【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  e' R, V( X4 F" [歌词我附在后面。
  `, m# Q- Q. l1 U: MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 a' \/ Z) g( j, N) ~0 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& {5 C8 j6 Q" S: g% C) s+ G2 c/ NThe sky is happy down to its soul
% p: s8 u+ b: N" K' F% y( RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% K& V1 k% [& G( I% tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& C9 i* @3 y9 G% F  p7 ?6 cI love you I love you with all my heart
! c1 S/ O" h# N# m! @5 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* L# w, e# }6 O' P. C+ [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 q. |9 X" N. N+ S6 L" UI’m still filled with fear
1 l: W, g: s0 X' c0 f1 z: {7 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ |5 s# [6 w8 ^- Y* G7 }' u6 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' l! w0 N- |% T/ L% a, NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  Q/ j( x9 |2 c3 a" iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# z  C7 _4 l, N2 L! v3 c$ W4 n; f. YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' Q: p: |( j  A8 L8 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 o$ B$ ^  @, @/ Y9 N$ ~; v  v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! R' p, }' T* O6 t2 _/ Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* X* f; |4 J8 I3 ^- j% }7 b) E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ _6 o& x# s. u% C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 h% x) e) F3 e0 c9 i# @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# R, a' A2 R( C7 Z# s9 [) i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ ^$ T3 D4 {  ~5 E& Y" @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" f  d8 d4 G+ o9 h) x+ M, A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 F7 r" ~8 T( ?: H  \9 ?! {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& T0 s4 g7 ]9 U( d! U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 @$ C: p' L7 N* w3 L. F1 v8 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ s4 H" v# M$ h- f* s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 o0 H+ [1 [& b9 e- J4 C+ G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# }) ?  r8 j$ L- f# V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" _) s: y4 U- R# B) x. V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' r7 C1 [3 F7 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 u8 f1 W5 o- q+ u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: K$ T/ E3 W9 I5 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 P' F& y+ ?6 n! r4 M( N  }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; x6 t4 C+ [; Y) J) E9 y! g- ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  C3 L7 q9 |" m/ h$ B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 r7 D( ]* a3 I5 [3 r! [$ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: `0 `9 J5 z0 l8 i& g- O) d7 F4 w2 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 Q1 D8 R. [! c9 S* o2 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 D# A" G4 k% ~我请你剖开它
$ S: u& B3 j: d! b
/ b4 r0 _5 b" ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>