【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
+ y9 a! t9 p: A  }1 s袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
5 X/ X1 {0 H) s. u  O% N
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 a. P- v& `2 h5 nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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% C. f7 i5 @* S, x3 d6 ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
0 P; D4 I0 ]3 W9 s搜尋著你的魂
& X7 \) N8 n2 E2 o1 _: X我也許就能了解
你的心情
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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& l: s% Q& X$ ?4 B愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
5 U& V- s, d6 n. `$ i, H如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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& g  y- P4 y% e6 Y$ t  P& ~4 y7 @愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 d$ {5 E+ A3 `0 R" Q也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

2 m; l  i! T# Q0 t, n1 C* KIf today isn’t too late,
; R% ~7 P( g" ]3 \) l% w% W  M8 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 e5 H% r% C2 Q( `% d8 n$ D' {. n
, G4 o' S/ l9 m0 w& E  c: V0 J: m希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

$ b) H1 r* r! L9 }0 I4 z- VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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4 M( I! k6 u6 x; p! f) L& lCan I entrust it to you?
/ q6 F& [! N9 bEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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$ x1 R) F8 T3 ~5 WLove… just the word love
& P: w& _. M  Y, E# b/ j  mWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
# [8 P- o7 l0 w4 f/ ^為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
+ S+ C; Q! u( Q8 A0 N2 DBut I never did

) R% \, S# P$ p, V/ H6 s愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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) S7 a0 R  F7 q5 Y2 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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3 p& M0 Q) t2 {* ^$ M也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

2 _4 v; a% c4 c, j4 g' bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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3 X) m' [) z6 K2 p8 d" M! ^希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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7 Q6 e2 K5 m' nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

' {9 o5 N2 t. t  iCan I entrust it to you?
; H$ h( ?% X# A/ o: SEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
8 U/ |: s  H; X7 L1 v( Q托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
: N7 m9 X. b# j. JEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
  U) X3 ~1 B! {/ M1 d$ p0 V+ GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% x9 w* o9 y5 y% S; [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

4 A+ ^7 Q9 G3 {8 q$ `皎潔月光下
1 p# x# I- ^+ Q% n. x( `3 V7 Y' w% I天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

5 O3 r1 G" q3 b5 |/ t. ]4 C4 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; d) U- Y; n. {2 _7 N5 d5 l0 f% I4 pWith the moon kissing it every night
' b. `* g$ M5 ?, G0 K3 FSeeing the sky content with its love

9 i, _: M! `: t6 f# T$ }. A月光映在我的眼底
9 P' x3 T% m3 L3 O+ ^  O月夜陪著我一起沉醉
# l  [4 A8 b& k+ z6 ^8 Q" G8 D月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

  G. j- U# @. n$ S7 e) C! A我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
/ f5 _2 V' z+ r8 {# J愛你
! R! w  c  j; W+ e8 x堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
  a5 ]' N/ H; M4 YI really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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9 z; g" ~! h% s' K% w' R( R我的愛 全心全意
& {6 v. p7 v7 P你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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) [2 ^$ J  V3 @2 I  X能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

2 a* E4 r1 ^- t/ J我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
- U! P1 |1 L5 U$ E$ sTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
) n. \# I& {1 K我願意用生命
8 z3 k$ g/ T" v來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

' g" T1 B; M' `我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

- o: O/ r6 M9 a. ?3 E可惜我未能以死證明
' X) d3 M5 E' }6 ]: y0 Q# }; i; V我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

3 i. T5 q3 o9 r* Y* S這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

" w: w$ C" T6 x* c5 `1 N9 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
: R) g" _  V6 U% b! H1 x$ d我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
! f& h7 a7 z$ V8 ^; Y! x& a愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
0 a1 w# I4 U* w+ u3 T* Yxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒