【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" o- [( G& e! p, J7 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- c- Z, F0 n! e" ~( e5 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; `! d, z" z* l, OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ r7 {! @! w& qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 J5 N" m$ U; U7 C9 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, p$ q% Y$ D& G6 \3 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 v- g; n4 j& L- b1 U* N. HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 N* y* }$ u& t) ~1 z7 G1 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' A3 P' `! o% N7 f) C2 L' TWith such a tongue as yours,
: @$ i1 O+ U- l4 G" G' zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 [5 W( w4 Z& mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 P. X, `) u; T5 b) i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 q, |5 O% w/ M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( p  A; @$ O0 B7 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, l/ W( _0 ]% A$ `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" I4 J: }  t' x0 o% H( |& S/ M( y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* I- B, u! M0 v) B: d: s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ A" Y: R0 j3 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ {3 g: z1 M& N8 f& j1 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' M# t# {" a/ C. L1 I  E<P>你无需担心</P>
! }) E  N6 b' {( p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 r* T$ U% G4 T2 O/ U5 H3 r; Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 U, E/ \1 }% v8 [0 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# M* D, D0 u( E/ e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ U! V  l- [8 `! E/ b& g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ~0 `0 E7 b* ~  U" H! B1 `0 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& B* z( O. i$ M% y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; E! C" }1 N6 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% H$ O! s$ [+ `5 K3 v+ c: k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" H! R1 z3 i2 l! w& y9 @9 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! D  q  W- B: Z1 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 R5 |5 \- o/ A8 i  F/ t9 h0 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% W* r! V0 s( k' P4 D, o; G8 t+ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) M$ H! F3 G+ B" V6 A1 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 a+ r- |2 x) ~1 i' b3 i- f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ H4 t5 c0 k3 e: y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ R) H: N4 n( A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 e9 |# F+ E0 p1 y% d* s6 g. O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( m& J3 o' ~! D$ q. v" O9 P; |3 V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
" M; o5 ~8 Z; m5 |$ R
& ~1 u3 t7 X- s$ X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ h  O1 K0 E# {$ P6 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>