【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" v0 a7 T( h% X: L/ N) o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  e! Q1 e" L: `* ^1 y$ c8 f2 o+ uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" x3 [7 @+ u* Y. z* |; IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* Z5 i0 B! _9 a0 K& pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 H8 a# s! A# _" l, _/ _! R) t3 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 a7 m" I7 A* x1 e( ?/ o# n/ GYou needn’t fear anything
% T7 l  c' J: C& Y$ hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  X8 e5 v# s' K8 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. e1 p  Y/ x- d  d9 T: bI want so much to see inside your heart
" E/ t7 M. O3 o" J9 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 r+ i- i. ~4 s; jI’m still filled with fear
. C+ B, f2 T" d  ?% p0 L+ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; C. w8 X7 k/ u$ R  H, PWith such a tongue as yours,
; X5 D5 y# J( H8 L. g. NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, \, U! u' ?1 b0 \$ S  A5 @6 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  [' M: I) L" G" z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 u/ j1 v0 D# C* t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- G7 j/ v% ?$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# p; [: u9 r6 L+ A1 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 {. J* z. ^* f$ `% r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 Z5 Z8 V0 ]6 D5 V3 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 ?7 r7 J; J, X* p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- h1 l3 P) f- |7 }- C3 Y6 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! a/ z1 L5 T- |( c% L<P>你无需担心</P>
. F3 P2 G/ M2 g7 a8 k+ z- ~' o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' x4 O8 [- s& q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 `  n$ v% y$ V1 U: M0 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ Y& [' f+ l3 J1 L7 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& d! O$ D0 d" B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 |& P9 I+ F# {; O+ E# D1 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" ~) x8 ?% G& t; H" j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 g# d% ]) D7 {3 L6 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& c6 U" O2 ^6 c$ K; w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* V. o, e6 ?% b6 U: i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- ]1 ^# k- l- s9 E8 U  ]$ w% H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 n8 C* Y0 H( Z- Q4 m( |+ |/ ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% k( V2 j  _3 H) x* V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 e2 s; ]2 G* k: Q- l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 ~3 \+ L5 J6 i# k* V, t6 e, F1 _  q- y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 b9 }% R8 W5 w  \+ W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 m# e* F$ h/ k8 \! V) h0 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 O* z! f) z# X6 g( r6 ?1 o) g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- p; D- U& l2 V  ?$ M: f1 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  C2 |2 R6 E4 u% l  F: ~2 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; I( f. E7 g( p& U: r1 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- p7 I4 C' [( g) O) l我请你剖开它
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0 U, U2 O; V, ]  b, ]) Z- X2 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: e. `/ _, i6 j9 _: X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>