【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( ]7 _9 g/ d6 ~/ y: kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# {2 d6 D8 K" k$ v/ K' gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' x6 ?- O, G  l5 ]$ e, |2 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) o  M- k3 d0 B7 o/ Z% u1 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: b  ~; `+ C$ c8 i6 ]( @! f- v7 F* vYou needn’t fear anything
' Q% V6 \/ F6 h4 C# RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) F8 u+ q( _- xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 O- u* J; |( O3 P- ~* j. r% ~4 I; GNothing can compare to my love
9 {1 y6 g2 w' Z6 F( [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 g! T! _% s+ D9 f8 \4 x( f! e. |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- b+ H  V  }+ q6 Q8 U  T1 N% QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' D- M; I& @* \/ n, k7 s7 d5 pI’m still filled with fear
: y$ o7 f( V$ z6 j7 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& w- F3 W( a. P4 ~7 Y4 yI regret not dying
1 A  A) v1 v6 b( e% d/ t/ z/ SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( W* q' }( _- XWith such a tongue as yours,
+ m& ^- E% v7 J, W# xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! U1 q5 j0 @6 T9 r4 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  G, p8 k* R  G% `3 S' k. pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ ?6 _$ R4 I) Z% y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 U2 g& U3 _2 d% m) I% L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ v% X# K/ F1 h/ c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 c% G2 c3 Q0 j" b0 m% k# N2 U4 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& |' V6 n0 U( }4 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 b, i# K2 N. I! I8 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- ~9 ]% x3 m  D$ v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 R5 a* K0 ~/ p/ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% _3 U+ W7 b/ u; C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Z4 s1 S7 R5 N8 e# Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. o1 a( _* s& z( c2 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ ~( _/ |4 Q( ~( D( d6 }0 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" h& @, @' l8 D; ~% v- @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% x+ E! L$ M6 X0 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! ]. i* L4 S% d( `# ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 S, j% ^  o' |" L! F4 p+ ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; v* I8 g7 X- }) \, L* f2 l" }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! B" T4 ~+ F" t6 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( c( [/ h6 M9 o2 {( P/ r$ K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; G% u$ H7 O6 Z  S& O" f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 b! N: q7 o: ]" Y  u% J2 C! ^6 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: _+ `" o6 H; E" l0 K0 ?$ q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 b9 M" R2 n* A+ w& K8 f' G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: D  r& n( n" h5 z: U& Y6 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- W" V5 I+ x' o$ h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) d! t( q6 \8 R' w) ^/ T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! J% j; p) N$ d3 \. @# U: N我请你剖开它

, `, G: [0 M& ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>