【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 e; ]& k- D  Z/ b5 Y, g$ mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 i6 v+ f  e- Y6 w7 y  @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ^- \% m# f( M" [$ ^- g% rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 E& N) Z, r% L  R3 q. cSeeing the sky content with its love
2 u4 R8 i+ e& z6 r- V2 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ E" `: X) o6 C$ q& mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* {" E# s" ^3 _4 ~Every other word you utter is love
! s# A0 X$ {) |' ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 v8 [# x7 C7 ~9 N% V. B+ AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 u2 \# G9 O  Y+ b+ eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; X( Z: k4 s! c4 N2 s, gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& [+ n  ?- W4 _6 DI regret not dying
2 S; [" d! C4 d- p/ G3 @" UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ |) p$ k7 r8 Q# WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 e* E" D/ b+ H. p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 j5 \$ Q2 g/ Z3 r9 V/ `  U# q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) {) s% J  K- }+ m& a( p: H" s1 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* v* m# H# h( K  T% X+ ^7 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  V3 n* H3 h' `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- g; y/ |+ u. g5 I2 ]# [( |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ o; O( F  j% w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 u0 @* p0 C, G& b0 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ H! G, g% W% D6 N0 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# r. T- W6 Q5 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% l9 W. U1 d' [2 }% D, {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 h# w) C. i4 E; j7 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' D3 Q. W9 t* e) W0 c* L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% `: H6 b* T  Z8 h  R2 `1 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 X% r$ t) A) w% c: L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 d) i2 c- u2 G- L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ \' M7 W; @7 O- h: g9 k4 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 l( x  e8 }! y# d4 z2 E6 G* S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  @: B, }: h# b) I/ a+ H! D0 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 B; `- O# p( e$ s8 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 z2 N; l2 E9 b( i) X! G$ V9 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) L% y9 Q% l9 F/ o! \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ P4 O- w. p8 [( n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( s; ]5 H6 _3 f# a" W' K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ g0 C9 z' u7 W- B3 e/ o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- n% _" \" L( H7 e/ @! z7 D( l4 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 [( U3 U" g3 j1 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) h) A' G8 j  T6 R( u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# m7 q  O5 P% C. G" b" y2 W2 h4 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! f1 L4 I3 a9 e! T/ p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 I3 g3 d( F( t我请你剖开它

! [. o% f" m8 E( V) K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 O% \" k( I# M; g, ?; j0 f: J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>