【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: b/ x4 G# l: n8 i) X; Z: T7 wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 |% L5 [/ W' u1 E; I7 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! M* e3 d2 @1 z8 r* V) `% LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& T! T1 a+ o0 ]; S" }% j" iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; u- O1 R$ U. l  ?7 Z9 r/ VSeeing the sky content with its love
" [5 I& X- ]" N* vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% o5 D# {' N" lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 V9 C% H: E% M! F# }  SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# \/ v( |( U* E, K" hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' i+ v( X. v; B- `. T7 x/ iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  w/ @! |; H! XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 _" G& ?; j7 k0 k* V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  o7 b' b, N) Y; {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. Q  D0 d3 N$ \# s& ?$ y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 E# E9 ]8 _; p% |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& K6 [7 d! K9 c+ n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 v9 m* Z' h/ M% }7 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 C' q" ?" p! o& q5 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 U  z1 i3 u5 [6 p- x0 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! o& \7 p3 l% ?3 g: M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! M7 Y: z" p" L. J: d* m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) s5 p; j+ u6 L  _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 u" j9 D0 h5 |' [- P# |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; \" W- k+ P7 k( x( n: _/ b1 k5 u  t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 T* ?, W( c, ?/ e+ ?: ~2 @' F' R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! f  w) ?% l8 }: U! h* a- T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- S0 R0 \; ]5 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 A/ U- _9 R: |$ T, G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 N2 }$ c3 Z4 N/ M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  G! V! B! \! ~6 o& q# F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- @- G* e1 X) Q# ]/ ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" e8 T) L' e7 a& x( w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 l: g' I' w! J$ f$ v* ?  A) A% C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& w- U. s, g( R0 j9 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 U' D$ b8 K2 ~5 L. R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 \: x% v; x/ |, y' b" Q- d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. n. [  m8 j6 `: ^' R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# ^1 A7 b& L9 u$ U' G  d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% i8 N$ f  O: c$ V. R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 `" Z6 b8 D' T# ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: L  Z- |' j$ H( }, \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; M( v+ Z$ Z2 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! J' i& |5 D4 ~+ ~0 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, p3 j% c" P- t. Y7 ]5 d- \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( e" E5 M# I: F$ Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% F8 A* R% |. m/ S# z, B) {# C6 Y6 j: J0 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>