【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( r3 o" n, ]" |9 x- V. R0 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 j: X- o- Q8 z; i' X, WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' D/ U5 U8 b- xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- [$ `/ A- F7 R3 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# h% b9 J' b* ]$ eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 e+ h& l7 X. Z0 N' _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& b, {. v; ?! _3 b+ G  l& D' r( a, q4 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
2 t4 y+ G9 R" ?: tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 Q# y7 _0 j5 H8 Y- e9 W4 u8 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( @3 S# f* b, b% k0 j) Q+ H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) g$ ^7 N. V& G1 g# I$ p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- B7 }( I9 _, Y, Z# r$ N' ^. G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" Z$ g3 _1 |1 X. Z: l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ^, i- i6 E: X$ M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 y' N3 L  d; L( L7 v9 h6 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 O) w; J4 l+ H3 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 U( P4 u- T  y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* J$ p: l) H$ ~( i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ ^* Z5 D% ]. Q3 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ?$ F/ [( y; v3 N; y9 R5 r- k9 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% n8 `2 G+ L" B/ w' _0 t. r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, j$ i5 E  y/ w! w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: k; o' M' m1 o5 a3 `( n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. A/ }6 B2 G' p% l9 R# i7 R! s5 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, ^1 `# o) ]0 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% i) p# c, Y! A, U; {& L9 m5 p# [* _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' x$ A5 d3 ?1 w) L, }1 X4 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ v( V* _  w1 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! ]" D5 h; t" P4 ^# R9 Q" J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& h  o: u; j0 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' q6 f& E* o% o& D0 F( Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ e% F/ ?0 O2 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 ~- g: U3 \9 s7 Y) P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ z; J! W; `& D' m% c- Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ]) F+ n: r6 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ _$ x9 W9 Z0 S" ]4 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: y% @. F6 s1 \6 ~" N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* \0 w' L/ B' e- Q我请你剖开它
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8 x2 Q7 Y; f$ U9 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>