【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ S( R& P2 a0 G' ]+ \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# i1 Z6 W! g  U" b; t5 g& [1 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 C+ e) ^4 h6 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ A$ b0 J! _9 wWith the moon kissing it every night
+ y; _9 d8 Y' RSeeing the sky content with its love
" E2 d$ f1 v" j3 [3 Y& sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- E0 N9 {( q+ i6 d4 G* SYou needn’t fear anything
3 o2 J1 z6 X0 L2 }, v! ]/ F. m: PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* O! Y: s  t1 ?/ G2 M% b  d& KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" n3 j7 v% s+ R! `3 A3 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: E2 o- U1 r" ~  v0 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ]7 |( C( N; n' `. `I’m still filled with fear
3 T$ A; I5 k+ _* Y$ M5 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 w8 w0 E1 n$ K, jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 Z6 ]' ^* t0 T9 W2 v9 |+ L. {# GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! ~& F: z# @% R9 |; S6 _1 z. rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 P6 ^" s+ P3 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 K1 R7 E4 t  q: U7 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 x3 I! X" L5 a  ]+ L5 d7 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- i/ z3 r6 X7 \6 h4 e- Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) t7 m- f; C, M5 N- U( I9 r8 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Y! H9 f: ~. ^) k' i+ D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ^' f, T. g; s' b# v' s8 m  E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% k& r. u% X$ m1 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% k; }6 z5 y5 b$ Y3 B7 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ G& I; @: B6 Q& \5 G8 Z- N0 h2 k, O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) f$ }0 s) Y; t. T0 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 h6 e0 K' B* z: x6 i/ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: l6 Q) a7 s) a& a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* ?1 L3 c. e6 M5 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ [6 v) E) `! r8 ^. Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 C# L/ W9 u5 Q" Q0 r0 d3 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 r" M& O( t% k/ W+ B8 Q) {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 x' A/ o, z& G4 B* Q$ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 c; K9 e. G  v; s. i9 Y% q/ y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, e$ U9 ?) }( D& K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 u) m" h: ]4 \. J, k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, D: v/ D* X- X; W9 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 G2 Y3 _! Y' w5 L( M9 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* I7 [! F6 {! w$ `* l3 J# a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 T$ J6 S7 d# u5 [/ U% |  O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 `" F. `3 q+ w. V8 i1 q" f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 p( b4 y8 O, w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& w) b2 n( ^* q: v) W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>