【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 n; }+ d0 T2 H. _' }! Y歌词我附在后面。
, \2 e9 S4 q4 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 w; G3 O/ m& X7 F& e& ~4 Y0 L4 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ u1 |! y- `4 z# KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. t6 t: V$ S+ O8 Y+ `4 n! c3 V  aThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 l: m) k# m$ lWith the moon kissing it every night
; z0 H/ e+ O# B7 t, J0 o( i& QSeeing the sky content with its love
- J, K6 {6 X+ a, }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; n2 s4 s' s) W8 s2 A$ B+ J8 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- Q4 n  U% `2 D( w8 U& dEvery other word you utter is love
- j: u+ X  I! `+ u' U/ \I really want to know just how much you love me
, s3 h% h8 y+ `4 }" {: i' C& T, rI love you I love you with all my heart
7 L8 M5 A2 d8 S8 @4 X+ `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 r9 b/ }( L# E2 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' K' T5 }4 \2 q* m: dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: f" D4 P4 N" [% c; m! O' IWith such a tongue as yours,
, u3 a6 k( f4 V+ j( ?/ GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 }3 q% w' b4 p5 E2 ~# O; yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% ?$ S0 V4 Q# g9 _- T+ X- f. ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ G8 M9 u% Q5 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! X8 N7 H: [! o% c+ P/ {, o. e& d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" E2 L; }8 ?% @1 @- p9 R3 o. ?0 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 j1 E2 ~1 L, n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- d! y2 |1 T, E5 c5 ?0 a9 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 e, N- b4 R$ P, _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 R9 m' A$ l+ @4 o8 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* M$ E; l9 P( h$ y3 ~" E) j) M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ K$ P( [& i3 i; k5 U3 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# P4 \6 e# M6 y7 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" k. m% Q4 U9 [) h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 R, d. |, `4 K! g7 J- D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 w# m2 n1 x; s/ E0 t, b- T* |7 F8 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# X* q1 M" P+ ^6 d  u$ k% k5 `. v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& q2 m7 z$ k* V. V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; Z2 x5 N+ I) @) e4 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ M, }9 N1 t7 E" K% Q3 D1 }! }! E( k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* g7 E9 ?* ~, v$ G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% ?2 j, ~0 E1 F2 t! [( Z* w9 f7 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ?& |5 W6 c+ g' }+ ?+ r* T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; Z3 w/ s( w- W# Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) V& c* e, P# Q: n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 ]9 z3 m: N' l& ], V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 v" u1 ]2 N+ N" A+ G. c: b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( J7 I) l' t# ]5 M9 ]; J0 b6 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 q, I. |7 b4 _4 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 E4 I1 A4 t) Q- A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>