【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# O+ `. s/ A  j: P- u7 |" c, AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: m4 E2 e( L5 F: g' HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 B: r" Y0 l0 Y! h: bThe sky is happy down to its soul
) X1 n8 q: h) J8 Y1 [) m  h& h9 jWith the moon kissing it every night
8 K8 |) G8 \: q( s3 l6 g0 b4 \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 ^+ a: U+ Z  D: V9 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 D: i$ w* v# y, @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 q6 `& ^  W6 u9 t2 iI want so much to see inside your heart
( u/ c6 X& W) \; a% iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; \' r) R- h5 ?% T( c3 ]: I9 L- oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" T# c) ~! T! l+ v+ Z5 @) _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 O6 G! o$ f5 I8 |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# W) r& d& `' }" H$ P) J& U8 u" r9 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 z" u! O8 {! g1 n( `& Q( T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 X. F- d, A- z1 U9 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) C* n. }+ J  X0 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; O# o0 Q8 A# a% d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 x5 z$ r; _; V! g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 J+ z& r) K5 Q3 L3 f1 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- _# b& h4 O8 U  |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 h  [% g* v$ I8 w6 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* o" O) @! O: D8 n  h. j% i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ i5 W2 q. {4 T/ j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 f4 L/ J2 _" t/ w. y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, \& N8 @0 `" W' q! w1 B/ M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 B) P6 W0 K2 ?( w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* q" N; W  D- g  [( d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, L- ]% P2 b7 m4 l4 L! A0 G% g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& U" ^  \5 u4 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  s! e4 X( K( X3 X7 L# ^8 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 z  O. k& x5 t1 S) K, b( K8 N  x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ a: C" D$ x, h  D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& t  z% g# l; r! i# p% v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- t' T, `& d  @3 |( I# o& l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 Q7 G# O4 y/ H3 p* Q2 H0 P! {$ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# j; k# k" [2 _  I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- N: }6 Y4 O5 M6 [( v; Q! q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 t6 e* f7 k; |9 i6 e/ ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 N9 {) ]7 D4 q6 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! V; \7 q1 B5 |: e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: i" c' r$ r& U: W& s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: |: g4 [* j) U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# y# i6 z2 @( z1 y; x3 ?; ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& H/ x! C5 [7 Y2 e0 h我请你剖开它
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1 h; A: k( x" ~" A; h# E$ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>