【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- l9 \  n+ A- E0 Y6 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 f3 Y4 T6 F1 F' a8 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ K- Y  ]/ O/ m* V( PWith the moon kissing it every night
& C4 `0 G8 ]8 k9 ]" d  V1 aSeeing the sky content with its love
# v& u3 d2 U# G  U& WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 i* [7 s% I* M7 b. O, ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' x0 ~) G4 K! K( p0 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 U* s, o. T% e7 ]  m, S7 b* I3 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( H' e- y5 L0 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) q! ^$ c1 {3 l/ O: M1 D- {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, e- h6 O/ p+ v1 d& o+ NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 N) h2 k, E6 G" ~" xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- C1 Y" I0 q2 ^( l) N7 _' w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 Y6 r% _$ D( X8 Y! h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* J, z; u6 P# J$ H2 _+ V! `7 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 `, W6 M% x9 y3 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  P' {3 v* ]" \' |& h0 F/ P7 L# d0 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 {5 ~# ?% k" ^, P& q& S  X4 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ^, y, p9 J& w) z: P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% C% {4 m$ {: @# M; T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, v% T( l" s. V6 h) G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* O* |1 r* [8 s$ F2 Z& T% h% {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" l4 x, q9 @0 \, e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 `5 _1 u7 u/ u4 i6 ~; J+ _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 E, I! p% z! |) ?: |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 G  p1 D$ X8 ?7 o: {4 k7 j- S( r6 s" X, v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 t: `3 c, _6 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* C2 i( ]/ a% I7 w+ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 E5 Y  D" Q0 x- G# ?3 Q8 L! e8 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 b" J7 s6 E" v" \/ v+ r) V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& [# I2 V# N$ Y9 M6 a1 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" g7 ]' i$ Z9 k" ^) T, G' Q" W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 a, y0 g% A* M# B: A0 @9 ]; ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  d! X5 b, x% B$ C6 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* [1 ^  o# C  E1 T1 P# J5 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 M" u/ w1 C7 k3 @1 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 k  B& P1 Y2 \) V! _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ m- E& h; U& ?$ u" x# {( m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>