【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 l# }% x/ F) @: I6 X- [' ~The sky is happy down to its soul
. N  R0 z6 ^0 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ h2 x. M! c) K5 g( WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- v0 j8 ]0 y. n+ zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ P1 L& z9 P( cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  C1 D( q3 o; c; N! II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* o( l( i8 ~- I/ C' z3 k4 yI regret not dying
7 Y0 a- o1 q1 g2 x9 q* M9 H' B: j( UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ X( Q& Z7 |3 P; Q7 U9 SWith such a tongue as yours,
; T6 K5 A8 F9 c  f$ I, ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Y. q" r7 A% [7 ^+ a5 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 L, `6 P. r, h3 X. P, P6 i% g5 O# T$ S' i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ^. }  H0 R0 V, Q2 |3 y! L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  K( Y& q& S* G7 S/ u- N# r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) z. W* f8 ~* I) D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% D) V. f9 c# X+ K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ^3 q% v4 F, |- D9 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ~1 A! h" @& o! Z; H/ l6 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 k: D: F' d7 Q$ C7 V1 c  l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 R, P$ E/ g3 P( ^$ t1 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& [' i5 d2 @' I$ F! G# ~- l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! o/ s3 j6 x7 M% {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% q" W; W6 w) ?7 g/ k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: R$ N0 p# R5 v; o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* @* q0 Q+ F: c9 z8 ]9 U8 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 o) r% z! N1 I5 V0 ^+ e9 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 r2 u  w$ s* ]! m1 X4 B* f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ Q* n; X! D3 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* R6 a. N$ U2 R+ a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 A" o' b; x) g5 r4 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  N8 n) C9 b1 \- `7 K8 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 S% l0 Z2 a$ n, [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 x5 `7 M7 e( o$ R( _# Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 M* R3 d2 S9 k1 j. D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% m) F* `- c4 Z' k+ u. y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 \1 x% K+ k9 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( i+ _4 ~1 L  T2 X% T5 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- T$ ]- S" W, m* o$ ^5 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 F/ g3 K5 S  h! T+ Z/ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 U" ?( I: c2 V+ M1 i' L4 r我请你剖开它

- x# Z4 e* `  X! y, s/ x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>