【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 ^7 t% e7 x. p, O# A" I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 l5 U3 G0 d  Y" M2 n+ TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 \5 i0 E" L! J$ L! ]' t! S& ]! fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  _- @( e$ O8 l9 l3 m8 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
$ a6 I8 f7 x1 ?- h2 V! {With the moon kissing it every night
% `: q% ?! s. S8 G4 G0 j' ZSeeing the sky content with its love
' I& @6 K( Y  eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! j$ s& X0 K6 }! @! OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( U) u6 C7 I/ e: aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 M8 }) [) ?8 G% Y* r% s+ KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 e2 b: }# y0 G" W* f# WI want so much to see inside your heart
' R- [* _7 C# o3 d, K* O8 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 l1 D6 `# V7 G# ?- m& x8 \" oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 E5 z6 g4 X; @* NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  P! X, Z- k+ r* oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' e( N3 H' W4 N5 M. qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( Q+ B$ c5 U+ K  J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 ?1 A! P3 w! e+ D& a9 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# K& @) i5 p- V4 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ W! u; i$ Z: `# d  n- h* m- j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; T& q8 j" `( A. w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 e  a) S% b3 m% R! a8 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ?$ o$ V' d/ n6 l+ _0 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 t) R+ M; \! T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* s3 `) B. o" j8 V# I& X* c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 ?+ v7 Y/ R* |3 Z9 x+ T  S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 G& K6 A( V( c* K# s) @* S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ L. Q" u9 l/ T( r8 _( f6 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 d& ?* j- L" P7 p8 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# ^; z0 h' h8 a, I$ k- q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# Q8 u$ N) B/ o0 w8 A+ t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 e3 K  p8 K$ p. y) v. _' ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. v  d) Z, E% J$ m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 N; P+ n" q. I7 K3 c& v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 I' c3 B- ?2 P7 Q7 A# z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 Q! V8 S, b/ v: B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* z+ J  c- H8 {7 r  f4 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# P( m( r0 @' C5 s  V0 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 U  m: F6 u5 ^, E9 W4 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ `1 f! x' ]% C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  c3 p& o4 j: R& m" U' {% x' L. C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* ]7 P% ~. b  S% _+ z4 X/ S6 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# j$ z4 Z* J4 a. j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# m2 ?. K+ f0 s  x我请你剖开它
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1 W5 H4 g6 i9 O; r# p" w7 v0 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( t9 Y- o6 F+ ^) _+ I0 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>