【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" ^/ e8 |  W, J% t' k% K; R歌词我附在后面。
% q. e  Q6 l8 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 B6 y' G# I; iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 i$ ^) ~/ n7 O, k# Q% P- zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 J8 C  r2 q& j5 o. L. zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. Q, n% G1 x% _9 ^% w7 wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; M4 E9 ~7 U3 [* B7 n) L, |  \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! I2 i3 S+ @! j- ]  tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 F# `4 S( }3 B# Z% G8 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( Q4 ]% S3 i* H+ m$ s& _" JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( _! K% ~: p; w3 ~. Q* n$ H2 `0 l) aI’m still filled with fear
' T7 X+ g+ N; ]6 i* F5 R* DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 x6 q) ?& T+ Y$ H8 w  x$ V# NI regret not dying
( N0 }. W4 z( A* ]- Y4 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) |* U( S- Z3 B) _/ d2 X- k/ ]- m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* R0 F, r! v( ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; Z& E/ [7 \$ _2 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: T5 X1 R! u; j7 n& k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- y4 y# M- m  O- n4 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 h; `8 D0 S9 l* U% t- K/ j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& {% g" z# v2 i/ X; L! A; ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ O/ x* r. g, M+ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. f8 f+ Z0 `8 B4 W/ l. \! t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. Q3 M1 N) d( H<P>你无需担心</P>
; J9 i' a/ B7 F  F/ Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* d" ^% g# ~8 Q9 I% @' ]% p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' M  C" [# Y7 E1 D) \* E  ]; n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& V! P& @( ^, s6 s8 S0 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& \3 i) Y0 f/ Z1 a. d7 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  ?9 R7 \% ?! f4 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ n7 ?/ L5 ?3 K, c& L! f" ~& y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ^6 K5 T) r4 Y3 p9 q  h! Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 g" ~. s6 }, p0 S  |8 |* L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 f3 s' b( ^2 {1 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ G, y7 l3 u7 [, f6 m3 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. \, S1 i7 o+ p7 ]1 O4 h  T<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 {1 l2 v. S9 p6 U1 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: B3 m4 s5 O3 R0 }! a! R( k0 O' d( k9 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. R- Y4 y* a4 w) f8 }# P! k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  J, G) m' ^& p! J* H7 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 K) x, k0 x/ H3 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# C. x: B' A( Z' _! |6 Z4 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" x# Y7 c$ q  z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ z! l' K# i' T% u5 B# j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 O# g+ F2 z/ N) \2 k$ `; b" D我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>