【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( c8 C+ ]5 \& p, o0 s- m& }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ b: [1 a- x/ m' [; `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 e6 A8 r0 A! ^/ {. w& f' H6 L& lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% u- G8 n3 b7 u9 H8 \/ cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, s" a/ p# p2 n' s* N! Q: x9 q$ O# FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 {* f( V& m5 i( F$ b/ d3 P: n7 V- WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; d! k' b5 D; o/ R2 m6 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 m# X' [) w* U! I% l4 N) ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ @! b+ Z2 S+ P2 {/ ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# V' t+ s& [# |6 G! e' G! cI regret not dying
* `) G: m" U: w5 x+ Z# Q6 A* dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# S0 J6 u6 D- w1 S- _) F( yWith such a tongue as yours,
2 A5 F! z+ D- p( M* ~6 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 N( A' A9 F' h5 Y- g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 I0 Y* C3 y4 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) o' s/ m8 B: e3 i3 s! {) A- g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: x+ t' Y3 b7 T: P/ [0 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( Y# j7 s/ W9 p9 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. ?4 u3 x9 r. F: P  H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- x- k0 P/ V: Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ l. B0 x2 y$ k. ~4 Z5 M4 p8 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) b# Q% W5 r4 \1 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 Y% _* Q( }' v# z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 I4 E( f5 K6 P. Q/ l# [<P>你无需担心</P>
; m4 z* O+ |3 y$ v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- l) o4 X$ E+ G0 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 c+ e" g* i7 i2 [/ M) T. S0 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 G2 B* E8 r4 k; h0 E  C' R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* n" [; d4 q+ w1 f6 `$ b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 v% ]. ?, J+ H) M/ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# o; @- M  b; J" d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 \1 U6 }! f* M+ s1 F, K/ C8 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 a. g: V( Q$ ^4 [2 o- ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( L9 |9 ^& E% G( S( c8 M5 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( T5 F; i2 T  z' f2 F' _* P+ v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. R( \; F, Z& t1 C; [% F- ^$ f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& a5 d, N  Z3 ~9 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, L$ I; ~1 M! }" a5 _+ ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 e9 p+ y  C" t( F: S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- M; g  V- Y% B4 }; D  I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, ?2 s" O  w9 y  ~) V! ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- N1 O: \0 P' p9 x8 ^. E6 e. J3 ]. l( C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* s* e2 ^- @' V: A; }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- T0 U: @$ p3 b% Z! Y& k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. H4 [1 O! t. f& F! D  S$ O2 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>