【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 k' s# O0 y4 C4 J' s! p歌词我附在后面。
( `+ L, P( n. VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* t$ q' O. }* g& uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; m& b3 }7 n) q: r6 @# yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 I3 z, l3 W* l* y9 cWith the moon kissing it every night
$ ^& w. ?- ~. Y2 T8 i( b/ G3 B( I( VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 t3 S) C0 b4 m& X3 {* b' GYou needn’t fear anything
0 j0 U+ H: r3 ?8 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' M2 ?1 ?/ ]5 M. D- Y0 a1 LI love you I love you with all my heart
! \8 i( O; f2 g1 E( H; wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% D, w2 G. q3 O6 h2 K9 `: kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! t! A! W" Z. c1 c; j2 H% KI want so much to see inside your heart
& b- m& d: P& U# AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 L  \% h1 C1 r2 n; v# n' e: PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ }% w  ]; L. V  m! b( JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 p( T+ x2 B# s; MWith such a tongue as yours,
; d) i# U# H0 N0 p; {0 m* S% w$ GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  \; [% K( K0 W2 w# B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# X4 F2 K) N& i3 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& \- E* u% G9 `3 S5 P9 T1 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* b3 y2 Q$ Y" {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ w9 ^! @8 q* }2 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- c8 z$ ^1 u" v% I# w) a8 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 N, l) o/ }/ z- C: _+ |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" E, n- V8 n- |4 m/ @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ~$ h/ c6 i; b% @# M( V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  h- W6 _2 W. k" T( T<P>你无需担心</P>
8 j0 A: n' |  Q% f5 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 [9 u' V/ F* u) s, l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Q, @  [* O" M* E- K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, m2 L5 A8 O& N: T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; z( k  X" r. G; O+ M2 K% G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) M: l9 m5 [! r7 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& @; D! z' s6 s1 x# `0 E3 M3 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 H$ p9 a) V* J  h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 \$ \" z7 b+ w! j+ x* ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 e3 ~+ t8 f& ~( ?! l$ L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ E. F5 T3 h: d+ p9 b- m6 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 {% Q! W# {) b7 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
' f5 J- W% r4 R8 u, u8 e5 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  @. k( i- J* X5 t: a7 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 M8 G# U" O, E  b# t( A- A2 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 Z8 t, g+ a) D# _  E; z5 M- K' K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 ]1 r7 J1 b$ X4 L) F1 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 X$ `; \( L5 E1 y$ C( ^4 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ g1 k- c: o0 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% E# M8 O1 w. x( X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" q+ K3 o% A; p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>