【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 N; K  v; y9 P2 R: m1 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 H8 u/ W( ~: h! E. W# KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 W* [2 F" x3 t! K1 T. XSeeing the sky content with its love
4 i% u. l" O- }8 U1 E+ a; _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 I) p% c2 M  p( B5 P* @9 M* bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* C+ z9 g0 Z( A+ U3 U9 T/ FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 C9 ?: V1 |2 V0 L9 h* MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) y3 M/ n8 f6 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ~: |% D6 V2 Q$ i# B/ m1 u0 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- ~! w' R4 H, A. M( Z. URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 p3 J6 E+ N' I8 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 O. x( l+ w* K( ~3 o( E2 ~1 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- d- C4 \" d2 V% U5 r& \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ]) o8 i' P: T. m: p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' }  ^- @9 p  F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: }% u" d4 F4 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. f) E# Q4 q2 D. s# {4 W( ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ @# z2 e1 z/ F- I$ a" x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D( u% M4 u% r* C' M4 a% b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Z; M' {( F! O; \9 {# x6 J4 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& o6 w/ x/ ^9 R  f/ O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. ]. }. `+ i; q, I0 X: w9 V1 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! {1 v* a) z8 ?% r, C, B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 N. j  N: ^1 [0 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' Q4 l( f! g2 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' M' u$ r4 X" n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ]' i' F+ z* z5 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! u( `- c6 n! j9 c, @0 C7 Q& y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 u* t* V" Y2 M& s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ ?$ d; Z2 [9 C  O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; j' K: p) o$ k- |4 j5 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ]) h0 S4 y6 [; {2 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: p$ t) _/ M7 z4 e0 C8 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- |8 c- @( L, B6 G: W7 i% s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# m8 N+ [9 U) a! t<P>I regret not dying</P>
; i, U! }& z2 w8 g# o7 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. ~6 }5 J; `& v9 u7 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. i. p  Q' |5 h( D1 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% w9 O1 {$ o! Q# M9 p# r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: f- m% g/ d" U- _2 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 [& v8 A# M/ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; P* }4 L$ A; W# g* u/ z7 a3 H2 ~! z/ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>