【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; p% K/ M0 @) R5 a! @歌词我附在后面。
' ~5 G* F/ n7 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* t+ U, g0 ]0 v6 w, HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; g! g8 w+ W: H8 K) ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( V. L. {; I! H, r% ^% zThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 x7 }' y) h) eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 i, Q) b  g9 u# R' i5 _% qYou needn’t fear anything
  q. w  ~  V0 s  t: {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 T6 D4 E' ~, @$ J6 u6 j" ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 ~% U* I4 a' F0 P2 x5 QI love you I love you with all my heart
! I; b1 i  N5 V7 b! C/ ~Nothing can compare to my love
) k0 j2 ]' B( c' MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- o6 |/ s% v' q4 J# L% F6 X# tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; R" A6 I/ n" _. _! g5 u. tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 h& t5 X9 R2 ^4 X0 nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' h( \. o9 [9 N+ L7 n; Y" H( zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) o; ^5 ]& X; _; B  sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. f4 o! P# W! e6 |' l6 |' ^; MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, Z, H4 n, y7 q) l; o5 u+ ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- }0 _: F$ M+ \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. L* u& x+ _7 ?6 d& f7 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ~) V. P4 Z! o2 r+ w' \. B/ x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 p/ ]' O: e( @! a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- I/ S. g! C$ y0 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 E' e) O3 `/ ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# e! [! g: ~5 M  D4 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! k% @4 n' H* n0 ~8 l3 Q* ~# @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 C2 I' _" _! Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 i( |7 h' D7 R& ?; l7 N# _<P>你无需担心</P>
7 E7 {# |1 j! P4 n$ h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ J. W! O4 K5 d. d# a8 a8 f! V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 k+ g6 J: F5 M5 [* S. T. b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 W& G9 Q0 L8 o9 t. G9 l' p, ~  R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 E; C; q: X& ]- n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! ]! M2 d, |4 b9 c7 }& l& e% M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" C! }. D5 v: b. g: R: [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ [9 Z5 K+ [- H7 J" ]0 ?4 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! D! U6 L; i6 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 U* \7 }3 q6 |5 i6 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ P* c% L; J+ J2 G0 W; Z; P' y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  D6 e0 z# F; d6 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; ~. {1 F5 I. a" J<P>I regret not dying</P>
% }, |1 b$ L/ a0 a( J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 F7 u5 a  j* l" ^+ B; d" w6 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) a: N) z0 W: {9 @2 }7 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. ^0 H6 J5 |/ t8 e& k; C0 X& G* Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 o, N* g* u+ y# R1 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ C8 x8 l& Y' `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; k# u7 V% T9 g, _6 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ a6 p7 u  }# o9 f! f  f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" q3 [7 A' l9 I5 a3 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>