【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* D! [& X1 s: v- ^( B歌词我附在后面。
( F% q4 e+ b) HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! K0 |$ i$ J. x" x' I# N1 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; I: \# b" y2 e: c6 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
% ?! E: N: z$ z$ TWith the moon kissing it every night
. W8 s8 X* d* W' ^/ [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ~3 D' v7 d0 X3 n" v. Y0 hYou needn’t fear anything
& |, k9 V9 Y0 Q$ e) [% b) \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( `  y1 L  e$ `  F5 F3 S  NI really want to know just how much you love me
, K) Y& _% t9 l2 K0 YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! f: W: ^7 d+ _! KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ y9 c7 G& r* c% ]9 _0 z4 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- M- t" _( l8 K2 H# I# ~9 E7 N0 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# |! \, N+ [8 R& H$ A# s; h9 E: UI regret not dying
: i% C, Y. }- ]0 w  C5 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: g, N! w% j& l' M4 d: u0 LWith such a tongue as yours,
/ P9 D' Y5 |, r$ |+ YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 E/ K5 y; {& L8 a- @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. v! _6 N& y2 U3 K& p/ _! I1 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" {7 M3 M8 A& Z4 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; B, P9 A4 G+ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, o. U7 U0 E+ r4 u2 ?# R) K4 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, \1 J$ G! e0 y; c( b. [: U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: x  }, W) |6 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% |$ i: F+ ]4 _6 `<P>你无需担心</P>
& p5 N% t: c: j: P& {/ p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) o# z7 `( ]% k! M" i! {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' N& U" x1 {4 i' P& \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 l, Z& d8 M2 [/ V; j/ D5 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" T* P0 i9 k$ [, l0 j( S; C5 U4 p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# I  g! V9 P; N, Z" D( @0 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% X' H- r$ z4 q. l; h, L% I' X% O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 B" n% h9 T9 h2 `8 f* i9 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 \" G( ^' J0 Z0 [' G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 R! h" Y& K( _, q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 }) k/ r) \0 _8 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! ]2 ?- `9 g/ D5 I! Z- ~7 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 n2 M  B- Z6 E* u) u+ L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 r# c+ T0 Q' [7 @9 A" D<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 n" M3 E3 `, M. I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  L3 |4 B% ]1 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) h- `2 M' e) m; s$ H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- W- p% z, m7 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ g0 j5 v4 Y- m& G5 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& A- m: G' `7 \/ s2 f3 J/ c# ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>