【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 M7 _6 K' W9 F0 [1 |歌词我附在后面。
) t! N& m( J) \3 X  {% EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 _" N+ P: I" L) z! fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( Y- w. b! q# F3 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- z# @. Z* m0 Q9 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
: L2 T* Q7 W. v  d+ {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 b$ O6 X& Z5 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) |) X! M! E7 O2 w% m' KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; j1 x. @$ W) y7 Y  g/ Y5 w) m4 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ U% K8 t$ W2 CI want so much to see inside your heart
. y. w* Q* l. vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, G' F9 v' i% _) e: t/ Z% J8 R( `7 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, I6 p9 }5 q- l7 h& e1 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 v9 E* M# x6 v% |' u3 Y& R# X/ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* y3 x' F: S- y# ~. I$ Y* y& O6 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! C/ X$ h) m8 |+ E) E7 a: X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  c% \4 U! a/ X# G3 R7 ?) Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& {4 Q, D' q' ~; A2 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ~* e/ M+ M- ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: H4 P6 Q) ^  d. T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( E: N/ t2 j) _5 A# y; _$ O& F6 Q9 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 H1 u: ?7 Y" e$ B, ^* w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 n) z, k  e: f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 g- p& y* S8 K! \6 q/ a1 I2 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; @  {7 C/ k8 e; e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 {8 V" h* n& _$ N4 o( Q0 M# z6 T: S% ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& Y, @- _  u! R* @/ w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; y9 v! o- e+ U! l  d' D$ B; U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( T: a  {' v7 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 h6 P8 Q/ S4 z+ ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* w1 f% k0 Z+ a+ l0 ?& a) d+ m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! Z0 \; T2 {) h4 h: }% w2 m1 s: {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ K2 ^# O* c+ K/ l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# ~8 S; T4 P+ L9 H: F  h+ y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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