【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
% ?* x- B2 D4 j, B: W. A' L$ B
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
& z  c( }' u# }% F5 l8 m6 x, |
9 |7 t' [- Q5 H9 B) M
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 y& T' J* ]4 L2 p* JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 t; H' @* G: o2 J9 M9 ~( OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ e$ W) k! ^/ N# oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 S- [  Z) b3 u( S2 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. R% s+ D3 l2 ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 I/ A9 q7 P& h9 N2 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 @2 q* R+ m5 KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ O0 V0 l  Q  p: p! p2 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. B! |% z* q2 J- LWith such a tongue as yours,
9 K0 u* v8 t. y' k8 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  l4 g4 x3 ^2 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* j9 p, ^/ G) k9 V" w5 I6 `9 N: aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" m9 i% G% K7 B- U4 `# f
7 R1 n: |6 \* c* k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. J, H8 z( t$ ~# B2 w0 X7 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( T8 u. g1 v# q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ B5 D+ ^1 F9 ?5 F$ h' U; s* M1 C5 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ v4 j( X3 z% v# B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  B; H% ?- r) G& ^* E6 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 k, C6 K5 c( s" L$ V3 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. h( J( G$ R2 m: ]5 P. n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 V0 W9 W: O* \0 {7 _- U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ~2 E! t) G0 D) H1 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
2 Z$ y5 d1 [% r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 R! e: ?7 T! B% X+ a. f" j, L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% V$ i( x# v* \  ^1 I1 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 G# V7 g, d5 L. Q- \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% E  L/ g+ l( Q! B% k0 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 A5 J5 I; M% q0 g' s7 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" ?( d' {, ~# V; f6 Q6 v) o0 B6 z5 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& S$ J* }3 K: \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 C: c1 d1 g% V$ K6 [8 h5 C- T: a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 c) U3 R1 W; C% i0 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# h8 z  ?$ k' I. q5 Q7 K' ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 X0 G  H% F/ C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* X# w  B' [% F; {& Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" c+ C8 e& ?9 D7 L4 T: V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ V) l+ l3 t1 W: W5 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 \$ p% _; }# a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! D( t/ B: c* L3 I# `& ?5 \: B# Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- G4 G3 @% v9 y6 c# Z& ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
" x+ w: d. ~0 s$ t
我请你剖开它
5 A) ~1 J4 N8 }& \" U0 _1 P6 n8 w
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>