【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% a8 s0 w) L$ q6 c4 W. M歌词我附在后面。
0 ~+ S2 @1 d+ A' zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# i3 r7 {" o( TThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 m% P  V5 N1 M8 v8 ^7 {, N3 [- FWith the moon kissing it every night
6 [9 {+ N( O. l4 G0 v! ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 E1 i9 V; I! l. [6 |' _& M$ v0 H7 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: T5 g5 f! v' t4 \( WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* {1 @# r8 ?$ }7 H+ _3 `$ H! |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ k1 j+ ]+ T, h: q9 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! B5 v9 J) j2 x, nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! }' {, g: A/ [( h* h. e) U9 y3 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 r& J/ p0 g* M" U5 f+ c, f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  [* C! m( t' Q3 j# o1 r# v( q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# r4 o7 `* B; J, O0 G. b+ t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' Y2 ~; I* s% _* L( Y1 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; g" q$ R# {4 R6 ?$ ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; J! q' Z. G. f+ v$ Y" u! `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 s$ w: ]2 {6 a" C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( j0 k0 y4 s8 w1 a' c1 A; V+ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ D) ]2 ?. }8 [1 g3 b; @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ?: ?$ s( ^3 K- v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 V2 V, z  ?7 g* V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' b) u/ c( m# U3 H9 a" W, v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ P# t# p, O; d: T3 V6 q( f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 h! A$ Q6 s3 W) Z( R4 a% e& H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 s, X+ y. M8 S+ y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% F7 K. P3 V, {7 @# L0 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: M6 U6 A; I8 U. R+ u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  m3 E* m9 o' W" r( h: m! H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: E& N3 X- g" u<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ^; w1 T& |) i4 u" y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ r$ E% Z4 I4 E1 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. F. u4 a' U+ D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ L9 U/ x5 M; V, T我请你剖开它
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/ S7 @  o3 q* _# ]( R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 m) a/ A2 t' c% d- H& @, O1 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>