【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ s; w* k5 B& c9 l; U& v0 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: E2 G3 _. H) ]2 [- G2 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 `" W& w8 y' L% I3 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 E2 r' b/ z/ }The sky is happy down to its soul
7 K$ D% q4 q' vWith the moon kissing it every night
% t) |" t- Z0 _& c& c% WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 F: ]1 l7 u/ JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  u- z% ^0 E' [# A- @6 C8 qEvery other word you utter is love
" V" E+ x) b4 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
. ]- b2 H  r2 ~4 P4 M9 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 B! f, S& n4 l6 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. G$ ~0 w6 a% VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 W; T0 ]- x( |- z0 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# c7 u& O0 u. E$ zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- w. G. z7 o) t$ jWith such a tongue as yours,
' i! y+ C% b  N8 ~* nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& i! i- H- Q; J6 }1 d, NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- s% V/ c' n" U9 I8 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 V% n; Y  T3 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 a8 B2 H7 s5 M* V0 c5 B4 W% ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, l' h7 _, k9 C' i, j8 l+ \; F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- L  d' ^  ]! O1 V+ g7 \1 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& g" e2 u, k. @% H( k2 O) ]6 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& i) g5 p4 j* H+ o+ v8 O) U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 `- U! j* O7 [& O) f: U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  H+ K# M. j4 i) s2 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. |9 j1 W; g  V  G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% T4 b( V; m5 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: J/ v7 \* H+ ^) k! D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 ~/ p' S# @* Q, r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 e2 n. d2 N$ m7 C+ z/ G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' v$ S) H- I) Q  D7 Q/ `7 l$ V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 d5 L1 c+ B  g. T/ Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& i, v4 m3 T7 q4 x* E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& K0 u$ z5 _% N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ Z! z2 @5 T/ Q, }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) w+ X6 J+ E/ @. U$ O9 k; q<P>I regret not dying</P>
' `, s  e3 e" L7 q) t$ C  i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ Y( S5 a) k. e5 P# v5 T: f9 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 [8 Z/ d) j4 R7 V; [5 F9 E/ O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 W5 p8 J, D. O: E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- @- u& ^4 J! ?4 Y! @) G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# L4 X% V4 S' i- g% Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>