【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- I* u+ W# [+ W, L( x3 v# t- S歌词我附在后面。
& c( D& {# q+ ~- a0 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ P  ~- ?! C- c4 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: e" Z% t9 w5 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! F8 z9 U7 ^% S3 V, MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 n: w: e/ R- z' ~3 gEvery other word you utter is love
+ B7 C' ?( J( Y! Y: j0 _" L  [3 [/ TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 l1 f: v; b! z; R9 ?. P4 g- ~/ ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 e4 A0 a0 N: f7 G! w7 [  l" QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, y  x( P3 g+ \: k  o3 J" t2 H' iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 Z& z" [# c1 q6 J. s+ pWith such a tongue as yours,
; o+ l8 l4 c/ F4 X9 N: `( \4 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  V1 r" P8 w# g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 y7 h! C7 g8 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! @; [& y& e# U# d9 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ^9 S4 C# r0 i7 w# T2 ]- D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, I$ E, Y& p0 O2 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 V! B9 y/ e: R! D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 a5 }9 {" C5 U6 v) y2 W1 p$ x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ M3 b* [0 o% d; c9 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" R; V7 i, `! j* _- a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: @/ G  m8 _7 ?$ b* x( v5 N9 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ H" ?" i! y0 T  r6 t$ o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( `0 c4 c. A& W0 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& H, @1 P3 D* D  d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ~/ `$ d8 X8 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* S, I" s+ C$ M1 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ s2 l1 F# e- {0 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ o* Q" Y9 f$ p: g) {6 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* a! o& Q/ C& ]! y4 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ m0 a2 t6 C+ F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' d  b6 r0 Y) N% C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, C. f% ~: D- U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! h6 r' k* L1 M$ |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: Z; Q) [/ N) T2 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) o  r( s. |3 @1 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: g3 z+ u7 ^+ o) c3 @/ o<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 K* a; W  x6 [! P' X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 }/ m8 r8 E% ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* A# d& d! B3 U( Y& L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ z9 ^; H- ]& a, {. P7 d0 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 n3 J0 B( F, \- j, k& K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- ^; |3 k5 J' Y; A0 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>