【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ V0 {3 H2 S/ EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% i! a8 \! k$ [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 w1 x8 v- X6 ]: p) `$ @% A  r# hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# I& ]8 Z9 T* W' xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' t9 `9 `# H9 g1 ^" nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 g/ ^9 y: y4 \# \8 V* k0 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: _# Y0 V9 h' Z, R- FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% n. W4 `( J( {. c( h' OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. ^' Y1 l5 B& j  L$ P2 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 a$ F* K( @+ j* o7 O2 D0 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: a8 W: {9 b" O7 y; j  [2 [" \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 U0 N+ I1 `4 yI regret not dying
6 x# f( F  `- W2 s/ M, O0 m; A1 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: L: v4 \/ K/ R, J" o+ l" yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 {' T! E7 I3 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. b9 E) `) f  b' i7 c( B: J! e, |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 s7 n$ p# E$ {9 e( \% Z2 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( \3 B; Q5 H2 W/ S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 b5 B/ b2 X5 \4 Q' _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 g+ R5 V$ _( Y! n- [4 Z  b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! a) m+ r4 z7 d8 Y* e+ }* {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 u" y4 ~( a9 _6 S/ h) y5 e0 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ m1 q* I$ z: y' Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 w( _/ P" N3 z6 A$ m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( ]' _$ x* b, h& V! a- o. p0 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& U4 k$ p3 I! O+ y+ T8 p. z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 Y7 x& e/ t  p4 E. z& s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 B3 G- A. @6 R$ e2 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* B$ v/ s. _6 d- p3 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. ?; R. V3 b6 f2 A( f1 u5 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( V6 B6 u( Z( @7 s: a& c- [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% a4 W- w1 T, m# P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ Q+ l( I9 H0 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# r) @2 P7 t& ^2 x/ ^8 n, n/ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 D& P! V! g" D9 _) a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 n- {7 ?' j& {( L* t& |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# d# n0 s9 l6 k9 z3 f  l4 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: }$ @4 P$ F7 Y4 b; w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>