【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 \6 j2 a1 K' k7 a; C2 ^) k! T歌词我附在后面。
3 g5 N, p: R( A5 x  B' k0 M3 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ u/ r! R+ x9 ~9 G/ A! D+ n% VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ W* U4 O" y& fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( }) t1 |/ b$ ^1 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ Z0 y8 l0 h- k+ {  SEvery other word you utter is love
% Y) h+ s  K4 S# `. @7 hI really want to know just how much you love me
$ y+ X3 g8 Z# BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. t* r% X9 p& {% t* gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 U: l$ p1 B( c" k5 i1 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 ~; ^' ^: C* M4 F: P' X2 }2 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ z3 C* O4 _  X- V" }3 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% C) R% j& L2 N6 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 {4 B2 V9 V6 l! ^+ d. jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 t3 s: n+ X/ i8 P, e( f( _" e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* v" `7 p0 ~2 n8 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ F" C6 \; Z1 O0 ]7 u/ B( ?6 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- ?: _; [6 N+ B" C. |" G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 C. a6 N' u( C) a0 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ \: X/ d( T% n9 z! H1 ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* q8 A& ]& r& u- ^; V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ N6 r+ l/ e& q" I9 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ l1 }  R: v2 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# x) X2 t% V" O: h  D7 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% v4 T" t/ H* M% r# L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 {; S+ w* r! J7 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  M$ _; S7 p( ^0 a4 v: P/ U: Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 k1 [8 ]7 }) O# g# H! I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 F6 v" O$ z( |2 I; _4 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 n0 U7 y; ]* \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" V8 d) ~, K; s5 K% ]1 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% B5 X  x! C6 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! G- {$ B. w7 c+ `; W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- M& H9 n) ~3 c6 ~8 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ |' [4 n/ k, `% f( w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* C4 _6 W% ^) H; Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 C* o( P4 u# A$ C& P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ {1 q6 b+ _/ e) k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. @( D" S, b4 `( M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! u- z# [6 r. h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ]7 d, R0 n/ k; b: I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>