【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' i( Z6 q8 [8 M0 R- GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 C" [4 D" R# E& K; [  pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 M. W" C% R% QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# |- h& P' K) }( C& T; d) u0 EWith the moon kissing it every night
$ y( C% y! F. BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 O( {. G6 Q. e, x, O% L- V' s$ NYou needn’t fear anything
2 @1 @* M  w$ }6 M# kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ [9 H& x$ V/ N$ G/ tEvery other word you utter is love
6 }+ q, W- |* F: i( l4 l* VI really want to know just how much you love me
- {4 {' ~2 K$ ~% rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* Z% [4 ~  P3 j. sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# L+ S  [+ V+ s9 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 T0 s# U; v1 J! uI regret not dying
2 @; s4 b9 o4 U# l3 b) c$ B3 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" W" i0 l3 h# b; |5 m2 i* M- dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 o, k  o! E8 E$ i) ?4 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) v( J! ^; {5 ]. T% J4 c2 m( n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; R. @; |( d6 ?7 ^8 n/ B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# v- F: V% w& @  `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 c* f7 x7 ^! V; {) f' }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" k5 E) e: T+ L) K3 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 y+ ?1 }* I# P5 Y1 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( H( z2 l7 G1 Y; C3 ^0 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 r0 B- W+ }7 o' @0 p3 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; |$ F  x+ j4 l6 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; t/ V3 l3 Q0 z7 X; ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 O) `6 Q: Q3 v# F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* V9 F* X# \5 I0 [: R9 T" a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 f0 ~" |8 z$ i, h- L6 a) A" Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 e0 Z7 n, w1 i. e, ~8 C/ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 v4 [) G* q* e; E9 p6 C. E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, _+ ]: ~$ O" U6 i; ~) C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ v3 ]2 o2 a0 E) \' N* v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- z9 K5 t# T' b5 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 H% s, M( y& |: s- Y( u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ n% c' }- G( c$ b$ O' q& w1 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 t6 N- K9 ^2 c7 X: M4 @; ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% X* N" z; T- |' _4 f; ]. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ W  O7 @2 d; ^2 |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# p7 K* @( M: t% j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>