【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 ]7 ?7 [, S& F# y) `$ EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ]% i$ B% P$ D, G" hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 f- i  E1 ~1 ?: t* NThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 U& Q8 {0 o1 x& x4 k* z6 `* XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) m# [( p# a+ ~* A5 zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% H0 g& s. G0 R  bEvery other word you utter is love
+ k* F; r7 s1 X/ S& b/ V8 r+ b* T$ t- `6 wI really want to know just how much you love me
, G  o8 Z/ S! m' g0 j; I, d3 b4 vI love you I love you with all my heart
9 w9 ~* U6 ~: c3 X$ r7 H3 INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; D0 x% r" @7 a/ k2 R  K: RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 F0 _; {4 [2 {6 f& `) N" EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' L  g3 X0 J8 C" @" O4 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" U4 o2 M) l& t$ e& b* m; T5 V* bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- S5 F6 B4 Y* `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; |- x3 f; `5 B6 H( z9 s' ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 g+ Q# l4 \5 M2 X" v' N. H0 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 E/ Y8 e6 n4 q! {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; D; T8 Q. s) V! W# q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; N/ o1 g- `" ^3 o8 E) n! M# @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 U4 i8 [# z2 f+ d. U5 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ H) w( D( w7 }! T5 _2 z& J' D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; D$ k! y" k* `' o1 Y+ s% Y: {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& H9 w0 K+ e  C. k' Z5 ^0 ~( t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 w* p9 Z0 N* _4 |8 z$ K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' V1 F0 v. R5 c8 p$ n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 I1 I5 w, B6 R6 Y; I+ r: n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 n; H3 k' W* p2 N- ^" K3 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 A! H; I& I, V% F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" M! o( M( F+ Y% h: {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& U/ {+ P3 d) ]4 a. J' U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: [+ P1 M' `' n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) {( E5 v. i: g) `0 {# B% ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 ]9 F$ U' R) y! m6 v; V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) u6 c2 e) D& U7 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 w, u7 B0 T7 h9 g1 G; g! A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( c1 y! y' Y& N  s+ r1 j1 N# I) Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' h* P/ _" W( _  L/ [" b" y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 ]* P7 b" e- l. K6 v  d; `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ v! V& z  i* ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>