【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
, _/ O$ O0 f5 i. b, h9 M! ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 j, s/ a7 H; A: `6 tWith the moon kissing it every night
" E7 Z$ Z8 g5 l8 T# d$ ^) B- mSeeing the sky content with its love
: s3 ?: t8 w) h7 q% g( }3 K$ ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 y- P7 q& Q: F, y5 c- g2 u% @: XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& W/ P. W) I% q+ bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, i; c- ~7 Q0 p& MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 I$ s* U2 P$ oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# H( g/ ], o: q9 l1 @2 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# S  k, N1 O9 d, R# URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 E6 b- S. B, `9 p- t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# w" y  }, X/ j2 [7 D& u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 I) e6 _0 F+ @7 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ R% p. N9 F4 j6 a; m0 W: r3 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" q8 }' P) W* b6 p# {& r, ^7 M4 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! \" Y+ I! ^( u% R3 S6 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 u* \4 ]2 p& H( d, I8 S1 P. K/ y; S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- J# M5 {8 s* E" W* O1 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 w8 j' U/ T3 H4 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. w% l4 z) ]. H4 [# ~% k& T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* y2 q8 C7 G6 t* u. }- j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. i5 P. Y! D6 }: t, V! Q. Q8 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; H/ J, t' w/ O& M( l: ~4 ~. W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; i/ }$ X* S" b# j/ k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ I1 o3 l0 Y- P: }! g5 a: f9 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ M: J5 N7 E1 Y. J/ R: f9 {$ R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. X' {( B; s( k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( k4 J) G( D3 Y+ R' n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 p- b$ W% ]% W( C* Z2 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& l) }/ ]( z7 U: X) `! r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& y+ U/ g& Y5 n  E" E: l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ c/ G( s. a' N: ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 U2 Q8 @+ A7 Z- J% u% V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- g  D' J) O7 A! r& X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  C7 a. a$ j: z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>