【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 F  {$ I9 r: h* _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  I1 T3 c& P, j+ d: ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* c4 e5 t. f3 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 z5 x4 P, C' C8 h0 d7 p& O" K! @With the moon kissing it every night
6 K* `* u; G) b1 y. hSeeing the sky content with its love
- G' N2 H$ S+ w- e; D2 C* bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' j$ ~/ N. ^! n, XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% Y, J( S8 s, n/ zNothing can compare to my love
4 N0 |/ ?5 a$ }6 f9 F. h4 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* l9 q# M6 ?# y2 ]( m. J  G. S4 h3 r& \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, v+ y( j1 k# e4 X1 b! MI want so much to see inside your heart
, X" U% d; F2 u* O; w; ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 Y9 a+ e6 K$ ?" P% c  r! ~' j0 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 Y# x* h! D- v. Q& h1 r  V: wWith such a tongue as yours,
  O/ S8 h1 \3 g% v' I% a3 x! SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ K- ?! ~; D% i0 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! u: P" a7 w: _" ~% }" \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: S" i$ r. a- V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 s2 `* J  U8 e% c; T5 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 p1 s5 A0 H, ]- q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ?5 \" T9 t: w0 y$ z3 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 L. t0 w! c1 X' u9 `7 o<P>你无需担心</P>
: J0 U7 T+ C3 i& ~- @& i3 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ~$ E" q& }* Q5 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 W/ `1 k: G( r1 }3 X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 v1 W  ?; g2 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 z' m  I) \) ^5 r/ L& A6 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 M6 A5 ]9 U8 w' v. R1 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 Z5 c0 U% `, I. K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* i, ]+ p; P, I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: g# o( A+ X0 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, Z+ a8 x5 J& l3 A9 |3 K- ?$ e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 [5 W4 i+ ?6 \1 b% f$ U$ O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 I$ R" ?# b: x$ F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: T. i- }! d# O2 k9 h; Z; c2 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 L3 Z/ }8 P$ A6 Y+ o+ s4 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. |6 \' i. I# t% l( A- B  m$ C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 @0 ^( U# Z+ p  o8 D8 w8 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- L! X/ n3 x2 n/ o9 H' V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  a2 v3 v: A. w! q) Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# X( d( b: D+ I3 O我请你剖开它

; [8 g8 |4 [0 s  m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" [- W* q4 l6 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>