【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 q, d2 Q2 z" z8 P- e5 X3 S6 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 x7 ]2 ?) Q7 ]1 y5 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 p& r. X, F# aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" x0 H% g& g5 x& J* B! u& s# ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 @. `3 u# o# |% l: \7 [- ?' TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: F9 o& ]& ]8 E- QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 {: W8 l$ g, FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 f$ c* C5 H5 S$ D" QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ Z  k0 Z1 {4 W- w4 D9 gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 [. h' m. }, mI regret not dying
) i) `/ ~' t" c: k0 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# I/ Y/ _3 |7 C( ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: J. g. ?& d: C5 R3 M: l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- w( X: `# t$ n' F2 a' `: U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ]% e! z3 F# i5 S- k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ^' f2 Y, H9 D/ `4 b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 L5 s( z; E  u9 B. ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 y4 h2 ~4 `, Q0 N2 k) ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* Y! V$ W) u# P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; y: S0 Y1 I$ m+ @0 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. ]- ~6 W* j2 I' T  \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 Y2 s; _1 l; b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 s% w; y& _3 Y. u9 d, k) t& @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 o- D1 f  q) I: h. Y& N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: i- k, q& E7 G% J+ k7 o) D  `4 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' X7 [0 e# A* ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- n$ X; E. w, G' V" T6 b9 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: r' I1 z  L5 M/ M4 s4 b" z' N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# E( C! A8 l1 ]& L4 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ p* s9 z& |$ p- P: N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. g( o4 V6 n- t# S' m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ v8 l  L  a( G3 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: h8 n  f, T( v- v4 d* O+ e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Y6 ^7 m+ U3 K# {1 z% l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 k  W: x4 d. g7 r7 u$ A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 o. x- ?6 x- ]1 O: L5 z9 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 ~$ D# t0 c; E! J! m4 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ V8 e1 Z5 r4 W/ P  ]' v4 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 S2 c% H# g( v2 t9 O% S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>