【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
. T- H* I  V6 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" j/ W  r! A7 _0 N( l0 [, _. SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* R3 S5 q- {1 {7 R2 d0 y7 jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 L9 c4 V* O7 R3 M/ |5 nI really want to know just how much you love me
( A$ `' |( i* G% w. n  h. T6 eI love you I love you with all my heart
: E. R0 I/ y( M! w) Z+ S2 N1 v) v6 _Nothing can compare to my love
% }6 N! ~8 v# ?: d! y' _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 z* [1 V4 I$ e; y, QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 I9 a, d' e2 Y& h  w. ~* lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* c. b, D/ t0 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 ^" o. y! s/ R+ Z- p! W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& v; x' U; H0 d) z& ^/ B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; U$ F  X/ x/ C7 y0 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! K. X8 @! @. r' H$ b& P, d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' N2 u# t8 x% `1 `9 r7 k$ O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Z/ ~& `% F0 L4 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' e& D* E* @  @: K6 R0 y1 ]8 o) Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 A0 |9 b) h, G5 g* K  m( r<P>你无需担心</P>
$ v3 [5 X9 j7 g- @1 q; X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. `2 Q5 ?5 z- j# D: ?8 C& D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) I* C$ k6 P* k; \! z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: V$ _0 P2 w3 I4 E9 X( w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! R  p5 l7 V- Z' |$ m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 \  p: O; y' J* J, F: R8 y1 k/ j" P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 L" j1 t) |& @: R' `& w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ f0 ]' U3 Y: @( P* k& f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ H. ?* S. o8 r# r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& z4 S6 [  K$ Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 H6 y& L6 Z  f) C2 Q: b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% a. v. u0 w5 S3 I! K( z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 x/ z3 z6 {4 W+ F& q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ X. O, o* i" j# N8 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& U/ d; m) b  W* O7 a5 V' f5 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ^3 ~, j' d2 A, D7 I- z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, d- j* Y, j5 _% N/ K; B  c$ C8 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 C: k8 j  y: w; v7 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, w  Y$ a% \4 R6 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 ~3 n9 C7 A/ C9 \* A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" q3 L' c$ D  ^) K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) u9 [  h  J# Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ o  M2 f4 j2 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>