【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& w( E7 y( [1 R3 G$ R& g2 O0 R. e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. x" b8 P4 e8 g7 _' iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 O* [* J6 P4 i) k4 }The sky is happy down to its soul
% F$ R: G; x' k: ]With the moon kissing it every night
' M- i% z( r' w! I5 H5 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! I9 Z, R4 m* X5 z& V; r. t9 EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 y  `  T! F; ?2 n( `, M9 x, g9 NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. h  g: T3 c! Q' W3 h& T) gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: @7 v) u& s( ]% kI’m still filled with fear
% _& v- c7 p  _5 x2 s: m5 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ]9 r! B. {" ~7 {: aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ a' G4 M8 u# ]2 `6 lWith such a tongue as yours,
8 U- Z3 G- s6 A% `% i( ~: RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, z" K* c# ?" NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% V( e' `; g  L+ cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 K  m" x1 r/ B. j" d% {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 ?8 [) f8 _. C% j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  R9 f3 T. V$ C9 @( y5 f" R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 E" F. H: }# o; |; E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. T8 u" f& W5 U5 n5 e6 F7 `0 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; u9 w# Y: J# q3 k% w8 A- f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" N2 R2 ]8 o( t6 \3 C" w/ r& H7 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" d& m5 F" t5 t8 M9 h1 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 t  }& b( g6 S/ k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 U; O- R" `6 Q* j7 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. ~7 v9 C) W( t7 h1 H7 r! ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 v% Z$ `+ L/ W/ [6 ]$ ?( Z6 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: }' o1 T3 L1 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 Y" T  r$ a" B& K2 ~" u6 A5 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 b2 D$ E) e& q  V. v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 {: |" v( f/ o  C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" f' E0 S( l4 t. u# d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 o3 s( a1 v% I7 J2 k% R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ~" e. R. `8 P4 {& B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 S0 f' K  [" I* ]6 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ r4 m% W) s4 V3 L! S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: S, A# e0 v% ?3 `9 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# e3 o4 c3 H; I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 _* Q6 g" r8 u! W3 a$ Y! K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ J+ f% T* w4 ^9 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' f( [$ \6 e$ ~& ~1 q$ t0 U) K# ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 z/ M, z3 N" I* x& K; |- T2 c- z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 O' \' Q4 s) o* R% v4 x7 z我请你剖开它

2 m% l5 B+ t5 A" {1 c# l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! m6 J3 F$ v1 ~9 W8 S; Z# v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>