【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 b- x, K2 T6 r5 L8 d6 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  b- E+ _5 v" j4 i+ z% lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ p; n, N+ L% P4 r( n7 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 {  E5 t/ p% B! Z$ [* Q) m/ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, S; x: x. D. uSeeing the sky content with its love
7 w( j8 Q. ]( p3 G0 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( q" ^: Q; r4 B# `+ W2 ]You needn’t fear anything
3 y9 z/ A& l2 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 P0 l1 N0 K, r, j+ V$ H/ KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) k) j$ @3 B5 E5 ~; u' JNothing can compare to my love
- J) B( v5 ~8 o# A% }3 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 Q( n% _. D4 j; A" K9 O, jI’m still filled with fear
# G+ C0 B2 s8 d1 }2 R) L" [, C- QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 M, ^5 }& J( r& \( OI regret not dying
/ K5 D8 }: F* Y- Q$ |/ p  xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 e5 W  ?/ w; U" F* bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- [& A' ~9 |, pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 J7 R1 p. y, Y: `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  M2 j9 G1 c/ ~, [& h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 E; u. w/ L% O) r+ O1 J- {# c9 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ w, k9 Z+ Y7 }; c: L! V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ _' _5 \2 }: _- h  h8 y0 g  \; L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 T. B/ p; g" z$ R; r2 Z! y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) l2 e+ r* c7 i6 \# e. B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; T5 G7 p9 }' U: b  @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. g4 P" K* c4 v$ u3 r6 A* E* H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( f' Z9 [0 T* F' w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, r7 B4 z: O/ H: R8 S2 Q+ r<P>你无需担心</P>
  G  a0 j5 _' d* k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 _5 J0 p* @, Q& p* a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 f) O6 x% e/ I- f/ _7 @6 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Z7 B& T% x% I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ q$ M/ S  S2 x/ v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ ~% ?  k. o9 H: P7 H+ [( T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 E" L' ^9 f8 W* B5 ~9 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 |5 n4 I! \, r# {8 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; |% F/ v; O$ _$ m- e, @" D5 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: H2 P( j( r' i  k! f  J) R. t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# v, o+ F4 K* i/ M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# U" u8 V9 [6 |( b/ ^7 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 g. J) t: z8 r2 a' u& O2 V2 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 n' K0 J' j/ z7 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ w# D/ h9 b0 a/ e) r8 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# x' z3 o0 U/ J4 ?8 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 {- [  }) c: I/ S3 Z+ N& \# U% d. y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ H/ G2 U7 ?& A6 L& Q4 l7 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, J, q6 [$ t$ v) j3 x  H" D/ L& I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>