【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ p7 ]0 n/ Z  x8 j) _4 y$ R: z歌词我附在后面。
  u" S! a5 u/ T, Y8 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& K; z: s/ z, DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 ~6 K8 f7 b4 r; B, EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' J" Z0 _- G! H" h7 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
% s5 }7 r; K& y( OWith the moon kissing it every night
; {  u. B0 g) USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 A" E, X' }0 W" e2 t, aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 G! U; @- q8 ~. UI love you I love you with all my heart
' _) ^; l6 g0 V) p7 zNothing can compare to my love
! i: E1 @+ o1 b  LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 c. r3 Z  m4 `2 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- j8 p  t  w! s6 E6 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- L$ Q4 L! `, ]! ~3 Q. h1 jI regret not dying
% t3 e) P: r/ v" A: lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ U# {. l8 o( \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ Y  J8 h5 ]* [# nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) q3 i5 P) q0 K7 J1 `' L+ Y% I( ?" vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& y! g' e4 a! S( B4 F' O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 [7 L/ b. u& t4 ~% q4 l3 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 f/ [& a9 P* B/ E' P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- l; e4 l5 V8 G' f, B& n" V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ z7 m! v0 k+ j- `, ^# v8 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 `* b; o9 ~8 ^0 v, T1 }  S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& {$ w, n, m  b& d' P0 R6 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 H: n% n# @  C" u  w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ d! A' W) w8 D" {/ X" h8 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; A  _* M3 d4 _" d3 x7 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; a! U1 S$ Y5 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: I# [  G& T6 j9 J6 S3 O; D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% p3 [6 y' s% n5 w% p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 {% O8 q8 V1 y! z/ x1 I% u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( `8 a# x& }8 ^6 H' i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 W+ p; n  c3 Z' J2 I5 Y8 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ `' m% @* K' B4 D7 c+ C! d- C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* ?" I0 z; J! G4 B0 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 F8 T: [) I  W# e& r) J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Z) `9 r0 R1 j4 I. ^3 `  N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ I) p( L# p( Z+ w) E/ i* s) q$ D2 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ G9 a: r# R0 W3 y# X! b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! x1 f$ b& M3 p  R+ A6 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' m% ^, L8 N1 i+ b* V- G. b1 w; V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ q- j* P' o8 W' b6 \1 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 x  v9 J, A; Q  W; C& {+ m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ^5 Y' }- r3 ]/ `* q( @9 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>