【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ U; Q* g; x) U6 i  \The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ Q" s6 @) `' E, ^3 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ~8 A5 j1 K' i& J3 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 K1 g5 u# @9 I3 AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 H4 c) K" B+ w! m3 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 M  }9 V$ x7 T' lI’m still filled with fear
5 i$ |* N3 e0 ~) R2 ^; \$ ]3 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- M: p9 u2 d. n: g2 h2 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) b; w- E* P+ o* ^$ C6 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 s2 }& u3 x5 K- I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ [% L: G' T& W( L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 g9 Z3 g" E7 g3 \0 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 j: S8 Q1 ]7 l' P7 i# N' i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. i' L0 r0 {) M" P2 Y! |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 a* |* `! \# V5 D, G# e+ f5 A) `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* J, j. X+ i3 q8 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ @; U9 X4 C2 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' Y, Z7 L( l' ?& e+ G% Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ~; L* z( C+ b( v6 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, b4 ~5 W6 Q  ]3 _% ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. u4 M( y! u* a. }8 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ^; n' o  F- N# e5 N' B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( r% ?! e9 h  Q2 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 ^' T! k# P; ^- F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 B, {$ f9 h& d. t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% q& J- A  n: Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Q, b  o; h4 C. e) Z& [% u- z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 ~! Q9 O! Z5 x9 }" m- d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 Z( j8 k8 Y& O- l2 U* H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ _9 k, V1 C2 a* z0 D8 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! V% a0 J' n/ f7 F: n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ g% r6 h# E. w( z. |) u4 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# Y9 t) e. i! U3 j4 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! X1 o) {' }7 d! ?8 S# s我请你剖开它
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5 x, g+ Q5 O4 `. a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 q' `6 O5 e7 U' v5 U7 C  n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>