【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 R0 D# g) i  q4 p. C歌词我附在后面。
- j. y( h& }* G' f6 j9 d2 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# @9 }9 u/ G3 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, L7 a% D1 e# u* I) W; A9 Y- ^$ OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 \+ i/ L- |4 b4 q/ U( e9 t# O5 b$ NSeeing the sky content with its love
! l. T- q' F9 ^( c3 C+ |' Y+ `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% d/ }2 P2 X" m$ [1 a; r0 f7 @You needn’t fear anything
+ F1 |5 w3 k8 \/ iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 J) w3 I1 ~/ V, t% r( Y2 @Every other word you utter is love
+ A6 W$ C! d: T+ YI really want to know just how much you love me
4 a9 t2 `; `# v6 N5 G+ ?; H0 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ c4 ]0 H3 U2 ~$ S# A% iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  B+ Z) W( M# V& K. i0 ~I regret not dying
( |6 U( w( K3 p4 p2 H: {1 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 G0 r  R9 i* [5 `2 p- Y! r  ?* i) ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 a% ^2 e& x, fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: |+ X9 }- D% H! ^! k) q/ |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 @& ~* t5 Y/ O: I+ S1 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 f1 ~7 d7 F- O1 m! M- j/ h+ N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 ]5 K2 K% [6 |, Q$ x# r$ @) w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" z- k) W- F# J3 c9 m  q  I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" ]8 A% K1 Y# Z, j. G4 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: K& Y6 g9 `1 u# v0 }7 v4 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 L7 I9 L; O& p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 e5 `) L1 f; X- ]; G& P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. Z: Y/ \: F' j0 o9 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! A& E) n5 h9 G9 w( J& J4 r% ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 u' Z: _3 ~8 U1 w9 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ ]& s. A% W* x8 g) N3 h, ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" j7 \5 E# T$ T/ P6 y2 L( p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Y. L4 _  R( I9 d& v* c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) n& u- L- ]2 O$ R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  a$ A' O+ k* E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  x, I& k) ?5 w& a$ p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 d) a; Q/ A# o+ M1 A1 A) M7 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 D8 _; A8 L+ {; f1 y4 x: e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 `* _7 n/ M. ?! a  C9 r) n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* K" a; S9 t6 I. w" I( o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 d3 m$ |. v& F# b4 E2 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" z# p) s& I# C6 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; ]9 h# j6 y! Q) u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ \* ], b" r9 M, v6 x5 A# n2 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 g% S# y* w% u. J3 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" @2 b) p. X3 E8 V! I我请你剖开它
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, A4 m) o  {0 W- x  O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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