【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, I) `& k. d# Q* Z9 D) N4 i9 z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 B  U$ {# q  H' U& kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, C( Z1 F- |6 k. y$ f1 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; \( [) j6 F+ `9 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 p! y9 _$ n, ~. ?( e# XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, Q; O5 k6 ?& v  C* ASeeing the sky content with its love
% [" r8 o  @5 Q* D8 s3 g( _) SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 _  b& t( P: y2 o4 CYou needn’t fear anything
( e8 |8 f- Z& F' G3 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& s( X8 c9 D7 `5 {6 h' t0 `Every other word you utter is love
% d+ T: s" x, K" m0 ]3 GI really want to know just how much you love me
6 l; I& s( ]/ `. }3 `I love you I love you with all my heart
( l6 w+ x" c4 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* G$ [$ P6 j6 [9 n. jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 [8 K, d4 v" X2 [  m2 rI want so much to see inside your heart
2 b2 C( e2 {2 w. \! I: |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, O: _) s2 p  R* X1 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; x. l6 \; ]2 x1 IWith such a tongue as yours,
7 `8 }9 N, i+ U/ p& X9 l# |0 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 s$ s& ]5 @( \+ y' x8 N& b5 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" G5 p3 q9 K/ \& z" v7 j, u! T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 N7 ^$ U/ k/ S" z% |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( j0 [8 Y' C+ K+ ]- g9 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 X' i3 x/ ]: v7 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ K. v. K2 i4 A6 z. w1 @7 `- T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ n+ e# [; S' G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' `  d9 n* |' {( t. w& w$ N9 h) J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ?& V4 m, W3 ]- V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% x1 F% I% I. Y7 J9 F" t9 `+ t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( B, v$ p8 @* s9 N5 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 B% P# T+ s# V0 [  F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ W/ S$ Q9 ^( }7 w* {  w3 m, ^- I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; k- {+ h& P5 c% ]( ^( t6 o0 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; D- n+ {" S: |+ C  |* e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 j* m3 s$ [- V" u" e2 ^1 @9 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; F3 ?  U% A7 q! n, M4 C1 E0 R3 ]1 c! W- d& f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 U0 t3 B' L2 u' ]) T& U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# |7 X& G8 _% u. g9 x. g5 o0 h) O& I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 v" u, J; C0 u" \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: w1 ^  q2 ~6 U/ b$ q! W1 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* ]" q, M0 w! \0 M2 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ b. E' A  R4 j3 ^# H+ @* U6 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' E' y7 b! V* l9 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: D, j) A! r4 N' c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ H$ X& H, y# i" J/ m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, _( p8 E( @: ^& F5 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>