【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 K9 s8 P+ X# f4 z6 s2 X7 ~0 t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; A' I2 T' q% g& H: A/ Y7 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% s' X5 D5 G0 K; BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 q" S4 `; I+ E: }/ ?* yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 K/ Q0 y9 l; p2 [$ H4 p( g- cI love you I love you with all my heart
' z/ W5 @* B6 T% J. z+ [Nothing can compare to my love
4 [1 X; L0 }: _# u8 qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, W  X) v) U9 F  S+ O) i, c+ GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ d& L4 ^2 j& [3 c1 aWith such a tongue as yours,
4 q8 J/ e! K. Z4 \- p+ P9 L( P0 g5 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ ]1 @& U7 N! u/ X6 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  r6 m! c$ W0 h3 Z" D$ d$ l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ^* H5 t1 R1 C, ~: a! e$ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 }! ~" a' m+ d8 C$ p* R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 K8 o6 X% Y+ I) c5 j# [2 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" L7 c, O  o" n* G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# U. n, B; H1 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. d- T. h! o. Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- `# v  p' _5 h" d. ]! g4 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 N8 ~6 Y- R7 Q8 @$ T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 d' t4 H* i" y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; y2 B* f8 M1 A3 \' x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. G3 U& z. c$ r/ a3 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- a! k) [/ D& g& A' s+ Y. s( e- a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 f( ]3 c6 z" v, `' n6 I8 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 E' V+ s, q- k2 s: S4 s9 @. L6 K' i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 c$ X! k" D' p) ^/ M3 a8 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: W" w8 K8 D2 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- y) ]. Z4 b. W4 A% o0 A% r- }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  Q, I% i! G0 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, V% s7 S# y# D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 x0 w3 |: v9 K9 e$ v- Q4 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; z. T, d0 S% W6 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 I: m5 s3 a6 O0 c7 A3 W4 D% q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- f  A: O8 j! z$ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. P4 {( m$ u. e/ S7 w* c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! \) O1 C7 x% u7 k' ^2 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- U! U8 C$ {, M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" `3 ]4 ?% G% f( s  j+ Q我请你剖开它

& c' W$ Y5 ]: p& D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>