【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% q( K% ~3 l" j% v% r- K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 a; W" q) ^6 ~2 X# DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 a4 d6 w, c) L" DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 @" |- p7 n; q; TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; G6 n' w" X( l5 ?# L- h  c9 KSeeing the sky content with its love
8 h; {8 i5 {& d8 j3 i4 ~( C. kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 |1 B4 w6 C, q: o/ fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# d  }4 B* a1 dEvery other word you utter is love
3 J" t4 R7 S9 M, x& PI really want to know just how much you love me
' S$ U- F7 |' Q7 V8 cI love you I love you with all my heart
/ [! T- c) B! b" `# p& B" {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* h& Z: J6 y! H. v' n) CI want so much to see inside your heart
0 c5 b  l! Z1 O: gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( [. P7 ?( I" u* r6 {6 b5 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 A9 W6 s7 f# o; u% X4 B6 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 I7 {+ A& ^" T7 c1 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' \, X4 f4 _+ U- O8 d5 ~- CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- s% s/ A6 k6 b' `$ n$ h& E6 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 O' U; T" ~- L! ?. A7 w6 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: p4 T0 ^/ c+ h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 c, W3 [: A, O+ I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. r& [+ }' P! t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- X/ L5 ?% u/ K& y5 Z% x; O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; o1 N8 f1 k* d) [, M6 E, |! F' K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ W4 [. \' G+ }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! b- e& u' |+ E+ p  m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  k' [, n/ r7 X4 g- c7 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( d8 Z% P: z! P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ b( [8 T+ U& X$ [- S3 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" b2 ^4 {1 s( [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 s/ H/ b2 e4 b* q' z, M1 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% r6 i) l: l: v- P2 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 Z( G3 s6 M+ ~5 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ F2 C4 b6 k2 F% \, H, x3 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! @/ Z& A2 ]. p5 n- q! S/ [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 S3 k, }3 N+ Z) v3 s) ]" ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 C' @- `0 d! A1 g! b8 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. r- b2 w9 m% r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 n! k9 l6 h% P9 W  C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 D, m% A* S* Z; e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 d& A2 v0 A9 A- W" z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; S% E  m! Z# f$ C/ Z; K  X3 z4 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ K# G! v7 O3 q/ o, }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 M, C; N1 ]6 Y5 Z% m2 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% e/ P  w5 k' C' Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% p" k. n; [6 \; _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ r& k" b# V7 i( B/ v# d7 u  z我请你剖开它
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; D5 H2 F! S% `% a0 \! s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ n* I- D$ M6 c9 h6 o! c6 J" F) o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>