【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. W( _2 Q, s8 b歌词我附在后面。
& c0 ?9 e8 p# S6 Y. xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 V$ E! t/ I4 G% b8 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
. |" I, w; L) Q/ I% b  ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ]( Q4 [% F9 a' A8 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: f2 b4 d9 _- E. UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! d- v4 z2 U0 q0 r/ e8 AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 ?! l- c1 e0 FNothing can compare to my love
" \, x8 i  k4 k3 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" }5 |4 s$ Y9 q  s/ |! p* QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- O8 a) z" o6 |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 v( v" w3 h1 n; ?) i/ O- T4 ^I regret not dying
" h! L4 a2 V# ]! p" ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 R& K6 y8 U7 L% u  @$ ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, T: F' a! G. M% Z& URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" z& D9 |* d( h1 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 B( ?; \. o3 y- M3 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 k1 A3 q4 L% V' \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 E2 `% q+ B1 M& @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) Y  o$ s2 g/ X0 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! R7 O7 I" q: w3 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, \0 d$ U) M/ S) ~; ^' K) h3 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Y: n  c  P: D0 M- R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ]: b2 H0 W: \' J# |' D# N9 `% s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 _  h6 r/ Z5 P( X( [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 p6 ~  m# m7 A. ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, t% W/ p; f: Q, m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^1 O( X& S7 ~* x) V% y<P>你无需担心</P>
0 p; k- |& h- v$ w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Q% e7 l) w! A5 x. r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* [  g8 s% I5 n: U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: F7 e! ^! r; ]2 f# N' p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' F0 @5 F* @. r0 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 }* u: V1 z. H; v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& k5 a) B( w: X8 A9 M2 Q! y! h; y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# z/ p) m0 ~9 E- G9 `, L: y) o' T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" a* X& Z( u6 Y( ]6 E: M" o7 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 _  \- U% f+ S/ y; O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% p! ?4 b. s0 X5 i4 ?* t' z2 E$ P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 B1 P5 w2 A+ [2 O7 ~1 L- l, ^8 ^- q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  w( \5 M: {1 D1 m8 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>