【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, ?% z8 }# W1 e3 O+ }8 N" r' L+ j) IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" ~4 R/ r7 {& q- J! MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 W& c9 O) }6 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 \, H% r8 @# ^9 z3 x( TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 D) p- c. n; {( q  T; O1 ]' h8 @With the moon kissing it every night
/ K. ~0 @/ j0 S+ [) H0 BSeeing the sky content with its love
: L! v" q, E: ^. GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; K7 Q+ e1 f2 a) U! q  x) _- XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, e0 W; f3 A. tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 \" h" h6 s8 m! B$ UI’m still filled with fear
! T# m. _4 a3 k. [  ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ `' m! A/ |9 I9 j( f" R% b/ Q, r9 |  hI regret not dying
, R& l2 d$ r$ M& ]6 u* a. vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' C( n' t# r( V2 E6 h* q+ w8 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' X- }3 b/ S/ [; {4 w# R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* H" |9 V, t) s% q4 F2 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. l6 |, y: S0 O# W0 f4 j+ {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 T+ E8 u1 m. \! W" ~' w# Q: F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 g" _, y8 Y6 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- f) H8 p) E" w: u& ^, x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 [* u& X1 l. P9 N( N; a4 i  B; }# j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* e2 u4 p3 @, @6 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ H% A$ d0 Q( y" x8 h4 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! {5 e. f; `/ q<P>你无需担心</P>
  E8 ?/ [0 {' o+ b6 g' p7 O9 @, l: P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% o$ h. E$ Y3 p& s, c# _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 c# q* t2 u- V$ F, [3 N3 ?' Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 d: p  H; G; H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 W/ R- _) t- _/ `) \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 {8 @1 i# u) P) s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 J3 {7 E9 v# n& }( V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 j7 w0 }. r% |+ ?" W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 s& Z2 D  U# s' m$ q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, q6 U5 p9 U, C0 d0 M0 `+ x0 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& j7 {1 y' \% J2 Y  ^+ T3 _$ u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 Y- s! N: {6 K# o' F* [- x5 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Y6 w9 A8 \5 ^& ^% _2 `' n* d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 `7 s8 c% E- v) b- G$ \. g& Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ I" f9 Q0 F# y1 ?# G) Z8 w+ E8 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' f7 J+ j7 [" N  u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. d3 M- z- N, W. Y+ ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* P7 b" z% T5 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  Z0 h5 v$ T  w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 K/ h4 r% k5 L+ F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 d9 Q; w& l" D9 l/ m2 h* a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>