【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 G8 m  ^$ J, C* Q* Q1 s" h9 JWith the moon kissing it every night
5 K& I( ?4 Q- L" b7 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
8 W6 n- A! t6 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 i3 c9 k% E& x4 q6 _* E) ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ u( c' d0 K1 {6 t" vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( t" v' l5 I6 F: q, S3 M* W* xI love you I love you with all my heart
; y: I! i7 l8 u6 O8 O1 JNothing can compare to my love
7 a  y, ^4 F2 \0 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' _5 w9 W$ p& W  S* s1 g/ E$ fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: Z+ Q  ]- ~! Q7 ^3 PI’m still filled with fear
+ ]6 c4 n' J4 w1 d  K. L# h9 w9 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) I; F' E; `8 }& e# p! ~, [8 @With such a tongue as yours,
& p3 ]6 u3 B# F! j  r/ F: `2 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 l1 a6 H. b8 {3 u! _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- n9 V  M& \% k2 z; }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- Q+ a7 s) F5 x+ l  N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. W" A4 N1 I! W9 z3 q$ O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 d  |0 F, m- j  {6 B, d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 S2 @% J# s8 c1 ~) V$ a# {( w% s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- r9 n2 D5 L% ]. P3 C( X8 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ k; f( V+ W# i. }6 v! M) d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ z0 P" J/ G9 B! S! ^$ \+ s6 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 a; q7 i# P8 l. L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ]; o" b( V5 Y6 m! H4 ^$ v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 L* V% V# q1 g6 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* H  r* v! O! P8 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 a$ n4 d5 l  P( Q% z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 r  z2 y) @5 M6 q  r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! i. y6 ^4 |/ g0 c' c0 B' e0 b+ ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( H# l  H  j3 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 v8 m& |* }+ k7 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; Y1 ]- x# W* `9 z( {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 b# ]3 e% ]; c6 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% r8 X! t8 b- }% \; x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ x( w" L; B) U5 |8 t0 Y. Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 }, p+ V' a: Z) X0 y4 D( c2 A# o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ A; e) o- R8 }8 r* b. w" _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 s3 E3 w/ y# `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! H& ]% h; V0 B4 z7 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Z. c9 y$ H; k9 |* |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; \+ |' p! ]7 t* \3 [5 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ `7 ]8 e+ b# L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 C, M2 x1 w: a; Z4 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>