【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 J- Z# z6 n- Q: [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! F: u, a: i- O5 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
: K5 g; P6 N3 z! _; k' V0 l) UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, K& E* Y6 D0 |8 f0 @8 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% X. o" u* Q3 |6 S8 Z( v3 xSeeing the sky content with its love
# n( t. q! l3 x$ T& }/ s: |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 V9 |3 Q- S) H; kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' B. g# j' ~6 `' N7 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: A5 E% A, z& @) AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) O: z9 k. |$ ~3 [  q1 GI regret not dying
: Y  v6 y8 K, j! t& cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 u" v7 }# K4 X* K7 \, lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ \7 V0 {3 q0 ?: ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* ~5 m. _  m# U' M' i8 y# W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 l0 r; z- `! @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ l6 u: N* G/ `  j! ]5 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: r, r- K9 k) T- u  f0 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% s; K4 A1 j3 l& ]# a5 K& ?$ ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 }& g' U: w2 G: G& h' J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 F- m( x0 {) I  @8 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ L  f0 m6 v- T: W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% [- H! q; Q- O6 N" j3 ^( p0 n& a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! U5 v- R7 q! W2 ^+ Z, D# j9 I0 `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  F( w/ [* h: V" }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! U8 I3 [' e3 X; W0 t! D% e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 }3 p) l& u% l5 t5 p/ I/ }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! w0 C3 l7 z/ P2 Y& H7 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. {% n  q0 z1 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- |% A' R7 j: |5 c/ ?: o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. T9 [& m0 i" |4 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, K: d# q' M" l/ d- w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, O/ U0 U5 k- f$ ^, a- H& u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' k- w& G4 c$ q! w0 Y0 P  W: s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' I" k) s3 P5 t  Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 m5 u# S2 B6 [. y' R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 A( }0 J! _' ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 j8 d' x. Y; U) K) k; h. q2 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* J/ J: j1 D& Y$ y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! y% ~, @0 F9 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ h' l- I' ]$ p9 q: U, K4 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  @# k4 A6 b9 }' H4 j; L" t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% m' {9 x. e# X. W! r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. n  d) K( o; c6 b6 z" N( L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) b0 o, h" u) }2 G) {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>