【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. {4 |) z4 S* ~& W1 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" c- }) V( Y; Y/ q( [9 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' g( m# `" Y( ^" [( E4 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 j; c1 o. G7 x! aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 J8 l; B; {- ^, T4 h+ rI love you I love you with all my heart
/ G2 Z7 l) q% o. p  H) f# B0 e0 I' PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& T% `- a5 C$ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ~; O4 x: n( vI’m still filled with fear
7 ~. b+ w& t! W3 D( @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 _) W9 X. T1 v# AI regret not dying
7 p, w! |0 [/ i" k" aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" W6 x7 ~& v; v% GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 h! A! N- Q1 D8 _/ r" q, k/ NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ A8 R9 l3 ?$ H' O( e  {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 x- q9 P$ ^& c0 j1 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* K5 [6 Q; I/ j+ x# i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# Z! S/ ~; E. p) _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 J) D: j8 {4 _0 H& K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 Z7 @! h6 U% }+ g6 c) w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ d+ o1 w$ T2 X: w) n  }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 M. ~% x; t! h; m  a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ G: i* X" v& U% H$ X  B- X2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 @2 v( a0 E7 }9 N: H7 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. z; N- a! Z& u* @+ U5 ^( @' i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" \! X4 u9 q4 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" T; \; g8 ]6 N2 F7 h& S* K% Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 L* H/ b- f5 i( I  Q; S/ `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 l* ~! _, ]/ t4 V2 F5 O* e% o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 u* m- R, ?( M! y6 W) ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 q/ H6 k1 W0 [' A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 p; R+ H2 c  {7 E$ F' u+ q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ G5 D( m1 T, y: r4 v% `# B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) m/ W4 Q/ I  w/ N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( w) D0 E; R, Q7 P: E: ]3 |' c+ p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 t5 y) ?3 I% Y8 L; }8 n6 Z2 B" g% O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. x; q0 |6 O$ r- ?) N0 X; f' ^7 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% _4 y, ?3 L( Z1 f' `* u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( k' c5 @/ b8 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; p# S' u. k% y' Y; E- u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* \% y' B& j# `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ?! L7 W, J" Z1 t' V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( U8 f, Y$ s& Z$ x2 N5 G2 R% C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>