【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( W% h( @1 w0 Y  I$ ]4 g歌词我附在后面。
- ~3 N$ R. o' u: J9 ^5 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 `2 P- k+ {: {% h9 m) G1 T% X( oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. |$ u: z/ n2 l% @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 S9 ?) _' f* wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ O9 O* r# a0 |5 ^; R1 ~7 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, r( S5 y5 R9 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" f1 {* O+ L4 Z# K' G  ^# E# UI’m still filled with fear
1 l  L' O2 e' K! ?+ v* Z3 W9 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" l3 Q( L. q/ F, |# u( HI regret not dying
4 ^9 m% l1 E$ R0 Z8 p6 W' gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( u( u5 p& ^' ~# y8 Z$ s( y3 {With such a tongue as yours,
6 r4 c0 _8 i+ R. N- M7 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! `/ l, {7 f8 P: j8 B. I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 O5 C4 B! h9 g; |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 V  ~2 w, Q" v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, u# F! T+ J  |* L5 K$ y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; f' Z3 c& L5 [/ _1 ~# H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. Q' u2 [2 I0 o' E/ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& V% W. T2 Q# n* }! t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 a, r! }/ N; j7 d" E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 o& P, T# V& E( e; Y1 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' x2 H% r- F& w7 Y8 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Q$ S; I8 N6 i' p& A; P. b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. R9 ~% O; r& p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# F- V! ^! w2 m8 E5 F7 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  h2 i" }: ^0 ^& A5 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 q. f5 I# N% S: m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 O+ X0 v+ ^5 r; d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 x3 I" D! I: j( t4 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 Q( D8 X6 b- G, H  f6 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 w; V- G- {0 F- a; k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ D& [  s) d5 _: q& W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* {  B! P6 }+ a8 H) g<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 e$ S- V: B& w! d5 J3 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q! V5 G0 u# w: D8 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* C- P3 I; W# ]3 ?( D4 H$ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ Z' Z2 e( t7 ~6 \, r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" [/ ?3 W  Y7 s: d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  w& b  ?; h: d/ i9 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Z. E9 a' c' Y. X+ \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>