【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 t% l% X8 [+ o5 F, d( M歌词我附在后面。
- w1 w# Q2 C6 m) dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ W, L( \" h- r. \9 P8 n, NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 p' ]3 i# ~- T+ ~( y2 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ^# z0 O' o( ]5 \! k4 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 D; N, K. \( C! c7 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
! \5 v0 a3 o% [8 l, t; L2 I' _+ \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 g6 \+ O" N, b' ^4 M& y9 _; FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 {, G- {) F2 n8 d! hI really want to know just how much you love me
/ A* t1 D( b6 q& M, {( P2 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 ?8 T" c7 k" t; DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! V6 |. t% P) C) x$ e) v3 `I want so much to see inside your heart
! y' f* o' f& ^( BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) k, f) q/ m& `9 x" I- V+ YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 q5 |* u7 `) w# {3 U4 tWith such a tongue as yours,
7 A  _( _9 s6 Z! Z9 W3 M0 U+ [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 j) Z# {+ z1 ]6 u" d* H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  ?1 y0 M4 S. S, e. R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# c* i( I* E* ^4 i! F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, u; s2 O; ?' `9 s2 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) A" E, Z" k) g& W4 X. S+ j' I$ n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) A, }4 r3 Z* K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 _! n9 b& ^/ ^( h% {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* A6 B. K* c4 C& S6 `3 {" {+ @$ b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  R* S; o9 h5 x5 ^8 W9 }+ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 S3 w) z4 w1 j6 }; K8 Q$ Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 _" B% L+ {  D' O& a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 a5 {' N/ ?7 B- V2 l- j- o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Q; K* }: D+ Y! @  _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; \' z# ^. V4 ^' Z8 ~) K, u% a% Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: g, g! ^; D0 q) \/ R% T! `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  o& L% ~/ W, v0 W* w* |, J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! e, e7 X9 O" e( [( I8 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ V. b/ j4 [. g* l, A* S" H7 ?  ?6 Z+ H5 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 P3 @) H! }1 x6 }- ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* P/ ?9 U! I1 |; J: @# Q8 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( V/ d8 Y4 d" w+ J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 n( n, a9 T# W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Z. J' ?% I1 {' a7 q2 ^: e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  b; j2 [% S: D- ]- h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! M( M5 z  v; v6 ~% k- ~9 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# S) M8 }. p. _5 q$ ^  U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ K8 e8 H- `  }, F  ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 @8 C; D  p+ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 z) b9 {+ O& A我请你剖开它

8 c% ?3 S% ]; e* N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 i8 ^; ?% o+ U7 {* }5 H3 f8 J$ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>