1 Z4 E4 S5 G+ `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' _0 s! T8 Q# D7 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 u. c  ]- X$ d8 M$ WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% P0 i! k/ d& dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 c  v+ Q! j: BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! l; [" D/ l4 F$ k* q8 x2 Z$ L/ T8 f4 eI love you I love you with all my heart
# P1 |. P1 O" X& N" LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 R2 i4 Q$ B* G) B5 V4 S1 Q$ eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ?( e" r# D6 N/ |5 II regret not dying
) A( T/ |. ^. R2 F! [/ l% @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; n8 |& A. c" k4 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( i+ ^. c$ F+ ?! [4 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: U2 H' S! A: x; U+ T( s, a1 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 [, }2 B+ F) ~: _* \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( M6 w; J; J1 O$ D* [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 b5 z" v1 a% Q* Z) j9 s; v' B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 `; [6 c0 w5 Y- t5 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* M  B+ }9 W# x& a2 [) g. q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ Z: g9 r6 J" L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 b" p" m4 W1 R9 f0 \! R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: R. V% v: ]0 F9 k* Y8 G1 V' w; s8 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! r3 @8 h4 y" ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; b0 N, F$ ]6 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ _( @2 b$ O3 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 g, C! L7 d7 t4 o2 H. R6 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 i2 z' V+ d# f$ P  l4 C$ O3 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# N# V: N% p& w8 V7 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. A: D% k' a; o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 U( q( a5 }/ ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% k+ ?, @! s, `3 n; k' s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# T* X! J% D* T- q$ Y3 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 `$ j( Q. m% P, o7 m7 r, c/ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  _( h" w, W/ N5 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" u. w: T" ]" P. W$ J<P>I regret not dying</P>
  t7 {  y0 H2 k# X: f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 J7 p# T- m, p6 K" s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 V# K. {" D& ^" h; W# S- R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 D8 E1 _" F& K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ m9 n! n. R, Z/ o* I1 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ B9 r4 M# S8 [* O0 Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 y9 @# @& m" K% F( l/ d8 S我请你剖开它

5 T& D6 f( p9 q) o2 F1 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>