【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 }( q$ @' m+ q( \: D6 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 I- L* D/ x; K9 y2 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
: Y8 F3 h  t2 x- L. ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 m# b4 z9 r0 y. iYou needn’t fear anything
" o1 W) }) k5 z4 E1 }, p5 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- Z/ {9 B( l0 z' b- G! O3 X+ e: k& RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- `2 ?) M  P9 u. p) n+ NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 Z+ P# z) D. D2 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
! J" m, j2 t  uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 V6 ~: Q. g, r6 YI’m still filled with fear
  ~* v: d) O2 I" R+ UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 |* O: f; C- v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ l  u0 C! U# \2 w6 E8 x4 h( i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; C6 U+ z2 J* P: u4 \9 h* x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  T/ @  r. t/ Y" ^% M7 }) M" E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" ~$ R9 I! {7 D% b5 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ G6 L9 V6 H4 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 F; R4 K  h& C8 h; k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 x5 D1 R$ Y- I- q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; c( X: e3 i4 [$ ]" I" h; y) v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, j5 `8 c! y- \0 q: o! n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ B# J* E( W% W9 L" T7 f$ @, ~% {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* Q) o8 S4 y) j( u/ a/ Z: t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 p$ o/ P3 c" M6 |8 w8 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ?1 x# u0 I4 O. g4 w2 ?7 |  Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; N& p. Q+ r; B. @# [, n  l0 Q; E& c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- o6 i2 V+ Y7 [! G4 n5 h2 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( k5 H; L- k. W  @; Y3 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# @/ x! A5 B6 D' I. V7 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" @  q6 T- i% X# y. V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- C, o1 {  m! D# N  H  @% x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. B5 ]5 V3 l) w" t0 a( k- M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 q+ I. L7 j0 ]- F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' p# y% c8 Y# p) r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 c/ M0 H3 ^4 y$ v2 r+ T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 x2 y' O; q8 {4 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ ]/ a( |& U/ `. ?3 e% e# m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>