【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ e7 d4 ?2 O7 b- g# R; n0 L2 X1 ~, |+ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; a4 w+ J* `- u  H7 s. j+ zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ @5 n- x( l" b' r1 j  _( GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; _" x. Z! O3 |( R5 G6 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# a& ~. i" r8 n. ]: |Every other word you utter is love
. H( C+ p' a* II really want to know just how much you love me
: h9 `3 U) x' J: RI love you I love you with all my heart
, t1 l: W& q* c8 N# X& ZNothing can compare to my love
+ x  P; g, H/ H5 Z& OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 I# S* J  }- z; K; S1 mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: B2 |/ l, E4 k/ a0 {1 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 o% l- R6 b: O  H5 I2 d  M2 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* C3 e0 O0 A- k! B* e4 @, V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 A7 n: n& @/ J' \! P  S/ m0 A& {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& u1 l) O# L% [) {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, W. d5 }3 l+ ~' u5 u- a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( i; W$ E# q" P% T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ y3 D' r# j: h* m( Y$ \. z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 [9 {7 |2 C. l8 ~5 k0 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 z- b; L$ z$ \9 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- D; V, {9 }0 Z, U" S<P>你无需担心</P>
' B, C0 @& C4 T: ~; e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, a4 l( e$ _) U& c6 ~! O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. z9 N: q: M6 @$ r( D+ o/ _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# x7 e3 i8 `6 n3 |4 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; K4 f" m) _' v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 C4 X. t* N& \0 }. _  q5 W+ p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! J2 v) x. r! [' W" A  @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 E% h" r0 [6 N9 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 J( u% b! U+ a$ Z/ [: l0 P; V: X* Q8 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( R) E  I8 J5 m6 j% l2 N9 E# m  c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ u) d3 }& n3 ^* U4 Q. J5 m+ N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 S. v9 g. A$ q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ s9 Q1 }( I. C4 E% W- q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 X, M$ s, p% k1 F" {% h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. e9 H# g$ s3 F4 G/ b. T: r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. Y( ]/ z2 k+ s, {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ ^2 Q" j& _, N: z% a: I9 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" b' b% ~8 U4 a7 I3 F( w- C% ?" E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 T) g1 k- J4 f4 I. n6 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ r+ h4 B8 z2 P& Q# o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% ?! `/ E: y) |. v, f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' S  z5 E6 X- b+ I4 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>