【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 s: q3 V( a0 o" W, V8 x  RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ y, P& \0 t3 S/ VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 h  Q) z; h1 ~# @! y8 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# O8 j' ?+ R+ n) `3 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! \+ P8 N, s* L! D. F5 F) SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. n3 P/ k. M  a) DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- C3 a( ~1 [* T6 Y1 Q3 q+ c: ]  VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( C/ }) m6 D& ~- l' _& pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 v! G9 d; T* o( e; j) j  \8 `8 NI’m still filled with fear
; c5 a3 Z9 a2 x' fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# a8 N, B; R9 _( Z# _* _0 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ M) d9 l1 m* c) H! ~' XWith such a tongue as yours,
' `6 E" ]# ?9 W% ~% ^9 h$ p9 M  ]3 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 C8 A) `8 ]/ Y+ GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( w( p$ u4 G! X4 G/ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. ]0 x2 ~& Y& F1 I2 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( R8 N. q% N# C$ v0 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 j- V/ q" [8 _4 C$ o. z4 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# s: L: @8 r4 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" R) s; b  i; Y, }6 a9 m' S. R4 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ q9 @3 ?$ R" L7 Z4 i! }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! [& T. E7 u9 _, r! M8 I* G8 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) x3 y7 Q0 M0 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 K% y; A- t' }& R( v/ I( @# z* n$ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- |8 z0 b5 U. n" Y" e% D7 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 Z( U0 g  I" [( @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ h* e% `: H1 Q& l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  {8 M8 a- ~3 L- t7 h' a/ R1 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- }- A. S7 P( a' r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# g' C" q- H; |6 z/ G9 `( ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" b$ s0 k( ]  Q- V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; F% l$ c- f% ~7 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# u" Q, h, w: y; ~3 }- n% P, d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ b3 `5 O/ U4 {; F. F! U; S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ n$ x% g* R, T3 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# r% n% B/ ~7 W0 L/ [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 G% P! m: h) u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. K% D: r& }% e! D4 M. {9 T: {! z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ^8 }2 R$ [- g  `; A% ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, i7 L/ P  O2 ^% _1 \  V<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 P' w4 F% c. Y. t; Q0 X+ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% [  s) E% U% G. {2 t. c" W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 R9 q1 M# e8 @) P4 b. v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 K# r8 t9 [0 Y. Y7 z* V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ O! x$ V1 b' s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ]/ R) v1 F' h% E1 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 h  w/ y& S2 v" r' V" b7 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>