【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 M) g; I5 W3 h* D: r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 j1 d" O# Q* O# N1 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 T6 Q6 K3 m" M0 o9 K# {* VWith the moon kissing it every night
: w. M5 [" \1 H) @4 m% J1 {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& w' d5 d% \  K7 @4 A" T5 r2 oYou needn’t fear anything
! {* F5 ~+ j( s, uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: {) r9 _/ K7 q' i8 ~" Y) k7 I8 AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 q) E! S  v0 L) n. E' fI love you I love you with all my heart
; p7 ~+ G4 j' ^: t& iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  L* x! A  @4 a0 f6 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% J) G8 m. p: P; L8 `, p& Z! }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% }" H; Y) l) CI regret not dying
# {, H% N( e# K+ Q" Z2 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& j' n" G. G5 W* u% x+ B; r: [) OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, ]. j0 T  ~! k1 t6 w- x  B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ I3 h! _6 t' r4 c+ H0 N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ^( I0 G( q3 m1 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 @% @  `' @6 y2 O& k' h" L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 Q6 {+ r1 A3 z$ \1 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: w" A% E$ d+ `# |. J" Q! ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" l4 Q, {) Z7 @5 n- s: g4 v6 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# V6 F7 i- g4 \+ g2 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 }1 z  `2 z, C& M: `  m4 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 S7 f& f( G7 u3 b8 y9 M* @: ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 E- A- U* Y6 t# }# v5 n, _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 j, M5 v! T) S  R- Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ], }9 w- d- H* f, n4 W; E* ]2 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 u6 E0 X. [$ \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 w" H) y+ m. u# O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 J% c2 F  E% U" z% M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 |7 d' \7 d, K; x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ m3 M% K6 O5 u( a/ O# {) |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" ^  {  A4 W& i% |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 u( b0 p, x* ~& g, w7 T! Q1 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% _, E2 b. I) H4 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& p; [6 k) k, g1 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- S) A, b$ h- L8 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 Q0 a5 w" B# j5 T4 p( z7 b6 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 _: d2 o4 x. j1 C" l9 D- ?* y( T. F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 v9 \. \, `/ J! c5 {/ O  `我请你剖开它
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; R2 }: v+ q2 K$ f2 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 P! x* Y  S' A/ y1 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>