【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* e' s* m4 k- ?9 q: e; B; A3 V( y+ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 _/ v, h3 f# fSeeing the sky content with its love
6 u) d, G, \0 N/ {/ HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" s! T2 X; Q) d; dYou needn’t fear anything
* J  O5 a9 K+ l6 H" q# z( C" T2 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" O+ M/ ^' _5 f5 ^Every other word you utter is love
! I1 V6 N- ^9 X! b3 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ z9 {+ H$ q  o8 r# J2 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* r1 k8 n! z* M! O4 |1 Q7 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 s. e! Y: F! a" gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; m& p! U# X( q# }$ z& dI regret not dying
6 I. O' H& y' ^, {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 S8 P2 M- h' v8 m1 N# lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 W( A/ |1 w5 n" P2 x. t# yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ p/ y0 Z6 E. [' I! BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 @, ?5 O8 A# D( \6 p# L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ~) w1 ~- ~9 M9 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 F" X$ P' y% O' s, k! i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 e+ _, ]0 K) y0 |1 s& W9 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 P% t/ E" T  z# i! D: n& U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. |' P: g# D9 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) u3 j$ t! X0 p- p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 V5 |  L) c) e, G' I; ?3 M$ S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" D6 x7 i; R/ n0 Q0 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) a1 w! A. P! e% s2 t% U# U, L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 o2 n& |! C( N0 x$ U/ z: h  y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, L; K1 ~0 X; k/ e8 b+ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" D+ Y/ q! _* g7 Z) G* \  p% I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& J' x1 |+ _: d" i1 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, G  S1 i$ o# n! I, v6 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' E+ [9 v- y3 N+ Q8 w1 s0 [2 D1 V2 X  F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) c# r/ K" S, N+ u! H& o* }$ l% g1 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ @7 u& t- i& |. ~& Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, X" r; u) R3 x5 k1 l4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& }' J& S: Z6 E' C1 i8 V0 }% d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# r& X$ j( E/ k) C" x1 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. K; ?; i/ k% `/ J0 r0 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! P  h2 Y; g6 K. [+ B. Z8 b, u<P>I regret not dying</P>
. z4 N0 B5 y7 \+ B' B5 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( L5 I7 u" o$ e+ T+ @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 g- @" V9 I8 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- P- c2 L% N+ r. w1 {* h; T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 J' |( J7 t9 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 \7 w* w+ g; T4 {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% {! D2 k5 V, Y' W  x0 }4 d我请你剖开它

$ x$ L% {0 j) j/ }; n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>