【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% [0 i$ q# ?2 n  a8 ^2 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- e" j; }5 c, b6 D3 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 x! y+ d* J) c) D5 C3 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! z2 f% }7 U# V" BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: k; R5 ?! t5 M" [# [  z6 a$ J* R' hWith the moon kissing it every night
+ X( }; h  k  bSeeing the sky content with its love
! e7 U+ g/ k- E3 F( g& x, rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ e' n) c, v" `- ^* z  y% @You needn’t fear anything
9 F, r' ], u) l7 T* MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ F) q8 h0 S  K' cEvery other word you utter is love
; D  g' z. v/ `& PI really want to know just how much you love me
/ N1 O! B/ w6 B# O$ e2 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 a1 k8 N: x4 d. tI want so much to see inside your heart
2 d9 y9 ?- ^# f1 V8 Y7 v3 U$ `7 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ X' h3 I8 r, _3 {; S% Y  tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 \& G( n9 S3 m, o% q; L, ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( D/ e& S/ d* H5 z; w3 t6 s$ jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  B4 [/ V6 l* `. g, `6 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  T6 G6 z' s  J/ E$ j8 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 w2 B3 w9 b; z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  j1 V: ?9 N( D) H# x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Y  J4 u. @$ N; f9 C- D, I* F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) v" A' b4 w3 A4 T5 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 e+ s/ ^5 _; |. y# L; e/ P( s4 P7 a' `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 H1 C: D: Q' p# ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- v% T' y7 N6 S1 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& k, x6 ]0 g" c2 o9 E& s/ }7 P<P>你无需担心</P>
! K" m# w# C" U$ u- f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* l, o: k2 y& y1 v, \+ P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* q) V; Z! x  p: C& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" D2 g- Q' C4 @: l9 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ X# s+ t! Y2 e1 e5 a! O# D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ~+ {( H; @$ b% r5 D1 Z' \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; c( h" W3 M  p' a7 }) U; w" x7 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# H0 v% m  a' C: [* K" \' l+ z. X" L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ R9 t5 s  [) q$ X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, A# ?" j# J1 i  i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. E0 ]. F1 F/ T9 w3 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& M" |" Q# m5 x7 M+ s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ^7 s/ N# H3 T( |  y# j; S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 {/ W4 a& Z# K0 _( ~& ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 G2 ?$ h; z4 P8 u# |& V% d) Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# u& _5 @# `5 J1 g& K, A' c5 I0 Q' \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 D& A) ^. O) ?7 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# v. B' d6 q8 r( \) G0 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>