【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, o; B. K4 L; L. a2 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& s" r& v6 R5 D" {! }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 B" r* s) @  BThe sky is happy down to its soul
: \, I" X, a9 l2 x. \* o: hWith the moon kissing it every night
5 G' g& z. X$ L; ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- s& J% S) M7 i$ s5 l4 I# OYou needn’t fear anything
; x$ u( {: P4 K5 o1 m$ n. f# pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 D! {- V! @3 v8 Z: G4 l, nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 O! P" l; f5 U# a- K# M) Y: wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 F0 j) y8 m+ X$ g6 d, OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 `. B; z) U6 X( M& RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) A( _; X1 L+ N! |3 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 `) d; T. g: j3 D/ `0 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; Z1 h8 N1 i2 }( ?9 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  M1 S4 p/ v3 W) x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 m: T; h0 L6 G% q5 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 H7 A1 H5 L/ q7 E2 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ~) X4 B. c9 y2 _% L, x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 c0 S/ g) l/ o7 ~4 U8 U/ g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ?, W$ n" g' j  O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  b8 a1 j( d* v, x5 F4 o2 y- I, Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 r9 ^7 R, {7 ^* d6 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* L: i3 P" d4 }% S5 f$ ?) f" a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 E* a% K# h# w' |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. E! u; _7 P$ c: R0 [/ L9 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 {, w! @7 o/ l3 L! y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- f3 s3 `) y7 H& G8 P+ l! n2 O% ]5 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 \) }# Y9 z" o% W4 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% S$ l. r% `' H5 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% d! [7 v$ |, T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; B) e2 N& I* c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 k/ b* d7 n9 X* a% N( k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 [# B! {: B; f  Y6 ?, T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- m3 t% s9 E' [% L3 E% @<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 z2 }' |, D+ g1 s5 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, Q; Q4 B* f8 F' o9 Q  V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 B- B, c- P, T1 ]- P: u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 l$ V% Q  x2 ~% G  n0 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 ?$ h) I1 Q! b- v+ A7 ^5 E. N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) h1 T, k5 T. F& U& h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>