【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' b; y) B( m+ g  n歌词我附在后面。
$ _8 I) p& h4 ^3 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" L9 @* Q# v8 Z0 T- P4 y0 A6 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; C3 d- a* a% O1 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 k+ O3 n( n: G1 ~$ JSeeing the sky content with its love
+ e" k  q: b! Z( QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 c! v2 \/ O/ s# G- ~0 D2 F4 oEvery other word you utter is love
$ K# P# z( [6 QI really want to know just how much you love me
0 v. o/ Z/ k" Q1 {' JI love you I love you with all my heart
2 A! X* X: J+ H: z  I: aNothing can compare to my love
4 V! r2 @3 }9 h6 \- J# CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 L3 O6 L% c; p$ n& yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, g' G9 u/ m' ^/ w) l" |( HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( k0 N  ?2 C$ p" v( K1 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ \; |3 i  J( {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 I5 }& j3 O$ n8 G5 Z7 c2 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 x) M0 `$ S. Z7 z" S4 |0 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; W1 A. W& |! I; j/ ^7 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% ^4 ~4 A+ V( S* u( y( X' L& ^* r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( a2 O) U( t3 u" ?) I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- T+ o  ?; D$ s; A1 c$ J% }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 x, ~  G7 F! ^' `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) S3 K1 x, m" {- X+ }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 i( O, M/ j: [# _0 r; @/ E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( A0 g! K% Y  H; u. q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 q- x, D7 {7 K0 }( }' g5 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 F, B& @7 X* C+ D, k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 t  m2 ~' F' i- W* Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ~0 w7 e+ n1 [0 R" U; z0 R. `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ~% o5 f5 j$ M7 Z+ o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) b8 d- h  c% [" z" N! {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% }; [2 A4 _! z/ f. Y5 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 `1 e5 {5 N+ f6 c6 d; c& @: R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 D0 r" x. M$ q, @- X( o( E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 m9 w9 v' j! W$ L2 i; m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: c1 @7 O  p/ I2 L1 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: y/ `- L. b+ J/ }- ]5 ?. g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 I6 G/ V2 G$ Z$ h4 F1 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ R* A9 H( d- f; `! u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) D# t. N# d/ p; |* V1 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M8 O8 l  w& o0 G8 M# B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>