【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" @; P' H* v) G# nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# r$ w- F" A% J: E. t  O$ WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 q2 d" R9 E! s) l8 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ ?' W$ S( I4 b  gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- x% L: I3 q, l- O7 t6 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ N1 q) k& {4 y# U; y! H3 cI want so much to see inside your heart
! s! U9 O& ?, E2 u2 B( f  c0 M/ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ ]$ @+ S2 C' c8 F4 Z+ CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 ?  \! q/ \3 @" P* [9 e; AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 h" p. l2 K' M+ YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 J8 H6 L  k( b& b3 p* W2 w/ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 u8 g- I2 c6 e+ O- `: x& }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; E% \1 r- _# q, V+ `* Z& i3 J* }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% u" X0 A0 q6 R% t( J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 [- J% w0 x, \: D/ \$ r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ A1 t- x6 N1 K5 f0 `* ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( @4 ^" O2 J1 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 N/ {" ^; _. Z  U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ W1 R# O2 d; q( @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 i3 _6 W0 y3 i" Y) {! R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; [8 x% T- {7 Z& t: B) t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" e5 p4 A( O! ?. X<P>你无需担心</P>
* ?/ ~/ Z! s0 n; _. t6 c- C0 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 l6 k! ~( d6 ~  c" V# O; G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ r+ w# @  @! m5 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# J1 ?. l! O3 J$ ]4 A7 a' n3 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' l0 G$ X4 g6 Q* D  U, ~# C  l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- T  Z  U# h" w8 h" v( I4 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# X7 z* E2 x2 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 O/ M$ P$ k% z: R* U# {5 X) Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 o5 I+ m) G, N0 N! C- J% s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, W& d8 M8 H' e* _# @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 V& g' W+ q; }  K2 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 C1 d% O5 o- ?9 j$ r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ I$ h9 \) S2 o" F9 f  R; x1 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 p6 X* `& C7 _/ n5 j0 e8 m* l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ N$ k$ C' }( _9 A$ a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 g$ B& q0 q" b$ q3 y( I% E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>