【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 d; \, P8 s8 }* ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ f; K# Q) G* l" a: d( X0 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( A" f7 Q  F) FWith the moon kissing it every night
0 n- o9 H  g6 f& u7 u6 y& ?Seeing the sky content with its love
7 w! v- E- ]2 S2 J% n5 r8 ?5 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 C1 I2 X  }+ Q+ bI really want to know just how much you love me
+ Y. t9 }2 {8 u5 XI love you I love you with all my heart
2 m! W0 @# I3 n7 x0 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" a) {. A) L6 t8 S6 X* XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) o' q7 x' ~- D; W% nI’m still filled with fear
7 `; `& y5 p+ N3 D2 f( x0 ]  `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- {: Z1 P+ e# {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; q- u; d9 l; ?6 _2 YWith such a tongue as yours,
$ l; M! ^1 k3 A  x7 E- OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 C/ w8 [; p9 a( w* `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 v; X- d& A4 a+ v7 N, D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* w( }; P) A: D3 n6 [4 a  f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 A/ H3 b0 @: v% D2 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 ~) }/ i$ d& q2 e! u1 Z2 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 z/ `9 @( Y* e1 j3 C. ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: U/ y3 q/ q; h5 w1 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  M/ M* N& B- X& Y; a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: X/ n* k# G; p& i% [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 ]$ u5 `( ?2 B$ b, e. g8 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 W( J, y1 _5 O2 ~" k, X- @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" T8 J  d6 l$ b& z) o& B0 i& |1 K% g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- Z4 R* o+ _% {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! H. m4 ]' ^5 U* F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( p/ M. b( _8 |) F. K  D3 ?% A( g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% n! B# O7 a. {& v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& ?$ X$ D+ P) N2 {& j! p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. d: ~4 K; R# Y& S) i. `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 N9 f3 T: Z8 B* B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 x+ F& p& E: g' m  J. j; n<P>I regret not dying</P>
# x; G5 [; |# w# _2 O- M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. E) S) g* Y  O: i+ k- j6 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( n) Y8 {2 [) D3 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 U! M9 Q; v, w" n- }* L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" M/ \; C1 z" Q& v( k' I! t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 L3 M* v* ^" W' E% C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& ^3 [  }2 @+ F$ g1 g5 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>