【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 c. M7 N( ]! d: O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& D( d" b3 n5 |( u1 F( XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! c+ z8 Z/ D: FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 H6 d3 T4 X* D! `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 r1 u6 D& x4 ]8 P( uEvery other word you utter is love
- |% x# o6 T) T. ?( G+ B. [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 d5 q/ [* N' {$ O5 O+ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 K9 e* T2 [" |5 h& F4 a( u! \/ [I want so much to see inside your heart
, n- ^) c0 L. E5 [- {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. [/ r0 S2 }( v% x& P5 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& \% V* v% E0 a1 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, H# S# n% v' b  I* PWith such a tongue as yours,
0 c8 B/ U" W$ C4 q5 `3 U% N. RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! ?2 |  ~" Z# J2 B- }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 b; ]3 R2 [8 K$ [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 v; G+ |: m9 s( z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) q+ |+ P8 d5 ]( Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( e' y! Y4 O2 [0 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 D2 g* w- D$ x1 B; u5 W: Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- _# N1 R7 N3 a* L7 Z- T9 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ^8 u& r, Y3 h- I" e  a3 z5 ]" E; X, F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ~0 A" `3 k: v5 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* e8 c2 l1 }8 }! ^7 r# q* ?' r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 c1 A% K( [& U7 e& n5 f6 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 [5 i- J! c0 ?0 a& P& L& G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 }6 w+ ~, @' b: T/ }7 i0 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' m. Y$ B& h4 u3 }. G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 v! ?. l6 g1 Q# T$ N, b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ q! Z( G1 [; ]" Z9 n8 ^2 N; E6 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ Z  m% k. m) h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 `# Z6 U" ^9 R3 E5 E0 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 Z4 T' O, T, r% L5 Y4 o/ [$ ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 S2 `) x% G( y& ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ s4 A9 y4 G6 P1 Z/ w; r( P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>