【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 K: M& L3 X( `7 G) q; e. NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ p: J& ~  f2 o9 I9 K6 Z8 G& [) ]/ MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 K2 l$ ?# A* l/ W% e1 z% L2 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 s* }9 }8 k* L) t  n5 t1 d1 ^1 aEvery other word you utter is love
4 p0 J- m; u; h7 e& l" k$ dI really want to know just how much you love me
# ?1 R& H# B, s0 V" V* G& I' [I love you I love you with all my heart
% D- q) g2 S% x9 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( Y( d* M3 @& L) A1 `* s% Z9 B6 s+ ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 h/ x& h. X5 s& k( ^/ AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, s+ @% q8 o3 z% H& U; H5 G6 cI’m still filled with fear
$ m! T4 b* t1 x4 a* `1 L) w1 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 s) H% |0 d" ]( @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 D3 p5 w6 N  a* x( bWith such a tongue as yours,
" k( H  q0 i/ ~, J$ j6 |+ [+ m0 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% j1 g7 U" p5 K( J! u' I" pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 L7 X" x' L( R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, a$ _) d# C8 L" j3 f& _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ~* V% u3 U. C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. [1 L8 ?% r2 z7 W' o4 {3 C& q! j; M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) _* ~$ c, \5 a- S, `; V  K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 @4 U$ J& N- c$ f. T- t3 j9 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) t  Y& l/ F" M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  C% Q9 `# a3 a% W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 `4 g7 t& v: Z' i: O8 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 z2 S+ P9 A8 Q! i( T0 v* A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 Y9 E+ x2 a$ y) K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# v  Z2 V2 X2 v3 {- _0 J/ t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 `, a6 W* d; C0 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ t2 L5 Q/ q3 O! k/ r% p. a% e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 L4 g' H( l! q; q- M  x: ^4 k# l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: `6 b7 S4 m0 s( B4 N8 l/ L9 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 H' S2 o. [5 S' |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, k6 C& J, c9 I! h2 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 Y4 m  p5 ]! k. b/ |: Y! J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 ^- G- J! q% G3 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 |; ~4 h9 I3 Y. d$ H<P>I regret not dying</P>
, g$ k! ^9 V0 m/ c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 O. P* o1 Q  e) n4 `) N  x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ _# s7 k9 b" w  G" i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- h% J/ V; M* A, }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ?8 U. K4 L0 m* R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 F: [( o* d7 R: Y2 I' C3 a- s0 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 Y0 \8 B8 G/ o( T# _: |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) \8 j2 i- u- X6 r# o7 \% w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ q5 S9 r( X, ]! w3 {% T我请你剖开它

) Q: E' G; D: p9 W6 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 o! Z; G& N8 C0 x2 o( S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>