【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* J  k( d4 K2 C* S8 H1 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ a+ V& _2 W+ S7 L+ |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) p& ?- Y! ~0 Y0 cSeeing the sky content with its love
: h9 C2 q; p+ ?( W  _! kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 y- A) \3 p9 s/ V* V, J9 j. I; gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 J6 R2 |7 f. A# M! e: NEvery other word you utter is love
' A9 m7 |- W' x2 C9 BI really want to know just how much you love me
: H# U5 A9 f" B3 f5 n# S* w8 \# XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 Z/ j. ?0 g9 i' H- B/ A! _" BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' W, b4 ?: d% g+ W  gI’m still filled with fear
. V7 H6 {$ {2 k* U# _2 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, e+ o1 ^; W6 c4 R8 d2 jI regret not dying
3 L$ O+ l$ c" p, ]4 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) L7 U: G2 V9 Z$ b( OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% X- S1 [5 G6 n1 j6 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- }7 Q# C/ x) E4 ^. L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ k  ]/ D, P- {3 v# a* s. W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. p- M3 n$ g& S% }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, D9 I- Y' I% ]9 R* O8 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) N# z5 w$ C) M( ?* q* i% b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 w, T" _( P3 P8 m9 t. b: o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; I) I! }4 U( \* V" `( b; @/ t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* y! M$ B3 H+ V% K: H8 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# k* c% {7 p# [6 W9 m& W% ]2 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 ]; h* ]* m# i0 j, N" D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ t6 z+ K, O9 Y. L$ e& z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  W  v4 o3 K" ~# a- Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ i9 j6 a& h1 y. N( [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 C. B8 o) U* S6 b! u9 r  h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# d" x/ i. H' v/ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' H5 f) o% T7 C7 B" @2 O1 R& L5 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 `% T# h: R7 _5 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 [$ N8 I0 u" G% m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ]0 t1 O0 _3 C# P7 e0 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* h5 q/ H% s, o% b4 P" e- O" L: y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& f; ^3 W/ Q0 Z8 U$ @- o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# l  `( l7 b/ u0 Y+ }<P>I regret not dying</P>
; \: H1 q8 d4 I5 c" ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ }! _  z% e6 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) y0 S3 N2 V: q9 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 ?' f+ [- A1 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" p+ J( T9 B$ }4 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' c, f+ |9 d6 p( ~! I. A2 a% M) U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" n8 G3 c: q: a% b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& g4 M2 H% G' }, [$ a, i( z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! m2 G# s, z8 h1 x& ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 a! k7 }  M5 K4 G6 ?( j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>