【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 J# w9 B9 @8 {* ]' {6 ~6 }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 ]4 t5 F5 G) C2 G5 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 b1 ], y. l1 q5 k6 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 C: L% I! R; ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 y/ o; O" P* R& i  g. qThe sky is happy down to its soul
( ?" K' e4 b/ z; j/ cWith the moon kissing it every night
$ ~( _5 \0 k& _. a" p5 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* O5 h: }, I4 DYou needn’t fear anything
1 {4 m- B8 H% k1 u7 H6 Q; {3 E' N+ kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& H! P) R% C* H8 bI love you I love you with all my heart
0 v9 ]) _6 s  ~2 \% m) r# m8 ENothing can compare to my love
  K4 @! \& q% c$ P/ X7 ]+ G% gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. U8 D! G% x( O- B0 U. f: uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 R. T+ i, M, Y( kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 k' Q& r4 M" M3 l/ K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 v# J+ s8 W/ h: t2 }& W: n, Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 @) X7 I5 E1 Z0 a" o& d- R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 }; c0 {( ^! V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 f; W, U/ q- }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 r# f1 \; f8 a$ p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* e0 V' u7 V* d6 N  S  q# |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ z" f% r9 H1 K7 F7 k( E- L0 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' @: X/ @3 }# L2 x9 e3 P- U. E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ a: l* S/ S5 `2 b/ i; K' b& S3 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" {7 _1 o# I5 B& `- e: |; ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) z" @2 }/ V+ T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ s8 n1 `* Y2 ]- `! J% o2 P: G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% @: }( O! x* R6 b" A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 m- Z% W: J9 H" `+ C. n  m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) u8 \' s; E: `9 w! @" q% k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: ]7 g9 g; _, a  r  D, o& z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' s6 w4 f# h1 v4 j+ E. `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) L6 H* d: w, a3 B! q& K9 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 f0 N( H" j9 j8 c2 j& t7 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ s1 R. B! O, S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ~' d; m: ?+ p8 j) L0 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- U) a# K6 `# H3 w, N  q, {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>