【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 i1 B0 g9 S4 C) ~. c7 v! ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 J9 x0 R; B2 ^* _' [' ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 G3 `+ u6 d2 _: k& XThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 F8 K6 ?: o2 Q. z% U5 wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; r# h/ d* D. n) ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 S; s' `( U$ b3 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. {, p1 [! t; ]" u# a6 NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( U$ f; w$ p, E$ P/ {/ sI love you I love you with all my heart
: K# _: t2 v: O% mNothing can compare to my love
: W0 w7 A4 g( E) F. f$ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! l, K, A9 _' \1 [8 i0 J5 Z2 kI want so much to see inside your heart
* w$ w2 p! S/ l, Y- P' }+ o& ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! O1 B, _3 w- w7 K( RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) l7 F8 a, ~9 y- ]2 l9 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 `5 {: }: O0 l$ Y- U/ a4 E! v' B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 i) E6 e6 q8 l0 `2 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, ?+ b& w+ M, X3 V8 v; Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* K; V% R  R% d0 z1 X+ l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 Z; y& Y; Z! `' y, |; ]8 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% h& p% ]+ q3 @0 j- M5 Y& b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 U- V* a# J& B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ r1 ]1 g& ?4 _2 `. `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ l- F, ]# v0 Y' j5 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* k- j* [; `( m0 k3 d* Y) ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ Q, E3 g6 J; B, Y1 T$ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: ]8 D" B$ U4 s; O2 ^/ m! A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. H1 @" |9 k0 ?1 r* T8 L4 j" |' {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( A$ m0 V" f3 h9 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 z: q" Z" r1 l6 W& |0 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( c9 `/ k2 k( E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 R* Y" t8 ~  C% t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 P9 {. x/ g7 g; T6 |0 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' t/ S: O+ T8 p8 L, L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 N2 _* S( P9 Z( i- u) @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ \. r0 n( x6 F: J& A( f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ {9 q' r% |9 U+ ?3 A; C5 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" j# I$ q6 D$ b! e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 u: x& o5 ~( F( G+ ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ d$ l% ~! c5 ]* m2 p- ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 {+ L4 t5 O! q; m% D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 m' B. D. Z9 T3 S) u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" K5 o' U: {) L# v+ E; y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' C( {* u' w& W; ?  S6 T4 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>