【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* c' [; x3 f, b7 J* EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' }. [; `  |- }: u2 Z: rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ F. p( q# a; f0 Y4 t7 q- NThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 g5 D, `+ Q- @% l2 }" BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 M7 q' I, h9 G; O2 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 ~: ]  w* B4 W7 x4 x- gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 H5 z* _6 f6 M" `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 W4 a1 E9 E' t9 i3 q- Z9 `- bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* X6 Y. f; b" [! L3 d7 S1 w( P! jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. H8 B7 O6 ~# b5 J5 r9 d# M. E( mI’m still filled with fear
$ O& t$ ?# D  aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; X: C- |; U# J" A. Z  d1 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ U+ p  B) O, ], KWith such a tongue as yours,
2 c+ L) x8 u6 G( zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  @5 @" @. m5 C5 ]; z0 ^# H  f2 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 i& ^* {8 A+ b( c9 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! a* x% ?# F. v/ n6 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( q4 x/ c, }2 {* W& `: d  m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( x* Q2 l9 @) F, L6 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  `' Q# j7 p4 ^- z3 A6 d9 h! J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; w3 _2 q6 T3 U6 U( W6 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) F  O3 s( a1 N; E% _* g% E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 D% X2 z5 i/ D, z7 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. R/ l4 p$ I) a9 H% d6 [! P- j" i3 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ P6 c' _4 ~% B8 q( a- V- d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, _/ x% e7 H3 s- ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 |! \1 d- D& n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; u% C+ |) g% o$ j4 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 y3 {2 m% z* X% g+ U% V# }( V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 _; `2 G! j, P0 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# Z: S7 v" m; M( _3 a7 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. i( p7 m9 y6 `( A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 @1 ]6 F( h/ ]" \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: E- C# I% J# d2 k+ ]2 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( i; J. C5 z. _1 }9 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. O8 m; z0 Z: |9 c3 B  _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) M/ `) S1 o2 `# y+ j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" F) r$ n& a- a" ~0 N) l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 f. [  D* W: X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 y3 w- E# T: G& H! `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ I8 x6 q6 T6 b4 X# [: D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 g3 H* @2 a& k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; e% c' v- [1 w: q5 e0 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ Y6 {8 n9 s5 D* r( b! N7 b: r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 Z1 v* n; _& A7 V6 J, A我请你剖开它

9 c1 G* M- L" [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ J/ s* s0 T* |+ C% }4 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>