【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ U4 d* o( W6 _7 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ b% ~/ {: j9 [/ B5 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 c" q0 C" S+ _+ I5 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' r0 x6 s9 e8 g/ p9 j8 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' t3 I) N, L) F9 D+ i( bI really want to know just how much you love me
1 S5 y1 o, m* l! V$ `7 d, OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' p  X6 N* a1 R& F5 I/ }5 x6 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 F' _4 ]& F5 g% d# cI’m still filled with fear
8 r) a) [! N8 j0 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( e  T/ R8 g' x4 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. ~- k1 r' [" B- Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" I% t& q8 _  P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 {2 q2 @8 @8 ?. ^$ o# e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ i5 V3 Y7 v* {3 f: t  H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' K9 t: j5 j; W5 ]  T7 a* h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  h! F! r, a; V% k8 I- L& j! L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! {* y- y. ?% d, N" G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 Y; T! k2 @+ Q( i. g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  H' @% ^# B7 u3 _! @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 [6 ~6 b) w6 w9 J; `2 }; c$ I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 E# g+ J8 @6 `$ H/ a: j/ u# ?& p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* M% F% o# P/ W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 a0 @+ s5 p7 w* G+ s/ q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ B6 I5 y5 O; A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ X# [9 z' q% t% T+ ~  M& S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 ]6 k, g* T) ^; x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( C" d0 X6 R; e( p+ k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ I: @* W% `' l5 p$ ]) x/ _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 G# `" o% L/ z/ Y2 R7 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% \0 G' r2 U  x( T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' c4 H/ r4 n8 ]1 D" U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ X9 O/ u- q3 m4 b4 u8 |, r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' R* y( W. d1 J3 u. D% F! O8 s0 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# ^* N# i! f: ~+ p/ t4 Y) e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* `0 Y- |7 B: K$ F' ^" x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 f' z& \/ t7 ^& K4 I2 R3 m$ Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' z" T' h" T! m2 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! W# ^, g8 P+ `, S, B1 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" B; I1 j0 R; O5 U7 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' P& p7 H" y( \1 W4 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) E$ h0 _+ Z7 v8 E. A2 _5 c5 k我请你剖开它

3 P7 d( M1 B6 ^0 \$ Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- Y5 |6 Z: [3 e  r% e4 d$ [5 }) j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>