【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 T6 ~2 ~/ ]) y4 `4 A  ^, @6 C. vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) k9 A! F" ~; M9 N" B& VThe sky is happy down to its soul
: J# P) C! P& `( g1 yWith the moon kissing it every night
1 n5 @( c( @0 j( Y- _% i' Z- MSeeing the sky content with its love
& V3 Y  y' ]8 T, MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 O, {+ {0 z& u; K7 E5 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' G6 R. s. \( }- AI love you I love you with all my heart
9 F* ~* Z8 O9 e5 hNothing can compare to my love
7 L3 e; b' L! }3 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ E) N* z' w! Z7 u1 d9 w8 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ^. [# r) \* n$ o- A  [+ _I want so much to see inside your heart
) Y" C! S, t* y1 l" A# LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. v0 {0 d" v4 h6 @3 V6 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ^! w$ b6 |& S3 B( rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- W3 d, P  m; y& Q- S  \  ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' P5 D: `2 H2 f1 s2 H3 J( m' z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 v/ ~1 L( C6 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 S1 G; o1 o. g8 D  U- r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 M8 w9 D& V0 h' [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* K# b6 j! T9 ^7 ]9 Q. H; t4 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 L7 W* Z7 [' L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ L/ O$ u- Q4 C+ E- g8 E- j/ I<P>你无需担心</P>
3 N1 U& T3 H( c' F- D4 x; Q( y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ n, Z* k7 }# u8 p+ M7 x$ X+ D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' Z. x- R* t+ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" T( v0 Q4 D1 D4 J# c  l& V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& ]% ?. m" @; x! Z/ p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ P( \* C( l$ Q& |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  I; Q) Y! o/ T) g& D5 D, |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) _& Y+ q- Q* s2 |# p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 R2 H! i7 }+ \* t! E' E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 s% m* U. q7 S) `3 k+ J/ t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 v# {6 \# _& T, N) Y; l1 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: b& q0 w) p( o  e, A+ `. U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& ^: _6 H4 M, s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 x! C$ i7 ~0 I6 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ i9 u8 N, Q9 I  `. ]5 ^7 M- {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  [/ p% @; ]: @; Z. f9 }( g5 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" M' o8 d2 i' h( H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) n% D9 @( H: c+ |1 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: _- _- y6 s! h- D0 w+ n; w9 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) E8 X- D# z3 Q6 i! c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 A- b/ S; a( a3 n( k; n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 b) N' L9 q. Y* O+ w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>