【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% V1 o  w2 @" v8 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ M, p# G0 ^; eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ j2 j# l: i, y1 Q. `/ j2 uWith the moon kissing it every night
. a& c1 \% E8 I9 `/ `) j: ~" gSeeing the sky content with its love
( G# L8 c. @8 Q- P  uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, u3 J4 A  M8 i5 Z+ p: EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 f" W- n, y/ w% Q% c" e" U* w, oI really want to know just how much you love me
) N( }5 {: ?+ I- T) S+ m' _1 wI love you I love you with all my heart
1 C& a$ V& r5 g6 o$ a$ nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ c+ g8 R4 j8 Q3 `/ @- i, ~I’m still filled with fear
; Z: ~# O3 O0 l- [6 N. r: uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* o2 o! j' C2 a' F5 L1 T; F" xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. l6 \& C7 B* [! D$ VWith such a tongue as yours,
: S! P( w5 s+ [' }% V" |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 G# j# }9 C* i4 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 s/ ?0 Q# ^- R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ ^5 [: m9 f2 J, b3 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 |! W; c% t1 D6 z& ]2 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, g" l3 ~( Y, E  n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 S8 `: Z7 Q6 h% {& n# n0 O7 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 F) T, H$ D4 H2 j& J* c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, ]8 a$ a( Y3 L+ j/ z1 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) W) o4 L7 h7 T/ g7 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 b! I; h, |6 S: @9 }# E3 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& @7 M% x* d( y4 f2 K6 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 w5 Z9 X. l) O0 v7 L5 [3 i0 ?( u- z<P>你无需担心</P>
( t* |! x! v/ j/ v, @# j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  k7 i( K  `. V# h+ e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 u* T& G9 h$ M- D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: H9 A  G: O) E, {0 L/ C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. c# X2 U* l7 \% M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% o8 t2 P- Z2 S& h+ _/ Z1 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 e9 o( o% p& J) W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" u* {; z0 v! _6 P- {  u' A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& f4 R5 F, |. e, e, o- Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# [2 J4 J  G& Y6 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ W9 |# j' k* q- E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 K, Y8 ?5 L5 ]  a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 u8 S) h5 b" s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% l9 H0 j- ~3 J# \! H2 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( M+ ^" R8 i0 p4 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% \3 |+ p7 _% T/ }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>