【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 P: [( |+ M1 b, p5 V歌词我附在后面。
3 r$ N- M# x! z+ ^* ~9 s$ I- BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 z; E6 X- N% F: w0 }9 }. q+ {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  m: w* o) v0 K: JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  @' X+ Q) m1 n$ Z( D) ~% QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, m/ f8 x& n1 Y. u! @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 L% j; K. _0 J5 ]: y) P/ GEvery other word you utter is love
$ o* H/ J: w% t/ g& m4 O! Q. [I really want to know just how much you love me
, c( B0 z* R; ?4 H" h+ |/ |I love you I love you with all my heart
9 C8 x0 F/ L8 d% X4 B" k0 e+ B8 gNothing can compare to my love
, s3 p1 G7 ~0 z, l/ [7 y0 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" ?# {5 m6 f$ \- ^% i# II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 X6 _0 i& t; w! JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 U  T5 O! `# E0 n& RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. Y- s! X, E, G- U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 m) p; X' Q0 y/ I) Q' y; u' r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  X/ W: h5 @8 w& g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, K; x) G7 u/ v3 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ e1 x3 |+ A, o; ~8 s/ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. Y3 T/ h8 D$ {+ I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* f% x) p. r$ R- h$ S. t0 X, P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ x) P# f8 n6 _5 T+ N. [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 T6 S: l5 T+ {<P>你无需担心</P>
4 L9 |1 b6 V' h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& W5 B' D4 u  V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, Y: l. x& k5 E: D" Z7 @2 j1 ?/ d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ]4 U6 q% }1 M' s' d$ u1 B$ y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ f+ l! s( |8 n" i, p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 K# _3 E6 j+ X. m: O) h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 E8 i7 j& i( F9 v, t/ v, B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* k* i) p. f1 ~/ g/ ~. ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: R' P5 J1 O, ^' l5 I, \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# r" k( r" j+ q1 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( }# p2 |, t* q) ^  V% Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ N9 Y: r& J! |: P  H5 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ~% r5 D' X9 V4 c! Q" |$ r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' L4 i# I9 N' s! _! v" g! X, u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( N4 M' K4 l( r" S" d; C( y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 I. K' M) {* H& l0 ^1 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* [3 R9 a- `8 x+ `' i, A1 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 E' k2 e7 u; }1 G5 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) t4 k0 `9 m9 D, d# v6 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# V7 a/ A" Y: |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ^4 T0 ?# ^/ u+ b$ b% w0 b$ z! p* [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: _! w" Y% C' U4 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>