【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ c6 Y  A* ^3 N5 m" J( I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- ~) Q9 _9 A4 }+ _5 I9 l; U+ mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. l+ E" a, V. U3 J8 S) uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& q" z9 }9 k' z8 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) e( s/ v! u$ ]1 N9 RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! j: Y8 {1 C" w% [$ b6 o! RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; c: r% T$ O) Z2 I8 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 V4 w$ S4 i$ AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& i+ ?; K! \* S: I' o0 O3 Q$ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! x) g/ I5 o" K. ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ l* A. U; }3 @* F" m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# i# T8 l+ b  E4 c- |" K. H- b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  o3 M# }' s6 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. r7 v! {8 y0 H+ @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ~/ C: C9 Y; k9 B% ~( `3 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, V$ F- i; j+ l0 l- A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: O/ y7 L  v2 h3 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 M3 n1 P) w- N& _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 O0 x0 ]% C9 t+ W3 z* u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ J0 J/ j3 @! l5 K0 G<P>你无需担心</P>
& t$ i# q; M; l2 U8 P- W9 D! v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 S# c+ F: T! m. l: {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) u* z9 i4 @0 f% o/ ?( B. ~7 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" c- q4 C/ F. F" i  F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% x5 |; ?& E. O0 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 P2 L3 V0 p/ {4 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ q9 w! T$ G" y/ n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. ?( d; ^5 D6 T; j& P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  t( n- t/ f+ u5 t& p; \" B& R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. \0 t3 W/ r! F5 F0 {7 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. Q9 k; P) M6 r. }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; X/ U9 K1 A2 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' i0 l7 ~7 V8 O! B0 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ z5 Y% l9 I  [" ^/ N, \+ h) Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( I( s; p1 d; y- J0 L/ U; T+ z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" g- t6 p# x) g5 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 y5 F. w1 @0 J  T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# k& r* M1 ~2 ]; |: W+ i
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>