【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% O4 Z7 [+ C& c0 Q9 \) N* |歌词我附在后面。
: g- e) K* o6 W9 Y. oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* N' e1 k& W' [& ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
( ~# X9 ?/ }/ h& i7 l6 v1 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( @3 _3 }7 u( G, z* u! OWith the moon kissing it every night
! R! E+ q( J) k' a" L& H9 y6 |/ `4 k* jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! t9 b% ]) ^$ ?+ N" ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ v0 n: m' ]' O. b, f9 e3 XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. X7 N9 ~! a4 `+ R' @* h! u6 XI love you I love you with all my heart
0 N, m' Y) A5 `: S/ _0 ^  rNothing can compare to my love
  u0 w. y" w# ]& }* t! V+ ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ \) |! b8 H4 p. KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 X8 E  g! E2 w5 U6 y, `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ ~9 [* J- R# TI’m still filled with fear
+ d( H9 n7 N* N- {! j* L, b' WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' k0 H3 |1 ?! k. i  aI regret not dying
9 L  v* _$ {: H5 i3 {! p/ S) _; I6 k8 G3 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 K: d3 Y7 k# w7 M: A  jWith such a tongue as yours,
( ^9 j/ K) R) k  mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) K6 Y; v6 b0 d' |! Z0 v2 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- U; p1 j# Q+ ?$ @3 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 r/ o! N$ k" l/ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) h" C8 N( C* u$ H) J, U. M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 ?/ ~. c$ \5 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ w7 J# y7 E2 X3 {& H6 g# s* Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 |( j0 h, k8 s' Z" H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 A& \+ I$ M3 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 }0 a# D, b# f' E+ N; ]" N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* u- S- G* G6 M8 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- s; l5 e7 c1 _% I4 S' i& a9 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 T& S2 f  `! P7 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 c  y( j" i" L8 r$ O& s  I# K8 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& B0 F# n7 J) W$ ?7 V. Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 B" ]; c- \) J/ q* r+ x. G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( A" ^0 |; H/ q" M, j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ z" M; E7 K) l% A8 W; a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 `8 ~1 I. v. a# a% _* S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 [  t& ^) X- }* u% Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 \9 g; T0 A2 g$ P- G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 H0 Q+ \; n1 G0 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 }& M- F' q! o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" d2 S( g; J& y1 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 {( p! c& L& o$ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 c. C% o# f, o. F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 R5 C/ ]1 i( B* g3 J5 n8 }/ b2 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  d" ^7 \3 J1 {; m7 z& P" [0 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, Z4 T. s7 ~( f2 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& y% O% [9 r  X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 O) a2 T) \( o7 E9 N0 [6 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( M( K2 z2 ^& A0 F; `7 z- j  u! }+ K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 h+ Y2 e; ~( C+ x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 l6 O1 x# X, x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>