【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* S) z0 t' k7 ^9 [% Y, k3 |* Y. U8 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 f9 H7 I# @% AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& F) p0 |! Q5 x/ S, `/ IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- {5 v5 k0 ]+ R( {/ J" K/ yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' M9 m2 u5 S4 F# b* {( p$ pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  \% [1 J, ]3 N* t. Q+ c. C" N; k+ LYou needn’t fear anything
4 g1 K3 |5 X7 z/ L2 Y1 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' T( ^. ]: a0 M! \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' A& v$ W) F0 R- y$ w8 @) |/ F4 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' `) a/ \6 `9 l7 q# o8 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- r% {7 Q' M  a% Y; q1 d; ~/ ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 S0 |# y# y/ K1 Q* k9 dWith such a tongue as yours,
, M/ H  Y  w, T5 i- qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 [5 N: c# m6 T' x5 V" b( L* _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- n7 I' V4 _3 q# p5 H3 M* ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ e1 ]) h/ S! |& z$ m/ T4 J, n. m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! ?8 A# Q) ~! \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* A) G, ]& H/ i$ s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 a- C, }  G: r& W) O2 _' e9 Y, C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ w* e1 V$ w  S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' h6 \) V2 ]: Q: [( u3 y9 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- [, f- U  C/ A" H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! o( N5 s6 x7 h% @4 I4 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  l4 X- R' ^, L: A" o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 \. i" e7 r; @5 z9 Y0 i2 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ?1 Q9 ?8 g! j) [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  a4 F" d1 _* f. A' ^3 O' m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; A" c3 c1 ^8 _8 @% m# X; ?- L8 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) c1 D( t& S( d$ T$ R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 H1 p1 F3 u% f. p0 D! Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* I( Z/ A' B' y+ D7 s3 p" @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, u. N" E1 [$ V5 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 s6 ?7 x4 ~; ^) S1 `1 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: f# G8 R: M3 C1 ~1 X) n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 n" w. I2 G9 ~; d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ Z. k1 H; ?1 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: h6 T6 d: @' W7 j0 X, B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 @# R+ g5 |- Z9 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; g6 P1 G$ j3 @7 f( n! x1 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; ~1 c& r0 p, v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 I8 ?+ t  \  j. }7 K$ j" N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( z5 |3 q8 a* j/ l) _7 t$ A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 ^6 i, u8 q% M  h, m& `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 i- @; G' Z- s. L9 _% \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; t9 h% @4 Y3 t: ^& P! E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! Y5 l4 z' {- E, r! `) {2 E* p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 Q. G& _1 r& P9 P- p" `. H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 B) [& f2 ^0 x* } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>