【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: p3 M) C, S* w: Y  }歌词我附在后面。
' F' e7 w8 R; Y1 M& p" q, g+ q# |The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 W% N. ^0 g# n* D( KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 b* e# K7 O7 f0 r) uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- j" X6 N* m; g3 ^, v8 }: _6 {8 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 U' L5 E; }; f. w3 g' hWith the moon kissing it every night
# n. h; \1 r2 l$ w2 LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& i+ E- k1 o0 k4 G% Z0 GYou needn’t fear anything
' z3 ^% k/ f, \% B) |! t$ CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 O5 I) ]9 J$ @! C' }5 o' dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ^% W& o) R# R: LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( U3 h/ G. Q2 l5 r9 j7 x0 {I want so much to see inside your heart
) G0 z1 k0 _9 @& [( z6 a! {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 b% y% m% _( G- Q  gI’m still filled with fear
. L' l0 `7 g& b1 N1 j) g( e; [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- `1 v6 J0 U% E) |$ GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* M! ^5 F; a+ PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 m3 ]. E, A$ m4 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& F. G8 ^* W% `6 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 {. o0 s# v# I' \$ f& t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ^* y. k% o8 C2 T' @8 _3 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' @6 z) X0 V$ s5 j' w) v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& c& |, y0 {5 k3 N5 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! `( I  K$ ]4 F( M% K" l7 s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 j' q0 {: D9 s0 V( p+ ?5 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# J5 P' ], C1 B0 h7 A" ^, e6 X  G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 p1 u9 \9 t4 u. k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 O8 [$ v5 Y7 m: E: H! O! j4 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 s1 `: ~2 a: g7 L/ E. g7 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 F5 u" J5 R8 T. ?6 M' }. }, O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. t7 z! v3 V+ l4 [# a: M' f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ v' U8 e5 k1 J# X7 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  O' Y* ?% M8 m0 U( Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" s, y/ n# I2 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. ]. W* D8 d5 @8 V0 B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ h/ D1 E$ \' I+ l* o9 t* f; z9 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; @, [  ]3 B8 T  c# `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 l2 ?) t0 a: G7 _3 j' U4 \- R- S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, n  _5 `# L0 c  I<P>I regret not dying</P>
& |- E2 w# ^0 ?4 S. N- q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( ]0 k! l* {2 [5 A6 Z6 l, `+ d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: y, q- d6 _& E/ x  @! x3 F- {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 w8 C7 r; M: f1 `: g: g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ d' p8 B3 `" v9 V4 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ _  C& G7 C# {1 p, E/ K: u0 ?* G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( s; @$ W- F, n$ c9 u, h: G4 i# n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. K$ ]/ G2 A0 b* Q1 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>