【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 D/ w( R: K) b* ?4 b6 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 Y9 D4 w3 K; J7 a: d4 A2 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 K/ H4 e! u/ {. ?% n# VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ^' K5 V5 ^/ B1 @6 q$ @0 [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ t  b4 O" d! G2 NYou needn’t fear anything
2 S  y3 W( m! @, Q4 L1 D) u+ PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 v' z( j5 M0 @5 ^Every other word you utter is love
# ]: G6 ?0 p; s8 b( Z# _8 B* OI really want to know just how much you love me
+ _7 _- X  Y8 PI love you I love you with all my heart
0 ~- U' S  s% w0 W  Y8 @5 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 V: M1 X. ]6 j& KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; `% f) J( y9 v3 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 X9 m4 z% }) l" i/ {! WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: \" N9 \% Q1 E0 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. J  K. t8 [3 t9 V: h9 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# e  N; @1 [4 `( o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 |4 H# t9 Z$ F  c9 G/ V2 `9 ]) M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 |( a4 Q$ Q4 r- I0 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; X% i7 i7 o! D& p4 s( e$ B8 I2 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; d9 ~* M/ B0 f. R# ?; q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 N+ ]3 e$ Q& [% B* [, d$ y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" M! M# c; l6 M8 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' j/ Y" ?0 G$ D8 p( L9 ]. c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( ^9 K% q( M5 J; ^( L5 A; [# y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. J# V7 f3 u0 U  T6 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 Z" A" u/ z5 `, i! `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Q2 u: D: X+ Y" J! V/ E3 L4 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 Z3 ^2 _3 G( O0 E: T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# h# h$ r9 ?( x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: }4 R0 w1 Q8 p! l6 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: [* ~, t. g: I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! h1 h( e( t. i/ V% |( R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 d  d* S4 E! F* W6 y& e9 U) J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 P2 k5 w, s  ]; A* D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) d) e9 m( g0 Y; W# s- Z; Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& e& |5 k' K' y0 l; M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. `% ~3 j& n0 K) b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' W& x1 O9 Z* X+ _4 O" @8 ~7 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 y- n- _4 X; V; d! H5 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% I7 P$ Y4 ~( D5 ?/ }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( w3 L& l3 d  Y& f$ Z; _  A$ l5 }( ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  z. c0 h; o* W: K7 g- k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( K, ]  f/ [+ s( t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 G. C) b$ q' A2 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; |7 t# ^! k. W' M  P; m# D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ]5 c; A. P3 F" K( |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& S. U' Y' r( h* e  ?' I  I. ~2 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ v2 T& E7 M9 X" l3 r0 @7 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  t$ A+ E, O, C2 _( U- ]3 y& Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  C1 |$ e) d1 j7 v6 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ |/ K# r: O/ @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>