【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 e4 D% P+ T+ y) _7 g歌词我附在后面。
. o3 ?; q3 T7 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, A7 D( R3 o$ G6 J9 |  U& sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& }1 \5 M/ D* C% k: g5 G5 t, gThe sky is happy down to its soul
) G% _8 _# b2 G" ?: V0 {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ]% i% V/ m1 e  zYou needn’t fear anything
6 N' G' e0 U/ @1 V8 l8 n9 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ Z; K) O+ t/ O4 m. ^3 _+ o: ^6 dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ F( g$ h4 n3 @4 d! JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- d" Z& f, @+ @( }- e7 ]' sI’m still filled with fear
5 y: }$ v" p3 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' S  ^3 d3 K: m/ W7 P$ u  sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 l! e' l- g. _7 Y2 l6 ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ G: k9 {1 l: W# E# R* v% q! ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: K/ w% x8 w7 ]5 n$ {. Y1 q5 E7 X, zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* t0 S) `6 _* |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 X/ O! [" D' m. Y3 z, X" n3 i8 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- s: i* L4 A: c, \; C/ g- A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) r/ o& f# m" d( ]! R$ y$ t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 J0 p, e  W9 M. A/ J, c2 @! d* o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 D6 d( B2 C* S$ Z  A3 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' m9 L9 U& K5 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" T# x7 |* X1 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  D2 v" x$ z0 p1 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 a7 ^" Q% n+ y: R) N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" A6 f, g& b( ]; s( }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ L! H1 o6 g( ]. d  Q6 C% o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* j8 Q; X" ^+ T' v8 [% Z2 l( j# L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 z% ?. R+ q8 ]+ D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. ]/ Y: k7 g( ^! g# f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( V7 X- A* O; f, I% `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. s1 Y2 _8 ~" Y; v8 T8 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ I3 }- ~) V1 k& S/ i' P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' l3 I) A2 Z% v5 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  p! Y5 c% K) [0 X1 U* K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% q: l+ N1 B4 W8 f" B! Z/ d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 G7 g7 e, @3 Q2 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, i7 v8 J, C$ M0 Y, |& u" a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- \5 D, t2 L0 t( ]  q* n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 T0 J* X* c1 F0 Y# k# @' S! V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 A3 x! L' y6 `9 H. R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 u# D/ }% a/ B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 a- n, F( t5 h. s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 I7 H! I* o# S/ A: B5 f# A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ j  x# C! v5 \* \! E- M- J& i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ N3 L+ H5 N; R0 i3 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 r  K/ ~1 w6 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>