【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" q0 ?' c+ M. d! R+ J2 V) S4 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 {( c6 d0 y# T2 p' B, F0 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. m- G: T9 z) P( R# U' D7 EWith the moon kissing it every night
0 _, [5 f& J4 Z( i* X' U/ y$ \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* I' N; K7 E3 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- C6 M& I  h" ?& t% s8 r7 CNothing can compare to my love
6 R" q% Q. B- V7 K, ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, Y5 T; }6 ~' V" a4 w0 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* r  k3 R1 r$ V4 N* G2 C( @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' V7 l) \  U) ^5 q& t0 j/ V9 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' ~% S& Z- p4 V2 V9 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" U9 U7 A! _! A6 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' \' M& x8 g4 u# w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- z7 @8 G9 [3 G+ J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, F8 Y0 H. W: A3 L% A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, }4 V6 D! x" o% b7 N  m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 q& n2 C* y+ U' t, s& k5 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( G( b4 L% N4 y9 L7 J. Z% U, o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% q; P4 p+ ~8 M& m" I) U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! @+ d0 A3 m2 u" e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ Z0 R; k5 W' A+ ^! B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! d9 T  u8 W1 D- \3 j, h- S<P>你无需担心</P>
- U; T9 f' s1 K. ?- q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 `' u% `4 ^, x. D; R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- x% v2 B  C" j; |% M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, N$ C; Q: t+ ]( x7 E& |. h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Q" p* a* \; G& L9 [2 U- U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( C3 n6 b4 {1 l4 B  g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- h( ^/ ?# r. s+ {; a7 N4 m( O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: q1 u: p+ v; {2 E* P; O+ P$ @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 ^' U$ C" B+ j0 @; ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' Q9 ~+ B" j* b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: M3 h; D, y3 S7 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" [1 T8 P4 _7 C4 r- g* r3 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% J" J$ h* S2 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) z" T, U/ x6 o! f. Y$ [' }5 b5 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, n4 f; X* o, K& x4 E2 b( t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 q( h6 C5 [# b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* P! M, }; s- g' x4 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* K. Q2 p9 {. R) K( n/ Z9 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& `' m' u% [. r; n+ `) G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 ^8 e3 s! u5 l% y! B: m2 f- i2 C我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>