【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 n% i% x+ q& \2 C9 k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 J5 j$ k8 F( s/ V9 ~& O! ?( OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 {9 O( R7 a. p$ I- zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 Y: t( e! K; o) ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 b; x' e: a/ {( y, z: E: `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, D4 n% v# Y' j0 @! S  `You needn’t fear anything
8 C. N* [6 j) ]# TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 E* Y+ N9 P3 n: y3 T3 y2 {3 INothing can compare to my love
: m6 e/ B+ K. ?7 u: ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, C8 [) P. @, M2 j. cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# w. Y8 V( V# _' j/ |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& ^  H+ }& c7 d) p1 oWith such a tongue as yours,
8 G. W6 v8 A* r; g( t, r$ jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 l4 c- B; ]6 i  h% e# h4 b" GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 L$ b1 r+ A; S' K0 w( s; bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* P& c8 k- C# Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 X' G5 U3 Q0 [6 K2 @6 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 w- x( d9 P- Y. |- _# x  T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 D- B: q  l0 B" \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 D6 y5 `; X( x. L5 X1 u" p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, U" `# n! ?4 N* v# ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 Y! n1 R, a8 t8 S" C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 E% L& ~0 c. R4 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! H& I( J: S7 n4 K! `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# L6 Y; {% k; r5 v! b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ @) ]& |& x3 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 S& w6 T) w) k7 c2 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 l! o$ v7 k! }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' c7 X  T% ^( R) G4 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% J2 L8 f# h; J+ U9 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% w* N% C/ z) U, A* e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 ^8 c: l- h4 Y0 e$ x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! l# N7 ]# m) A( t( f: v: f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( J& @! z3 G! x+ f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" R3 x% E  W' B+ @( H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" f8 w3 E: \1 k, y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: X& N2 u2 [3 k( U; c4 N) V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( I& H" t  |: m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ u* ?. e3 b. F5 l) L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' p' |6 {/ q# K1 u; d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 o' Z$ i9 h: y, a6 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- `1 n8 u3 m) u* M) h3 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) t& ~; o. D! O: y" v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, O7 Z' c3 E0 L) k3 U- u  P( Z我请你剖开它

9 r- J3 J- x  `' ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" t0 S. t4 z5 L& s3 u3 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>