【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 d! q; ]* F: W  F# F, I/ ~歌词我附在后面。
/ {5 n4 }& t- T  c; b  a7 H7 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: y* K+ p( ~& ^, y$ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, O% p) O# ?3 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% Z& z7 i9 w9 ?9 Q% Z( E, FThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 }2 d% R7 O6 P' g3 Q0 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. D( ]' |0 X+ ^0 P7 X( A/ p. E- SYou needn’t fear anything
" @# x( ?9 ]! s5 z8 b, I+ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ ~/ P: W3 N+ t7 E4 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  C% j4 a( D  u; a; CNothing can compare to my love
9 S8 G7 h3 J( X& y4 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' S7 ^4 S3 ?9 {! X/ R+ h/ BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& C$ N, l4 q( n5 g- \" KI regret not dying
1 |4 E7 c) e$ C# \8 b- a- yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# S& k: `/ }6 O! f( K$ o$ YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 J8 B& B- i$ Z# w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' q/ {' P" `' {! T. X# b8 x( D6 s6 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 m. y9 m: a% y1 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' n( Q" `1 V/ m" h% d3 q/ A& r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  _; j7 m- n2 i8 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 u& T0 Y" j& }( x: E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' a/ Q: ^- h& f+ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ R9 X6 M" F7 T3 S8 r: u2 R3 V<P>你无需担心</P>
' m1 Z) e; Q- n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& s) O+ I* F4 Q5 d5 ?) Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 F9 {; @6 f/ ?+ ?& o7 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 b- F; j+ V' R- L  }1 k1 X/ \2 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! J6 g" y9 p6 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ c3 Z( [( @4 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% x) r! @# y9 E# W1 n( t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ t5 Y0 M! x' q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, a! u, d( N3 ?/ D! v5 R& Z2 w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! @. v4 t, @- O0 Z& X<P>I regret not dying</P>
  k3 H! N% ?& t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 ^5 M$ o6 H( a0 b1 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ k" R/ r& l0 y0 o5 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 A4 ]1 {9 X5 d6 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 X5 W$ D# U9 s# a& t0 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( u# E2 R5 t) U  f+ a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ^0 c( r  i6 C+ W$ a& v& K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% L. A  ~: X  s' ~$ @9 C/ a8 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 t3 x1 M8 g0 m6 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( D9 g' I1 M( X& T" e( e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>