【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 k6 u$ F7 w  b% jWith the moon kissing it every night
! }' Y% u; f1 d+ ]7 }2 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- P- Y9 o7 }5 n( q) \I love you I love you with all my heart
6 ]. K7 v& `/ {  h5 k+ ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ V$ x* o- o! `+ V& DI want so much to see inside your heart
0 G6 c" d9 {" S& p  ~4 P# t$ LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& ~; ?7 r* P7 X8 y( Z5 j* X  b3 U# zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% B# U9 ]& J' W  T( O, wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 ~  Y1 ^9 N" ^, e) z+ a( \# l/ o) {0 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, D. K7 m  O0 z: `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% k" P3 T7 B+ T1 J' I# i  R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# |! J" d8 d7 c1 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ l7 D7 [; {, x7 p# ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& g7 R& K& |. C( `$ T$ j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- `8 j, t/ `6 m, E" L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- i/ U" B! D% P1 }0 ?* _: h8 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ u( ~3 q6 h, }) l2 W4 E3 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 v( Z$ q5 L  J6 R7 G7 C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 H! R  [, ?4 q$ M. o& j& {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 w; v) M: n( f* n0 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 h# u& E8 k  Y6 C9 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 q* N1 K% t2 V! T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# K( y8 Q1 |$ n; o  N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 p+ {. I/ v2 s. D4 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( f5 Z* o) V3 l* Z( s5 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 H* d& M% J4 T- B/ _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  ]+ S" S8 B$ y0 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 y0 ~4 H9 G0 z8 Y- C% @8 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; q& X7 o4 [$ r# E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 T5 @' ]7 i. V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) b6 L. C" d) ~0 Z$ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) A) }( K; H2 ~0 e+ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 p4 X/ p. D8 o+ `3 ]* o! K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% w; R" y9 Q9 Z- D; l* F# e$ q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! j4 V) A9 {6 E' j# O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ {  u0 m+ l( R$ s4 i. C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>