【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 B$ e! w- n, v歌词我附在后面。
# d* ]+ {" f( q, c; DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 l7 q7 W+ t5 a! d. SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* y. [: d: E+ v2 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 q  Y1 v+ X' u; X( Z$ g6 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 w- M9 n9 G( Q' C5 @) PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  p, }5 L+ j& j2 U" s- `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ m# Z; n& a) _; uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 a6 Z  F/ }/ C( z5 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* x2 S+ N- n# p+ x9 AI’m still filled with fear
9 i- @0 E; B& o8 c, IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, z( G, Q& n* E" T0 A; X( |. V5 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 z; g* K( q5 Z* q# TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. [) L* ]: \; M) ~* ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; T2 ?. G& i' G2 I( I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  v1 `3 j4 l  {  O- e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& O: v9 u) L0 M+ H/ E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 {, _: D" _" R- f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" p% W  m) F1 `* K, `* M/ w$ p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) n3 P5 k( j" V3 r/ D3 f( n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 a* n' L$ M. L* x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 M4 ?1 x7 K" s1 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: N9 |, ^+ h: c8 h  W/ O% v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: p. ^5 @. ^+ o8 u4 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 @4 `2 U# _, `/ l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" M* f8 n" k, P3 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! I' [& E; H" T3 W7 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ \. {* M; A: Y. o; m/ }5 W# v  R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" `! I9 c3 p# y* Z" Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 D1 B8 T9 o* Z& d( O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 K* }( @9 n- g# Q3 W  e9 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& L3 h3 ]- P% g3 Y5 l5 A: u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) [: Q& b9 t/ z1 F" R3 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& x6 x0 G9 ?/ C( T; o  {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 t- h6 n% U& c7 ~* }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ]8 p4 u1 a  d) ]$ E6 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& h" Y' z( X$ Q* Q: U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  y& D2 z# m8 O/ U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>