【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; U2 f  F. N+ V. ^( |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 ?  Q0 p$ y' BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. }4 R8 Z7 s- L- o& p3 Q4 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?9 _2 E, E/ h% f8 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 u( J+ E/ ?$ J) _With the moon kissing it every night
$ ^9 o9 J) F2 `( C& f: D0 cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: [* s. F6 t- J" s& t9 O8 u2 CYou needn’t fear anything
, B- D; Z2 m& vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! y+ ^; x5 S  W  qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 _* n: B0 Z7 C4 d7 r) oNothing can compare to my love
8 r% f( `; @! V6 c: \% E/ MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 C2 H& Z# f% {+ bI’m still filled with fear
* l7 e. E$ |/ x/ G+ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& ?# Y" @  D  b: HWith such a tongue as yours,
# N) {5 e1 |' wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ f9 F3 @# z6 d" C6 m! S& D- `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 v8 A2 U# u) W# m: v7 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& Q+ ~4 E- _* W- O$ p$ S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! l) e! ?2 f1 N0 S# S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% C0 b0 r! t3 K5 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' {" o3 a: d, z/ I1 r$ D1 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 Z6 O3 d) m, ^) U' d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" G5 H% w- y/ A2 I9 g, V! j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& k  r4 m3 G# X  u+ J* T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, N- x; m1 E5 a: W  K& Z% l/ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ^% A# F3 W& W1 M2 j2 o1 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 F+ G# }) J3 h7 P+ b- ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) |/ ^7 W( ^# X" U/ w5 h8 `& {$ R! J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" |) L% C' j" @* ^$ s' |; W3 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 |& K/ M7 J& c! N# \* Y% w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 c  v7 Y' f2 k# h7 p4 e  I2 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; C) [. O0 M$ x' ~; G4 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. v/ C7 V! f3 {! M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) q' b2 _+ H2 Z9 N  F1 X& Y$ s- }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' P5 F  i4 j; R0 M. I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 ~9 i4 G7 X; ]  G" P& X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 t- B7 L; J" ?. w4 E4 o- Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
: s" i" {1 p7 `" Q" G8 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ T+ U" c3 d; a  l# b2 t# E4 B# @7 H  j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ A' ]+ E4 k3 j* Y, U$ l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' p! P) C8 m+ C! M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ r8 P9 J. D6 `+ F$ X! L6 d4 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ _1 t5 o4 q, W- O1 u3 F5 z% E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ T- s% r' D6 K+ ^$ ~; `1 v, ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% h4 p, ]- x- p, Q% o# Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>