【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- t  k- M, H! E. p  {$ Y, T歌词我附在后面。
  f  E: C; g1 h  ]& A$ T2 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ m, x/ m4 H! \/ i7 a* R% PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* @# ^3 t. Z2 F, BSeeing the sky content with its love
6 K8 T1 X& ]% lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 a* t. l5 l6 Z9 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! V/ Q1 r3 z% B8 G9 F4 N" D4 R6 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  S; Y' x$ ~- ^7 T* e; P* xI want so much to see inside your heart
2 @9 G* T* O( j, D7 u" ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 O6 L9 |$ I, r3 k. w: F$ M* oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# V; J& C# ?% ^0 q, w4 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! D" g! a3 e  iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ f; c: @, J, x9 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# V9 H' P: v6 H& p" \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 b3 ?) W4 X; }6 c7 [; t$ M8 @3 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) a! G" M0 a3 i4 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. [2 r8 i; W0 k; g+ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# ?9 C0 E; P6 R1 s1 `# j6 _: Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& y& r, J1 \1 y* Z  Z: ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 @' X" S5 m9 s+ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( s/ J5 t! Y2 n' K5 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( K/ M" c3 u$ i' {  r8 P( z3 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! c) s7 i, q6 o! f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& o1 y* ~7 ^; Q& D( ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* C9 V6 y! F5 I, I$ `" s  |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# B0 d% r% _, X" K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; s2 }; f) W9 V9 B7 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: H! Z$ }( u8 g$ L. ]! O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 C8 m  B- y6 T0 k6 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) `4 z- G& f5 V7 a0 O% c3 ?7 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 z* D) d* N+ v4 Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, N" r$ R& d* O" K+ b* R' O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& t5 l% j- c% |5 f' t! t) R; P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; ]; B  N) f+ N/ K4 l' ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ?. |2 y; N# a2 Y) n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& s$ U" p3 {$ n+ c7 L  N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 |. o* ?8 C, [6 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 g5 y3 z0 C* B( O1 H; R2 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 {6 T6 X1 U; Z1 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 P& d; r2 e4 ~; C& B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ H3 U# [- w7 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! D; o% X  U1 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, @- n- o6 f' [3 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>