【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# }3 ^, B1 j8 `" N7 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ~3 f# S& j$ q5 Q& i! t* o) AThe sky is happy down to its soul
, g8 w/ m% S$ l* O* o0 R  YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 Y- }, Z: ]& |. ]2 N7 A% GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; P$ I+ H7 ^) D  f3 XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. o9 E3 h% e+ R7 m0 i$ C& MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' s: m( V: b- o6 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 N. s+ ], F# A, ]. i+ l* @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 v6 Z3 }: V! Z! QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 g$ D5 x$ e% V+ n$ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ _! k* N& h8 @  P& G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ?- r$ r' F" A9 [: ]  ]+ k- a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. q/ D. o* x. Z7 |+ `4 G' k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 g  F( _% k. R, |) f, N- o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- D0 L1 f- k& @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) K0 m" J+ a9 m# Q* g$ E1 I! r9 F% Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) O  N  T0 d. W) S" Y( n. p  H* y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, c+ M& M/ r5 @9 ^4 w( c/ ?" v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* k4 B" R% a/ j+ v- f5 \) T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 ?0 ]) }3 R4 n2 k6 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% o% I! _' \7 L1 t7 r( s3 w7 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" r0 f& i0 d$ H5 B( i8 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 Y5 N+ F; r( }: V! P2 e1 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# f6 k1 m$ v! w) S# H7 J/ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, l$ Q8 t4 Z4 n& V, ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 o3 i; N% G0 o- l& N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  R- A5 S& Y7 g' V! |3 f2 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 ^  M# U( S9 g$ J1 _& `: p- }# ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ ]& D; k) r5 Z- X$ j+ U! s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& I2 s, V4 w5 H8 H5 n/ b5 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' k* Q% J& S$ C' c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- ^$ ]! B+ ?, _4 k1 |: v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 A6 M( x4 Y% _, ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& J* |# c. E0 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ x/ `/ G- D7 a* V9 \9 T  H<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 ]8 p$ t0 w# U5 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: B- o  x+ l1 U4 ]& K  q2 P0 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ H" j; z/ h5 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  V( ?% L- t4 k" F2 J$ u9 P" a. v4 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ @: [+ S+ ^) K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ W  e+ S6 o- @/ p9 c0 X( x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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