【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ ^- V" I) s# G: L) ]5 o* V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  {: B3 Q6 e0 L) iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# k  o* \; e6 t2 i6 Z' Z9 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 }5 w" ?+ V/ Z2 q7 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, D; b) a) j* fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( G. b7 [# B3 N5 F. r  {! HI really want to know just how much you love me
6 O+ ^; \3 L! F! [6 o$ \I love you I love you with all my heart
  u0 `. ]3 O$ I5 j6 h: T/ W( w1 @Nothing can compare to my love
  c6 E# z+ {; B- H4 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( h& g# o3 w% G3 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" V' @9 s; U6 [" c/ wI want so much to see inside your heart
  |$ s" Y2 v  H) _/ s) r  m; tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: w$ E+ ^. a$ F' LI’m still filled with fear
# K0 ~$ u3 y  C" H/ |: D7 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 c! ?  c. ?; r+ `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ M# B8 X! A6 j- CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  T1 W9 k- I, {$ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. J: j- q, Z  D- `/ v3 H) f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ X2 i5 u/ I- {# S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' S' B* m$ K, o# D. _4 Q+ B' k: L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. x$ t: R' x) Y3 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' [% l2 p8 l% Q! }/ m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ |0 ?5 U6 Q1 S& w3 `, R( l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ B5 b! {2 E' v6 s0 e% a2 V- I$ ?" T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Y5 o: z# w! N5 L- U" {2 T& @. ^5 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, \# Q; q9 I& F4 u3 A5 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ D' l* n  O( _  J+ F/ f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! c% {& Q- a9 @5 k" s" ]5 O4 w) g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! x6 Y- e. C$ t' f9 C; }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; N  g/ K9 s; \<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 i) U" O7 V9 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- S, X6 G4 F' I' m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' M3 P- l- D; E# I$ S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* T2 M: h8 ~5 Z0 `4 x& A. M( `8 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  X* D) j* a: K/ {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# w/ _# W; g6 m  C/ ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) N* Q: r5 j8 N( C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>