【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 x1 Q( n9 x5 h. s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 u& e- N/ p# vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" R6 y, {7 {) }, t6 ]" XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ?7 x' Z/ f% zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  ~$ @* i9 L! R( k: T0 n$ C0 s9 yI love you I love you with all my heart
( n( L# O2 X$ p4 kNothing can compare to my love
( j1 y9 O: z8 N) BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& Q9 u( ~* p8 ^3 m. H7 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% W& E+ ]: r1 A9 H# c2 `I want so much to see inside your heart
8 _6 j9 `: P' Q: ?* E  ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! n. m) ^. A& Y7 g& TI’m still filled with fear
' I! K; h5 ]1 m9 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 O" M, B0 R- AI regret not dying
- {$ @, I; C) X! {1 P, nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* e- S% ]" q& r# A; s9 T& B* TWith such a tongue as yours,
* z( f4 B( \: e2 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ n/ u9 P/ l. O' l% ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 ?. {' e, |, V8 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 L& v9 V% c8 s; p0 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; j1 x% z1 Q- |  N& m$ Z5 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 G+ I  x( R" s% o2 i" }4 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ S+ J; N0 N  n* {0 @5 o6 V8 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 a5 j8 n7 V, D" k$ e/ {5 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 |2 f. }4 k! ~" d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, b+ R- y. P, \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! u2 b) t* V) D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& q/ M( ?8 M& ?) {6 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  E" T0 E! v2 U( s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ c) f" i& X: k5 l1 F, K, E( d/ p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  x- O4 A- T1 }( v9 H9 F7 Y# T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; i& C* R3 b- o! z% [% A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 V+ [7 _2 r& P" s5 K6 v6 f  s; U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& {9 T& C/ k0 @  G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 z" S" ^* Y2 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 [8 ?+ A5 k+ r( O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ U  X  f8 Y1 I3 t3 z' ~  S# R7 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# P: r% F* b5 i( w6 y5 l  z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 ]2 T9 y* W- m* I& R. T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; A. }  f. Y- b1 E. }4 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ~+ Q  p0 w% @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 D9 e. {  T! {( g% f/ Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 {' j: [5 }6 I! c8 d5 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>