【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 U$ K3 [  J4 k1 N/ e$ j( |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# a6 R+ u9 j/ i/ w( Q- P* @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 u) L6 i5 Z# W! P/ OWith the moon kissing it every night
) R( p$ B0 l" {5 E$ d4 MSeeing the sky content with its love
; a* o; E4 x% C9 j$ bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# e0 Y$ y" [6 s+ ^1 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ G: R' s" C. A0 \, N+ l- D- II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 Z: L6 c; u! q" D6 s0 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 W/ D8 r7 u* n; E3 F* L3 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. h+ b: L! A2 S0 f$ E! CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! P/ R" M& Y3 p) N' b. mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( b( Z8 S8 A% L7 g. V! ^9 h. W8 d  r% lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 l' L# a$ @4 j+ E+ d+ I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' S" a, G5 x1 }" T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Q+ y8 H$ j7 z7 b2 f' B& G  a4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# x/ T) h/ A) \5 }* p" c# ~" }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 x+ E. t4 `; ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& R3 A& y4 H4 Q" T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! L% j( ]0 Y8 t* L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# V3 ^) z3 j1 U) q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) [2 n. Y4 b% {* L. ]; U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ r' C. W- u! S  q3 w0 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; g2 _2 g% e4 ?5 K) r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  z) E" C: f: H0 U- J; [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 _1 z: ?# O8 [2 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  X2 G7 V4 n0 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 N" O0 a1 g0 M3 K; t+ h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Z4 R6 U: u9 J! t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 t* a; z; E" n( C2 _9 E; w# Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 [9 j) A" b  E3 I! z1 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 \2 [  w$ Z4 }5 B3 C. R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' u1 @$ W2 v% y& k/ w9 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( _$ Z" [$ g# j<P>I regret not dying</P>
( F7 ^% v+ q. f) z" a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% S" ?0 i, U' V( H) Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ B) P) s4 U4 G' Z$ h7 @! d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' `9 ?) z" Y0 l. d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 `$ \# g' t+ f1 I% W- c  s# p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ~/ g0 P0 x: P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, @, b9 ^+ c. g  X. i9 _8 k0 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: y$ S0 I# y) ~! [; d* D9 _  B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( P) K0 l) \5 J我请你剖开它

: X' M3 N6 @3 U+ s2 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& Y( U4 q7 R2 e5 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>