【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
; O" U: b' W6 ?+ {. N8 Z  ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 V0 K6 y' _+ @9 S" d/ d! [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: t2 [9 ?" X) K5 B& ISeeing the sky content with its love
  q% a* L, G* r! OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 |, n$ U/ p2 E3 Q1 F' h1 wYou needn’t fear anything
& V1 h5 q- f, n8 D7 {) bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; D1 n3 R: c/ y' j; cNothing can compare to my love
, X* C+ b# d" c5 h6 o' m6 ^4 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 n/ ]+ c8 J6 q) W( A* V9 ~; I1 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% o" _9 F, P1 f9 D7 ?7 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. m  S  _5 }" P. wI’m still filled with fear
2 U! P; J( {8 z8 M2 \# z- QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 K1 |  E5 n2 y! YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 {# v0 m8 f( g3 I, i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: J. w6 C1 o: l7 x$ i( ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* N' T# i4 W. Z2 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) ~0 G& Q5 ^0 Q6 d7 t- I* C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# O1 T2 Q' w- \6 L+ \" q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ~: ]. l8 J$ J5 S6 M/ g! R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 K* S% g3 D% A# r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Y0 E' v+ H$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; I& H  \1 D1 k0 [" D2 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 F6 s9 H7 J: ?# K+ ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' I6 Z  }; ]( }6 F6 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" D* i, C$ q/ b8 S. \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ]" L: @* r2 \& s. V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 k! X6 q, D- Y9 v0 [- H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ U1 G. V- W5 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 Z7 s9 X! V" I! L7 u; _8 _6 D) W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& \' M% B( B' w0 j" j3 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 _9 ?$ p6 Q) x$ b# v$ ]. |" P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 z4 T" B* ?/ i  F5 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) `- S: d! C. I$ u9 s8 O" S3 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 @2 l5 L3 d' i2 k/ s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 x) i& ]7 l" Y5 S0 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& T" g9 P' P3 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 T$ {9 _3 Y- ?" d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" V, }( E* L, u0 k& B2 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
* r  \/ _% J" C8 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: O2 w8 O3 k7 e& l/ R. R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" y' c; j% M6 T8 F& q! m  b/ [' @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; Z* y. [) {( L: O$ t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 p: F  w) T$ o# N3 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  Y9 e" H# X9 i, T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# \8 }( U8 \7 f( u: N* H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 y6 S/ g2 {0 r  ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ x$ S. y. r0 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' i3 F9 {/ Y  F2 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 M; R% q' ]$ f' z$ s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>