【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& q# v, H$ F9 K7 h歌词我附在后面。
! {, R( W9 u, `& r* C* p+ Z  KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# m9 R% I" Z' q) d1 Q3 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, W7 I0 m! K  y7 I. T( IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 Z5 l7 H$ Z! X2 t. R! y. P. cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 Z3 N# g" }4 [5 l: PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ x: s; j) G* b7 {2 Q; l# MSeeing the sky content with its love
( s/ j% d6 Q& l' e% ]: ]1 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 D! `0 L' S3 `4 L' \1 Y, pNothing can compare to my love
6 A/ U/ ?# z" Z, @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 m; C& H$ B. X+ c7 D/ i8 i2 }. FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  Y( T9 f5 `2 K3 `: s$ ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* f% P8 J; ?* p8 X+ s/ [I regret not dying
7 [3 _  V) j- f# lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* P! c# h% B  O  [+ Z; \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. @+ O: {  y% P  \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Y% ^- C2 s1 E0 i) H* D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  `7 P' T; v! i3 `: I4 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 }& Q" p! H3 B% o2 A2 p  \  s( y9 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ d6 m+ N; q. I0 a% M- b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 f4 t: p/ f2 Y4 P1 C  W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 v+ J2 \4 f6 v1 S' \0 o/ G; _" l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 z: N) @# h* g% p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ I% N  i; Q9 j8 ]7 v. W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ~) f2 d( Q6 T9 R8 V, ?" o6 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 E- v5 E- k2 N  h6 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# u  o, c1 Q3 t9 t7 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: s" `, c1 Q) y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 E1 p4 j+ Q, h6 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" W$ E- w( J* Q$ m% S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: W: b, \6 ?& Q4 Y+ z( H5 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% F* E+ t3 M: H+ [1 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; Y* L4 S; A$ E! {, {1 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& \- w( h; S4 f+ M1 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- N& w7 N- y' z5 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
) z$ @2 F/ c$ g* m! W3 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( a" F! ~# h4 L0 q; K9 V& k( u+ U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 b9 k2 h0 D& b! b( f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& M4 v: \, D, L  I! A( K  K" x) a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  F7 G& B# B( j' F! |- a7 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& c+ w! t% @5 E' c$ h- @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) [$ I8 n0 E; l9 h# i! f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, U6 L- Z. F/ a! x! A0 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( |. }6 N: S5 v% l$ h. _$ O我请你剖开它
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- q! l: Z; r7 O, K% `. K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>