【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 y# p, y6 Y! A. {1 \9 O. C6 S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 r5 _$ f, G6 _& g, j8 [5 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, y4 _; f! e0 a. y- \6 m. B* fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% P& W6 l3 b7 ?" e+ zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ K, ]7 o* b% o  `6 N( dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 S: z" h' T  o. z* ^: HEvery other word you utter is love
/ G4 J3 P+ Z2 @3 \4 |; T7 iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ }2 I1 H% }& Y' e) l5 X0 o% qI want so much to see inside your heart
( q5 ~! \' O+ I7 h" II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: A% G$ F2 W. m2 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- B8 q$ c. e+ o- t6 kWith such a tongue as yours,
* D0 w: Z, ?8 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& q8 [4 p( @3 ^" y5 `/ oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) a  F8 D2 n; J, b: k0 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 w0 N5 c* G5 h* @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ o9 H2 I! ?& F+ ~( q$ b( K6 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ i0 d, j, H5 g/ [+ h8 |$ j2 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: o$ ]) R, ^; U' W6 u2 f2 R: T# [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Z6 S% G; U5 v" f  l* ?- E6 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; _& n$ b7 I- h% w* j6 i! t& i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 |% Y8 I; C9 U# Z: G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( o: q+ `7 }( J: H) g+ f<P>你无需担心</P>
- A% ?% y, Y; ?4 t+ [8 Q$ ~4 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 h* _- y6 D4 ]! n0 k% w9 X( {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' J2 J- \. h) w* h/ K6 o3 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; h  k& t# `2 B; B& ^  l/ N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! ~7 v# U3 _! H8 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: H  v7 l' j+ c$ l8 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- k3 T( o: f+ |& E; y" N0 w9 e0 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 I2 F3 P  Y  Z% B" B" r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ R; R. I8 j7 f* t- z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, {3 l' j# t4 J7 B9 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 h9 i! ]" I: J* L4 F6 N( J0 ~/ S- p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% O! }3 M' u5 y1 e, N1 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" l; ~  U1 k  n" q" p3 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; l( C5 d+ b. H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 N- N7 A- A( c; ~; F. J5 X1 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ Y7 G2 X5 p2 S( j+ V: u  z6 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ U1 `+ r( j1 m( ^" }7 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) m) r( x# |9 r) g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& F( d" @$ r+ r( W. H- d. r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, D5 i0 C8 X( Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>