【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 Z: g( U$ d8 Q& @歌词我附在后面。
3 ~$ p9 x; a1 j; NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 e5 n" m& v9 I. yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) |$ E5 F% K* Y; \, XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 B0 d! H# `1 k7 z# L0 cSeeing the sky content with its love
; b1 H$ ?: k( i; b5 k# L$ }0 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& k  z; Z7 V( I& wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! a* b' P2 I" b" o1 zI really want to know just how much you love me
" q3 d# V3 }1 MI love you I love you with all my heart
8 I' T; O4 I8 L7 n! YNothing can compare to my love
% z9 R0 y2 U$ i' O3 v  F: FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 f; p8 Z/ o; i8 Y* WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. M5 s9 _) ]9 k" D/ ~( GI want so much to see inside your heart
7 W- P" j, H$ Q/ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 t3 o) y$ P6 R9 \9 FI’m still filled with fear
( ]% t" }' m: d. s) cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 y5 d* ^2 k% s9 a: Y1 }$ cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% X5 l% P' D' eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 V. _2 m3 d7 W9 n; `+ h1 Q+ J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  A$ q0 V5 A/ c. d! {* A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  x6 Z6 T) d2 d6 Y/ P5 V) W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. e; B6 U7 a( k: I' @4 _' S, j) C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ G! |. e# q  u" B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ]7 F4 ?* n- T2 @( f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. i6 r3 x# V5 c$ p1 [0 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 Y& g# s7 _" n; d" W9 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Z$ w9 l  U& `# W9 q, b' ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! e3 @. Q+ W0 k, x( }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 s/ y6 o& d, W) Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( [& M; W  i- c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 a& j0 K7 H* k3 @7 u3 r, A3 B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- ~: F, a5 j$ {) W& o: M0 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 P# b/ L$ M3 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, L9 M) @" z/ \4 s9 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 [+ c" J8 h/ u6 g! B( i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 y& |' Z+ q  m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 Z& L) U% [! O! b- a6 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: B2 A# l0 D; V3 B7 U4 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 y2 o8 g7 F9 w7 f, I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 B3 O( `  n- u3 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! P( o( G% C9 A& G% l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 x6 m8 Q# D/ w2 H2 `% M<P>I regret not dying</P>
: e6 k0 j2 }* A  a1 @( ~8 x6 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, B  z) s, ^$ g5 N7 y  _8 P) m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ g& j% n7 f9 }8 F: D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 w  i2 S7 ?8 t8 K4 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% e  O9 I* ?" G3 N5 b% Y! n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& q1 n# R7 ?$ d! P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( a! R3 K( y, m8 o. y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' I+ A8 [0 b7 d( s8 f# s2 h/ \+ c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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