【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" t9 D( b$ a2 l0 v歌词我附在后面。
; p) N$ m5 g% \7 c4 W3 v; bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& B# A2 o% d& j% k6 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 g# U$ n6 z  a1 U4 {2 c: q3 mWith the moon kissing it every night
- v" |# [% Q2 D+ O) I* y6 E2 Z0 gSeeing the sky content with its love
" s4 ?. L8 g$ X% c2 n) pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) Q% B- i1 u. J+ P' _/ k$ ~; V3 y5 GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ P" l' I  o$ lEvery other word you utter is love
9 ^1 }7 n6 `$ b+ PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, u1 [: {9 [) e' h, Y6 I+ n. yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# i) o' E$ o" V- CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 p- |3 N1 L1 H, x# k2 d& VI want so much to see inside your heart
" ]; i; p) I3 S+ Y/ f$ [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- T, l5 Z5 E  N  M) KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 ~; U( b6 s6 G+ v6 z) q  D( P. PWith such a tongue as yours,
1 J" j6 M  e9 l, ~8 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* a: H) q$ z* h6 `5 p- [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& S! F2 X/ @/ o/ g( v+ oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' u  c2 o$ _3 m; M* }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' f3 @7 \4 ^0 S' u) p2 p1 M+ ~- X. n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 S1 c: k" K$ p8 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ g$ u: \" {8 B$ ?4 N1 x' g$ |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! a3 @: a7 ^% H3 S0 m- v" ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; {- N1 x1 k# j3 T. h( j; m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) c, I4 u: T7 }4 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' ]4 h' p2 K4 Q& s$ x; N9 b& A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% F2 X0 E- G  b- X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 D+ L0 L7 U* k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 N. A8 h- u) y( h- a7 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- c7 S& h/ Y; e+ J. j8 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ B9 C' b9 k+ M" n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 N9 @: X0 Z( ], {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 ]- t; r! C% |+ J2 X- d1 V' `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ D9 I! D3 r* L1 J, _* L- I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! |- p/ e* y' G& U4 E8 u# U1 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 i& L% {( I* _, T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! J3 K! c4 a9 x. c$ m. \& H; R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: @) N) T6 K: ~2 W, ]- x<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 u: @/ W9 T4 ~8 Q, q8 F  [6 J7 D8 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 G! c+ n0 }" v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! c& P$ E, S4 G, v* y" d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 [  x+ G" I" v% w2 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 A+ ]6 g6 o/ @0 o; k5 ^) D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 B$ _, m/ [& s1 G& }& j我请你剖开它

( b. u+ Z9 `/ X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>