【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' _2 D4 U& C7 H- _1 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ }  }: Z4 S- J1 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 |+ d2 r; S7 z. X( aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ m! F+ m. X" E6 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 K0 K5 G; Q. B: L7 F+ OWith the moon kissing it every night
/ c  c( o/ u; R/ J# VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& a  j/ X& J  f( oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) [6 o) c4 Y0 D  \/ U7 c/ oEvery other word you utter is love
! F) o. L3 ~- \I really want to know just how much you love me
' P' ]7 k0 a9 }% B+ k% eI love you I love you with all my heart
; [0 |8 i5 m1 e3 V$ j7 I( R- gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 `& \$ c" m& h  J- N  l* UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* f, S2 t7 \( ^# M0 zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 A' P+ ^/ }5 _! zI regret not dying
' ~; @% Q- v' k  J5 J' }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 v" \4 E- q/ H/ p! N  cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 f* C' s. Y8 j8 ]% M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 Z4 i( w9 J$ D/ `" Z3 N* A3 s0 Y0 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 i) B4 D3 i  U1 f9 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 _% w! i0 H' l  @3 Z$ H8 _2 f7 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 h/ _$ ^0 |1 ~7 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  B, X  D( |6 N  u4 R! k$ x( ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% ]( x0 ~1 ?! j* R! a: `/ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# ]* z8 a) N9 Z' k' f+ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: \& b& I1 f% g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 u! i0 C4 D# K: o3 z0 i" j- e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ Z% k3 ~( ?" j/ j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. d& Z" r% |, O, G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! L; @3 E! ^  T) u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; z. S  `! Y& C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ H" q5 r3 e  m+ m3 ~$ o  D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( r) U; L1 ]- u  t* I- F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# U2 a/ j' b' R0 N0 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( N; n0 ~8 m& y9 m) W* Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ?" Q* w1 e& L, }6 [7 m8 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 p  c; n3 Z. I3 F0 x4 i$ D  @- u5 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& d0 D- q# G; k- V* y" z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' f  u" w7 j, k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ P) W  I% z  B: x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 L2 I/ u7 z  {3 Y' e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( }( f; {# c# q+ Z* D; y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, i3 V2 P$ r! {& q+ S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. m' f1 S9 D- N% w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ g: `9 Z. a& o; n; ^5 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 r- j% ^3 l5 R8 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( p) _5 D- H% E( z8 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ?! g6 v7 S$ U3 s, h0 T# X9 l$ @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# {. C6 \& z! h3 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. T" k% Q5 c* n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
% d5 S7 {; c' t5 A: T! U
. w: v0 z1 N0 w8 x我请你剖开它
2 L3 L, }' P5 Q% @0 T* z$ G
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) P% H4 }6 j0 }. n1 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>