【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! C- O# E5 Q; X: E5 |% W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 G! D: L) m% ^# n$ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& d; D; n* C' EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  \) z' l) D# D. qYou needn’t fear anything
' f0 s% Y/ C( E* Q( `+ ~. `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 E/ }$ L- s+ L+ _. X4 Z+ j9 XEvery other word you utter is love
! \7 \1 ^6 G5 M# JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- Q3 n8 |% i8 b5 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) g. L5 o/ s, H6 J; XI want so much to see inside your heart
0 B; J8 ~0 W0 o( I+ h4 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- M4 Z; s7 k1 u% l+ h; B: XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: N- `# H0 q  }2 o8 Q* wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) H  k, S  H- b; O( l4 E0 hWith such a tongue as yours,
( t8 b: I- Z' S$ JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 c' i9 u, q2 O: ~8 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 Z& ]. k- G+ G" ?- w$ G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 s2 X9 U0 {6 |! Q4 ~# B$ N" y0 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 T( Z3 J7 G5 E: }1 h9 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' K7 l+ U) o- l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* l& l3 m$ v; r, a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: P' a% @3 u+ b  {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# @# O( J; a+ v: l" S# |: K; b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) H  d) F0 o! K+ O8 }6 }$ G# f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 Z; f+ o  v3 Y6 p/ w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, d# K& M% Q) r$ w& R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& h: W2 K$ Q* w$ J6 V9 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& k4 _( W) z- `+ u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. H6 \! ]) q$ Q# C7 Y# L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ l' @7 \  ]: E' W: F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 i) G) m) j, e. Q6 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( F" Z! X: i: d8 O0 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; I/ b! R: ]8 \" `; z8 R* h  }( Z2 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 p/ a, C; N4 F) }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) ?8 j# g3 ?5 y  b, d$ }7 X# c' I  N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 N; @9 q0 ^8 d0 Y* A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 Q" y( n' x! c+ |" W6 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" t) Q! z6 i$ _5 Y% y+ S3 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
! \, P' X" {) x, j1 _) K9 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ ~1 e, b5 t( n/ _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 l5 _; p+ j; I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 E/ r4 q6 u, b8 W; P, N$ @; q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 c) v  n  u- H  L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 D7 X- a. ~( t) o. q! c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 d  k  K& P1 U- R! \& O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>