【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 n0 s/ W, K8 }" \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, O* I; _; l# C/ Q1 G# e$ U8 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 k6 w* p+ U7 `Seeing the sky content with its love
  m2 ^0 Y/ ^3 p  I7 `) WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. y) i# _( B- d2 ^6 K# v! oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) K; s3 G" B2 Z/ s2 p8 y3 M+ p+ xEvery other word you utter is love
, z8 d4 r* V5 ~" [  G6 `6 eI really want to know just how much you love me
* U. Y, D$ g+ N2 RI love you I love you with all my heart
4 p  X# C& L2 \& |$ k, eNothing can compare to my love
/ W# ]8 q; P1 _+ }* U7 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" e. I2 ~5 B$ |2 CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 j. s, U, ~! G5 k& |3 Y7 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 g, V- w1 t( t* p. ~8 |7 U! UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 O) [7 W: e; sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  N5 O8 z) _1 `; @) x( f5 c; X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- E2 o( M/ W& R2 ~, x* q3 _- b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. i4 x3 N5 ^- V$ q  p+ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, O7 S) I% M: Z; O& c! W+ \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( k* ?- ^; q- m2 U9 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 L! c2 w0 y) H. ^: I. \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- e( D3 p) q+ `% c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 p9 K: L! F! r8 s3 y  E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. u/ {; ~' Q8 x2 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' t6 p6 [2 [* C  T$ @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ~9 g' z' t$ H' ]% @; j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- i9 [  y- H! u( H- q8 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 v: Q, p3 c: Y$ y6 m; r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 O, C' X% E7 y/ i! W& f- v5 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ y4 D" u: ]6 Z$ a6 S+ ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ @4 w1 v' h$ `1 z0 N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* p+ C( h+ M; z) V; \7 l0 W) [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ n5 Q3 p, _+ l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 t- x% k- r) U- ~  j& P; [! ~; V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. a% _) }- |  {6 m, ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 R1 i% E! y7 _, w/ ]# r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& P8 G3 D* a: }8 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! e- @4 q1 }2 l$ a9 G' ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% b) b' t+ F4 S& e8 s6 j5 K( h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 u5 X' S6 r$ O% D& [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 x' q' ^* Z' _. F8 s; D, ^4 c* [* U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 L# O+ G  \- Q: j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 t/ ]8 B+ Y8 k! i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ s8 Q9 c/ Y. Y6 i8 @( k& g; G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: {2 n7 Z* |$ p2 K, `6 g) M<P>I regret not dying</P>
* _: Z: l7 i/ ]! h" p2 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- q3 C2 G( O+ J: D, A# {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 E4 V7 L0 P7 y: l/ L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 A: Z% J* R* f7 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# g; F3 T) _+ M: k0 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! a% r/ }+ |1 E1 x) ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) p: F9 z9 S" g, k3 x9 x3 O9 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>