【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 a) @0 o. Z! ~# ~* W# @, \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% U8 ^0 f1 N1 d3 ]/ HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ l9 Q9 X1 m% T0 k) hWith the moon kissing it every night
( F5 a3 G, D6 d8 m5 g) iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 h" D/ w' h6 M( K+ T% h1 vYou needn’t fear anything
5 y0 W1 I  s! @) AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 u+ C" Z9 e5 ]0 l  d& cI love you I love you with all my heart
+ f5 {  Q4 `3 k$ ^) S4 MNothing can compare to my love
3 b# L# U5 t; @5 b1 k5 B& C7 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 N1 [4 v1 C* S% N) BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& x3 V0 h6 v- x) B; |I regret not dying
( x/ o+ F: [* q' t" Z5 {- e* T3 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% K) X2 t5 d$ ?# U- C( PWith such a tongue as yours,
, |. b. b8 q; c+ O) c& ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& p% s: U, e4 g; L9 \( K5 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 h. K# w, @( Y( s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 A6 j- Q' U: Y: H- M, K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; k& ~! |5 M2 {2 n7 v* V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" r, d* N& _1 R$ {5 {! |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% R3 ~3 w% m9 s8 X. r: R2 s% z: u<P>你无需担心</P>
) _, ^5 b! H# u, i+ D0 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 q) R8 X3 X6 L( {  h" a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 q: E# [- _6 y1 z, L0 W, x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( d; B  U  c4 ?7 i2 z0 m+ u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ A4 ]/ w5 w: c+ w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 J+ g: g/ O* H5 _; U& g- e! N8 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 s4 ]0 R# E: `) k/ ?6 B  y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( {' |' ~/ x! i9 |( X2 {, R4 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 q: j9 k* Q6 t& v+ O) }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% b' h2 Q% o2 K9 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  }* n$ N* z# c& ?# G, L* D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 l$ H6 \' s) r  u2 G/ ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* U  }1 T- n# v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( _- n  J, Z3 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" B. y& J  m2 B) J' v* y& T$ C2 i" D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ X3 l5 S9 R! k6 X1 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. ]4 o. q7 W+ Q) [6 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ l0 e9 Y! _4 b% F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  U! y8 x9 n* Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 d# i; v  U" J: y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>