【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 V5 X* ~0 M! H" ]% M+ D5 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# \% [2 g6 s) R8 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 Q/ c, o6 m, \; k  R1 L3 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
* n. j# O& J% ?: I+ o( \" }With the moon kissing it every night
$ V: N3 w. K' d5 c7 M- p& ]* oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& ~, A7 u0 {9 S- v9 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ M5 ?1 S8 |9 o# A/ D) AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( p) a' M5 _; FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( r" Y* E7 A3 s! R1 c3 B! xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. O1 z# t5 S3 l: x* b  |% \+ h, p( m+ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 _6 O. ~& m+ k/ qWith such a tongue as yours,
, L7 A3 [7 {/ X) K1 ~7 o2 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% u2 ^" k/ X6 W0 \# RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 q/ q+ E! W+ X. }8 ~' ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 G- m6 @6 F2 G) P+ d4 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! F0 h) b) S# a  |5 c% V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 z0 h& F; L  ~# ?$ L- v7 x  a- Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 \. P* U3 _7 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* h0 b+ x, j( Z/ r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  K  Y$ l( ~5 R) `5 P; R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. {. Y1 t$ h; Y# {/ r( j# n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ~0 F% U" y. w+ y7 A  E; U" @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: _8 }% E* Z$ d, E' c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 e0 `! ?2 k" ^% U4 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ W1 d! A0 Y$ S7 z* \! p1 k/ ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  U/ x7 Q, l+ t8 R$ h; r, e<P>你无需担心</P>
+ f: f7 m/ e. K5 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# H5 e# q# {" V7 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# E- ~9 i7 h, ~# L" ^5 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) C/ Q. h" X- s6 c/ c- L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 X" |1 ?& F9 n) T1 n6 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ ]! U6 r; u3 c4 {. u8 u5 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( G( e* b# u+ K: \0 R& s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) n, w7 t  d$ v9 H' E; |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ r; P2 W2 u) `7 U' \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ m2 I7 j) @3 y! r  S2 j* ^3 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 u7 w2 Z' m, H. e  n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  K# u3 R7 i5 x# u: k  T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ Q5 H" c- F2 r- Z8 o1 O5 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 `! s9 u2 x& S. P& A; c( k! O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# G2 S! R( O: r. x* T7 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. s3 z( i0 a( B0 c* Y: k" p- N7 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 G, w1 ~( X& D# N$ E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 M2 d  s2 U) e1 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& q' O! I# F$ p( d我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 d8 Y3 B! @5 z4 T& s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>