【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ F& k5 _( c- KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 }# T! V- E1 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' d' j" I8 T& S& S' f. E% ?1 kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# C  K" ?8 N; P3 C# p' L% Y; PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) x# w' z4 }  h9 \You needn’t fear anything
* J9 ]+ A$ ^( p7 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  j3 ?" ?6 Y; d* ~$ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 f6 {# p0 R, w0 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 d  S6 Z( J' l, W' L8 S3 A1 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" G$ _9 l: H4 _$ M0 G" [1 H5 P$ ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, N8 T) r& c  Z- ?" |5 ~$ L% @, J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! p5 @1 c) s( S: m+ `" y( @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 A; B7 D3 O% S/ `& p: j& u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! x* S, w& j: O5 a) S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% D* X7 v# \/ z! w4 N- `. m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( @9 B: e1 A1 Z% v4 m; C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) [# A4 j' r* g9 n5 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ u+ p3 m* e) `  c% q8 L9 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 H& Z, j: }# X  T4 R1 [; Y* u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# E6 F9 b3 t, o5 X& v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  c+ s9 S) a1 ~: ^: q$ V% a& E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 P3 E+ l; [* g/ \* f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ H0 h8 n' {, B+ _6 n( M0 l( Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 D! m. m$ M/ P9 q( P; |" o9 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 G. q) k" f% k' {4 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 `3 I( i% b; T" y6 w2 d* S' ?' G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 S. d; r, l/ L3 q) w& K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 I, q( f) l) z" ?7 j) Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- `3 F& W1 C5 D( Q1 ^* h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ H: \' P& R& }4 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% X7 E$ I% X2 i2 `( v1 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- E6 P4 z4 n; o$ d3 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 ~7 A* C) a0 P8 P6 ]  p' J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 \) M+ l& {4 l6 i4 U; s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' Y9 ~; z  {! ], W* |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 b& M$ p2 I; _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" G# i. t) C& O* y3 |: y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" o  \2 n" I2 ?9 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>