【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" P" a1 g* a0 w" jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 I* e3 j0 \  u8 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# D/ V) I  d  _+ o9 ]2 T- V* p2 S3 T2 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ N2 |% d4 H5 x3 e7 q: O' ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 q  R  a# c0 F% ASeeing the sky content with its love
( w7 }/ [7 v+ s3 c' E( ^" kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! Y9 \+ C3 K' s  bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ V- J  j% k" t1 G1 JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; `7 `1 M  |7 D7 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& x7 o% U  _* K) C0 Y8 hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ ~* j, L4 s, f, GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 b+ L# S% ^0 e8 W0 X! Y: B- MWith such a tongue as yours,
6 S2 X: Y" ^3 U* \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# T( \$ M/ V* Y5 d& ]  ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ g* U' r  n$ r& n; T: d! U6 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 `& i1 v# A- m* Y9 B, C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* u0 \  q1 B& C1 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 p) f) ?7 n  w' `) W& {) Q. M! S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ j( o( `. Y$ F1 s+ b5 P* Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 s1 \2 `! [& j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ y! P0 y/ t. ~0 z1 I% [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* g9 }: j9 W5 x5 B0 a. {" z- y& Q3 B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 h( v: p/ v9 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( I" P: A" M" x! B$ L+ j" d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 @  b# m- n! V5 V4 s% Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 z, }7 H' u# l6 y4 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 s+ U( ^/ L- j, c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ p9 n1 K% ^* ~- x; [, s1 o7 B- h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 D0 v7 }; f) z9 ~) _- l, \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) J- @* v  d& D' r  \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- B0 J$ f! |# W/ O3 v" d: R. W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 s7 ^: u% \: [; _6 g( z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ V# M2 W# V: G" R; M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ g" F7 o, M; b3 k+ a( J$ d$ w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. u( ~2 F4 a% ^* e' x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% Y3 m1 T- t; W+ z1 Y9 n+ A. U" z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 U. V$ f8 t; u; |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 e7 P$ {7 F1 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  w) c/ Z4 M7 a( g2 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 g9 E; ~, }; f2 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; o) F4 ?/ W5 M( Q% G+ `4 j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( O. V5 s0 V# Y- A' p6 s/ u- d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>