【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' K7 i! X) Y  d. C4 L$ i" hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( L* S7 T. j6 |3 H! M+ ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' Q3 }; p! q" f2 j9 q( n: XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% ^2 l  b  [5 |7 ]: J7 c' l. @  nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& M* W0 x% ]/ ~! I, eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 F1 w( ~8 z( x1 \% Q5 m* `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 k1 `9 h7 H1 m( eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 o$ Y9 O8 `3 Y. {4 Z9 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
, x, f; x2 b! ?9 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: D( ]4 G, J7 B, u# o9 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: p" M5 v6 E( y7 |/ RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 \6 w( @( e1 w4 }) D9 ZI regret not dying
1 A2 }) ]( Q8 _* E# u: a4 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ M/ [6 d" U8 X& a2 a: F+ DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! U4 I4 v  c: q: O: Z9 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ K* Y9 C2 E' Y! M/ }3 p, h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# e* \% W  f% j( J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! T4 b; ]! o$ t' d0 W9 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 \4 H# S$ _/ {; P. T: F4 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 e# M6 e: {3 C$ R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' D( V& N# e. @9 O/ \8 _9 i4 X  D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& M, [' r8 L6 j, b: `4 ?- O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 e/ f) e- E- ~" i8 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ O; F" g& B$ W2 m/ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' J* X& W/ Q3 [4 R8 H& y0 d- n<P>你无需担心</P>
3 }  `$ P2 {, G: h1 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- V7 A  {8 }* x3 r# W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! j. I* j) n4 l  W# |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ~: S, F. \5 U4 R' @5 Z3 G* Z6 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 C# U/ B- H: t) y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: i6 N1 z; [* m6 u8 o- w* Z  v+ M# t0 G0 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 [3 W: E/ u) ?8 k6 F( E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 y1 Q) b, ?5 h0 n- N* h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' o3 d9 G3 s' e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: o# H0 a& Z; g+ H8 S7 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( Y# E% M5 w0 @, F2 k/ D& ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( v5 d9 [' R1 I. c7 @, O+ A0 H5 w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 z  [; p' d+ {: X1 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: f& l2 \: \0 i/ i6 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* v! f4 W+ S: f0 }5 C3 Z. U7 ]# U, W9 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 F8 `; P% o% d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 g2 _4 n; b: h" \, X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, s) N+ J  [* G- m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. n' y4 [- d* I' v% _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! W  P! W, a8 O+ @! C" @* p8 p. Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: S9 C0 K+ u" k* u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# k; r- Z9 {9 x) s) v7 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>