【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 M9 G- b. T6 G' f! D1 D, ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
" K/ s! A% `# {; \1 x3 ?$ |: YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 \- [7 Z# b/ d  qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 f6 X) X% W) S, ], wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: F* v1 E4 q  s1 {  t2 @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ i) W8 I0 E2 Z2 {( x7 iNothing can compare to my love
  l1 b: s# C) Z. L! ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  c* @6 G* s" W' J  ~$ {) d, ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 T1 {( a! H: |' II regret not dying
+ S- o/ \, ^$ `* ~$ GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 z3 t4 v/ t8 l+ k) o9 T4 e, {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' q1 B$ \4 |) \) z/ _/ Y! @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 S( P3 Z( v( \" d& I1 p+ w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! ^; }2 o6 Z1 n, j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( [% n6 c; I3 {, e: m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% O3 d1 H" M" Y& {% @+ u' Y5 W( [& q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, B" v5 u; E) j6 e& E- W; g% n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ m/ B4 h$ X+ w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# V7 j5 Q4 D' N% N8 J$ \! w6 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. ^5 {8 E2 C3 a* T6 Z5 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) n+ v& E( e/ m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* w, ]3 z; @3 G1 j1 J, q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 {1 g* s1 Y- [0 l7 w2 f6 h4 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 g& L# A! A" m; z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# s) A% ?8 e$ g6 r, g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% E" @: |8 q( W6 |. D3 D# c! B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 J& J+ Q- S5 n2 C' U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 R1 C1 |! o7 b$ u* [$ C7 V% F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( J0 |: G3 X( T$ S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ z& ^# V( K& o. o9 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ^2 _" ~& l8 O( t7 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' m% i. B. S7 N% k( _! T  i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* l% n" h1 G& K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# y0 E- n6 K# n, }* `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>