【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 Z2 I% Z9 R) h. XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( g3 ?0 ]5 q, M- N$ ^: ?. JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ v/ T2 F8 M* q5 \0 w; X) BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 {1 }; S6 z* [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ H# l3 c- M% ]) \9 k+ WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ x& k6 W5 Y, \% q- HSeeing the sky content with its love
1 |: L8 h% j) v; [4 ]3 a" zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 P$ m6 h- D5 @' S7 o* d- d2 }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ b* R8 l6 Y" w. b$ UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ [$ E- h3 U  _* \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" i  x+ z4 @3 H; v. A, K: `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- X0 H8 h3 N8 f* h  AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 e; ~1 R% @* M  \3 l5 [) g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 y: s0 D3 X1 a! O) \( L5 [: G2 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! O! }2 ]: k' c7 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 F" K. f, ]* z; O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 v1 f- c# d/ m! g+ O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Z) e/ B+ N# }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" m7 H9 l+ \, A3 E6 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 r0 R. Z: N3 j" `/ B8 u$ Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 M( P* y6 t8 C5 |: l2 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 S6 O* D* v4 y+ v& t/ n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 q" s& \" m: c: b+ _1 u# G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 D; \5 g- \5 F; ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 \; }2 t/ A: H1 N: d3 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( Z7 \- Z' j) W* |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, J9 D6 _7 d( O6 B' u3 Y0 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( z. b% V" _4 E: B( V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ }8 u; [$ T2 T( k& E# V1 a3 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ k+ l0 v3 M! \& `# g+ @0 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 X3 V. n  {3 I9 T0 x- N& Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 u4 Y$ e% F% }, n6 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& f+ [5 z5 @1 T8 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ B4 g' d& |, {$ U2 b/ d: \<P>I regret not dying</P>
) g9 U" s* F' W2 L$ m1 P8 ~0 x# _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' O, o) N) t6 n! o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 k1 n, M. ]" o' x" D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  @0 v, Q3 \! W) r! w3 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) p( k5 h2 f2 G6 Q4 c# x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# K# d3 J) n- e/ Y; i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% [* f- H/ v: s$ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* @7 @  B+ s4 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" u7 n3 o+ h0 r% X9 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>