【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ U9 ^" y! p* H/ A" `歌词我附在后面。
  ?, Z5 J1 `) {  P2 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ E3 O/ C: s+ y* Q* |" AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 b2 m& B! N) D; E" PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. R* [# y% {! a5 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& `. U2 O$ g( BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 C( r% i9 Q5 y* s1 x. e* vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) m# K7 j) H% ~  T0 |( lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Q' O' H' C% j0 L8 N) x9 f2 aI’m still filled with fear
. F8 r$ }! f2 q( f; c- i6 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% h3 e  D, h: C" }5 T8 }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; u: ?! L) D" o; z% xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ ^. m3 ?1 b0 L( E" KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; p" j% F3 U3 C. uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( S9 _& K; S& v" ?9 A& A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 }' R5 @0 [: i' U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( C7 N' {* {# N3 F$ t  X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 H3 g6 G. q7 J) E- E) c7 y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" B0 H5 ~7 Y6 d& A+ B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& P- f4 p$ i& v' ]" d* f( l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 r7 Z9 C0 _0 _8 l- {9 o6 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* ?/ J' ?- `* O& E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  i; K. l2 _( }, L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ~5 h" U4 o$ [% f) J9 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 h1 k- h5 Q5 n; i( G1 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 k6 e5 b* v0 n) @7 n, o% b- Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 B% a; t" }7 K6 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( t6 Z+ v* Z3 g9 j! Z; t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. ?4 t9 r3 w, F) j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, X4 S! |7 f2 B& }6 }! H* @<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 x5 v* a+ g  Z7 p% c' h5 D9 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' k8 _3 Z+ w4 L2 M8 y% l' }- ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% J% e* Z2 r; g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z1 {6 m5 H# `$ D9 n7 B: n/ _1 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ j- t% k1 w& E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 l% F, D; v( `4 D$ _; I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" N6 i- |6 C/ l  \+ i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. Q8 a/ j4 C5 F" ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>