【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ h9 M7 H5 e  s' NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ U* V5 r+ F# X8 S6 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! M3 M9 O- x9 t; e1 s) SThe sky is happy down to its soul
: ]5 P  I/ g% M9 T, `  B& m  F6 _With the moon kissing it every night
1 i. Y  u0 S& r+ L( G' E  }Seeing the sky content with its love
3 u" U4 K2 V6 @! Y- GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 B; P& D9 {& P9 S' ~I love you I love you with all my heart
7 e! s! z3 f' R( [- C' K' j0 O' ^Nothing can compare to my love
9 j6 f, E) a8 d( @0 O4 M! O& Z% U6 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ t0 T8 f% ^& t. aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 v. y, W7 h/ w. j- {+ PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% S2 ]$ b* h2 T  ~! h0 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 x4 D( l; }. |. J0 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ `" G1 M, j$ q4 ^% zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' j- N3 V, Y( J" `' m6 C  n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 x! N8 Y! o1 b! U) q3 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; J$ h" D% V  u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ [; r" @: ^6 N+ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: F5 o6 ~+ }. D# x/ @+ _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) E' v6 O& a, j" b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 {  x5 e# ~- _9 ~4 F( `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) [& R; W9 D: e3 y, L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' u6 q9 u2 G4 ]6 p& F6 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  k+ X! K" U3 h7 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 N8 h. l  r( I9 v& n9 W7 s5 w( ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 W9 F, l/ _8 X0 A  _7 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& z! V/ x% }! x3 j& M! n$ e1 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 @7 n) f6 O; ?# s8 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ v  \; @. ]# ?$ d( |/ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* I/ w+ h! D1 i: u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 E0 n, f5 i8 Z% [# q9 `& S5 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, H' c8 l, i5 c- @0 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) r! y* c7 Y% i4 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ^9 R; W! Q) i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ~" U7 u) V3 a* R$ i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 N7 d6 t$ E; S! k2 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 M5 O+ ]' y8 J. H" m( u" f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 q# w+ w# x2 }9 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, @& n+ h% r3 T+ O1 }  R7 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 e2 l- G4 s. X, P) \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 h0 W! e$ w, D2 C/ q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ x4 `: e! P- `' y3 R- J% \  J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 _: ^8 |) n6 s% I  Y! `9 ]我请你剖开它

" ?8 U- H7 i: h/ o$ }4 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 x; w% u' E3 \/ Q7 i; z' H2 {6 e! n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>