【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( Q  P; W% ^9 D% K$ m+ QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: D# \; d! G" Z0 {4 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) D$ L* X4 e; \/ j4 O, U" cThe sky is happy down to its soul
: a& P% y% q. oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 \1 W% X9 a* R+ P6 RYou needn’t fear anything
" C$ E% {8 W7 l' g2 ~  vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) i9 W% E/ B/ M) H3 p% vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) u! t% S  y6 M" HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 n4 _7 Z* V. f- ]% E9 ]7 QWith such a tongue as yours,
( ~$ q2 }+ G9 n+ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' X9 P5 R) k  z; l% JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# K6 T) w. O" s& J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* B+ J$ U+ N/ ?& [1 X( e4 a) y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* J( W" |& C3 h7 [3 T6 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 D% @- _& Y: }2 `* x3 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) s) A/ f* `" d+ `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: h1 _, Z2 {. L  G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, }) L' z) c3 g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( m, C& q: h# b) O* @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 s7 R+ d: H- c6 u; }: e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; {% a8 G9 U: i* {0 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& m4 E3 O3 [% j, k8 A; b2 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 ?  e9 u  W3 T0 E4 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& w2 \1 _; X; `3 J# O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" h8 I' u: J. V3 S  Y$ h( r) S  E3 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 l# o* }) B8 x4 n, V0 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 g8 C. S8 o: H7 @5 B; w0 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 F* k$ |4 v3 K" L7 {! ?4 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 r) [( |+ T- E0 T; K# F+ _6 Y9 f% w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ^& W  Z6 C6 @  o  r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 h5 i& o& J4 s( d+ I6 X) h/ e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 j2 p9 U! ]3 i9 r: x1 J6 M; t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 i9 w0 @& \0 @5 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# M6 V. U, Q4 C) C, M9 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 \: z) V) ^" T$ X; W, J3 M( |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ z  }! ^8 j4 Q3 a# u& j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 D# n7 q# K0 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* V3 m( d& e- h4 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>