【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( f$ b4 y! A" oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 z, R; P* E/ T+ z& x7 f( _6 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' R" n2 Z) G0 t$ R+ x9 W" jThe sky is happy down to its soul
" ^" l, H/ Y5 |$ s, f7 [9 \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* s9 K6 C5 m9 Z: WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 Z7 @5 a% d; o- a" K- {8 U$ I* \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ i% A% Z. U! v) ^: W8 EI really want to know just how much you love me
' @0 S2 U& E: T+ w( Q) f) J- T* i3 XI love you I love you with all my heart
1 e" i5 R- x% s3 INothing can compare to my love
" v7 L. Q. g/ GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 i+ ?# D% e, @3 fI want so much to see inside your heart
% p, m% a, E  ]8 A  YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( H. F5 d7 J) ]% d8 p0 W" EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& I+ G: F5 G3 t% D9 L& t% ?$ rI regret not dying
, y0 \/ W9 W$ v) ?/ oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  k* D% x! I* W5 t  wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) ?* r2 ?4 f! [: ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' C/ C% Y2 A# s* ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! e! n2 h3 s; Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 B) z7 K6 z* u2 H9 w" X5 s5 |& K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ a& z9 h7 H+ D: f8 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* n$ W# R: _) }. P# H' e+ g, N& Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" z7 P8 i8 w2 t3 C7 {( k$ V- W2 o) i9 Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* F% J- c0 h! m. c' u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 [8 a5 f: Y1 v" l/ o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  S! A: h+ i( G2 _# Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ W$ `- J! r7 D& I, T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 X+ J5 ~8 q; A  A4 ?8 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, Z# O: J; D+ `+ \% ?1 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 p' l  ^' I$ U( l5 c- ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! \, F/ _, a3 s5 y: r% g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Z! U2 Q2 B2 f+ |7 F: B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& Z1 v  M% ]2 u" {0 U6 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 P$ [6 H: A' D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' x  {( W: g/ N. ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& d& S& t0 \: r) `: x+ Y5 ~4 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- h+ k/ m6 t4 |9 y. y1 l  Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% e: L( S3 Y! k6 B- P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ^9 Z) P5 I% U0 c7 @/ k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 x# _; h# n" q- @  S! ~$ a3 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 g7 k, _3 ]+ ?7 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& \2 z4 Y1 ~! m3 h4 u0 n" z! k$ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ W  \. u1 }0 D" U9 X$ Z2 ^- ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ F( D$ d! r2 {3 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% K+ K* U1 R7 q2 x- g% ?2 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 T$ Y9 K) @9 V/ o& t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ P- u* c$ \" Q3 H$ L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>