【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 Q% T3 W) a- [/ G; l! n2 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 s: F# _' Q2 q6 N) CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# c) A7 R$ j3 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 [% B8 i3 l' J, K! C6 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* B/ J7 x: q% f% \' N7 LYou needn’t fear anything
  c3 ^' ~) t' P% B2 ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# q, [" l  o3 W+ I# EEvery other word you utter is love
8 s0 ^+ U6 ~( AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 n$ B; ^3 e& B0 `Nothing can compare to my love
6 j+ C( K1 d- `2 w& gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- |, |) l) Q0 _% rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* m5 v" B1 ~4 b* t: `3 m. iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" m! x& z! Q* ~% H3 _1 i6 V+ MWith such a tongue as yours,
. J/ p' Q! [$ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% v+ Z7 J0 F6 c; B$ f- x0 F! xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ ?- h9 n6 X: \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 g5 [  U/ |3 X9 k: ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 S; h& h8 ~8 g# L, E, p, e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 b9 F7 m! M8 c9 c4 G/ X# i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 v7 v$ k& B6 E* b# W# ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ x4 G: K" G3 {1 L9 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* [% D! M; }0 f" {5 `4 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 c% ^& E: g& j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. Q6 \" x- j, ~8 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 \& J0 ?1 A8 G' e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 A8 B, L  B) v  j9 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ P' K# w* ^7 C9 x5 T! z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 E) d0 O, `( `" F3 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! a/ m+ ~) Z. p2 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; G* G( E: S3 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& o' d; E; X' _# O; V* {' k! ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& D7 t$ y% j1 m7 h: K( J& ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: p5 S' Z4 `- X7 A! v7 K2 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 @* Q: w. o0 P$ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ D: O# K+ u; S8 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 h& y- S8 J2 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( P0 N; E  {5 q% S/ G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 r8 b5 T' H1 W& S" y6 p) g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. S  m/ ^- _: d/ p* [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" |; j5 Z. t. w4 J* t. ^- Q% B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ j# X- B! R- G/ Q: e) {* d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 x  f) n% _5 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>