【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ f9 k1 t5 |  X+ N- b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 u: S6 p6 b6 o1 x" x6 X" ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: o0 A7 w0 T# {% bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 n3 K/ a: X) S* }1 g  g% xThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 {1 S: e+ }/ a! _/ nWith the moon kissing it every night
0 N1 t' ]: ?' d# \: X6 f3 S. \0 \Seeing the sky content with its love
+ H8 u8 p+ D' I$ e: U, o$ O7 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 K1 b3 e- \5 w+ X7 g8 r# DYou needn’t fear anything
) l7 ~) c' p. `! d6 X' |3 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 v7 c- d8 `+ p$ R) F0 I6 A. `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. v. d$ R+ @2 Q! |3 F8 e: ANothing can compare to my love
( O; q: s/ x- z0 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- I( @$ o" N9 A: D% c4 J$ X' rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 O0 ~1 @: Z$ uI’m still filled with fear
5 p; m0 R+ _; q  z. G( h5 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, _4 w1 G: z# A8 q  l9 A5 D8 SI regret not dying
/ S+ @& [( J3 n" {, eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 {! I9 B1 ]: |7 i+ iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! y& ]" Q4 J& A2 I% I5 b( @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  b- `8 {; l0 b9 |2 g+ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ]8 W" h# z* X% G( m4 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 c7 t+ H$ p! d( O7 f# ?8 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 U, }' |9 K% k$ g. s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. `8 J/ }' `5 h+ \* G1 Y6 |. T! K5 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ q" c% L& F% x- U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ U# v$ O: M, I1 [6 ^% a, {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! s8 F$ s6 I3 s& m' o+ H- ]- q6 V) L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 b+ J" c( j9 r7 `7 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" x. F+ _# F* R! X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- J& p7 T& g; D; B1 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 l: H, [, C" L$ {: K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' V: C' V% O% B# d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; [6 b( w% a. B% O- y- e" E1 ~+ |) `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- z' e& X& q  S! l) Q+ L9 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& }7 z/ Y2 ?4 G' y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ?" }9 P# ?: w3 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! q8 n, s/ `+ h% V: p+ h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( i6 b* f7 k( e+ Y4 d) |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' f+ J( r. N2 A1 K  L9 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 ~  ^5 T. c: T: L% W2 ^0 l9 y" j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& U% X8 v( y/ I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- S* s  Q+ k+ M- r6 U# Q+ t: _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( m( [3 Q% X. I% D5 e# ?; r* L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Y# c: T* l; H% C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& w6 Z9 `. `$ t; T) I: t$ j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 `- b: N5 y4 ~9 `, A' c! X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& Q: Y4 n! d; `4 n4 f* x0 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' O" n- O9 _& ]1 }2 w2 W' F4 w0 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 T9 ?) ~5 m7 H, E! a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>