【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 w9 }; N6 l( TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 {" Z5 N6 T* [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  F1 M+ F, t4 Q7 z9 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ u' u" m. H/ p' j' a. T. ~) Y4 z3 [/ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 d. X/ T( o9 O7 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& d8 J8 J+ {, }) r5 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, O4 Y$ X8 t) e$ h. m, CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 M7 d& p  D' a  KI’m still filled with fear
3 A* K* E* J" jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 j0 G3 g$ e1 _' a* n0 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ X% O- q7 O- o9 B9 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ M% G8 P3 c; ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" f1 |: U% q: s; I$ m5 S0 {8 P  nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 O6 A! ^2 A$ N) O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- @+ A5 F5 a3 w; Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Z1 O+ f. N2 ?+ }/ `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! {3 q4 E8 z2 U. H/ W% N7 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: j* Y  R4 E1 {, y' p9 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 f  G  U0 ]9 P: l. e7 i" p0 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( s# ?4 @/ K8 P5 ]2 Y2 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 U8 O9 ^4 n1 [. a( \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- j, U  |6 j7 m2 Y$ v<P>你无需担心</P>
% P4 A4 w  w1 x8 ]9 W1 T/ G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 [, o, t' b, N% }1 W( C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) D5 K4 H2 o; I4 K( E4 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 l( I8 V, y1 m3 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 m( Y8 B4 K7 e* z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; E0 J2 x9 \$ `6 |! z& o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 x$ R; T8 u- @, t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 t9 q& J' ?+ `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ D2 o2 `+ O! k: B6 N3 z" H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 J& s& y" o, f- f: U7 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: d. C2 I, w. Q+ Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ n& D1 V! ]" M+ q( k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# z1 N3 s0 `# e$ N6 u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ O+ s& \# v2 D/ p# Z  l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& J6 E3 t/ X' i8 b+ D6 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: o8 e, r8 e4 u. z, X. x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, v" N: j7 j% U: A( r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; A' v- p! o1 c; Q' D  F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 E" K. p1 U. E3 ]; ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. T5 y3 E2 c. N# B6 w2 |5 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! E# A# L, i* p6 E9 J% p- G1 u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: @8 d3 Y6 u5 t. M  _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>