【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 \9 `- G, V# T! W6 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 Z. b. [8 k- Y" a6 V7 ?/ C% ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 I6 l7 Z0 ~; _' F1 r: X2 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 J2 |' L3 ?0 t* R4 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; ~# l1 v2 G, v9 `5 ZYou needn’t fear anything
. ]! g3 k$ C! d0 W5 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 a3 H' G8 t/ I" m, G6 y+ RI really want to know just how much you love me
, {: L7 O8 V7 U: B& q3 WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* z" B% D3 Z8 W: V' A' w7 K# dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 H" W" B  g% z8 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 r( S( ?9 \/ c" ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. ^) L# D: y2 r. H) R  }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 k4 t; Z2 _7 d' ~9 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 v  |, }& M; g) U: A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 d+ H6 ?. M& J/ u  m$ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; `, X* h- n9 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& T+ I/ R1 ^2 S! e4 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! K0 `6 ]; q& [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ U1 T, Z8 e- X& d, S9 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* Y0 r" D% C6 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: G3 Z* X# z2 _- M( ~) f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! |- X0 v9 g: z8 O$ a% W/ l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 A( `$ @7 ]! d4 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  v6 D1 c4 c' r2 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% ?/ z3 B9 O6 q0 }! i  @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 K9 \6 F7 c/ c' M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  [* F0 P, a% k5 s6 F; E$ v: U3 Z9 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 W: b- g8 @9 q' @" |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ n" H2 K- ]7 h9 d0 O0 A  G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 V3 f( ^; H2 c- _: O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. |) U# {7 n7 r' K6 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: y  R" a$ U: U8 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 p3 G- S' ]9 O" m4 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; C2 I$ ]& S+ S0 e2 M: e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ]' v* T( ]4 E; W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# J1 i/ w( i6 B3 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 j  V0 o* r7 w$ y: z7 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. @, o5 @% n! l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' i7 H- h0 [4 p& ]$ \+ P) ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>