【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; t6 V0 O9 y9 T/ A' GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 g( g6 U7 s: j7 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 H; F2 C( g8 x" I/ e8 L; qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! w* Y9 O" ]( {0 F8 W0 ]3 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) B- L$ B( Q( A" f* a% tI really want to know just how much you love me
& Y: j: ~/ I) [1 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 e# f0 Y8 u, x! f* ~' c( uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 [( _! o5 y4 D) Z# f; o: OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* U& `4 V7 Z3 ?' Q: eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ r9 U& Q) U3 m% T! d1 M! aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" w# R  v) Y6 V; R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: t4 O1 O# c, c9 L- l) v3 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- r4 k0 P' ?: D5 @) h8 x$ ^0 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 h; ~, g( t0 w6 r: Y: j9 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" M3 P; L$ w3 A" F4 Y: n5 d: i" A# s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 s9 ]9 ~9 ^( d' Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 K4 Z  t( J! ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 _' x1 w! W& p- O4 M+ e  o% r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" K. h$ G0 ~- f$ t6 C  m7 Y; W# F: C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) j1 X7 t4 [5 e! \8 o7 c( ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; w; j( h& P, n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. S% i. i: v8 L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' \" T4 K% e# ]$ E1 I$ b: W- @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 C, C4 Y" r/ F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 X' S5 ?+ u9 `. R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" v5 B& r0 K; i% D3 t4 E3 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. @2 {/ l+ F' H2 ?- @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ e& M2 s; g% }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 b* R* w7 e- R7 G9 {8 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 z6 Q. Z: p$ l* V* _4 F; _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" w) T3 L) J+ i7 J4 _& }1 Z3 m" q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ^* h2 X+ E* w7 i) B7 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 S' Z9 ?5 R; a2 a- A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, M8 d2 _, Z! i. a: w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ `7 o) h$ m. X5 F$ R& I) z0 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( m# K5 X% P1 z" V! ]; O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 m: [- s" M4 P3 u4 X2 W4 f2 E# n7 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& p9 u7 z7 N" R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 @. \& e! R* ?* s5 y) v) \  E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>