【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 i& U$ Q8 j& l% ?/ f3 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- S( @0 J* j& `; k* kSeeing the sky content with its love
4 C" x) V: e( L4 A& w) o) CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; q! R) g6 K; e# x8 PYou needn’t fear anything
, g# D2 S+ f% }! @, _, EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' t3 C2 }( E9 q* o  _( XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' L0 I4 p2 B# T% i+ u! cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, y0 Y1 G9 J% z/ c+ J9 |9 m5 }% zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) w6 \; {# Y) s6 j4 e% ]" ZI’m still filled with fear
; @/ o2 O3 l2 s5 J- w! Z% kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& h3 u' d9 T. c' U/ }0 G) x+ J1 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# j& e' ^+ ]. e8 P+ cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 |$ ^/ X; X: b7 s( C9 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- K( e& v& g, F* l% v4 p0 l" n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! B4 y1 g; V5 [% g2 F1 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( f1 _2 I1 J# F4 F8 i, J) e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! B+ N9 E; d. L1 n! F0 Q& x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 L* s' j/ C. H/ p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# `. t! z& ]- @0 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% I" ^) c! _5 ]5 w0 Z- A8 V5 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# C# B7 X7 E9 d& \: g; @7 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Q  W# M2 ~! x3 }. Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" Y2 ^- [" Y# i) P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 b: j& }! a# c+ |$ E, H; m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 c$ I4 R# Z4 g/ \" i! T<P>I regret not dying</P>
, E2 h# R( R. c# B5 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# B* r) I9 w# l+ G* ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" |- e# q  O) E: u  @' W! h2 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ m- v4 I, ^( i& R0 c- C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' ~% F  \7 K8 s, A  z( q, X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ?9 ~0 P& I" @. D5 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 B% m" o+ r( d# W) F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) n7 ?3 p1 V% O: ~, F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" P$ z# e& q; }# W) }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# a0 k# J/ u. a; _$ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* M. e; O9 T, B. l/ e我请你剖开它
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, i4 K1 m$ b& m0 x- D( x% _( ?# a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; [  C3 {  z+ C8 W4 H6 `( o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>