【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

+ x  v  K* g8 s% r+ p) ^( u* h<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
( Q3 m/ h0 m- H/ X8 Z

歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 p3 g" t8 m- D3 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. ^0 D3 i) F" N5 n) xWith the moon kissing it every night
  A- J5 S1 G* j3 A! S/ _: x, VSeeing the sky content with its love
0 c. j4 M4 ?9 L+ ]) MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) n* j% a. C% f3 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 ?8 v5 @8 w+ f& b: GI really want to know just how much you love me
0 q  N- ~: q" R0 KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ ?( m/ I- n& P$ b6 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 A7 C) A/ Q1 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 z" ?0 ?3 }$ UI regret not dying
4 o( _0 p" v. p8 P2 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 B# E$ J" B# U6 ~/ n, }) W% [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 q% u6 C2 ?4 g% ?# B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 v% j! g; V$ Y/ F0 p1 k: Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  N% ], J! ~9 a  E" b6 C0 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, B2 G/ T5 D& H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 n% C. |0 H6 D' U( R: n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ]& p9 {7 T5 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 F! y7 g) F' f8 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 F# {/ }5 h, D6 |7 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! K- ]3 a! D- a! O. y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' T: c4 }( x3 f& Y, W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  J5 g' n" a4 P0 e& u! i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  t( k3 t! X3 L- h% ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" F5 J8 O( r* K4 _% r3 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ P3 \  K& l: f& s2 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& z5 u' x* X/ V8 a. l1 Q& n. D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# B. K! J4 J- ?7 `9 l$ {  m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: s* o: Y7 @$ r( G9 m6 f! a7 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ U6 J& B7 B. K4 M/ P9 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 i( R  s8 M8 k% D5 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( Y: [1 j" C1 I+ D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 X/ g) n2 P4 A; B! }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 A4 L/ u- u8 Y4 J6 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
8 O2 G  ~! N4 M5 G3 _4 V5 |
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>