【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' Y( E; V5 Q3 Y9 N歌词我附在后面。
6 h( A4 b' l# ?  EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& a% v& M: o' d4 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ [4 n& a! t- h8 ]7 |' oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ T, N8 |2 X; o6 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
* `, [9 U! p& E7 S' pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 h, M" k9 g$ ~/ UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ j% \* j  y  G9 t/ \1 o8 vI want so much to see inside your heart
# }) \6 x5 w0 \3 d6 T0 U4 K  U/ a8 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ P/ X4 ^% X7 a0 ]. O" G/ P, L, l( Q- pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 F$ Y: w; s+ k* {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' P" p* p9 ~7 @9 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 @) g; s3 P' m7 R8 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ @  o9 L% ]; u! Q' c9 z# i5 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& A5 B9 w8 R# ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, U. Q$ R; M8 c$ f* `5 `% z4 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* e8 `+ P. M/ |; @2 N# `/ ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 z2 ^3 A0 D7 j' j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& x! N% |2 g+ I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: d0 @) G2 q' A4 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 I; }9 j5 [# V0 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 S" ~7 j2 Z7 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 b0 h$ O# p# y: i* v( f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 n" ]: d" [% P! k1 ?- y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 t; n7 w8 s" j7 ]  U8 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; k' B9 w1 g  I9 G) |8 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& r5 O2 @' |- v# Z6 h/ ?  M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) \; \- u7 f  b2 X2 Z# p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ?, K7 I1 r: v* g$ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 C9 O  J! e$ d$ b6 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: q. H  I! X4 {- D" ]7 \. R& g: S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 X3 F2 G4 x, c* \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. l7 G- _9 k5 G* Z, Y6 x+ B2 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 Q& T- U0 G; w. E" w0 U% b: l9 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; v7 f" G9 Q2 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; l0 G( H- C. O& ?/ t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& l# C1 @7 e) f5 K7 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( W4 V' |% |8 R& I; V4 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>