【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) O5 G6 L- L3 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# A5 Q" Q9 O4 _* gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 k% O7 L: F+ P( k* c; xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* d& J/ d" P% N, b; bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, r* w- T# H; _( q$ AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, |! z; C" _; m, y: D3 y, gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: w6 {8 }; X: m" e, kEvery other word you utter is love
  R0 z" @  [" B! z: m( {I really want to know just how much you love me
* A8 _8 G8 n* I- O* C4 }; z- w& tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" K! I6 y# G5 Z' tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- s4 y2 [( M( [: K. n: ?, i& t! TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# `) i) c- e" N  Z# d9 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; ^$ T5 c7 x  q) E" ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# k) @3 g4 y5 J; EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- a& j1 @# ?* GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. \8 x+ ^+ ?% }5 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 N' V! L7 C5 m! j& Z1 e4 |% R1 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% y2 X6 e3 l! A% t& t9 [) G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! M! @1 [9 \5 E/ y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" B, d" z' ?# m8 P* x& [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  L9 N" u9 x! Q  x; }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- h7 y9 l/ @7 y7 |8 l  e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 N3 R* t& [; X/ y# q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; z! p$ i" F) L. W9 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' u3 _( ~7 i- x" C6 F. m6 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" ?' G' F1 c3 h' n  ]: |5 n0 ], B! |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 o3 e1 L$ V# |2 o# ]: h$ E# e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 m" S  l) e8 G: o8 D+ k8 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ G& ?; o( u- \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 A6 v0 Q# H$ B3 K% G3 z, B: h7 z( J, F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ V) R$ E! L' A4 d0 I- H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 Z+ s; w9 b8 W3 w% R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: V; D3 K: g8 x8 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; B% @6 Y+ q& _7 U3 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% u) q4 N) ]# C- ?$ `* m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 a% G: M' j) v4 y5 K( ]/ C<P>I regret not dying</P>
. i/ [1 q) s5 u3 M" g* O& N( y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  H  }* h  P0 H) R( n  P% h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 e4 G5 f& a  U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 H3 O+ A& g2 W% Y3 ^+ T' H7 O# H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% J8 ]1 b$ a! ~2 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ X8 `  Z. p5 Q- e: m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 r. s5 `. m* O( A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- i+ ~! f' |) v* y$ R& j& B1 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- A+ }4 S) t' _6 o. Z3 N" Q5 g% l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 }4 V2 a1 L" A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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