【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* ?$ X3 g  |. n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# s) H- L4 ~9 |2 [6 |; cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ }! N" e7 P* b3 c9 [. LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ^. e, ]" W9 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 c% \9 P7 F* x+ _With the moon kissing it every night
0 U, {/ F9 p  @  aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! j6 l# u9 J/ ?2 [2 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, `& J& q8 I5 X7 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; F0 ~( b; H& [1 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
4 z+ Z" H8 W- Q) {" C# V6 E' o. V' A; QNothing can compare to my love
- u# j3 I: _  [, O0 l% O4 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ M% x; p0 Q7 I4 s0 J" K" F+ QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" W  Y1 T9 P4 p; w: @$ _7 Y, p. OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 j. m5 O' d9 A! B8 JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. N4 P" x2 i; _4 g  p( ?1 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ F9 i  @) _" a( Y+ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" `' I& t- w1 T2 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) \: D; q/ ^, [$ o- e! b/ W2 q0 t' |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: m. J( l; Q  ~: O4 {1 x( ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 n( O3 Z- k- c1 N1 C0 B& R* o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  v5 _3 k& R3 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 c5 X4 A& {+ u, l' G! Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, a, b; u8 }4 z7 h3 K( c0 W! q+ _+ d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* @& ]$ ^8 G2 k2 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 a) Q: d- y1 p1 q0 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. }+ f% |1 d" f# V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- N) l- t. j+ p; {4 ^0 U- u, I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  W- {( P1 Z) k5 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! p) O8 O- I9 c) j: S, D( b6 S0 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 z$ p' X* W; X6 j! }1 x5 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( M* `& l8 a8 k+ U0 _6 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 J0 X  f( G2 {- C. h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ `# l- o+ p) a* {' Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# [. w' d- C7 ^7 q0 y: R& r% d0 _- F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 p8 G9 y$ h3 n7 n/ b: g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# ?$ }- t4 U* ?7 }- N- S7 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 @" u* T1 f4 u4 r% {6 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ {; e- x8 B2 g9 S/ Z+ X% M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& _# O- p6 U1 Z! _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 f9 X/ T/ s9 M; S) z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 O6 H2 K9 S+ I+ e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) f6 A6 [+ Z) }6 R& A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ w6 O' T5 j4 H: q9 {/ R0 \( h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>