【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' Y1 _) ]; p. x: ]. a- J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 g$ q& ?( C9 Q: }7 a5 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& n8 d1 Z  C3 J% WWith the moon kissing it every night
( E* M  b4 i' A& ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 K$ ~  J8 d1 F; c2 aEvery other word you utter is love
2 k) ?' J0 Z; W1 II really want to know just how much you love me
4 e& ~* O( b/ r0 S9 v: Y/ s+ YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* s; w8 b; j- D  G3 V, Y: RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: o9 A3 I6 h2 r) @9 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ y0 p8 k. I) S+ _1 C9 v6 g# qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 o( B$ Z' l" E) J5 A/ h$ m$ a4 TI’m still filled with fear
7 Z2 d: E- K& Q( U/ j! ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  o" t! ?8 k7 a7 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 N8 j8 o- y7 H  i5 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 w$ i( O8 ]- c  D3 G3 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 e; {) g% d+ B2 v* w9 U4 M1 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ f( ~3 A* S8 n) }7 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" Y* [0 J" v; `& [6 Y7 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 g) j( l) G  L% }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ @) t: Z) ~% |. P* l6 n! }# D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 A, O, u; O1 X/ |" ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# H1 g# u! {! X6 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 s) x+ I0 F( L) n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 |" `- a% O: D1 F# l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  b5 h; q: H: z! E0 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: I6 ^( b- a5 |( L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) C. B9 ?7 E' }" U0 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; _$ y8 o* f: K, P5 E/ p9 \, [& u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 @9 r/ b+ F' y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ?1 d+ `5 j$ [  p# q- z  r0 P* v$ E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 E5 _; a) f  Q7 B: G. c2 e$ {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 Q2 G+ R0 K+ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. B0 N' g) q' F0 k' f: Q2 i1 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( [! w  m8 S; X  E9 p( `3 z1 q1 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ Y# E8 X% ]. X( \$ m; @4 V+ G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 `6 B. T$ d* H9 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 o  N5 m6 R; P/ D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; |) c( ?+ k3 Q; @1 C* ~1 s5 ^. z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* M0 S& Y2 I4 p3 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! j/ C. H9 V! t5 J# h  |" P<P>I regret not dying</P>
, w9 x  y# [2 c% u9 N0 \. b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 \1 P; C( h9 q" P; R0 `  K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 x: r6 |# x% w9 L5 U: [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ~" S0 K+ |+ x7 w( i8 x( O& q/ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) _, A$ m2 `0 H/ z* S& _' K: Z, \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' w$ K+ T1 T# _' a* v( @: N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* F3 f3 |! x: D1 D, j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% |$ |% ^$ N  P/ ~* L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>