【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ n! l, h) z+ q3 a歌词我附在后面。
. U' S  _6 v: m' S3 {7 a" VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: O; H5 C, x; }& A+ ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 u8 b6 W9 g! w. SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 N5 e7 E7 c$ S* M& w+ yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ ^0 E9 h8 F" K& t' oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( D. S4 a+ x$ P& c3 K: T8 @( i- f, K% |Every other word you utter is love
* U( d; t+ E, hI really want to know just how much you love me
$ w4 b" S1 A+ d5 L: D0 p/ |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) e; f% d% S- H8 y6 ?1 X- u! DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 n" A1 I  j8 c4 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ W3 l& M7 o* WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, X  {3 y* U& l: wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 H5 z8 D! ]3 m9 H0 {I regret not dying
4 N% x# Y! y" W% C' x. nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) Q# l/ S* j0 y7 B5 S- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- |" r  ^, r9 d/ C+ VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 l- a9 m  k' m7 e6 X. vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" C6 E5 G- W1 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' U+ `+ k9 \4 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. Y) I5 U0 P4 o5 H& l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 l) }7 x% H+ @- O" v8 J& `7 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. {' O# `/ j! y' w) m2 u7 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' E  r2 d2 M4 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 ?8 U' L4 t) y, M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 ~4 a% ~* C  A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 C# O4 Y# {/ Z+ B* O* M. p' g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) H, R- x3 g; ]' y; B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 w+ c  a* k4 g: |' E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# L0 J5 W: T+ }, R# {" l. b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- g9 \9 l- g- Z0 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- W3 w% w) y' C* C" G9 N7 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* u  d7 y  P) g  W, r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 e+ g& g) z% X. P6 K# w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; v' u4 n" H2 H$ e7 ^( y7 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; s$ G; ?* @, B! y! B* O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: Q7 e2 N7 x3 l2 _) m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 s8 J& Q$ Q, f0 A; W9 F% J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 F+ o- U* S6 ^. T) H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 F* J' d" l- `; U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 g. B! m+ _. u) R/ x9 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 v% d* c. T& Q( h: N9 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& q/ x# `( B* Y0 g- M! b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 _; u, d' Q( I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ z  H" Q! ]' O8 P6 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* H1 P: k' L" i( r, Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  Z. E' k. ~4 G+ C. a5 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 O$ {1 O% E; a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>