【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 D7 Z+ i4 C0 ?4 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ n! S: _! U* Z7 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# z5 t8 {6 j* {Seeing the sky content with its love
) S, q4 q9 a! ]9 [' [+ S, uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ s" r4 J7 ]* y$ ~$ xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 C8 p- R, i' s: r$ rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 r7 I0 p4 l" N/ o( F3 h- iI love you I love you with all my heart
1 @/ {6 o& c5 ]- t6 NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 K% m' C/ B) l7 l/ I0 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ l0 k0 N. w% O# f+ z! p- K7 AI’m still filled with fear
( B' ^0 |9 m; Z6 S) u" a1 s& @. \  ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 ?  |$ p8 C0 pI regret not dying
% ]- M0 p3 {  i, e; YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 I+ ~* Q. k4 J& }! F3 z$ @/ ^With such a tongue as yours,
4 n5 Y: f9 C& uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 y( O4 b& V( tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; P+ S% j% O; s1 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 o. v1 Q5 s6 g3 Q' U  c" x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- t, ^+ q. O0 {, K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 t  K# e( u/ }0 ]9 F0 a# R# U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 u3 C+ H& y7 O0 j" ]0 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: ?3 v- J) f* e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ u7 s3 p& f7 o5 u1 g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# ?% u6 }/ L6 P) B3 R6 m5 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' V/ i5 s2 g7 C, a# ^1 n" P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 g: g4 r( e" [. V7 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* B3 j, |# A9 l/ V& g<P>你无需担心</P>
4 v$ i2 a" c- _" }5 P" L, _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 L4 K' `8 L6 _8 L; q1 g0 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. l: Z& d% o7 Y- a7 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' g1 \! g. `' P0 I9 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ R  x( j# F* B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 N' v; }$ z: T# \5 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! y% E6 _, e% r/ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 l: M. n' M2 y- T/ B+ i8 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ v. ^( ?7 m$ k2 g+ [+ g1 ^, U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- J. g  ], U) b6 V: t' x! j2 R" @; D. P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; S% M& h$ w2 n( h# t8 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& w- [% r, [: D# W% U& \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ j5 H  I- t5 \( j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ @4 @: Z3 l; U7 L8 T9 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( H# \7 x+ L, P. f- h, Y9 b) X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, U( H  @; Y4 x  R  d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! Q3 ?$ j' P. h! Z3 x5 V! w& U. a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: x$ D; t3 k/ U/ R& z4 x  O' r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 b2 K$ [: j' X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ ^7 ]: Q& `: ^; Q( ~8 M2 W! ^8 Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 `% g- q* [, x' z3 b3 s/ |0 Q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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