【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% m9 U+ O$ \# D4 i5 A! ~4 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" N6 ]; V; a* Q+ ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ q( `+ g5 {  `4 q6 i: z! R; EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# l# I+ {! G5 D! ]( S+ h4 e. }- JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 y! O- x3 [( j- K8 P- mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 E' n9 U( H# X! l% XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 h6 R! I1 H, `8 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* ~! W" w4 x0 o- jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; X! y( |* r& W- `7 s. P7 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' y" a3 _; \: u1 W8 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ a: X. ?2 `$ M; @' N1 |7 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, D1 p2 b3 Q3 _$ S+ Y* C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 x2 F, |& G8 b6 @! |  Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 u  r) w# o6 o2 w; K( L2 C! Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 f& I/ M& L& x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. n9 {4 Z$ M2 I6 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 d/ d1 R! d9 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 R7 I. _0 I/ G, f" R5 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. Q4 x6 _5 K  f2 v" N5 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# h! n/ z4 N' B/ p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- x$ b, `" p* @* {! K* E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, L1 y4 y0 K6 m$ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' J1 S* l! G8 z9 a( G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 s, |6 K6 s0 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 r) s" P+ f! y- c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 E4 ]7 q8 H- Q3 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ P; c  x1 T9 d& J! R% S4 t$ t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. I; n4 c5 @% o4 ]! l/ D0 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  |) V6 W, b* E/ a' K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 |" D( h( ]. L, @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# I+ V$ G3 k1 r6 Z( T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% M0 _5 \9 W# x. }" |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 F. B0 ~0 ~& L1 I5 j! {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& A+ `7 i3 ]. D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 c$ }1 n) |' c- c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( Q; _" `% R& }4 ^  L, o) j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 C) v  H  a$ X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 C+ J( _/ @  C( R5 S* C9 n, V  n1 p' A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 F2 D) p$ o' ]) R/ _" u- @5 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  N' V3 B" y2 Q0 a1 l; S7 Q5 Z: K/ {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& n4 N" T8 l0 p2 d: r5 t( A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; E0 H$ l$ _4 L3 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' W) o6 R2 f7 |" n* ?* F# Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ a9 D; Q( a5 i4 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 h& v: q" a8 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 Z! ]+ P* o6 z/ r! g& @. s我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. C# P" K- j, I; l, L5 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>