【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! h9 ^  h) s5 K' n* K% a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" U8 k* _3 G* Y- t. XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; Y7 M% b0 W7 U: W9 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" K; u" r$ v3 R( H) b3 p. HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ P3 V- Z6 I( @9 ~' c9 t$ E. o! U1 e5 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 ]: J. o5 w% J& e+ |9 x& FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" e" u5 _* o6 pEvery other word you utter is love
' c3 ~; u5 I% `9 |' e) a5 X6 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" w# c! K+ F6 ^, VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& _& X  Q' ~4 jI’m still filled with fear
  H; t" v7 O3 o: [- G9 w; bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 f8 U" [0 [) XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- F, W0 F( N- J7 N/ q7 _" ?0 p9 BWith such a tongue as yours,
. Y) T$ ^- p) t8 ~1 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) k: ?& Z" ~* l- L, C1 _7 o, _% `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; K2 }) k1 J6 K, ~5 O' cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  K( U$ s" v6 N0 p+ m! d! @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ K1 Y8 n; X; T: B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! }* ^- l: W; w- D& K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 g7 ~( Y8 v2 c! O" M# V+ Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" ?6 l! S3 c5 d! T8 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 ]) q& c3 u. c' c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- o( G7 U# n1 b1 @5 R2 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; r. v6 G7 {4 I  r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- S$ @3 P0 \" n8 W( j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% X) O6 u% Q: S7 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 W6 {* R1 `* J$ t; H9 d. f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 R4 r7 h8 c) U3 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 w9 f( q! u* R2 k# D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% T4 u3 Z# Y+ a# f. b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; m/ d7 E$ B! g) }+ e0 e6 }5 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 f' V- O* _/ \, F2 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 m) S: Z/ ]- E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 z: q& p1 t, B7 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 m' R& t0 l8 c7 `3 h! \) S4 A2 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( t7 n  _4 h3 M) P) U7 L9 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, k$ x1 g+ i0 d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' T# A6 ^- M* C1 r" d+ t& @) u' E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, q+ {6 J% D& w1 b. k1 n' J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 R* d: _. i  c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  o% a; }2 E( R# w2 a5 |# l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 u& P' T1 ^9 D2 y% e; [- v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% f/ r% ~- \, u+ \6 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* I/ }3 C4 D8 q+ S; `& ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; H# z; Y+ R' [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ y6 h( N  \0 @7 X3 z6 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 V/ V' s& i* ]  s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, r4 Q  w- H0 i2 `9 a5 T2 L0 r5 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 n9 N! B$ a+ E* r  U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 J$ c7 k/ q/ B% p; J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% J- v- j" ~% {1 _$ W( f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 R3 X/ ~3 K0 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>