【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" M2 i# |* ~5 S4 I, i5 _, {* {$ H5 T4 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ Y8 j. V8 f9 ]7 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
& l* H1 Y; U: b/ ~) OWith the moon kissing it every night
  ]( x' S2 o9 U% d5 |9 {) Y, VSeeing the sky content with its love
. z" d  F# ?" b- l1 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 ?$ |: [$ p1 H) p' b* eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 g/ `: C" J7 _+ WEvery other word you utter is love
# @- J, Z6 _, V. T8 I8 [% m) GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# L" h* |9 W" o. b  Y" kNothing can compare to my love
0 K8 H) U9 y+ e, zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& a) i( }5 G* L) A; K9 XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: C- I; r) T. F1 uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: A8 C# ?/ P; k1 l2 N9 ~I regret not dying
5 E- ~0 M" _" x2 H9 @& QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( u7 d4 w( G2 f  Q" m7 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 b: E$ D3 F& [* L2 S2 K- R/ IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 }' J3 `/ K% |" {( e# D) \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 c  |! a8 `6 m$ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* O* f9 b  B+ h. y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) m# y! W/ }8 i8 a. r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 v7 P( v) P) p! \: T- A2 |2 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! f  v- i! v$ [6 U  A+ b( d- e. s+ z1 a9 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% l" B7 b6 F# k" B; @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( U5 r7 l/ a% r: u" P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ E- o" l3 E7 B& L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, G- g: E* y% x7 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# {3 ^" A; \$ G" b1 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 ^: c0 F# i2 T, Y. O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 G  n9 c( Q* y! w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! a& p: N" w" i5 _  {4 h3 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 Y" K+ h: z5 H5 \# K4 \4 E- A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 q; R' ]7 D2 y! ?; F8 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 L- k" D  i( |: h2 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* C3 \$ w# m, @" L6 B, R0 p# |; P1 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( N6 Q% o' y( Z: M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  N  X# F$ j7 h7 i3 h: ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ j% D1 [: v) r% D$ z- q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 y0 R/ W5 L) \8 t+ s; Q, Q7 w% ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ p. @4 K% t. C) R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 N" \7 y0 f6 k+ P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ V3 t& }1 X9 \7 n& n0 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, m8 ?' B8 c1 a0 x8 ]/ H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 a- y; z0 n1 z4 Y6 ~1 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) b+ `! `. C# t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 X/ ]& H* n$ j! K  s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>