【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 ?% A3 F# p: u  P) L歌词我附在后面。
4 q; I; x  o. R& I' XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: p/ ]9 y, X/ n! B  C' YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ^/ N2 b! F0 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& r5 @! r( P: @. f  NSeeing the sky content with its love
1 B( m2 M+ i7 v+ V& y( pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 M+ C) D0 m# Z, z- ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  g  o8 D" _# b8 m+ N! E! XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- p7 v$ _& @* [/ H6 H9 ]( HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" g7 s9 w0 F0 ^* R* vI’m still filled with fear
7 P! E) k# ]6 t' Q$ i  [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 s' R; N" U5 c/ bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( J2 Q# ~# Y6 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- V; \- `6 D! @) z* x" `: g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& i" G1 ?- C( B- H% @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 I5 }. e% y+ q! I8 T8 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 y& ?1 \* r3 v. H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) h' Z" I6 r% t4 w1 G# ~7 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ?) o' V/ U2 p0 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 Q5 Z; m1 B* w$ w; t$ ?% h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ r' C* e- a' G. h% V. P. Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 n5 ?: c+ K  o0 @. X7 ]+ }" ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! R* \9 S; a9 {9 \: r" R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 B( b8 K. o% s0 h3 a% e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; t& x$ _6 h* ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* @- A3 T( }) Y" A. B, P: d& N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" n- k) t, T5 W- ]) I* |% Z) i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# E! c3 K- j; }* n6 B- f# r- s; ^" g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 x; O- T4 k* x' r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ |. r6 `7 v9 C. U<P>I regret not dying</P>
( Q5 c9 ^( Z: I! b+ {8 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' u8 ?3 }, F1 B- q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- D5 Q6 x( Y. |" S2 Z2 P2 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( I. E+ y* V9 j; C( M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 G. y: }& _" r1 M, e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& z6 }* \* @$ Q3 R* h# Z2 K/ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 u# P1 G4 s7 t- J; u: _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" @8 G& d! x9 t; J0 o. z+ X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 ^; a2 I+ T5 D; W; T  C我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>