【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 \- l8 i( P* G9 [$ q" ?! T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: ^' [- o3 E7 X2 \3 n! e, V" SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 f9 J& V* F+ e7 Z8 ^* ^0 GSeeing the sky content with its love
& o$ G) ^- @+ V+ Q2 a1 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 T8 }' S  l* ~' v4 ^# w' SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! K. p- y+ T. Q. DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& ~4 ~# ?7 j9 _+ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 l% ^( }( R% o& h) t! eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. w& `' Q! I! hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 b$ t$ W/ Z3 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ }. G4 V4 _5 ?- E) L1 b3 G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 c7 e4 G" D- v2 `7 h5 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" Y$ d7 e3 n2 v0 q+ b5 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% a4 S3 P8 K/ v8 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ C- i! h2 l  B; M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& W: W* q0 L4 o& Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* w" K. d$ x" L/ d+ [) m' E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 a9 S6 L' }( L1 E5 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 s/ _7 w( u1 N" u) G% y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ Y2 L: y' E  P, P) z# x" z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' n! H% W& O' J$ v3 o<P>你无需担心</P>
! F: m1 A% y( V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ B2 r7 A# Y& a, z* o1 Q- X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 S# Q- v/ w, D. l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% s* ]9 j: P0 u- d+ w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# ?. b7 w4 w' r( h# E# C; h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' e2 q8 R# F& V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 n$ S2 b* T7 |3 [. j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. E+ ^! n* p2 }: J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ K% T( f( R0 l% k7 J) E3 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 S2 E/ X& k$ T' a5 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 Q2 O! w; T! |1 A- Y) c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  C- \0 w/ W- w) r: ~% u1 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 i7 W* O, U" p  j8 p3 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, U5 V% X3 `- Y/ u2 ?; s2 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" _  A& @( k4 ?5 i5 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 h; p5 f! x# g' S9 |3 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! {/ O# F$ p! |. d; k7 {2 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" a4 b5 _6 O) ^- T2 i; C, r. R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( s6 p( Z* ]9 A! M7 I" ^# L8 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ U" d1 g, u3 q& `  V+ e" R0 J
* |5 P4 y4 R9 L  _我请你剖开它

' P* z, _2 z2 ?. L6 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>