【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 a% T8 c/ x3 ]4 U歌词我附在后面。
& M6 E9 R" I% tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& U# m% P) J4 G, a) y4 F, D1 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ y- L5 u5 y; Y0 f1 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' f& _3 i+ f3 E5 y6 ?% d/ W4 @( [6 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- {1 t! d, G1 R2 l( A8 j8 jSeeing the sky content with its love
5 G7 r+ f; P" x3 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 i7 I3 U+ e# t1 W4 u( mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) R0 \7 \3 C5 }# cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 E- d5 X5 T/ a. F/ W  jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* J0 [8 c0 a, b3 b; t' ?$ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! J4 e$ }" W1 Q" C8 C) `4 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 A; }$ Q0 c- H% k% NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Q% W6 N1 ?0 D* u# Y. x8 j5 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 \- N9 R6 d& O/ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ x$ N) D7 a: j0 c6 O" p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% m% Y& _" J0 n3 Z$ R; S. v5 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! h, p8 N9 m% I' D. `' d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ r1 ]( u+ y: ~- }/ b! l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, x' y1 M9 ~$ s3 ]8 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, V" s& B7 U" o) f: j<P>你无需担心</P>
. [# V8 U/ p" z$ B  q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 f" Z1 c* H& n7 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 C8 J, X  \! L& n8 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  v% m+ H$ T! b+ Y4 h" W% R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& A$ }+ @5 i6 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 I7 l1 A) V, \) o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) M, T0 i8 ?+ V' a# ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 g; z  x* Z6 B' j0 q* K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ]( n" z  P! f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# J. P& H( v4 m, s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( Q0 u4 g5 p! |- B( y" g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 p7 f0 `. B2 }/ q& W9 ^# E# \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( B# p/ s/ o. Y/ k; _( }8 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! F+ i- K) ~6 @+ U  f+ H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; N# I. r4 @$ l) g+ [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ S- X' a$ k7 z0 p6 @7 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) q# ^! U+ Q5 u- W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ s+ R; ~* S  `( @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& o# m* _2 Y  Z1 |) h. J: T( Z1 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ G1 ?0 |1 N' o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# |4 M. t- @6 h0 m* a- l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# z' m% V* M5 y% t, U; q5 O9 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 Y9 G* T$ b* Y% W. E5 J我请你剖开它
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2 k" ~6 b# P( n1 E$ Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* l2 {* z( r; L  B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>