【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 \5 t" m. ~% c& ~4 R! m6 _! D歌词我附在后面。
( |/ T2 L8 |+ b( lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# K( _/ G; ~+ R2 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 }% M* f& @! k, GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L# w$ g6 Z9 i% D& B( qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! n# f# T& i1 @& d* A/ MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: s0 B: L% `9 Z2 Z6 Y. `4 [! U( VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ C* U) k0 l' K; b1 ]. fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 U0 _3 l. t; h0 M0 i2 f! {3 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ B( _' t0 [8 X% J( b1 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ Q8 @" w! H1 v. ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 r: b' K1 x0 p9 @8 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& [$ B( c) z$ |: b' ]0 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 K) o- f5 C8 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ x! e2 A0 d  A0 `' e4 n/ P. [( P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& ^: G9 K# s$ q, Z" A1 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 }7 i/ S( k0 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( G) a. p- z4 S% q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 N/ Q  M6 C" n1 D4 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ S7 j( p9 j9 R, y  A* u0 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' `- U  ]' }: b/ L5 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 s9 A2 h' ]$ s/ J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 d9 k+ D. x  G+ t! l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# _2 M$ x9 S% j( Z. k/ C0 o6 X  \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ?/ T! S' h( b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: }. N1 R) z( N. b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Q% |* ^) z/ a7 K: T! D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 v" Y' v9 D# }- d$ |! o4 n2 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 `- i$ K" ^5 e' P7 p" R3 _& A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 G9 Q# p% [! B2 ^1 M5 O7 q- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# W  T- @" r: ^0 P, s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& y5 K" B. E) M( v/ v0 h* E  Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 u: P% s: I- Y, y0 ?* Y( W2 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 I' e2 C/ S$ @4 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ L; ?" J- d, X- h. j0 P7 b5 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& q! x' i( b- R) A& l" O1 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: `: ]1 ?0 d: d3 `2 D- P/ U$ v* h, `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. J$ F- n9 }6 {/ B% ~. H; u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) _3 S0 P$ r/ W0 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 F8 V% m/ ^+ i) U5 \( e; Q$ a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>