【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 C$ j  ?) W6 u  _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ S. g8 f+ p5 t: iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 C: |1 |* o5 T. yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 k* J' R: n" I( g9 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
) j, P) r) Y" ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, x- J# p2 }* O" mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. A# Q* ]% B2 o/ X: h% f5 C" tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. L3 z$ S! E8 g9 @; t. R! Z  A% N' FI love you I love you with all my heart
! x' n) ]2 U! L) P! h3 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( C% m' D% _" S& O; Y0 Z* O9 wI want so much to see inside your heart
, _# R$ q. F% a$ ?3 @& f6 ^5 d! WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 P/ g* |. ~( _- s; nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 l( E% I1 w8 {( i; [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% U) F2 y% c+ C2 t  P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& [5 w- X+ A: @8 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; I6 F4 ~" o1 s9 e/ q/ u2 x% n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, D5 P4 V6 Z" o( q* p( @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  Y5 d9 p2 y& \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 _0 W" ^( _& e/ V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 H; `7 `' T) }/ r9 f" @0 Y7 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! u* [% i# k4 F' }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# }$ ^( o5 [6 O4 M) {# w# H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 |& @  O. l* Z0 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. `! m/ A- n3 c, _0 b5 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! U4 f1 W* ^8 d' P0 x9 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# [9 E+ g2 E! Q0 D1 S; A% |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 o" ~9 s! H, g' p! T0 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 @' A, F5 g- \* v- \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- V) M) n: A: U; c2 R' S0 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 U( N! e/ E  J% w, p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) M9 b5 W! \" i% Y1 t( Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ t5 h6 m2 E( T3 x' X4 P- h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 w- O; J4 m8 C& p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, Z5 J; X) T+ q! _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- Y9 L% v  }! d0 K$ ^' A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
/ l! D# Q  y' z/ C0 `/ s, w
我请你剖开它

, B2 s5 m* x- W2 U/ b# \3 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 L) Z# H6 r1 e0 H( o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>