【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# \2 b6 a$ ?& X& u2 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ M4 ~4 G6 S! K) O& Q8 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ~& l. g: B: ?0 B0 z5 n& SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 T5 a5 @$ v9 I) o) j* QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- j' _' s7 R( c, @) B7 Q/ W# TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. ]3 M/ {3 s3 P: |2 r# G. T! |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% a0 j0 b* f6 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' \/ l! f2 B( N. f. SI want so much to see inside your heart
( p& X8 I6 c/ ~* eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ v# V5 L3 Z* X  W2 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! W7 d  B- C0 V; ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( ?( D9 u( l* b9 W, O: e/ k+ y5 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: }2 j$ O7 B" U: Z& a: F5 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( j: t. ]8 B! r% [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% n  h! G/ V6 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 @- }1 N! C2 W4 ~& e<P>你无需担心</P>
' _* _: ~* ]7 Z1 B5 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ ~  j/ ~+ o" T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- d7 A& \5 E; n5 x+ b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 z: L" b5 @% W5 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' J; z" y9 f3 Z% }* v; o, e; Y6 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% i# K7 Q" ~3 _. f0 [: d7 q3 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 x6 }% k% e! r4 r; d7 j, Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ v. U% i) n0 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% U( e3 v, W) ]3 W' f8 I: ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% r  X- E; o* `% q4 P6 ]2 ^1 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ |: K3 x" {% k$ W; m, m/ ?- w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, ^1 x& Q! J& a; |" S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' s9 A5 |  A2 V. L9 d, \5 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% o) }/ N# A/ N8 [2 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Y' |3 x6 T" }5 i. N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 \/ L- {" G% U5 a! z8 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 Z( J$ r6 k! Z. C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 n, y" n2 y) z5 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: O, }& B7 ?+ d# m2 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 N, ~+ ]5 O" e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 h& C3 i  a! n/ c) }+ g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' i' u$ @( r+ j4 d5 F) w9 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>