【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 H- y( U: y" X# |! [3 M6 `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 A9 G/ j) B, e& rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 t1 A9 r; Q' ~6 ]0 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; _7 V7 b7 a7 i& Y+ w6 `2 bYou needn’t fear anything
. B1 ^6 d. k: Z# j3 M5 U$ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( M1 q* p/ U; D& [' \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& A( q& _- p* C- k5 xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% V2 D- e% b; _& G8 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" t* j7 X- ]1 f6 i: {, l8 {8 J/ O1 iI’m still filled with fear
/ U6 y. W1 {& M# J; K5 ]6 g9 {# {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; L' d/ O) o! ?" i5 M2 bI regret not dying
+ t, v  Z2 f& [! a3 h2 |9 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) A5 ^* Z5 i7 b4 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& F' L/ l/ E  x: r, Y7 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 |* ~* y# f* M9 G9 W' f0 I- C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: B5 z- o5 g# P+ U% o( h9 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 W& ~" [" o% D+ H0 z3 M8 k/ `/ ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ u+ h6 o0 |' v# b3 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ s* Y7 _, m! [/ [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ R2 c" ^' W5 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 ]& A. x* X8 n) q8 D2 f" `" Y+ {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, J4 P' K/ e9 a: p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  U' o; c& h* k+ _) R5 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* \7 d* B2 k8 T0 {4 ]4 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, m6 g7 M2 p. O' q8 x( Q8 ?/ m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" W9 R8 Q9 W8 X8 M8 ~2 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# w* w5 W& _6 h5 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! W% {. g( _3 b' R7 S$ j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. X% @1 t  C/ h+ w' N. `7 D0 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 I" U0 ]+ p7 l+ Y5 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; Q: V' K' i' P& p! C4 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 {( w" m' ^8 V- j3 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; D- U2 R4 x2 A, T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! F: Q7 M- \: F; r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 f/ G: G. h5 H2 r$ W" Z1 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- K0 }  _6 T0 m2 p& q6 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- K3 c# b' i5 ^8 q5 b) M2 u: N' |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- m% t6 a# y$ v" `! @* s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 ]" ^0 c" b, p6 X3 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# w! p' g) X9 F# e<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ x. U, A. f1 ^% L& i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 L& ?. _, n! V. \) d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 J7 G% `) G7 A/ P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. Q2 @1 D3 V; R* S# L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& g, y' B8 l8 U8 _# Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: x5 Z; [* I' T' T0 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>