【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 X( E: v) F. p) Q0 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! Q9 j  i" T, U, M0 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  Y& e2 o# u& cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 r$ }( r  L. fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 A; U: X4 ]  V" r1 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& x/ R: x; n3 Q3 v$ eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- C9 e0 o6 a6 |' e  k; d- O5 _& iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  G5 q; q3 R7 w8 o- U0 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# k+ T1 j* j9 c0 M/ V* B8 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% o$ J* H0 X/ o  d, O. R1 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Y9 O9 m- D  H9 K/ F5 c7 W7 ^: f+ ]I’m still filled with fear
" Z- m8 z6 z% G) `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% T9 `. N& a* |0 DWith such a tongue as yours,
5 m; }/ j! p# D) z4 e, o: t" i) BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" \2 W' t, T; G3 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 a; W0 X2 P+ F- X% O4 h7 M' SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 R' ^. Y7 M; P" J; X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- T9 y8 C7 E8 w! l' J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; j) I1 V+ s( E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ T; l& P% F0 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 X' ]7 P6 R1 Y( G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ [, a0 [+ s8 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  F0 i( ?$ J- V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K5 S  u# ?4 _8 w; b% J- {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |+ V1 |& l6 c6 @( t9 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ r( ]+ C/ b+ Q  U$ i% A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% Y( k" l7 h5 l: k0 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 H  W- c; }- F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  _8 |( h$ P5 V+ T* J  p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ]. S# f+ V+ ?$ i5 X+ y; d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 I  [% B, g7 @: s9 a/ k# K5 N  F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. A) h& S% r7 N3 T0 l, {' U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 I. O$ t: B6 D) K* w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 M" c3 m2 n3 T7 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 ~3 e2 a0 \2 m# b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# D# k" l) C  X# s' |- L# p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 e. D! e4 B) d. A5 \( }% X) Z9 ^: J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: ^. O2 w+ a" z- f3 b) m/ c& W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ x; p' T+ S; s2 i; K- _$ v4 ~# {# {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& K  X) f  e( ]+ Q4 T1 a6 V- V- u+ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; |! r) l: f9 |: t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& I3 ~* K  L& Q* @4 O+ H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. O, k4 G& S# ^; F% e9 u/ H: Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>