【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- c! F1 Z9 m! O) l% A' FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 p% e. S, f& N; j4 a( mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" {, t- n: F2 n+ @2 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. i  V, E2 r1 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 k- P, }3 I9 r; I' W  S4 h% ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  y$ n& b8 z4 H5 O/ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ P$ r; n) l8 D  X  eYou needn’t fear anything
9 P- w  U1 t5 {5 \, `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) |2 b8 w. H4 k% x5 u- t2 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! ~5 y9 y' J% c8 C' j4 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 p" h1 L4 }: ^) N4 A7 N3 C1 mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 B, A3 F/ \  yI regret not dying
( N& S' }* i% ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' O( N) C* k5 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  |3 s) l: n0 R  i' x9 |6 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 |3 e$ i; O7 k6 v3 s  R2 ~2 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 G' j. h! T/ K+ x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- k# ]8 Q% O% Z6 T( {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# \# D0 B, y+ _( u- {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 T/ {# d* W8 P0 ?1 n2 I5 z+ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ?7 [( ]3 u; m/ U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) c. a! P; i6 c( @* ]: g& o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 J, v) h# Q- `' y) N2 [& l" @2 X! a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 w# G$ }2 p; b+ S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. I- c: `& Z" J/ B  p<P>你无需担心</P>
: d7 o& t$ M8 d1 s% S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- }" W+ s  E, x0 A* ^4 G) Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# ^, ]' `9 Q. V5 ^9 F: F9 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 W8 ?/ p- `. B  I3 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# X6 g/ V3 y# z+ N4 x  I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, j& k& j, g% X% _: ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ P- K9 L1 p) ^' y6 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 l5 Q) Z& v& y7 V, G# j0 W! j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% N# |% f5 N; k+ a& \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! A. j% }0 I6 e) d: n6 F* {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) a" |! _& w; k7 P8 a* K) P: ]1 n  u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  L' b& ]# b. E; i3 R) j& e- }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 {- V; @/ G; [6 z  v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! {8 r9 v8 `$ |& j0 A0 _* O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>