【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 A* j, |9 \* V9 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ D* B- F! r3 j' L2 \! AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 x* x0 d7 ?; d' ?2 r( FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. R3 C/ E7 j! Z- i7 X, U( lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ Q; q5 k7 _) J; Z* Q( vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ d. [$ Q* u/ p9 Q, B8 P/ K: }# MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ~" Q, A& r, ?& [! xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, i: g+ q& `& {  {5 H# \6 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 y( D% D5 e% z# x1 V9 B8 Z+ h% ]I regret not dying
' ^4 e; X) }4 K2 f! R; iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ G; p7 m  o9 H: aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! w# A) @$ d9 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) \/ i8 r& X; g; s2 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' j9 U  F; X$ y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 s& f6 x" m7 k% L4 q5 T/ w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 O8 u! j  P8 r* s( U( d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# }! |8 Y1 p! p/ Z- J( C9 A) M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" f! A: m" j7 l- r- N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 Z/ Y* {6 n" ?- n# d6 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ {# l/ X$ i- }! ]9 S9 K& ^9 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 A* b  q: {; V6 |' L- o  s) \- j9 ~; m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 O- |) h5 Z. d$ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( _6 [+ V! ]" Y$ K) w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ g# t& s" R, [( c# y! \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 ]5 w! s5 C2 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 B8 M) t9 @/ o0 q6 A  c4 G( d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, u6 u8 `& A( e+ q2 ?+ X/ F& a' ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. P2 m. Y* ?. d# j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! e" i/ m" O# l( [! A7 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  K) Z9 a, r; v/ J* v' D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! `: s7 C# d, [% l* k( l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 W; t* i# f. b3 n, g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& R$ k9 o5 P& H4 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  [6 Z$ ]& a7 B  a/ [<P>I regret not dying</P>
# [; Y. g5 ]9 R$ _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: h, k0 q+ F: ~: A5 a9 S' l- \# O6 t5 l# q5 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* O1 U  r9 }/ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 N( k7 ^6 |. S# J9 L& F6 d& w0 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: ~5 Y6 t: s+ {* C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- |- h* V6 Y$ f$ Z, ~0 U. B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% w; \) L/ \0 Q4 m$ s1 |; [我请你剖开它
* m# t) n8 S/ X/ q) }/ v" ~7 l0 j2 X
1 J; x# S% X2 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>