【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ C* Z4 y) E0 r歌词我附在后面。
2 l/ }0 B+ Q, N6 }$ F: HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 a+ z1 q% v% M7 m( B" P) x$ SThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 W; ^0 l& T+ ~( g# _$ OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* H/ c1 Q  I3 \9 ~6 _# i6 U1 D" EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( k! g/ z9 H  f2 x! k. SEvery other word you utter is love
/ B+ g  ]+ d8 ], JI really want to know just how much you love me
' ~9 |% g5 m/ ?1 hI love you I love you with all my heart
' X1 B! @; W3 z5 L. HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 k7 q) }& b  m7 EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 K- N( w2 s+ e' aI’m still filled with fear
8 e) L% F9 c* H8 s+ H$ P& XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! C+ T$ Q6 L" x4 ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 V3 u  z+ [1 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* y& W( K; R: E. p8 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 Q4 ^: {' @8 l: o* tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 @! w4 b6 X$ S% x% ^0 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( c: p. `5 i5 N0 J& {  ]- L/ d/ \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* }6 v0 }. Y7 _; R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ h! X( Z2 j( f3 ~1 l( x' {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ {& e: i' e# m( I2 d, ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- u" S- T# \. Y# D. l) N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" s- M# v" ^4 |( s% H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 y5 B/ O# Y. ]% y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ Y7 A& O. L2 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% |0 H7 S! `; E& s! M7 U1 d6 H' V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* }: B: E1 v- u' B' |* `( M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 j3 W! a+ |: d) @' e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! \: \3 R/ y) q! B0 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 t8 l/ F7 f( F1 e0 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. x, e; k+ z/ ?: ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 }, M- n7 e' J& q( x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 s: D0 w0 c5 ~( o& r; w0 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 k# y" `) B: Z; ]  G0 O: V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 B* c* w- H/ x& [7 o$ a+ a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% K" {  R/ h# n: o  p* D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ G3 p" y. F$ p% D" |1 o# ]4 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 C6 P1 [6 ~2 G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! Z$ i4 H; R9 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) |; c5 e/ @7 Y  W* f, K) B1 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: g; u( R# M5 E. A$ c. o$ y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; D6 Q, s7 i0 F+ S8 I! v# a1 E2 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" X7 S) u+ V% }( X* ?4 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ A2 j8 `9 O. o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& Z0 i6 G! m8 m( T1 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 ?$ S4 H9 H# E  A: G4 V. D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, _- [9 v% k; J0 q( j' `+ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>