【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& G5 n/ _% W, B/ \( ]歌词我附在后面。
9 [5 n$ Z) F, _% KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 Y/ }/ t/ ?, u  X6 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 `8 u$ a% h0 n5 m2 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 t+ V7 ]+ d: t+ iSeeing the sky content with its love
1 ~5 F" X0 d; R2 V6 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ E+ K1 e* m- y6 ]! Y/ UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) b! A( F) f* B: S2 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ X# |- g6 n- c; DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, p& w+ i! j1 C& D9 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 s5 n' M6 x! r% pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ I! U# r1 g* Y+ [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ o8 g/ Z, @! A( s+ T& fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) {0 a+ D8 ^% i6 ^: }( K9 Y& SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* K7 w4 v% C# ]4 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, F4 C1 }3 j% y  t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. Y( w# H* k) @4 C: v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. a5 q' o& [3 N4 R; X1 G2 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, B" x6 ?! r% r6 P7 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 X2 r$ _0 L* C2 w6 g: t1 l- R  n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! w, N+ Q% J6 t2 [5 k& V$ l# b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 b4 r8 l0 z$ ]& C$ ^5 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 |& I  g$ E, C4 }% M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' ]& \4 g, A$ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, t6 \  F9 R- E4 b& o' [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 G" w' m/ k% @/ r* _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 y! f; i, {; e  {' ?  d$ h! C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 N4 l2 ?% L4 V' c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; b. J- \! [$ R, ], [" k8 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 u7 j0 o$ }4 T4 g) i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, k% r, B" L8 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% {% U; M: V. A8 n: z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 q7 o+ P9 v9 R+ H7 z: V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 q$ ~) G6 B5 H% o+ {! |6 S5 I( X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: g& M$ I) r) ]2 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, E3 S+ r, D$ x/ ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; d) g4 s8 J% S7 G, F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 u8 l1 i1 a, F5 G5 ]9 a9 C; o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 I+ |! O4 b0 f! X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" z) ^" J; [1 N8 G0 h1 o9 U! p2 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# K7 T# X5 e: k" Q5 [+ @1 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>