【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: E3 M) i* p6 u9 z7 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ d8 V3 X6 b) ?/ k+ RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, K, T! E; N8 t* gYou needn’t fear anything
& T- Z; {! \, iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( l+ X8 F5 ^; {% t0 JI really want to know just how much you love me
. S3 x6 A0 D" v, w% vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! T6 O3 \7 P( h6 X& tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ I9 B( s. _* }5 D$ ?2 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 c$ R7 h. y: f. i  j' m0 W$ _( VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; k2 T$ w( R. o6 o  w8 nI regret not dying
" `1 U9 o$ X' v5 s. P8 N8 z, qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 I# H- w5 Q  h8 }4 x  Y. rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% |) [; }' V* U, f" o1 Q2 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, n6 i% |1 g% |9 n, D7 F5 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! J; A- U- q% Z1 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) |5 i4 }9 E% |: K& `! \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- D: C4 F9 w. d1 `" k# r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ u& T  \5 i6 m, C; V+ }! W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 H( |: k' _# t$ B6 R5 L5 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 v  k# C( a3 Q; X/ a  I7 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* _0 \4 a4 C! _; R6 A6 ?( d5 |0 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 X9 l$ [) @$ d  M$ k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) m% e' @, A& E" U4 v: U" d2 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 E2 w3 J5 M5 `: _+ Z' M5 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 s9 x4 e6 O; s% n/ C( M8 U6 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Z/ ]6 G8 V1 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# ]2 j8 T3 x+ O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 G: E; }5 P  ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. o! P4 }1 b) H+ N1 S+ w! x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 \4 s$ D, C: u8 @5 g' |) ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 u" I9 E: l% N* ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& J) C5 {5 G! Y* L5 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# h& t, d5 A$ P2 q! [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 z- {% `# ]3 R5 p; V1 m* R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; Q4 {, Z  p  p1 s- B4 f. Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ?; Q# a! y% z( }! n+ d% Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, m- P+ w" J4 x) S) S) Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& J) O4 k/ L+ n  p6 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! j" G) I& F# i% J" o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 }7 N: w; P9 J( Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>