【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 W9 U5 F8 s$ {# y( ]0 p' R7 x歌词我附在后面。
. u- {9 f: J! i+ }# iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& V( h, g6 o+ ~8 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 }) x  C; L" Q2 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 k3 D! K' S  ]9 y2 e( XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( E8 k" v2 T! K9 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. |* Y4 f9 y8 P3 ]  T" p7 DEvery other word you utter is love
# |. l4 u) r) Z$ [2 x( ~  X1 hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 h0 W9 r, b6 K2 iNothing can compare to my love
; F7 U2 J' R; o, GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! a0 w0 D' \- B' i2 ^" T9 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 t% P2 i$ y& s% n2 f8 {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* Z- {4 l3 I! m/ G, m2 Y' @6 iI’m still filled with fear
. ?8 V5 \. [- s. F0 n) QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 }9 b( J3 |6 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( G% Z" @+ s. H8 L8 w2 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 U2 N- m; P; e, K4 f( Z  JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' Q5 ]5 X' p) T/ v( e+ l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 ], M3 `0 @; T& s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 A6 u% y7 L: o5 a; U  \' y+ M" n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  G- V3 c6 W' }9 K8 s+ A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* M# s# b  b  @* l" z* f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 F; c- s& Z* V7 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. M8 n4 M, J! r$ p6 C/ r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! f# [: Z1 e6 x2 ^: K! W, ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 o& n/ E5 B5 }/ S* T5 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ [7 u6 b5 I/ J! v; A6 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: D) p  p' p" L" \1 S& P- C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ f# j9 Z- I0 F) M% G5 I" T& o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 a/ N2 W) |5 o' S0 k( W" X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 }% h: |- J2 F* \) `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& l& F9 h4 @6 ?6 E5 W, R% j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* b5 k+ _6 I$ w* r+ N. Q7 V) ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( Z4 G. \: F# Z' c1 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  j1 M  s* z. j/ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 k- F+ s9 S2 [7 S. Z# `7 _4 J我请你剖开它
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: r6 M) H0 U2 \% l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>