【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  m' R" g: V( kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) t" m: O! F1 R1 e' J& [! IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' O6 ?5 A- _3 Y! WThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ i& g5 I# f0 p9 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) x7 g9 h) @( v) ?% WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 @  w& s6 z( y" d3 Y0 Q* dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; p8 K! X0 d0 _( {* _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ X8 Q: C* D) u) a- i3 W- V/ b# C' lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ U1 U& V5 n9 O, E; j) S' P, {* FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 P' v& f# B3 k: M7 i% NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 k/ Z8 B* d' {/ a, a0 o8 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ x3 p- U8 {! Q/ p+ p; A% xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 `; d3 u8 b, Z8 G# KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! j5 y1 ^+ F+ F* ?# D/ Z3 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  N" \+ m) P* b9 |" Q7 j+ s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 `6 @% e) g. k* ^" {2 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 P* r3 ?; t- f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% L. L9 G! Z* e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; i7 I, b$ x8 O/ J1 n+ T5 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 k9 H8 W  u1 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 I# X* V. e6 f+ E0 K# G0 ?) `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 p5 D8 E& Y$ D% F4 n, `<P>你无需担心</P>
/ B% g% M! k3 o% F" f. C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" W; v2 F( O3 q" f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 t7 T( K) S! x& G4 c' ^% y1 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; h% G! q( |/ s* @6 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  X. K/ W2 Z6 N2 L: y+ A, G  v) ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 t7 B" M+ b; y' k" K/ m& p7 w/ N2 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 h) o8 A( M8 Q' e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: [# e2 ?1 X5 N- o$ E7 F2 m# m8 Z" T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ d# \0 Y2 G1 A4 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 _7 [$ i$ v. g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 b& t/ b: [. A4 B/ W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% i2 X9 z0 u" k( u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) m' `4 \+ b. D) _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 W5 g* v) H  t( q$ |! ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
) b# ~3 k' C" `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- L, H' E  m: e+ w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 ^4 m; ~& b  T  e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- o+ W0 e; c0 F2 ~' U2 j2 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 g2 H6 p. T3 t  i3 S$ ]. T! ^  e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; M/ K* C  q3 [& R; w5 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 I) Z1 F0 }( N1 q- e/ ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 ^5 W; p1 O+ i6 q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>