【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# w0 R8 R" {3 Y+ D( D2 X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! s  u- f1 A3 t: ]  D6 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 `  P; k. i# N0 ?' p. D' G# d: }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  y  v6 n- _5 B6 y: `: DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) ^  x2 m8 {' x# V" W* f0 y4 PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 q5 x0 p2 y, q5 Y! F" l% ]. dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% U/ b. j+ l+ C$ }/ K+ o9 G6 `6 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' o* y* B% f. C3 c/ V5 Q& OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) D5 y0 _* {& JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ E7 i# V3 F6 f+ JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 ]( M# {2 S, @3 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( w, n/ W$ B; b4 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" t& N1 M" e$ X2 Y( \- D5 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 ]/ x( Q5 x- Q0 `0 c8 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 N8 Y9 v7 l2 J- d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. ]( v- @+ J* k% ^+ S! |& c( v7 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ?1 E/ n$ H4 W8 L8 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 |% u0 P/ ]; D. w+ [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 I; ^. Z  {# y" N- K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 e1 n6 ]' V6 @0 O" {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 S4 G* o3 h) J' |/ h1 ]" w5 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 M$ K& l7 v; G# l9 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 Q' U, ]4 B. K% R; }9 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 b' z+ G1 K( ]& ^7 d! e, t8 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' x0 q5 |1 {. Z- X) \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 |. N* `5 s6 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 y& @" J4 Q, U6 V2 e1 D" K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 ?6 j& Q3 f/ s: Y7 y. q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ v7 b* K3 o/ b9 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 a. d) P7 E3 a& c4 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 s) d( [. F- e  y4 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 e7 h3 r. I  @( d( Q# ?4 v. W2 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 U% @+ I( `% C4 F* P1 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
  \* {$ |6 t+ x- y: v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: P/ _3 G- a& V! e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, s  b2 k1 {7 Z6 E/ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ [; c& r% e  s$ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 w; ?% a* e: [$ ^7 y* T8 u6 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- ^9 J8 a0 I& ?; a! H# m6 r. x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 `" Q: o; K: y2 S+ y. t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 u! X) r5 d9 x, H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>