【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 ?$ S/ X: K" x歌词我附在后面。
6 G' A! p& W6 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 B$ P$ p) T" h' x: |; g! A; QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 r+ y) N+ l4 O: X% J4 @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( t4 [* N8 N! R) b1 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 t$ u$ ~* x; O, s0 RWith the moon kissing it every night
) Z$ y7 E- s& f( Y) SSeeing the sky content with its love
1 H+ H  p$ I3 _, F' yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 s" u. }- K8 S% BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 ]% q. ~% D" ^& ?- \* uEvery other word you utter is love
3 h4 B+ `& E% L7 r9 V# Z9 e4 |I really want to know just how much you love me
( N- }& \# r+ n3 h% gI love you I love you with all my heart
2 {1 v) m2 U# b& m" @6 C3 N$ wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 n1 |( f! j8 N- U" YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 U* w2 `* R& B' R# T/ uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 a# h: _& W1 x/ b& OI regret not dying
% [# m. k1 [3 B  RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ^9 R& P6 v6 f; d& u: dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' \& b5 f8 n4 G7 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# t% \( e, v/ k. S& I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 @0 S1 i0 D  C/ T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 ~7 }  e2 n' ~3 x! [) N3 z6 o6 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) V# b  [$ g4 Q8 w/ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 q; t& {. K. |  k& v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" m0 u2 j; }! P( }# F' o1 a4 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: w- T) j7 X5 f* ^. c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& J  Y& R  L4 X: q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" |- V) T# S7 h# B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 G' m) M5 d5 a9 c3 u8 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* C; Z9 `) R3 v. |$ c9 z& ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ s) d3 O3 P/ V) D3 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 i8 o" \0 R7 ~+ Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 Q  _: C. I! p4 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, `" i" H4 N4 [7 k4 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 Q% i7 `5 o" p4 O0 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- V- w& _+ t0 m* M% V! z0 L& u7 E9 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! u& r2 E8 e0 c1 p) G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 b, [: J- q) K2 \" G, \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& r, d) O# a/ K; g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ d- h. c8 x5 Z: n3 C% A( i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" @1 ?) ?; ^' _5 q9 l, m$ i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 e5 c; G4 ?6 p7 u; E  g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 @9 E( ~% s* o0 g2 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  T+ _6 b' ?  [1 Z: E2 C5 u  z<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 n5 q- V$ Z, R" O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Y# y) I9 W) U+ f* @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 W+ M2 Z* h% H8 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& g8 ?( [; K* }4 d4 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 y* F3 n: T3 p: V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ X# {' _8 X+ k% i1 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: e8 M3 d1 B+ |5 b3 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>