【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! R( K+ j/ l1 ?$ m2 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# G+ g; _  m5 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" `: g- w( i9 IYou needn’t fear anything
, p0 T! U) v% ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 A2 L6 S; e& |! J( L, hEvery other word you utter is love
) `% N0 R- Z7 u+ _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( U0 N; B# l- l3 G3 ?9 Q) SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) u0 ~! ^; Q0 V0 Y* u8 L# ~- h+ H# AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* S3 g& @( `& k8 m5 E9 p2 bI want so much to see inside your heart
% A$ r. h; B; c1 k7 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 _/ x- i  w2 |3 _7 a% SI’m still filled with fear
2 Y) U4 z+ E/ E7 R) Z2 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* C' f+ V, ?* U3 ^5 y! G, {% }# mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 I2 n. V3 L3 l) M) `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ~7 _' p/ r& i9 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% ]" F! m, b4 \+ ?: w( j" d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 r" A4 c% ~' J5 z! d+ a, z0 H+ H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" S. `& `! _  {# N# R& V- D) ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 _! k* T$ ]3 s. |/ ]" g% ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; a4 x2 W  r" s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 H, Z  J; A- {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 H4 x0 V. ~0 s' j+ e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ C0 G4 t$ e9 h3 G5 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, ?  S( L/ M! \, E# F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 I6 F3 D7 K0 z  k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 @# Z+ X" |( l  V1 C: O7 A% {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* L" {7 x* c! z" ?* U4 u/ }8 j6 M% z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  ~- Q9 i# k1 R- t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 m) T7 T/ R& W0 h( T4 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ Q/ C8 `/ }) b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& W/ j& l* W5 }' L# N) d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; }; J/ Y5 K& ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ o3 Q. r% K' y) d9 Q/ w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. Q. e0 r( b9 S3 Y& Y3 t  g1 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* V5 V0 _0 ^  G) v  g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& n' U- o" R, R8 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ r# k6 h+ l* l. M8 ~/ x; I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 Y; v, a$ }7 v! k# W1 j' C5 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 q8 E4 J2 b8 s0 P& Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, F1 u6 }0 m: M# e" ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 W. E5 i) A5 W4 A; C( A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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