【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; O9 p# h% Q: @1 O8 r歌词我附在后面。
( M. _, h& v. P. f' gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, k6 w$ t6 }8 V6 z4 w8 F/ kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 W, Y: W0 Q6 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; p7 x! B9 k! W1 M# qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! z# b1 T( h7 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& R9 Y' E& c6 ~, ?" X. BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) X# t3 H8 N) K( u5 ]8 aI really want to know just how much you love me
% ~6 l, L4 N* K$ GI love you I love you with all my heart
+ j$ B* m+ I0 V& W5 A, q8 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) b, v( c- T: |- F( E0 P( a7 f5 FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* U: {. }: z2 R& JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' t6 C0 P" P( h  i1 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! g  M" ]! k% {4 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 u7 F8 c. G" U; P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 H  h9 c  X4 J4 C( O; R( |( j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" u- L" T- F& u! h+ b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& B  O0 r! t3 N' u. `  i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* a  x) p3 g; n' r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; c7 b1 h- L- W: o3 M, h: R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* L; g) Y; t1 \  W. x  ?) X% ~0 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! P2 W6 W" q: c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 X- M. ^0 V" w3 D3 U+ Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ w8 D/ b! \1 w. t# }( c; O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- a0 b9 D, {/ P<P>你无需担心</P>
- Q6 x5 X! A- p$ R7 n- `$ O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) x2 z) r$ u$ Z, t  c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  F9 _- x* {" U% |3 e& d, I; l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 v% m: ^4 x" K) t" n0 i' p- K7 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) n- _3 A: n) p  c2 l8 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 T* w! w: {0 Y2 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" u3 r, B4 N' b* O( j' M3 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ b8 \: @1 \$ u% Y% p* E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 U/ c' v1 u) M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 `( {. P* V' u( }7 g- f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" l! P+ _/ G2 J3 V& L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 \# e" s& k8 @; R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* x5 Q! H. T% g1 I; C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! X- X5 a* J" O7 Y/ e9 x8 f5 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ t' [* N9 A6 c; q# Z0 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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