【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* b7 H5 F" D; O, L* b* |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 v4 Y; J, C2 i5 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 A/ s$ Y4 v+ @The sky is happy down to its soul
# n( C4 f1 \4 \4 ^% hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 p* m5 n% F; |8 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 `9 S/ v5 R' C0 B; ^7 }I love you I love you with all my heart
4 _1 ?, ^2 L; D2 v  h1 S8 O( c! jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 M5 y8 J. ?2 |, z' E7 m& w: u+ }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' P, C# `) Z' T6 P; fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 x0 \- @/ F4 `" `6 u2 u% qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 @1 p5 G* R% @: A0 P! dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. m; a9 n6 d( o9 N9 ]/ mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ b. X+ B* |( g9 l5 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 z& m1 c1 H, z& U' g- r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, X3 n( t. X4 R* ~$ ?. Z  |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 a, T& q" D8 a& A. g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' b3 L, F$ M9 G. D! o6 @2 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. \  ~& D- H5 e& t! v4 |. V" c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& |) P& S' N! |' G% g& z: }& y) }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 V7 K3 R2 F: [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! w+ ^7 U& u# U0 z. s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ i8 [. O7 L* ^: t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; t! ~4 g& x- S: Y! p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' f$ a0 W7 `; i$ u6 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- b1 K8 V( c+ g# T( O  J1 f+ G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 X6 D; _9 X- T6 m7 C! X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 j2 x3 D/ A; ~% X* J' s. \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# k2 E' e: x' a8 r2 a! _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! T4 p2 O) q  b8 I2 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( T" S; S# `+ ~9 n. p& ^- j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( H- n/ K0 Y0 f0 Q8 H2 y" [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 M6 y% p- V# V8 K$ j( z4 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' \" w& @2 Q7 V% H- e& W0 h' P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! ]/ B$ t$ Q: y7 N0 |% ]7 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" y. M/ d/ V: Z! x4 m$ S6 C6 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  [& I, p4 H9 h# C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# H. q5 t9 ]3 x( n# D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 R: [3 j; C0 A) U" p3 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 f4 e$ b/ a( U5 {. P+ g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>