【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& D& d+ t9 G! @9 W# o9 i歌词我附在后面。
' d# E; m0 m" f9 i- o6 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
: C+ i( X, C# c3 e4 P3 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" a1 r' b- g1 w5 ^3 f3 S2 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  N# Z3 }/ L# L) _& u4 w: YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' }1 J. d0 M7 bSeeing the sky content with its love
6 q* Y* `6 [, y. M- uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ?5 V/ n6 m9 @  l) i# DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# e; o/ u* q! \6 j( tNothing can compare to my love
" ?' {" M6 C6 j+ b2 k6 M( LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 f* |+ a/ t8 u6 }: _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 p: |8 d* Y* _+ i; Y& K/ a2 i' uI want so much to see inside your heart
8 k, |5 Z. _% X1 N" CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 u. r5 n1 _9 h- t% z1 e" h3 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ o, {! [1 x6 B; u, \5 v& T3 l) h& H- oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ W0 [7 B; `/ y& YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- L- \2 \  M% ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: N4 C5 Y$ V, K" W1 ~# v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 J% Q2 n: B$ v& m) H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 S% l( p  c% B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 z+ U- i4 f/ L7 u( t2 r5 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 H1 N* K, K/ ?5 T' L1 s4 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 ^8 v2 M+ a4 [, `! l8 g# m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* A. m! `9 B0 p* n  U7 T9 h2 ?' S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: @/ p" D- F% V6 t& V6 [0 O# K2 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 B& P7 x' H) C& K3 R2 x! L: Q8 ^2 X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; h- k5 \4 o/ O! }2 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% W! I) D% q$ ^# M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  W$ K2 C1 a- ^) t: n8 K4 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 @: t; V. f' X: d0 x% n& H0 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 d; E' i0 l8 a$ L$ h2 k, g2 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 t$ ^2 q8 L; M5 t) x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 d8 x4 V/ @9 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ y+ X* V  Y% X" {, f0 ~( v  K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 k" k" O: x5 a& K6 c, P, k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% r: ^' o/ z5 R) p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 u; X; f' [+ S) ?( D+ e/ _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) G2 N/ U/ w& z2 g; Q5 W1 O* G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) |$ ?; s# ?' @8 z/ J% |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 j0 r- L& O$ R; T. I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ _0 u& u% A( b( H% @2 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 ^) b, v6 v3 L" L3 f  I) M# o) h3 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* i% p' e; a4 z. Z; s: P; t. m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ G7 K5 V) i) j. J6 s" U- ^7 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ R6 E: }$ Y, ?, w: W' a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>