【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. n, X/ g8 @$ s( ?歌词我附在后面。
$ S! v( z2 f% C& c+ [' B. oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 C$ k. j1 L# {+ n2 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, x$ c( M- }9 P/ k0 \" uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, F% u& W  ~& x. L) Y5 E1 h; L8 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 m7 r- L$ }0 p' ^% s9 Z- a. @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. y% I: t- D8 @# G8 P; q8 FEvery other word you utter is love
* H# u/ O  O/ O( [" ?% R2 k" p% I; T3 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. @8 Q6 }- X( p0 v2 o; f' jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  l' k( K7 J; ^9 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, Z5 s+ Q, a; k3 N3 u7 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 |2 U. }0 ^1 R* I+ ~$ ~0 y( \, MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 V& w, H) w# T% u/ }  _+ ~. G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 m1 w8 o3 V1 i5 `5 ~/ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. \' W+ F; o/ e) k& ~/ m2 o3 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 q: ]! q: `" {7 @" F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ E1 _2 v! t2 m9 ]" {5 {2 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  j$ O1 e: r" A) C& Q* _6 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: I9 H' K9 R) M<P>你无需担心</P>
. Q3 N$ [( U8 r! I) z9 v' r, C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 j$ `- w6 h" p. A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 J5 ^# ]8 I. W" e7 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 P+ {. D  v6 B2 T% J6 F4 i) O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ~. J$ \4 j# x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 s1 G, u" v" x* \# N/ @$ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 a" z  m9 Q) O: I1 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ g1 z& H3 A" j0 M1 e+ e, f! {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 ~1 T) T/ k$ F+ h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( u) a- q9 A& _& o6 t- N/ |" j' c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ `! [3 f+ R' ?$ t5 T# F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 B0 a0 ^) _7 ~& ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! ?: U+ ~) o; C6 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ W8 V1 o! a& K) S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, }9 d, r# y, n- k. J( v: ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# t6 i+ |- l8 J& g+ t/ R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* t) C- N, h5 p. t8 s1 D& w. v$ L" A- ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: i/ S7 R' l1 e% _. e+ H' f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( W3 w& K" b. y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! r. Y/ r# l1 K+ e( h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* ~8 H1 ^2 T9 |1 v4 J7 W2 w( Y我请你剖开它
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7 z9 Y) i1 z  W4 ^: L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>